Talk:Hylo Visz
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This is the first time I've added a page to the wiki so I likely forgot something. As is I know I used the wrong "info box" (think I used a "jedi" info box or something). Can someone help me out? 208.47.211.5 21:05, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
Also, there are images available of Hylo from the two timelines released by BioWare. What's the process for getting an image set up for her? 208.47.211.5 21:06, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
If you have an image of her, you must register first to upload it. OLIOSTER 
21:09, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Okay, so now that I've rememberd my login info, how do I go about getting an image together? Also, what concerns are there regarding fair use? Can I just take a screen capture from the video? Fodigg 21:12, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
Hey I have an actual login after all. I hadn't used it in so long I wasn't sure if I'd really made one or not. I think I screwed up the categories on this page too. Or at least it's not finding two of the three I included, having based this off of the Gnost-Dural entry. Fodigg 21:10, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
Categories are almost always plural, such as smugglers, females, so on. OLIOSTER 21:12, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
Oh hey, there she is! Somebody beat me to it. :) Fodigg 21:14, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Yes it seems someone already uploaded an image. However, if you have anymore questions about image use, please see Wookieepedia:Guide to image use for more information. OLIOSTER
21:16, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Will do. Thank you for all the help. Fodigg 21:17, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
Added the line: "The reprieve that this action brought to the Republic may have contributed to the decision by the Empire to attempt the Sacking of Coruscant." as this was implied by Gnost-Dural in the timeline. fo diggity | 22:09, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Changed "action" to "victory". A sentence someone else had added created a dangling modifier, making it look like her skipping out on her medal ceremony was what caused the sacking of coruscant. I loled.--fo diggity | 22:11, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
- Eh, just re-ordered the sentences for clarity.--fo diggity | 22:15, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
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I like the expanded article by Darth Trayus, but each section reads as if it exists in a vacuum, leading to redundant fact listing and event description. I believe the article would benefit from the removal of redundant description. However, I am wary to jump in and do this as the article is up for "featured article" status. Anyone else have thoughts on this? // fodigg 
15:42, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
- Made the changes I felt would improve the article. If anyone feels the need to revert back to an older version, be aware that some mundane grammar and punctuation issues were also fixed. // fodigg
16:39, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
- Changes almost immediately reverted by Mauser for the article's FA candidacy status. Trayus, if you'd like to see the edits I made here's an easy link. // fodigg 16:59, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
- Changes almost immediately reverted by Mauser for the article's FA candidacy status. Trayus, if you'd like to see the edits I made here's an easy link. // fodigg
Featured article? Edit
This article retells "Smuggler's Vanguard" twice over, it already links to it, what if someone wants to read that instead? It wouldn't need much done for it to actually qualify as a featured article, though. (- -) 02:12, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
Smuggler's VanguardEdit
Is it possible that Smuggler's Vanguard actually takes place after the breaking of the Mandalorian blockade? Gnost-Dural says that she disappears after apparently double-crossing the Hutts, which may be what the story portrays. Also, in the timeline video, her ship is shown to have a small, cramped cockpit, unlike that of the stolen Vanguard. It's not solid evidence but it's something to consider. --DarthEinstein 17:29, September 13, 2010 (UTC)
Alive?! Edit
I guess this would be a spoiler but she is alive. If you complete the Gault companion quests in SWTOR Gault (the companion) finds her alive and in stasis on Belsavis.
Devmir 16:30, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
