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[edit] Re:hey

Yes, good. Did you get my previous message explaining that im coming back to the project to head it again, with you leading as well? DC 23:08, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Thank you

Hey, thanks for the recognition. I hope everything is well with you. On another note, I have been watching your progress around here with interest, and I may actually have a need for your talents/services in the foreseeable future. When the time presents itself accordingly, I will provide you with further details. Until then, keep up the good work.—Tommy9281 (Peace is a lie) 19:31, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

[edit] stuck ( canon issuses) mining driods

The mining droids on peragus are seemingly simple modles without much of an incentive to attack miners, so what i said was that they were made to belive that organics and unahtorized droids (such as t3 and the miners personal droids not linked to the central computer) were a mining material. The driods were also told that the head and heart were more valuable. last thing is that they were also told that the organics/ other driods were crosswired to think that the mining droids were mineable, so the situation would be to mine or be mined. oh and i also made the mining laser a continuos beam wepon that cuts and drills slowly more than blasts, so its a litttle more grissly. is all this canonical?HK-47 rebuilt 20:50, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Re:Maladi

Yes...we're almost done with Maladi (thank god). Graestan is probably going to copyedit and source the infobox soon, and all that remains after that is writing a P&T and P&A, and expanding a couple more sentences, especially in the section where the Sith capture Cade. I'd probably say its about 80% done right now, and once those tasks are finished, it should be ready to nominate for FA. Cheers. DC 18:06, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

  • Never mind that. Cade's capture section and the P&T are just about done. All that remains is the P&A, a little bit on the BTS, and a bit more sourcing. If you write a P&A, or at least one of those three, that would everything so much easier. Cheers. DC 20:55, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

[edit] RE:Hey!

Thanks, will do. Also I left comments on Kreia's talk page in regards to the name of the article, you might want to have a look if you haven't already. Glad you like my page, cheers. Jayce Carver 18:55, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Kreia

It appears you're working on the Kreia article and, as I am too, I was wondering if you'd be interested on working on it collaboratively? To me it just seems foolish working on the same thing with the same goals in two separate projects. --Darth tom (talk) 18:57, 4 November 2008 (UTC)

  • If you're going to change the name, put it through a CT first. It's too big a decision for one user to make. Graestan(Talk) 00:53, 5 November 2008 (UTC)
    • Anything in particular you'd like me to start work on? And shall I just edit the sub page? --Darth tom (talk) 19:20, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Unprotect

Hey, Kasra :) I've went ahead and unprotected your user talk page as you requested. Anything else I can do for you, let me know. Cheers, Greyman(Talk) 20:01, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Bastila vs Revan image

I uploaded the file you requested, I hope I'm not too late.File:Bastila_vs_Revan.jpg MIS Tau 1 17:24, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

[edit] WP:KOTOR Meeting

Hello Jedi Kasra. Please note that there will be a project meeting for WP:KOTOR at 0:00 UTC (approx. 7:00pm Eastern Time) Saturday, 31 January, 2009. Please click here for further details, including agenda. Cheers MadclawShyriiwook! 00:26, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

  • I'm pretty sure Goodwood will make a summary of what was discussed and give it a place on the project page. Cheers dude :) MadclawShyriiwook! 15:43, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Darth Malak GAN

Hey Jedi Krasa. I just wanted to let you know that I went through and did some copy-editing of punctuation and other bits and pieces. About the quotes, I agree with you, and since there seems to be some disagreement about including partial quotes in prose, I struck-out my objection. It may be worth your while to take a look at this discussion regarding quotes, if only to be aware of current sentiment. If you would like any help with the article, let me know and I'll be happy to do what I can. Cylka-talk- 08:01, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

Hey Kasra. I did some more copy-editing of Malak and have removed most of the OR and POV issues. I removed the Yuthura Ban quote under the Dark Lord of the Sith section since the quote alone, without any text just doesn't look right. I removed the mention of Bastila in the Search for the Star Forge sub-section since she would need context at that point, and introducing her at that point wouldn't work very well. I also wanted to leave you a list of specific items that need some more work. The article is getting pretty close to having the objections taken care of. Just a bit more work is needed.

  • Karath needs a bit more context. You especially need to explain how it was Malak who gave him this final test of allegiance.
  • Bastila needs a bit more context when she is first introduced in the Betraying the Master sub-section. Same goes for the Leviathan.
  • The Revelation on the Leviathan subsection needs to have more detail. Right now it barely skims over the detail, and a reader unfamiliar with the story would be lost.
  • Many of the paragraphs that come from the Knights of the Old Republic Campaign Guide need to be rewritten into your own words. They are bordering on copyright infringement. This is especially true in the P&T.
  • Make sure that the semi-colon is being used correctly.
  • See if you can merge some of the paragraphs together some more. there are many small paragraphs, and it would be better to get rid of them.
  • In the P&A, see if you can pipelink his Force powers a bit more. As it stands, it reads a bit like game mechanics.
  • Yo need to look through John Jackson Miller's KotOR blog to check his notes to see if he says anything more about Malak in his trivia section and notes.
  • The Bts really needs to have longer paragraphs. It reads like a trivia section too much.

