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If a vehicle is pictured only, you can use {{Po}} to denote it. If it is described, just list it under the Sources section. 1358(Talk) 21:21, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
Categorize the files you upload. I'm sure you can also use better grammar on the file page as well as use {{SWE}} for Encyclopedia links. Thank you. 1358(Talk) 23:22, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
I know it doesn't look the best, but we shouldn't be adding excess whitespace or moving images "between" lines just for aesthetic purposes. Until the article gets expanded, it should be fine. CC7567(talk) 03:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
I appreciate the suggestion, but the article should be fine as it is. The image you're suggesting would only work as a Bts image because it's not directly IU given the four-image splicing, and the current Bts image simply works better because it indicates the conflict that was prevalent regarding his cybernetic eye. I would be happy to implement the image if there were more room, but there isn't at the moment. Thanks though. :) CC7567(talk) 01:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
If the Atlas explicitly says that, and isn't referring to any other event, then go ahead and do it. Just remember to source the article properly when creating it. Cheers, 1358(Talk) 19:52, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
Unfortunately, I am not an admin so I don't have that power. I've reported him on the WP:VIP page but I can't access IRC at work to get the attention of an admin. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 18:50, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
I just happened to have signed on to see the VIP posting, so I gave the vandal two weeks to think about what he has done. Proceeding to semi-protect the page... Trak NarRamble on 18:53, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
Thank you, you did good work. But please post that next time on the CAN page. Below the objections. That's easier for all users to see the status of the article. Clone Commander LeeTalk 16:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
I seen that you've addressed the objections, and I'll go through the article again when I get the chance. Cheers.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 23:23, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah I left a source for feed on the dark side, and removed the Needing vertiifcation tag. Why did re-add it?24.193.145.164 00:13, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
Please eliminate those categories, as well the Eras and {{Nickname}} templates, in your workbench. Those are for mainspace articles only, and not needed elsewhere, such as user workbenches. To remove them, please place a colon after the first two brackets—I.e, [[:Category:Clone troopers]]. For the Eras and Nickname, placing the <nowiki> html tag will remove them. Thanks, JangFett(Talk) 02:13, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
Insert the first tag before anything else, then close the html formatting. <nowiki>blah</nowiki> JangFett(Talk) 02:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
Again, please remove those categories. JangFett(Talk) 01:05, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
Yep. Go right ahead. If you want some ideas of how to format it, feel free to look here or here. Cheers, and congratulations on your first status article!—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 22:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)
Hey, dogma. I'll take a look at the article again when I get the chance. Just so you know, please don't leave messages about objections. I keep an eye on the noms and will get to the objections when I get the chance. Cheers.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 03:08, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Unidentified clone trooper (Haurgab) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358(Talk) 20:00, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Yes, that TCW article needed an update. However, if you're planning on renominating it, please be aware that you must rewrite the entire article, as it is frowned upon when someone takes others' work. JangFett(Talk) 01:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)
Here are some quotes from the 2nd Service comic. As for the head quote replacement, one of these could work. I'm really not too sure of the second one because most of the time, it was hard to identify the clones in that room, and the "no doubt" could be Spitter. Ozzel was the only noticeable one, if you can see what I mean. JangFett(Talk) 02:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
"Comet, hold that junction breaker open while I rewire the circuit. With any luck, the lock will reset"
―Spitter to Comet, inside the agrocite processing facility[src]
"Mind your place, trooper. I am your superior officer, and I have friends in high places." "No doubt. We're getting out of here. Let's move!"
