• Old stuff can be found her.

Contents 1 New talk page 2 Re: MedStar II: Jedi Healer 3 Coburn 4 Oz 5 Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team) 6 Neebo 7 Cookie 8 Sarkli 9 Near Indosa 10 Re:CC-1993 11 CR57 12 Haurgab trooper 13 Hello 14 Sarkli (continued) 15 Interest in new WP 16 Nap 17 Re:Jet 18 Onca 19 CC-1993 20 Re:Balith Civil War 21 CC-5869 22 Near Indosa 23 Draa 24 WP:TOR 25 Outbound Flight 26 Resolution 27 I want to ask you questions! 28 WC 29 Bulduga 30 Re: Kep-She 31 Kesla Vein duel 32 Good article article 33 GAN Objections 34 Updated Ultimate Guide 35 Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V) 36 First Kesla Vein duel 37 Gungan bouillabaisse

New talk page Edit

Finally found some time to archive the old stuff. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:08, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re: MedStar II: Jedi Healer Edit

Hey Lee, I'm afraid I don't currently have the Medstar duology with me; my brother has the books right now and it might be late February before I can get them back. Sorry that I can't help right now. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 21:15, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Coburn Edit

Hey, Lee. Would you mind if I take Coburn on as a project? I planned to work on him for a while, and I completely understand if you'd like to write him yourself, but I'd like to tackle him if I can. Thanks. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:33, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

• Sure thing. Are you looking for any quotes at all that involve them? CC7567 ^(talk) 19:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • There's actually a text-searchable version of the book that can be found here. Might save us both some time, since it would take a while for me to get all of them. :P Hope that helps. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oz Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Oz (clone trooper) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 04:29, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team) Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 19:10, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Neebo Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Neebo has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 21:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Cookie Edit

Cal Jedi has awarded you a Wookiee Cookie! For all your nominations and reviews on the CAN, GAN, and FAN pages.

• Keep up the good work!—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 23:13, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • I don't believe so. I'm using Monobook with Firefox on a Windows 7 and everything looks the same to me.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:11, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Sure thing. I'd suggest that you switch to Firefox, though. It works a whole lot better with Wookieepedia than IE. Cheers!—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:10, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
      • Yeah. Running Firefox with Monobook seems to work the best.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:15, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

SarkliEdit

I got around to fixing all of your issues with the article...DjMack 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Near IndosaEdit

Would you mind looking over the Near Indosa article, and if there are no more objections that you can find, could you archive the pages so that I can put the article on GAN. ~501st Tup^{(Communications)} 21:06, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re:CC-1993 Edit

Lee, I'm aware of the objections, but I cannot look at them at this time because I'm busy. I'll try to take a look at them sometime next week. JangFett ^(Talk) 16:41, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

CR57 Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" CR57 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 23:26, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Haurgab trooperEdit

Hi, since I'ce done some changes to the article I was wondering if you could check it over. The main things I've changed is I've deleted the homeworld note and changed his unit to the Haurgab garrison becasue as I reread the section both the 85th and 14th were part of the garrison, and the 14th did not join the 85th. This means he could have been from either unit. Thanks,---501st Dogma^(Comlink) 21:56, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hello Edit

Nice to see you still at it now that I am back. graestan^(talk) 06:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sarkli (continued)Edit

Just to let you know I got around to your final objection, but the user who keeps adding the "update" tag for the TCG material won't respond to my requests to help with the source material. DjMack 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Interest in new WPEdit

I've been throwing around the idea of starting a WookieeProject based on Category:Entertainment. I'm asking around to see if there is enough interest to justify starting it. Would you be in any way interested? MasterFred^(Whatever) 17:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

• Since you showed interest in the project, I'm here to let you know that it is now official! MasterFred^(Whatever) 16:22, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Nap Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Nap Lagard has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 20:44, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Jet Edit

No problem, Lee. One of the things you can do in the future is use the preview button and proofread your own work. It will definitely help you out. JangFett ^(Talk) 16:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

OncaEdit

Hey, could you give me some suggestions on how to get rid of "Sorry about the mess" on Onca. Thanks. ~501st Tup^{(Communications)} 18:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