Cylka-talk- 01:46, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Visas Marr

Hey Krasa. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by working on her article. I was planning on taking her to FA soon, I just wanted to wait until my FAN for Telos IV went through first. I'm still new at the FA/GA nominations and I don't want to put up too many articles up at once. But if you see anything that would help improve the article, I would most certainly appreciate the help. Thanks. Cylka-talk- 23:47, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Vacae

Hey Kasra,

You may not be aware, but that particular user has been recently granted a permanent Wookieepedia vacation. You may want to direct your inquiries elswhere in light of that. Perhaps Lady Cylka, who has since assumed authority of the unnamed's current endeavors. Hope this helps.—Tommy9281 (Peace is a lie) 16:52, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

[edit] KotOR Project

Hey Krasa. If you want to, go ahead. My plan had been to wait until the meeting to bring up the current situation of the Project, but I imagine that that same little birdie who talked to you would like to move things along a bit more quickly than I have been. Either way, I know that you can't make the meeting, but logs and minutes will be posted afterwards. Thanks. Cylka-talk- 18:33, 26 January 2009 (UTC) Edit: Reading the above post, I may have been wrong about the birdie ;-)

  • It's good to hear that you are working on all of those articles. I too believe in this project and I hope to kick-start it again. I'm currently working on compiling lists of articles that fall under our project and I'm planning to overhaul the project's page. As to Visas, the reason the {{GameLSmechanics|Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords}} was added was because of a few things that I included that haven't been written anywhere else, such as: the Exile doesn't have to regret hurting her, nor does she have to learn Force-sight; the Exile doesn't have to give Visas permission to visit her meditation chambers on the Ravager; the Exile doesn't have to ask for Nihilus's mask; the Exile doesn't have to listen to Kreia's predictions. Cylka-talk- 21:17, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Atris and other projects

Hey Kasra. I've noticed that you've been editing the articles and I'm looking forward to checking them out this week. I'm a bit bogged down at the moment since we have Force cage under review by the Inqs and there has been a bit of a snag with it, but I should be able to look at your changes in a couple of days, and thank you for those quotes for Visas. I also wanted to tell you that I didn't mean to offend you by taking out the Project editor from your name. I'm not sure if you read the meeting logs, or maybe the discussion didn't come across all that clearly. We talked about the fact that since the project is in a bit of an organizational phase, we would discuss our roles in the project at the next meeting, once everything had settled down and we all had taken the time to think about what we wanted to do. So, it wasn't meant as anything personal at all, and I hope that you didn't take it that way. Also, just so you won't be surprised, I expect to be taking most of the names off of our members list by the end of the week. I left messages with all of the inactive members asking them to contact me as to whether they want to continue with the project. Keep up the hard work you've been putting in so far! Cylka-talk- 08:56, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

  • All the work you're doing is great. I believe some of the other members have left their opinion about Malak's quote. I'm also working on a hardcore copy-edit of his article based on the objections and from talking to the other AC members. I had to remove some of the images, since there were just way too many. Once I'm done with the copy-edit, I'll let you know and hopefully the GAN will start moving again. Cylka-talk- 05:53, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:Form VII

  • Thanks for the info. I've updated the article appropriately. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 23:42, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Atris

Kasra,

Thanks for letting me know. I do not have time at the moment to start the article beyond some browsing. I'm hoping that during the summer I will be able to get into the article with great detail and clean 'er up. Have a good one. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:23, 6 February 2009 (UTC)

  • Figured there was not reason to start a new heading for this. Here's the picture. As for the Darth Traya image you asked for from CSWE, I can't get a decent scan of that one. Probably because I don't own the book, it's from the library, so the page probably is just too messy with fingerprints, nicks, etc for a good scan. - JMAS Hey, it's me! 16:52, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Lightsaber pics

Darth Malak

Darth Nihilus

Revan

Bastila Shan

Here ya go. - JMAS Hey, it's me! 22:14, 9 February 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Darth Malak GAN

Thanks for dealing with the objections so quickly. In regards to your questions left on my talk page:

  • About Karath, I did put down context on him and why he was at the meeting, but did it in the following paragraph.
    • The problem with this is that you introduce Karath before the explanation for his presence. Perhaps shifting the explanation paragraph to earlier in the section may help this?
  • I don't feel that it is necessary to put Camper's involvement in the exogorth project in the "Captured at Flashpoint" section.
    • There should be some mention of his involvement. I'm not talking about going into great detail, but if you mention that Jarael was punished for talking to him, it deserves some mention.
  • "The Star Forge" section already mentions the fact that Malak took Jedi from Dantooine and used them for the Star Forge.
    • Chronologically, however, this event happened a lot earlier in the timeline. There should be an initial mention that he took prisoners during the attack, then revealed later on exactly what he does with them.
  • Also, I did take care of the first name-surname jumbo, but it doesn't right calling Bastila, "Shan" all the time, and it also doesn't it feel right calling Shel "Jelavan".
    • Can't budge on this one, I'm afraid. Shel Jelavan is an FA herself, and her entire article refers to her as "Shelavan". While Bastila is also an FA and refered to as "Bastila" throughout, it was written two years ago before the FA process was tightened. A recent GA that passed review, Black Vulkars, also uses "Shan" as the descriptive name. If you plan to take this through the FAN process, I can guarantee it will be insisted upon.

