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Publisher's summary Edit

• I haven't found this quote from any official source, so I removed it from the "Publisher's summary": One man's fall from power could lead to the end of the Republic, and the irreversible rise of the dark side… If it is official, please tell me. --Xwing328^(Talk) 21:03, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Never mind. It's on the back of the hardcover. —Xwing328^(Talk) 19:42, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

Rune Haako Edit

What does Rune Haako do in this book? .... 04:54, 14 October 2006 (UTC)

• Not much. Basically, he just advises Nute Gunray on a few things. --Xwing328^(Talk) 02:31, 15 October 2006 (UTC)
  • So nothing really worth mentioning in his article? .... 06:24, 15 October 2006 (UTC)
    • Right --Xwing328^(Talk) 15:52, 15 October 2006 (UTC)

Direct quotations Edit

I decapitalized Human in the Paperback section because the original source did not capitalize the word. If we use a word-for-word quotation, we must keep everything as in the original source, no matter our guidelines or our MoS. I also decapitalized Senate in the opening crawl because the novel does not capitalize Senate (which is, I think, a mistake, hence the [sic]). The opening crawl is in full capitalis, but still, I think it's reasonable to assume, that it would have beensenate had not the author decided to fully capitalize all the words. - TopAce ^(Talk) 11:02, 11 November 2007 (UTC)

• I'm removing the sic and re-capitalizing Senate. You can assume that the author intended for it to be grammatically and stylistically correct, which from the author's in-universe perspective, would be Senate capitalized as a proper noun. —Xwing328^(Talk) 20:05, 11 November 2007 (UTC)
• Actually, simpler solution: I just added CSS to capitalize all of the text, so that it reflects the original source even more precisely. —Xwing328^(Talk) 20:07, 11 November 2007 (UTC)

Mas Amedda Edit

I recently read the book, and I only noticed Mas Amedda being mentioned, I can't seem to remember if he physically appeared. If he does, does anybody know which page? Ressor 17:48, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Boccherini? Edit

Do they use Boccherini's minuet in the audio version? --Solo Bane (talk) 13:25, January 14, 2013 (UTC)