CC-1993 Edit

"So—you've finally made it in the big leagues!" CC-1993 has been approved by the Inquisitorius and awarded Featured status. Please record your achievement here, and feel free to add the {{User featured}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The Inquisitorius thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:39, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Balith Civil War Edit

On page 124, "Off to War: The Nu-Class attack shuttle is a standard transport for Jedi and clones on Clone Wars business for the Republic. When Anakin and Captain Rex (you can now source it to guide that Rex commanded it with Anakin) are ordered to war-torn Balith to take charge of the Third Legion, Ahsoka is unhappy to find herself left behind, but still sees them off from the landing pad at the Jedi Temple."

A box pointing to the shuttle confirmed that Torrent Company also joined Anakin and Rex. I haven't seen the episode for a while and don't plan on watching it, but it shows another clone next to Anakin and Rex onboard the shuttle. Here's what the box says: "As Anakin says farewell to his Padawan, Rex and another trooper of Torrent Company prepare to take their seats in the troop hold inside the shuttle's well-armored belly."

Basically see what you can do with the new information given, albeit fluffless :P. Hope this helps, JangFett ^(Talk) 01:55, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

• Sorry for the delay. Yeah, it says what Jang said above. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

CC-5869 Edit

You can see his article on the CWA wiki for the quote. In-game, he appears in the Training Room, just as a non-playable character and nothing else. The quote that he says to the Jedi Knight player character is on the CWA wiki page, so that should be all you need. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:48, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Near IndosaEdit

mind archiving Near Indosa as a failed good article please so that I can put it back on CAN. Thanks. ~501st Tup^{(Communications)} 23:23, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

DraaEdit

Hi, since I am updating Draa to Good status, I was wondering something. Since his article is small due to the his brief appearence, should I add something in the BtS briefly saying that Hasbro made a figurine of Draa to sell? I know bigger articles such as CT-7567 will not have this due to the numerous figurines made, but I'm not sure about the less known clones. Thanks, 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 23:21, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

• I was wondering if you could look over Draa on my workbench and see if you can spot anything major, for example grammar, that needs to be fixed before I move it to GAN. Thanks, 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 23:48, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • Permission granted to edit the workbench. Thanks again. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 01:10, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks so much for thoroughly reviewing Draa. I really appreciate it. Thanks again, 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 15:27, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

WP:TOR Edit

"Our time has come." Hello <insert name here>! So, it's been a little over three months since The Old Republic was released, and WookieeProject: The Old Republic, which was founded almost two years ago now, was in dire need of a revamp and update. Participation has slumped, but it's time to get back on the wagon and refocus our efforts. So here are some stats: currently, we have ten Featured Articles, thirty-one Good Articles, and thirty-four Comprehensive Articles. Cal Jedi and Coruscantfan have both been doing great work lately, but we need more users to start undertaking projects from the game and related materials. Comprehensive articles are a great way to get started, so take a leap, pick an article, and get crackin'. Beyond status articles, there are a few other ways you can help WP: TOR with it's primary goals. Those of you who have a current subscription to the game are welcome to visit our new guild page, where we're setting up in-game groups to help catalogue and confirm information here on Wookieepedia. Aside from that, our article lists can always use expansions. We have some fun new programs and challenges coming to WP:TOR in the future, so take a look at our news and discussion area for updates, and always remember to add any of your new status article successes to the news board. If you have any questions or comments, head on over to the forums or let me know on my talk page. Take a look around the updated project page, and happy hunting! Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Outbound Flight Edit

Hi, I noticed that you own Outbound Flight. I know you said most of your books are in German and I was wondering if that was the case with this one? I need several quotes from it, but if it is in German I will have to find someone else who owns it. Thanks!- PrincessGLG 20:50, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

• Okay thanks, I'll wait and see what Omicron can come up with.- PrincessGLG 17:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Resolution Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Resolution (Venator-class) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 03:06, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