Hope that helps. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:29, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Hey Kasra. I just wanted to let you know that the source list for Malak isn't actually correct. The Databank entries are always listed last since they don't have a "published" date. Also, articles from Starwars.com are placed in the external links section. I'm pretty sure that's it, but you check out out some of the current FAs to make sure if you like. After those are fixed, I'm sure Toprawa will take a look. Double check your other articles as well. I'll take a look at Revanchist in a little bit. Thanks. Cylka-talk- 15:09, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:Merge

[edit] Lightspeed

Hey, Jedi Kasra,

You may not be aware, but DC has recently taken a permanent Wookieepedia vacation. You may want to direct your inquiries for him elswhere in light of that. With regards to Malak, I will assume responsibility of his objections, but please allow for me to get situated.—Tommy (Nine two eight one) 16:45, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Legacy WookieeProject

Hey Jedi Kasra :), good to hear you still want to be involved in the project. Its great that your starting work on Cade, but if you look on the Project page you'll see that Riffsyphon1024 listed Cade as his individual project so you might want to ask him if he would like to collaborate with you :); I will gladly help with it as well. Did you still want to be considered the Project editor? Since I'm gonna try to appoint some "officers", who can be go to people, such as Floyd is the LotF Specialist, so that can be your position. Also I was wondering if you have any specific ideas for some goals we can have this year? I'm gonna be asking the more active members of the Project this; things like how many FA/GA's we want to have and so forth. Thanks Jedi Kasra :-). Grunny (Talk) 02:28, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

  • Hey, Kasra. Riffsyphon hasn't been online since the 5th which is why he hasn't replied. I still think it would be polite to wait for him to respond since he did reserve the article, however, you could make a start on it and I will add to it as well, and go over it when you're done :-). Hopefully Riffsyphon will be back soon, and he can reply, but until then go ahead and make a start :-). Grunny (Talk) 04:21, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Darth Nihilus's Species

If you are referring to what it says in the infobox, I think that for simplicity's sake we leave it as simply human because he was human and then he just became a different form of human. NaruHina Talk 02:50, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Unidentified Mandalorian Commander GAN

Of course I'll help. We've all put a lot of work in, and I want to go the whole nine yards.--End0 da Baker 23:51, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Bandon

Hey, Kasra,

Sure, I'll leave some notes about ol' Bandon a little later. I'm actually eager to review him, & when it's ready, I have no problem supporting it. Master Jonathan is a great copy-editor, he's done great work for me in the past, and he'll do right by you as well. Glad to see you still in the game, homie!—Tommy (Nine two eight one) 15:20, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

  • Speaking of which, the article has been copyedited. You did a great job writing the article as there wasn't much that I had to fix. If you have any questions or need anything else copyedited, just let me know. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 15:33, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Bandon notes

Okay, here we go:

  • Link everything that needs it.
  • when you say "reconfigured Revan", it sounds like his body parts were rearranged.
  • "destruction of Taris, bounty hunter Calo Nord was slain by a reconfigured Revan, who had in fact survived his apprentice's betrayal, and Darth Malak sent Bandon to find and capture Shan." What does this part have to do with Bandon going after Shan?
  • "When Revan, Shan, and their allies were searching for the Star Forge, an ancient Rakatan space station under Malak's control, Bandon tracked down and confronted them after they had found the fourth Rakatan Star Map." You should rework this so it starts off more from Bandon's POV, rather than someone else's.
  • Remember to use html code.
  • First two sentences in the "The search for Bastila and downfall" section start with "after".
  • "Accompanied by two Dark Jedi, he presumed that they would be no match for him." Specify the "they" and "him".
  • "It is not known on which world Bandon finally confronted Malak's former Master, but the battle fought between him and Revan was fierce." This needs to be reworked. It is okay to say that they fought on an unknown world, or if it actually is unknown which it was, I would omit that part. Also, calling their battle fierce is POV. Find a different way to describe it.
  • BtS needs to start off by talking about Bandon's creation & first appearance.

Once these things are cleaned up, renom it, and we'll be good to go. I admire your perserverance, it's refreshing to still see other editors passionately participating on the site.—Tommy (Nine two eight one) 03:27, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

  1. Very good. I believe that you are now in a solid position for a renom. Good perserverance, young Jedi. In the future, if you ever want an eye to comb over your work, don't hesitate to ask, I'm more than willing to assist.—Tommy (Nine two eight one) 16:38, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Removing GANs

Kasra, please don't just remove nominations from the GAN page on your own. I understand you meant well per Tommy's advice, but the AC needs to remove the nomination on their own through procedure so it can be archived. Next time, request Tommy or another AC to start an official removal vote. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:55, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Bandon GA

Hey Kasra. I don't think that facial hair counts since it can vary quite easily. As for his Jedi master, I don't think an article is warranted since all we know is that he/she was Bandon's master, nothing else. I would leave it for now. If there is more information later, you can always make one. Cylka-talk- 16:24, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

  • Well, we have an article for Alderaanian swan, a bird that may or may not actually be from Alderaan. We have articles on places in space that have no info other than that they aere there. We also have articles on other people from comics with no other info than that they were at an even and fought in it. Every individual or thing with any significance at all should get an article. NaruHina Talk 16:59, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
    • As you wish. The article name should be something like [[Unidentified Jedi (Darth Bandon)]] or something of that sort. There would need to be a {{conjecture}} tag, and you wouldn't be able to claim that he/she is a Jedi Master. All we know is that this being was a Jedi, and Bandon's master up until sometime during the Jedi Civil War. Cylka-talk- 18:09, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
      • Sure, go ahead with your idea for the article. Cylka-talk- 22:45, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