Just to let you know, I noticed you have issues with your linking in the Comet article. If you're going to link something, albeit want to lowercase it, you can simply do [[second]]s, without having to pipelink it as [[Second|seconds]]. This goes with [[Luke Skywalker|Luke Skywalker's]] as well, which is incorrect. The only time you could pipelink is when you're linking to conjectural titled articles or putting a word, such as "s," within the double brackets. For the conjectural example: [[Battle of Bomis Koori IV]] cannot be linked to that, but rather a [[Battle of Bomis Koori IV|battle]]. For the "s," if there's more than two [[Imperial-class Star Destroyer]]s, this needs to be [[Imperial-class Star Destroyer|''Imperial''-class Star Destroyers]] (notice the italics and the "s" is within the double bracket.) Hope this helps. JangFett(Talk) 16:55, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Hey, Dogma. While it's good to see you reviewing nominations on the CAN, please remember to update the vote count whenever you support an article. Cheers.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 01:35, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry for the late reply, but we really cannot assume based on armor, unless it's stated that he was apart of that division. Saying he switched from one division to another without something confirming it is speculation. Until it's confirmed that he was actually part of that Khorm division, you could say he served alongside them. JangFett(Talk) 19:42, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
I'm not much of a fan of promotional images, but I forgot the article is not even a good article anymore. I'll be taking care of his expansion when I have time. JangFett(Talk) 17:44, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Please take a look at the fifth item that was passed during the recent Mofference. You must include parenthetical descriptors for conjectural titled articles. I corrected the title for that Dathomir battle droid, but please watch out in the future. Thanks, JangFett(Talk) 23:21, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
How did you upload pictures? I thought only administraters could? 174.255.0.175 23:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)22JediMaster
Whoops. I wasn't logged in. It really was22JediMaster 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)22JediMaster.
Thanks 501st Dogma. I'll try to reach 50 edits and then see what happens. Also, no offense, but my favorite legion is the 212th Legion... I didn't need to say that I'd just like to put it out there. Thanks again. JediMaster22 21:47, March 5, 2012 (UTC)JediMaster22
Yes, I might be able to help you. If you allow me to edit your workbench, I can give it a copy-edit and leave some objections here. I'll take a look tomorrow. Clone Commander LeeTalk 00:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Review, part 1
Intro: I would remove the nickname of Gree and the "senior" before Clone Commander. It is too much context and plus we don't know if Gree was already a senior clone commander at that point. You can keep his nickname in the bio though.
Done
Intro: Context for the Geonosians.
Added
Intro: Elaborate a little bit more about the battle itself.
Expanded
Bio: Draa was one of the many clones of the bounty hunter Jango Fett, born on the planet Kamino to serve in the Galactic Republic's new clone army as a clone trooper: It sounds like Fett was born and trained on the planet. Please reword.
Reworded
Bio: fought against the Confederacy of Independent Systems as they defended the Republic during the Clone Wars.: Same here. Reword to make it clearer that the clones defend the Republic.
Done
Bio: Is the name "41st Elite Corps" mentioned in the episode? If not you have to find another source.
No mention of it, but since he served with Gree and had the markings of the 41st, I am assuming he is 41st.
Please see if you can find a source that the unit itself is the 41st. Hint: Take a look at CC's battle article or the episode guide.
Bio: The battle took place in 21 BBY, not c. 21 BBY. If you want infos about the general battle and sources, take a look at the FA.
Done
Bio: Do we know if Draa was in the Geonosis system since the beginning? If you cannot source it, remove it, as it is speculation.
Changed
Please elaborate a little bit more. You mention him and the others landing on the planet out of nowhere.
This remains.
Better?
Bio: You should mention that Poggle is Archduke of Geonosis. That's more specific as "Confederate Leader" who is in fact Dooku.
Done
Bio: Please mention that Offee is Unduli's Padawan.
Added
Bio: facility to destroy its main reactor, an effort that would result in the destruction of the foundry: Find a synonym for one of the "destroy"-words.
Completed
Bio: Context for the Super tanks. That helps to point out what "ray-shielded" is.
Added
Good job, but please state that the ray-shields made the tanks invulnerable against the Republic weapons.
Done
Bio: Draa and a detachment of troopers rendezvoused with their Jedi commanders on the opposite side of the canyon.: How?
Added
Bio: Did he really use both DCs? I recall only seing him with one during the battle, but I may be mistaken.
He used both, When he arives first on Dooku Boot he has a DC-15S blaster. However, when he is marching on the droid foundry he is seen with a DC-15A blaster rifle.
BtS: You can use the mistakenly recalled line as quote for this section.
Added
Checked all sources? StarWars.com Encyclopedia, SW Insiders, the Comics. As a note: You can take a look at the sources list in the battle article. Any mention of Draa is likely in these sources.
Started looking through the sources but I'll continue later.
Finished collecting sources. Could you take a look at the Clone wars adventure one, because it looks weird. 501st Dogma(Comlink) 17:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Taken care of.
I'll continue once you dealt with these. Clone Commander LeeTalk 10:03, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks so much for the review! 501st Dogma(Comlink) 14:09, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Review, Part 2
Intro: You can still state a little bit more about the foundry fight in the intro, e.g. that they encountered super tanks and their mission was to "cover" the destruction carried out by Offee and Tano.