I want to ask you questions! Edit

Hey, Lee,

You've written sixty-five Good articles. That's a lot! Since you've written so many --- may I ask you a few questions about Good articles and Good article writing? Since we'll be putting Good articles on the Main Page soon, I want to write a post on Wookieepedia NewsNet about it. My hope is to let casual readers of Wookieepedia know more about what Good articles are, and I want a few Wookieepedians to help tell them. Would it be OK if I asked you a few questions about your experiences writing Good articles? I'd include your answers in the NewsNet post. If so, let me know if I should ask you here, or if we should do it by e-mail. If you want to do it by e-mail, e-mail me at gradualferguson@hotmail.com . Cheers! Menkooroo 02:38, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks so much! I have two questions for you. They're both about your experiences on Wookieepedia, writing and reviewing GAs. Feel free to make the answers as long or as short as you'd like. I'll hopefully have the final post written in about a week. :)

1. Tell me about your experience writing GAs. Does writing more and more GAs make you a better writer?
2. Is reviewing important, too? Does reviewing other GAs also help improve your own writing?

Thanks again! :D Menkooroo 04:29, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

WC Edit

SavageBob has awarded you a Wookiee Cookie! For writing the funniest edit conflict comment he's seen in a long time.

•  :) ~Savage 14:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Bulduga Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Bulduga has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Kep-She Edit

I'm sorry, I'm just about to turn in for the night, and I don't currently have access to it. I believe Jang has access to it, though; you could try asking him. CC7567 ^(talk) 08:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

• Here you go: "Page 91 - The Malastare crisis scaled after the [Corporate] Alliance hired Sikurdian pirates to seize Malastare's duel tankers. Trench then gathered a fleet of Alliance Fantail-class destroyers and Sikurdian privateers and blockaded the Malastare Narrows, seeking to force a settlement on the Alliance's terms. After attempts to find a diplomatic solution failed, Malastare appealed to Supreme Channcelor Valorum to intervene. Publicly, Valorum demurred. But he also feared that the Alliance might prevail in a shooting war, because the Dustig Sector Dorces were weakened by corruption and neglect. Behind the scenes, he cajoled the neighboring Tyus and Var Haden sectors to support Malastare, funneled credits to Dugs to hire privateers, and dispatched military "observers" to the scene—including the Jedi Kep-She and a capable officer named Wullf Yularen, who'd fought Skiyrd pirates with the Kwymar Sector Forces." JangFett ^(Talk) 12:51, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
  • Lee, there's some issues with the article that I like to point out if you don't mind. Mainly that Yularen was sent with Kep-She, as said above, and perhaps you could supply a date for the Christophsis battle. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:23, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Kesla Vein duel Edit

Hey Lee, I saw you have First duel in Kesla Vein currently {{inuse}}. Would you mind adding the {{Lost Tribe of Sith resurgence}} template to the bottom of the page? Thanks, Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 23:20, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

• No problem :P And yes, you're right: the first duel is up to the point that Tola blows up the speeder/runs away. We don't actually see the beginning of the second duel; all we know is that at some point she gets more Sith reinforcements, attack the Jedi again, and chase them until they flee with Nilitz. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • Haha, I'll certainly allow it. :P Here are all of the quotes from that scene:

Then the duel breaks out. When the Sith are killed, leaving just Tola:

Then as Tola uses a cable to climb the ravine, and Ben reaches out to use the Force:

Of course, feel free to separate these into smaller quotes as you see fit. I look forward to your nom; let me know if you have any more questions. :) Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 18:18, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