About Bandon being a Sith Lord, where exactly did you find that? In this entry in the CG, he is listed as a Sith apprentice and Shadow Hand, which actually are the same thing, but not all apprentices are called Shadow Hands from what I can tell. I didn't find anything about him being a Sith Lord. He is also called an apprentice in his Databank entry. In that era, there wasn't any kind of Rule of two established. Cylka-talk- 00:17, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

  • OK, I found that mention in the guide, but I tend to think that it was a mistake on the author's part. All other Sith Lords have Sith Lord written in their entries, while Bandon does not. He simply has Sith apprentice. I would go with his CG entry and DB entry, and put the discrepancy in the Bts, since more sources call him an apprentice rather than Sith Lord. As for the Rule of Two, I didn't say that you said that, but when the fanoneers see something like that written for an Old Republic character, they start using that as an excuse to invoke the Rule of Two for any Old Republic character. I have spent countless hours reverting that sort of fanon, so I just wanted to make it clear to them, rather than accuse you of anything. I didn't mean to do that, and I'm sorry that it came out that way. Next time something like that comes up, I'll leave you a note explaining my actions. Cylka-talk- 15:25, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

I've tried looking up who voiced him at both Moby games and IMDB, but I haven't had any luck with it. Just leave it out for now, and if I find it I'll let you know. Cylka-talk- 16:13, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Chronicles continuity

Hey Kasra. I just wanted to let you know that I have figured out the continuity issues with Chronicles, and you can take a look at them here on the project page. I haven't heard anything concrete about the retcon that you mentioned on Naru's talk page. I guess we'll have to wait and see. If you need anything else, just let me know. Keep up the good work! Cylka-talk- 02:42, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Sith Magnus

That's pretty interesting Kasra, I didn't know that. That little tidbit would be interesting to add into the Bts, I think, and you could source it to Pena's answer on the thread. Cylka-talk- 21:23, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

  • The link that you gave on my talk page should work fine as a source. Cylka-talk- 18:52, 1 April 2009 (UTC)


[edit] KOTOR Campaign Guide images

Here you go. - JMAS Hey, it's me! 16:53, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

New

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Been uploaded for some time

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Just as a reminder, you also need to make sure these images get used within 7 days or they'll get deleted as unused images. - JMAS Hey, it's me! 18:32, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Adoption

Well its not specifically stated in the comic, so I think you need to check Star Wars Insider 101 or find someone who has it, because I'm pretty sure something was mentioned in there. Its only uncertain about Skeeto, since Ahnah is Droo's daughter so she's Nat's step-daughter anyway. Grunny (Talk) 20:55, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] GAN page

Hey Kasra. I have one thing I would like to bring to your attention when you are answering GAN page objections. I wanted to ask you to please properly indent your answers to the objections. Otherwise, if you do not indent them correctly, it is very difficult for us in the AC to make sure that all objections have been striken. We have a policy that even if someone has voted, they need to have all of their objections striken, so we need to double check this. I have properly formatted your answers to my objections as an example. If you take a look at the difference between my objections and Kilson's objections, you will see the difference. Thanks. Cylka-talk- 19:56, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

  • Kasra, if you wouldn't mind reading the following code in edit mode:
  1. Objection header
    • Specific objection
      • Nominator response
    • Stricken objection
      • Nominator response
  2. Objection header
    • Specific objection
    • Specific objection

… and so forth. If you'd please, please try to follow this format, the AgriCorps' work on the GAN page and the Inquisitorius's work on the FAN page would be made so much easier. Thank you. Graestan(Talk) 23:25, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Dorin and the Exile

Hey Kasra. There is already an article about the Dorin enclave, however it could certainly use expansion. I really don't have any new tips, just add whatever you can from the CG. As for the Exile, I would agree with that she wouldn't be a Consular. But since we don't have any other information, we can only speculate as to whether she was a Sentinel or Guardian, and as such, that would have to go in the Bts. Cylka-talk- 01:13, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

  • About the Exile not being a Consular, I do believe that we can't say that she wasn't. Please see this discussion as to why this is so. I have removed that bit from the Bts. Cylka-talk- 05:49, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
  • Yes, you are right about the forms if the player becomes a "pure Consular," but the problem is when the player isn't one, and this is where game mechanics come in. If the player starts out as a Consular, but takes the Jedi Weapon Master or Jedi Watchman prestige classes, they will learn all of the combat forms. However, on the player stat sheets, the Consular levels are still listed, so therefore, it can be argued that the player is still a Consular. The prestige classes are game mechanics, and this is why, after talking to Ataru, and a couple of others, it was decided that it is unclear, and we can't make the assumption that the Exile isn't a Consular. There hasn't been any official confirmation of which prestige classes correspond to which starting classes. Yes, logically we can say: Guardian = Weapon Master; Sentinel = Watchman; and Consular = Master, but until it is official, we can't make any claims about the Exile. All of this may make a good Bts bit, if it is explained in such a manner. Cylka-talk- 15:32, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Do you have...