Expanded
Bio: In 21 BBY, Geonosis, site of the first battle in the Clone Wars, once again began to produce battle droids for the Separatist Droid Army.: Two problems here. First you need to mention that Geonosis is a planet and also I don not believe that the planet started producing droids.
Fixed
Good, but please say that the Geonosians produced the droids.
Done.
Bio: Context for the Ray Shielded Fortress.
Added
Bio: Context for Droideka and the AT-TEs.
Done
P&T: His Hasbro entry mentions he carries a blaster pistol. This needs to be added.
Done
I would recall to ask someone else to give the article another copy-edit. Master Jonathan would be a good choice. Clone Commander LeeTalk 15:46, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Good job, I'll give it a final look tomorrown. Clone Commander LeeTalk 17:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks again for thoroughly going over the article. I'll contact Master Jonathan after you've gone over it tomorrow. 501st Dogma(Comlink) 18:34, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Review, part 3
Give a little bit context for the lead quote.
Contexted
Led by Unduli and Skywalker, Draa and the troops marched to attack the Droid factory head on via a bridge, in an effort to distract the enemy as the Padawans infiltrated the foundry via the catacombs underneath the facility to sabotage its main reactor, an effort that would result in the destruction of the foundry.: Please change of the "via"s.
Done
He also sported a DC-15s side arm blaster. His helmet sported the color of the 41st Elite Corps, green: Two times sported, change one.
I'm pretty sure it was an error on the guide's part, but you would have to check something like the subtitles in the episode's release in The Complete Season Two to verify it. I'm not sure off-hand myself. Hope that helps. CC7567(talk) 06:33, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
To be honest, it doesn't really hurt to delete the redirect. It was created — means someone has used that as a search word. Cheers, 1358(Talk) 15:01, April 1, 2012 (UTC)
It's just a temporary lockdown since some people are just too stupid to accept this change. It should be unlocked shortly. 1358(Talk) 20:41, April 1, 2012 (UTC)
Could you tell me if the bio for Wedge in the Essential Guide to Warfare contains any new info at all? I can't afford to buy it and can't get it through the library. Since you added it to the article, I assume you have access to it. Thanks in advance. —MJ—Council ChambersTuesday, April 3, 2012, 15:25 UTC
I'm baaaaaaack! Another user slapped an update tag for Warfare on Wedge Antilles, and has ignored my message requesting the new info. Could you take a second look through it to see what's been missed? I would greatly appreciate it. —MJ—HolocommFriday, April 13, 2012, 00:41 UTC
Essential Guide to Warfare info for Zuckuss and 4-LOM, if any? Edit
I intend to get the book tomorrow, if I can, but until then... Is there any information in the Essential Guide to Warfare for Zuckuss and/or 4-LOM that I need to be aware of? Thanks. Trak NarRamble on 03:30, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks! I just ordered the book today, so I'll be getting it next week. So, it seems to be a bit of regurgitated information that has long since been addressed and essentially a picture-only source? Trak NarRamble on 03:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for double-checking on that! :) Trak NarRamble on 03:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Hey, Dogma, do you have the Essential Guide to Warfare? If you do (or even if you don't), do you want to join WookieeProject Warfare? The Guide has so much info, and it'll take a lot of people to get all of the info into the wiki.
Just sign your name to the project page if you want to join. Thanks! —CadeCalrayn 03:50, April 7, 2012 (UTC)
If you have the Guide, you can tell there's a great deal of work to be done. The Guide has introduced a great deal of new characters, events, ships, and other information, and it's gonna take some work to get it all in the wiki. A major issue that we have to resolve is the new exact dates for all of the conflicts that the Guide has introduced. Many of these conflicts had approximate dates before the Guide was released, and we have to remedy these articles to reflect the new information.
If you have any questions or comments, head on over to the forums or let me know on my talk page. Take a look around the project page, and good luck editing!
