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This page is the strike page of what needs to be done to get Yorr to be nominated for GA at another time.Edit

What needs taken care of

HanzoEdit

  1. Both are still incomplete, I'm afraid. Context is needed for everything, instead of automatically assuming the reader already knows everything. And the bio still doesn't mention that he's a captain.

What Trak Can TrackEdit

  1. Right off the bat, I formatted a few things and combined a sentence fragment with a previous sentence. Also, make sure that you double-check every single source and appearance and cover everything in them. Pay particular attention to the prose, as I see a good bit of purple prose hanging around in there. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:09, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

  1. In terms of sources and other adaptations, he is also included in the film script presented in Star Wars: The Annotated Screenplays. As for anything else, if you and Darthrevan don't own all the adaptations and other sources in existence, I recommend asking others for help on compiling both the adaptations/sources and any relevant new info in Forum:Knowledge Bank. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:18, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

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