Yep, I have it with me. What do you need? :) Grunny (Talk) 15:25, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

  • Yeah, I know I changed Azard's article to link to barrier. Grunny (Talk) 15:27, 9 April 2009 (UTC)
    • Ok, I can do that, though you'll have to wait until Tuesday when I get home so I can scan them. I think I might have a few on my hardrive which I had been planning to use. Before then (to save me some scanning time :P) can you check you're going to use them all, since we don't want a heap of unused images. For example the "Azard kills GA trooper" won't fit in the Azard article, so what do you plan on doing with it? :-) Grunny (Talk) 02:15, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Darth Malak GAN

Hey, Kasra. With the Cite web template you need to just read the instructions at the bottom. Some examples are, if it has an author such as the JJM one, insert the address, title, author, date you accessed it and the publisher if there is one into this: {{Cite web |url= |title= |accessdate= |author= |date= |format=HTML |publisher= }}. If there is no author like the other ones use this: {{Cite web |url= |title= |accessdate= |format=HTML }}, inserting the website address, name of page, and the date you accessed it. Also, I have reverted your moving the succession box to the bottom of the article; it is placed before the references per the Manual of Style as a result of this CT. Please make sure you check an article conforms with the MoS before nominating it. Thank you :-). Grunny (Talk) 16:52, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Bastila Shan

Hey, i just noticed your post on Cylka's talk page. Bastila Shan is currently on probation by the Inquisitorius. Here is a list of issues with it that Cylka and others have been working on. The next Inq meeting is likely to be held in early May, so any changes to it should be effected by then. Thanks. Graestan(Talk) 17:17, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Darth Bandon GAN

Thank you for informing me that you finished addressing my objections, but please don't leave too many messages on my talk page. I'll get to them in due time. CC7567 (talk) 17:27, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Español

Hey, young Jedi,

My page is in Spanish as a tribute to someone very dear to me, who passed away on April Fool's day.—Tommy (Nine two eight one) 21:16, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Bandon: Sith Lord

Hey Kasra. I'm sorry that it took me some time to get back to you. I had some internet issues and I wasn't able to come online. I think that this is something that needs to go into the Bts since the CG, doesn't have him as a Sith Lord in his entry. He is another one that has mixed information from different sources. Cylka-talk- 02:07, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Fate of the Jedi e-book tie-in

Hey, Kasra. No, I didn't know, thanks a lot for letting me know :-). And I'll continue reviewing Malak soon I've just had a busy week. :-) Grunny (Talk) 02:11, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

== RE: Darth Bandon: FA? I'd say go for it. Noms are ripping through the FA page at a rate of knots these days, but don't be surprised if you have to do some serious work on it. Some of the other Inqs are pretty tough :) - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 16:27, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Welcome

no problem, happy to help =] --Ve-Sioux Ordo (Mando'a) 03:06, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] m & ñ

  • Thanks for not taking offence at me editing your FAN ;) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:22, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: FAN

  • Thanks for letting me now. Good job with the nomination. :) –Victor (talk page) 04:04, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Revan's Planet

Sure, I'll help. I've been planning on doing that for a while now but something always seemed to come up. NaruHina Talk 17:18, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:Yuthura Ban

Hey Kasra. Sure, I'll help you with anything that you want with Yuthura and Uthar. Once you have worked on the articles, I can go do a pre-nom critical review to see if anything is missing. As for the CSWE, I know for certain that Yuthura Ban does not have an entry, although I am unsure about Uthar Wynn. I can try to find that out, though. Oh, before I forget -- Alek has new information from the latest comic that needs to be added into the Darth Malak article. Anything else you need let me know. Cylka-talk- 21:51, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Revan project page

Hey Kasra. I just wanted to let you know that I added in colons to the category links on your project page for Revan since it was showing up in the category pages. Cylka-talk- 10:07, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

  • And I removed {{eras|sprot|former}} because they automatically put the article into categories. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:20, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
  • No problem. I didn't, but I do now, and have struck. I made a few changes to the section too. I think it looks better. I noticed two more things, though (I'll post them here rather than the GAN page so you don't have to track me down when you've done). You could make reference to the quote in the first bio section; say Alek and Revan were fast learners and wanted to learn more than their masters were comfortable with, and that Alek was a talented Jedi but not as much as Revan, etc. Also, the start of "Recruiting for the Revanchists" could do with more context. Say that the Mandalorians attacked but the Order were slow to do anything about it, and that Alek/Revan disagreed etc. It's already there, sort of, but it could do with more spelling-out for people who aren't familiar with the material. When you mention "Revan's cause" it wouldn't be clear to someone who knew nothing about it what that meant. Good work with Malak, by the way -- I haven't read it all, but it looks good and thorough, and is well-written. You should try for FA when it's gone through GAN, I think. (I'd be willing to give it a runover if you did). :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:34, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Bane/Revanchist

Hey, Kasra,

Yes, I remember you mentioning that before. I am unsure as to how to go about that, but I will figure it out. Thanks for that piece of info, btw. As far as the Revanchists, give me a moment. I'll try to get to it either tonight or tomorrow, and we'll go through it like we did with Bandon. How's that?—Tommy (Nine two eight one) 16:39, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] The Faction

My apologies, young Jedi. If you still want to do the pre-nom review together, I'm here. Other things have me stretched rather thin as of late, but I have not forgotten about you.—Tommy (Nine two eight one) 15:01, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Calo Nord

