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I was curious if someone might do me a favor and look over the Grand Moff page. I'm hardly done but I've been trying to give it a little panache before the really serious editors get to it.

-- Charlemagne19 5:44, 25 October 2006 (UTC)

  • You've got a little OOU in there (ie Revenge of the Sith, film, and Legacy era) but that is the only style edit that is of major importance. The Tarkin promotion thing does merit mention, though, and should probably go in the Behind the Scenes section. Overall, good job. -- SFH 05:52, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
    • I have had a look at that page and I can say you have done quite a good job for a new user. However, I can do very little to help other than praise you because I do not know much about Grand Moffs. We will have to wait for other users more familiar with anything Imperial like User:Imperialles or Jack Nebulax though they may be away. Also add a time signature like how I do mine. Don't worry, I have done it for you.Zainal 5:55, 25 October 2006 (UTC)
      • I've been updating it some more. It's in need of artwork and some suggestions of what else to add but I think it's proceeding nicely.

-- Charlemagne19

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