• A few things: there are a handful of missing links
  • Indeed, I found a lot.
• You should probably mention in the intro that Annax survived
  • Done.
• It's probably worth mentioning in the prelude why Vestara was outcast from the Sith, especially since the quote for the duel has Annax calling her a traitor. And in the interests of keeping the prelude short, you can probably remove the info about the alliance; it doesn't correspond directly to this duel, so probably isn't completely necessary.
  • Done.
    • Just a brief elaboration on why she killed a superior officer would be good here. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
      • Better?
• "Khai dispatched several Sith Sabers to the planet in order to find and capture Abeloth and his daughter as well as killing the Skywalkers." Bit of verb confusion ("killing" is incorrect); and IIRC, Operation: Shieldfall was supposed to capture/kill Abeloth, not Annax. I think Annax's team was just sent down ahead of time to kill the Skywalkers and locate Abeloth for the rest of the Sith in Shieldfall
  • Tweaked.
• After you mention Gavar Khai, make sure you specify which Khai you're referring to, instead of just saying "Khai" every time, or the reader may be confused
  • Done.
• Who's the "Keshiri Saber"? (I know; but the reader might not)
  • Adressed.
• Why is part of the duel not in chronological order? ("Seconds earlier"—why not mention what happened earlier first?)
  • Tweaked.
• "Led by the Sith Saber Tola Annax, a group consisting of four Sabers" makes it sound like it Annax was in command of four other Sabers.
  • Done.
• Their speeder actually exploded after the duel, to help cover Annax's escape
  • Done.
• The Grand Master didn't convince Kandra to meet with them; Kandra had to convince the Jedi.
  • Adressed.
• That's it; there are a couple of tiny wording tweaks to make, but nothing that isn't "sofixit"-worthy of me. (I didn't do a copy-edit since you still have the inuse tag up; do you have a preference of whether I do that now or after you nom it?) Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks.
• Oh, and for the infobox: the mission to Klatooine and Jedi Queen project are concurrent with this duel, and IIRC the Funeral of Kenth Hamner is the last event before this one, so should go in the "prev=" field. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done.
• Sorry to message again, but: Trial of Tahiri Veila was actually also concurrent. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • np. Done.
• No problem :) Here's all I caught left: "Both sides were searching for the dark side entity Abeloth, which led to a duel between the two factions." I'm not entirely sure that's accurate; it was part of it, but there was also the fact that the Sith just wanted to kill the Skywalkers and capture Ves.
  • I agree but Annax's question about Abeloth makes me believe that finding her was at least a secondary goal. However, if you disagree I'm fine to change it.
    • Yeah, it was definitely a secondary goal, but it didn't lead to the duel. Her intent to kill the Skywalkers/capture Vestara led to the duel. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
• It might be enough to just say that Tola ordered her surrender and Ves refused (you could probably remove the bit saying they "exchanged some words").
  • Done.
• Do we know for certain that the petty officer was only a former petty officer? Could Gavar not have just sent him down for this one mission without relieving him of his duty?
  • That's indeed false, it is only stated that he is a petty officer. Corrected.
• I think you could put a bit more in the aftermath from the Sith perspective: maybe just give a brief mention that they then pushed forward with Operation Shieldfall. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • Better?
    • Link for the confrontation please. :P And yep, a "one-against-one duel" works as a term (usually we say "one-on-one," but "one-against-one" works, too). Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Good article article Edit

Hey, Lee. Thanks again for answering those questions I asked you a few weeks ago. The article that I wrote for Wookieepedia: NewsNet is now on the Main Page of Wookieepedia; check it out! Menkooroo 16:56, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

GAN Objections Edit

Hey, Lee, just wanted to remind you that you have some objections on my GAN's for Ozurist, Galen Besk, and Vastil that are over three weeks old. I'd love it if you could take a look when you got a chance, and seeing as all three say "More to come", could you check if there are any other errors that catch your eye? Thanks. Cade Calrayn 03:41, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Updated Ultimate Guide Edit

Hello there, I'm not sure if you have a copy of Star Wars: The Ultimate Visual Guide: Updated and Expanded, but I was flipping through it and noticed that 2242 appears in it. Since he was your GAN, I figured I would bring it to your attention. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 21:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V) Edit

I got the feeling this passed unnoticed, so since you worte this article, would you maybe take a look at my objections concerning the source? Greetings, Jedi-Meister ^»!?« 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

First Kesla Vein duel Edit

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" First duel in Kesla Vein has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 21:56, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Gungan bouillabaisse Edit

Hello, I was just reading Coruscant Nights II: Street of Shadows and I came across the following mention of Gungan bouillabaisse: "Add to that the heavy, humid reek of open-air cooking, from Gungan bouillabaisse to Wookiee luau..." The soup was smelled by Den Dhur while he was in the Ploughtekal Market on Coruscant looking for a Compressed energy crystal for Jax Pavan to build a new lightsaber. The events of the book occur in 19 BBY. I guess it will probably still be a CA after the update, farewell.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:53, May 28, 2012 (UTC)