OK, I knocked out the copyedit and a pre-nom review. Here are my objections:

  • Plagiarism watch: Several phrases scattered throughout the article appear to be quoted directly from the Databank. Please look for and reword such instances.
  • "He became the most feared hunters of his era." Do you mean "one of the most feared hunters" or "the most feared hunter"?
  • Context on the Exchange in both the intro and the body.
  • "Jedi Civil War" section quote: the hyphen technically should be an em-dash with no surrounding spaces, but as I don't have the game, I don't know what's shown in-game. If it's verbatim from a text display as shown now, then a [sic] might be warranted, but if a text display shows the em-dash—or if it can only be heard, not seen on-screen—then it needs to be changed.
  • "Nord, who was on the planet for business with Davik Kang, tried along with the crime lord to prevent Shan's escape from the planet when she, the former Sith Lord and amnesiac soldier Revan, the Republic captain Carth Onasi, and the Mandalorian Canderous Ordo—who was also one of Kang's employees—attempted to steal Kang's flagship, the Ebon Hawk so that they could escape Taris." This is a bit of a run-on—see if you can break it up into two sentences.
  • "but ha and his thugs were quickly cut down": Huh?
  • P&T section quote: Who says what lines? It might be better to use a dialogue template here instead of {{Quote}}. Also, check the punctuation at the end of the second line—same situation as the other quote mentioned above.
  • "Should Canderous Ordo accompany Revan when Nord confronts him, he will make note of the fact that Nord brought backup with him," You just mentioned three males—which one does "he" refer to?

If you have any questions, please let me know. Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 19:51, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Since you seem to have reverted much of the stuff I changed, I'll explain why I changed them:

  • {{C}} does not belong in the infobox. That template just makes the text small; since infobox text is small anyway, it's redundant and thus make the size of the article larger for no reason.
  • "Spacestation" is not a word (note that the title directly above the definition contains a space); also Spacestation redirects to Space station.
  • "The" is proper before the term Star Forge (note how it is used in the Star Forge article)
  • "New-found" is not a word, "newfound" is a word.
  • Quote formatting: When using the {{Quote}} template and breaking into multiple lines, two apostrophes for italics should be placed immediately before each closing quotation mark and immediately after each opening quotation mark that you manually type. This is to properly prevent the quotation marks themselves from being italicized.
  • Date at the beginning of the "Jedi Civil War" section: Many readers might not know when the Jedi Civil War took place, so the year needs to be explicitly stated instead of pipelinked to provide context.
  • "disturbingly expressionless face": "Disturbingly" was removed because it is 1) POV and 2) copied from the Databank (see my first objection above).
  • "Occassionally" only has one "s".
  • GenoHaradan should have the capital H; lowercase H is incorrect.
  • {{DEFAULTSORT}} is used to sort articles in categories when there are more than one or two categories. It removes the need to pipe every category, thus reducing the size of the article.

I have redone these changes. Fair warning: If you revert them back again, I will object to them on the GAN page when it goes up. I did strike two objections above that you addressed. Thank you and may the Force be with you! Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 18:18, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

The only issue left is clarifying who says what i the P&T quote, which as I said above, would probably be best accomplished with {{Dialogue1}}. It would look something like this:

Nord: "Go away."
Revan: "I saw how you mopped up those Black Vulkars. Nice work."
Nord: "One."
Revan: "Come on, I'm just trying to be friendly. Don't you want to be friendly?"
Nord: "Two."
Revan: "Okay, I see your point. I'll be off, then."
Nord: "Smart."
—Calo Nord and Revan[src]

Take care of that, and you'll have a user vote soon after it goes up on GAN. :) Given the size of the intro paragraphs, I would say that three is probably best. Have a nice day! Master JonathanJedi Council Chambers 16:13, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Hey Kasra. I saw you in the RCs and I wanted to tell you that I would take a look at Calo Nord later on today, and leave you any objections. Cylka-talk- 15:21, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Stubs

Sure. If I can create articles like these, then yours are certainly worth merit. If they are going to be stubs, make sure you slap the appropriate templates on them as well.—Tommy9281 (No quarter given, all exits sealed) 16:03, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Name change?

It could be worth considering, but it would require a discussion on the talk page to let people present their views on it. Also, if it were to be moved, it would probably have to be moved to Rawk, since "Bantha" is a nickname, similar to Jarik. Grunny (Talk) 03:09, 9 May 2009 (UTC)


[edit] Re: Calo Nord's intro

In particular, I think it's mainly the third paragraph that can either be cut down or merged with the second; you can say that Nord informed them of Revan, but right now, Nord's briefing is a bit hefty. Also, the information in the third paragraph is centered a bit too much around Revan; I understand that it's part of the reason Nord was trying to capture him and the situation as well, but it's still focused too much on Revan. The information you mentioned on my talk page is important, and it can only be shortened, because it needs to stay. Instead of saying that Kang was based on Taris, you can just say that when you mention his estate. Also, this sentence in the first paragraph: "He then became a bounty hunter, and his legend grew with every bounty he collected. Nord became one of the most feared hunters of his era." can be cut down; it's an embellishment of his persona, but it's not really necessary. I'll get to reviewing my other objections later today. CC7567 (talk) 16:10, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