Hey, Dogma. I'm guessing that it's because you have two links to your user page in the signature, where you should only have one. Take one of those links out, and it should be set. If not, feel free to let me know, and I'll try something else. Cheers.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 21:07, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
Definitely. I'm glad it worked. Let me know if you need anything else.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 21:16, April 26, 2012 (UTC)
I'm afraid I'm not following what you're saying. Your signature picture is actually visible in the Recent Changes?—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 23:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
Hmm. I'm not seeing it. Are you using Monobook or Wikia skin?—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 23:47, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
Ok. First off, I suggest you use the MonoBook, since that is the official skin of Wookieepedia. It makes things much more clear and easier to use. Secondly, your signature pic isn't showing up on the Recent Changes, but in the Wiki Activity. If you use MonoBook, the Wiki Activity is no longer accessible, and you use Recent Changes in its stead. Thus, problem solved. However, if you don't want to change skins, I can only think of one thing that might be causing it. Since your picture is first in your sig and not in the middle of the signature code, the Wiki Activity might be recognizing it as a file, rather than part of the signature. Does that all make sense?—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 00:06, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah. Most users on Wookieepedia use MonoBook. Let me know if you need anything else. Cheers.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 00:14, April 28, 2012 (UTC)
I believe that 3 BBY would be the correct date, because the purpose of that particular infobox field is to give the date of the ship's earliest chronological appearance, not the date of its first appearance in canon. Good luck with improving the article! --Jinzler 21:03, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
Hey 501st, I saw that every time you sign your post, the image in your sig appears in the recent changes. Are you using wikitext in your signature, or are you just referencing User:501st_dogma/Sig? CadeCalrayn 23:54, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
Hrmm... I don't what caused the problem, but I just enclosed the Review section in <!-- --> brackets. Good work on your nominations! CadeCalrayn 00:07, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
I don't know, I've never read the source material. Sounds like the article states the speculation pretty clear but it might still be a matter of opinion. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 00:09, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
Kind of iffy, I would bring it up in the project forum and see what the community has to say. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 01:10, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Draa has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 01:09, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
Hey! I'm not actually a member of the Agricorps, so I can't archive GANs. You can ask any of these fellers to do it, though. Menkooroo 20:01, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
Wikia did recently change the way searches happen, but I'm still getting regular-looking options for search queries and in-article linking... Menkooroo 20:22, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, I use monobook. And you should too! It'll fix your problem. Menkooroo 20:33, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
Hey, Dogma. Comet is all set to be nominated to FAN whenever you want. Also, excuse me for butting into the above conversation about the skins, but I would encourage you to change to Monobook. When I first joined Wookieepedia, I used the Wikia skin for around a year. So, it was really hard to get used to Monobook. However, I have no regrets and thoroughly enjoy the Monobook now. Just thought I'd give you my thoughts on it. :) Cheers.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 21:30, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah. When I first switched, it took me quite a while to get used to where everything was at, and I actually switched between skins several times. I, too, thought that Monobook was missing some things, but it actually pretty much has everything important plus more; it just takes time to find it all and figure out how to execute it to its fullest extent. If you stick with it, I can almost guarantee you'll be thoroughly enjoying it soon.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 21:37, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Mission to Bogg 11 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 02:13, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
Hey dogma, just FYI, rule #6 of "How to nominate" on the GAN states that a nominator can only have up to your nominations at a time on the page. You currently have eight. I'm not gonna remove any of them, but please don't add new GANs before some of them get archived. Cheers, 1358(Talk) 21:39, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
Yes, I will have a place to put the Warfare GAs. The code for the link is already in the project page, it's just hidden. I'll build the GA page as soon as we're ready—it won't take long. As for the image, I would upload it and try using it as the main image. See what others think about it. CadeCalrayn 23:03, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
Give me like 30 minutes. I need to shower, eat, and get to school, then I'll do it. CadeCalrayn 11:58, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, I'm aware of the objections, 501st. Sorry, I've been busy lately. I'll take a look at them as soon as I can. JangFett(Talk) 15:33, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
Why are you deleteing Rukil from 4,056bby? If you look on Rukil it says he was born before 4056bby, So please stop it
-Dear 501st dogma, Sorry I misread the Birth year It was before 4056, now how would you put that on there As 4056 (approximate date). Please write back. -Starwarsclone 22:14, May 21, 2012 (UTC)Starwarsclone
Dear 501st dogma, thanks for telling me these things Im new to the wikipedia stuff so now I will only put exact date for people. Sinncerley,--Starwarsclone 13:47, May 26, 2012 (UTC)Starwarsclone
"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Aurora (Star Dreadnought) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 23:28, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Stax Mullawny has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 00:56, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Event Horizon (battlecruiser) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — IFYLOFD(Floyd's crib) 00:45, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
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