HanzoEdit

1. Both are still incomplete, I'm afraid. Context is needed for everything, instead of automatically assuming the reader already knows everything. And the bio still doesn't mention that he's a captain.

What Trak Can TrackEdit

1. Right off the bat, I formatted a few things and combined a sentence fragment with a previous sentence. Also, make sure that you double-check every single source and appearance and cover everything in them. Pay particular attention to the prose, as I see a good bit of purple prose hanging around in there. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:09, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

1. In terms of sources and other adaptations, he is also included in the film script presented in Star Wars: The Annotated Screenplays. As for anything else, if you and Darthrevan don't own all the adaptations and other sources in existence, I recommend asking others for help on compiling both the adaptations/sources and any relevant new info in Forum:Knowledge Bank. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:18, August 17, 2012 (UTC)
   • Was redirected to Forum:Senate Hall by an admin. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 00:12, August 18, 2012 (UTC)