  • It looks fine right now. My only remaining intro objection is that if the third paragraph can be cut down more from Nord's briefing of Malak and Karath; it's still a bit wordy. CC7567 (talk) 16:35, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:User talk:Cylka

Cylka's going to be close to completely unavailable for a few days, and I offered to handle anything people ask of her. Was there anything in particular you needed assistance with? Graestan(Talk) 19:56, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Bandon

If it's not too much trouble I'd rather that these discussions take place on the FAN page. It just makes things less complex, and I have fewer things to keep track of. Thefourdotelipsis 22:50, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Your page is awesome

Your page is awesome. Your character is awesome i read your fanfic and ,guess what, it was awesome.--DarthPhane 20:25, 28 May 2009 (UTC),Dark Lord of the Sith

  • Thank you for the help and advice--DarthPhane, Dark Lord of the Sith 22:20, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Bastila

Jedi Kasra: sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. Stupid real life stuff going on, and I forgot to put a notice up on my talk page. Anyways, thanks for your consideration about the Bastila Shan page. Please feel free to go ahead and post your intro that you've been working on if you haven't done so already. If you don't think that you will have time to finish it, you can send me what you have so far and I can work on it if you like. I mostly just signed up for her on the individual projects list to get us all a bit more time to fix up her page before they demoted her. --Queenofthe1ring 03:15, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

  • sounds like a plan! :-)--Queenofthe1ring 01:44, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
  • Intro looks awesome! One suggestion though, the ending bit about her child, if it doesn't have a source, we'd probably be better off leaving it out. --Queenofthe1ring 02:06, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
  • Ok, in that case, no complaints with the new intro. Go for it!--Queenofthe1ring 00:40, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] WP:LE's one-year anniversary

Happy One-Year Anniversary.
Thanks for all your efforts so far, Kasra. WookieeProject Legacy Era wouldn't be the success it is without the efforts of everyone. I've written up a small thank you at Forum:One Year Anniversary, so feel free to read over it :-). Grunny (Talk) 06:33, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Assistance

Hey Kasra,

I have to be honest with you in telling you that I have no exposure to Revan, or any material in which he directly appears. If you want me to do a general perusal, however, I can probably manage that. Please advise, thanks.—Tommy9281 (No quarter given, all exits sealed) 15:33, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

  • Madame Cylka is fine, she's just preoccupied with a few things. As far as Malak goes…it'll be a few days, because I have a pretty busy schedule for at least the next five. And, your projects take undivided attention, so I've got to be sitting when I do get to it. Patience, young Jedi, all good things come to those who wait;)—Tommy9281 (No quarter given, all exits sealed) 15:40, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Calo Nord

Please take a look at that blue sign at the top of my talk page; I have it up there for a reason. I have both Nord and the GAN page in my watchlist, and I already knew that you had addressed the objections without the notice you left on my talk page. In the future, unless I'm inactive for at least a week, please do not leave notices for me every time after you address any of my objections, as I don't need added reminders when I can get to them on my own time. Thank you. CC7567 (talk) 21:13, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re; Image request

I replied to your request on my talk page, but decided to copy it to your talk page as well in case you miss the first one. These are the images you're looking for, pick any of the two: File:MalakDyreFight1.jpg, File:MalakDyreFight2.jpg. MauserComlink 22:14, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Kreia's lightsaber

Hey Kasra. Sure, I'll periodically take a look at your Revan subpage and add in information. I'm still a little behind in regards to my work on the Wook, so I may do so slowly at the beginning. I also know that you take the time to check your sources, so I am not worried about that. Since the CSWE is the lastest source, you should add that she wielded a double-bladed green lightsaber before she lost the use of her hand. That is what I took away from the CSWE. Also, under the Traya entry, it says that the Exile was her former student -- Traya sensed the Exile, then went looking for her and found her at Peragus. This should be added in as well. Cylka-talk- 16:04, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:

Take your time. You do not need to update me each time, as well, since I check the FAN page a few times each week for addressed objections. That way you do not feel pressured to rush corrections or to garner my attention. I also recommend that people take the objections seriously and take their time in correcting them, so do not feel rushed. I'll see when they are done on the FAN page and we can go from there. Thanks. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 19:04, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE:Dician

Ah, I didn't know that. Thanks, Kasra :-). Grunny (Talk) 15:58, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

  • Sure, I'll try to get to that soon. Grunny (Talk) 16:04, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Ergeron

Cheers, Kasra, didn't know that. :) --Darth tom (Imperial Intelligence) 16:40, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Joining the Clone Wars WookieeProject

You're welcome to; you don't need to wait for an invitation. :) CC7567 (talk) 19:55, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Redirects

Hey Kasra. Just to let you know, I deleted the redirects left behind by moving your /Project Page subpage to the /First Project since they appeared in the double redirects page. Grunny (Talk) 08:31, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Senate hostage crisis

Thanks for the tip; I'll add it as soon as I can. CC7567 (talk) 19:06, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

  • I'm aware of the discrepancy, thank you. CC7567 (talk) 18:00, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Vindication

Sorry I haven't gotten to your objections yet. They will be taken care of tomorrow PointGiven (But...it was so artistically done...) 02:47, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

  • Just finished addressing your points. I hope I got them all correctly. I have considered FAing the two. I'll try to FA Lucien if I have the time and save Haazen for a long project. Right now I'm just focusing on Vindication, and updating Zayne Carrick. PointGiven (But...it was so artistically done...) 01:20, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] FAN objections

Kasra: I too do not want to argue, so I tried to make it as clear as possible on the FAN page so that you have an idea of what I am saying. I apologize if I did not communicate that well earlier. That said, some objections are still standing because they simply have not been done. Please carefully read the objections so that parts are not missed. Also, for the record, I am not mad at you; and, I hold nothing against you. I am just simply trying to help you get this article to your ultimate goal. Keep working at it and will arrive. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 02:45, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Plagiarism

It has recently come to my attention that you appear to have copied information directly from the Official Site's Databank into your updated version of the Darth Bandon article. Although you were confronted with this by two Inquisitors, one of whom was an administrator, and you have removed/rephrased enough of the content to satisfy their concerns, I feel it is my duty to issue an official warning regarding plagiarism from licensed Star Wars sources and the danger of copyright infringement it poses. I have heard from other Inquisitors and administrators that this was apparently not an isolated incident, so I will state here and now that if it comes to my attention that this practice is continued beyond this message, you will face a lengthy block from the website. Please consider your options, and I hope you make the right choices in the future. Write articles based on the information in the sources. Don't copy information from sources and then alter it; don't write articles based on information in other articles on the site; just write articles from the information in the sources. I cannot stress this enough. I think you will find the featured and good article nominations processes much smoother if you follow this sincere advice. Graestan(Talk) 02:51, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Jar'Kai

Glad you like Jar'Kai. Oh, I just called Dooku Ventress and Grievous' Sith Master just to point out that he was a Sith, not state that their his Sith apprentices, since he's not mentioned very much in my revision. Jensaarai 02:58, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Userbox Query

D'you mind if I use your Christian userbox? I haven't found one anywhere. --GungansPWN 14:59, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Karakan Gauntlets

Don't you mean from Mic'tunan'jus Orgu? At least according to our article, Ja'Gatcha is not on Tatooine. --Eyrezer 21:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Backlash

Is there a preview of Backlash i did not see one at it's article thanks for your time.--T-Rex1 00:04, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Help

I tried to archive my talk page but this popped up

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What do i do?--Sunray1 20:30, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re SW Miniatures request

Sorry for the delay. Here you go. - JMAS Hey, it's me! 19:29, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Sith Triumvirate

I'm doing well. The Triumvirate was the alliance of those who were left of Revan's Empire who reformed the Empire after the Jedi Civil War. The reorganized faction is apparently still part of Darth Revan's Empire according to the KOTOR CG. NaruHina Talk 04:37, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

  • Of course you can review him. I'll consider it a birthday present :P NaruHina Talk 23:57, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
    • Same here, I won't have a chance to look over Malak or Calo until at least Friday. NaruHina Talk 22:44, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
      • OK, I'll look over it now. Driver's liscence? Yayz! :D NaruHina Talk 20:32, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Oh, I was wrong. I misread a passage I was shown. The Sith Triumvirate as an organization was formed from the remnants of Revan's Empire, but Traya and Nihilus had no connection to it other than that. I'll fix it and thanks for taking the time to read the whole thing for this. NaruHina Talk 04:27, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:

Sounds like a good idea. Riot at M'Bardi or somesuch would probably be an appropriate title. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:42, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Darth Voren

Thankyou, I will certainly considering FAing Darth Voren. What is it you would like to ask me? --Jinzler 12:39, September 3, 2009 (UTC)

  • Thats fine, I will add the Betrayal info for you. I do have a copy of the PC version of KOTOR, although I only recently purchased it, so I haven't progressed that far in it yet --Jinzler 20:12, September 4, 2009 (UTC)
    • Ok, I will do that --Jinzler 20:19, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] KOTOR CT

I'm here to inform you that the KOTOR CT you started has been archived as successful per community consensus. I'll leave it up to you to implement the details. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:46, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] KotOR Prima Guide

Alright, thanks for this. I couldn't find this online anywhere. I need to know which characters that are in the South Apartments of the Upper City in Taris (the building where your hideout is) are mentioned in the book . And if so, is there anything in there that I wouldn't find in the game? Even better, do you have a computerised copy or know where I can get my hands on one? Thanks again, SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 08:31, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

  • What about the others in the building, (eg. the merchant that advertises energy shields)? Because the guide says on the back cover that it has info on every NPC in the game. Does this mean every character that you can interact with, or that furthers the plot, or what? SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 23:07, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Vote counts

Please remember to update a nomination's vote count when you vote for the article on the FAN or anything else related. It leaves less of a hassle for others that would otherwise have to take time to recheck all of the counts on the page. CC7567 (talk) 16:24, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:

It was CSD'd by Mauser. "The line "The Mandalorians destroyed my first life on Quelii" can refer to anything, not necessarily a battle. We have no right to assume such a battle evet took place. MauserComlink" -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:59, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Saul Karath‎

I fixed Saul Karath for you. Like the MOS says, the succession box goes after the sources section, right before the notes and references section. When you source a succession box, the box has to be before {{reflist}} or else the citations won't appear as part of the list of references. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 16:11, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

  • No problem. I'll take a look if I have some time. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 16:20, September 30, 2009 (UTC)
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