Contents 1 Dark Forces Project 2 Waxer 3 Clone sergeant 4 Re:Grievous attacks 5 Sinker 6 Re:Ryloth 7 Gauntlet of Death Part 3 8 Tao 9 Cookie for you 10 Denal and the 501st 11 Season Two 12 Denal page. 13 Denal 14 Poor Denal and Koho. 15 Republic Heroes 16 Rianna Saren 17 Fil in Republic Heroes 18 Grievous 19 TCW young readers 20 Nefta 21 WP:TCW 22 TCW mobile & Jedi Alliance info 23 WotM 24 Belth Allusis 25 A small request 26 You're a staffie, right? 27 Re:Ahsoka 28 Waxer/Boil audio 29 Clone of Ysanne Isard 30 Rex in Republic Heroes 31 E-mail

[edit] Dark Forces Project

Regarding your Dark Forces Project, I have all of the audio dramatizations, so if you need any audio files for articles as you're working on them, don't hesitate to ask. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 19:23, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Waxer

I see you're working on Waxer. I'm working on the sound files for the quotes, but thought I should point out the quote for the Meeting Numa section is incorrect. It should read, "We should do something. I say we take her with us." - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 00:58, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Clone sergeant

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified clone sergeant (unidentified planet) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 22:05, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:Grievous attacks

Yes he is, although he is only shown firing at Grievous as it appears in the episode. JangFett ^Talk 18:51, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Sinker

Sinker does appear in the Service of the Republic 3. I orginally wanted to take him, but I have no access to the comic. Would you possible take him over ? Or we can co-work on him. --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:06, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

• Thanks that would be the best. Does Boost appear ? --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:52, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
  • Feel free to add the info to Boost and Sinker whenever you like. --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:10, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:Ryloth

I actually just bought that from Amazon yesterday. :) But in the meantime, you might want to log into IRC and see if anyone has it. Did you try asking CC or Trayus? Because they FAed Battle of Ryloth (Clone Wars). JangFett ^Talk 19:59, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

• Sure. :) JangFett ^Talk 20:48, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
  • Just so you know, I have actually read through the book, which is why I objected to it for both Waxer and Boil. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:03, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
    • I'll look through it. Sorry, Qui-Gon; I've been very busy lately. JangFett ^(Talk) 22:05, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Gauntlet of Death Part 3

Qui-Gon, could you do a pre-preview of part three of my Gauntlet of Death project, the Unidentified clone trooper commander (Rishi). --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:17, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

• Thanks for your review, Qui-Gon. I believe that I have fixed your objections. --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:36, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Tao

Your last Tao objection should now be addressed. --Eyrezer 22:06, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Cookie for you

Toprawa and Ralltiir has awarded you a Wookiee Cookie! A Wookiee Cookie for you, QuiGonJinn, for showing the dedication, diligence, and exceptional attention to detail to source information in articles according to individual comic issue, rather than just the generic comic itself. This is the kind of thing we need to improve on as a site to continue to advance our standard of article quality, and it starts with individuals such as yourself. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:29, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Denal and the 501st

I'm currently doing some research in preparation for revamping the 501st Legion and would like to clarify Denal's membership of the legion. Did "Duel of the Droids Decoded" explicitly state his membership of it? (As a note: if that's the case, you might want to check your referencing in Denal's infobox; it's currently sourced to the episode, which is not a source at all.) CC7567 ^(talk) 20:07, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

• Ah, okay. Thanks for that. Also, off the top of your head, do you remember the exact wording from DotD on Rex and Denal's participation in the Battle of Geonosis? CC7567 ^(talk) 21:10, September 26, 2009 (UTC)
  • Thanks; I needed to clarify that they served together. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:24, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Season Two

Well, at least it's finally confirmed. :P Anyway, from what I can tell, the Season Two stuff appears to happen before the mobile game, as he's still a trooper in "Cargo of Doom" (according to the ep guide, at least). I'll leave this up to you to work out; it'll be easier to determine the placement once the episode airs. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:37, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

• So he isn't a commander yet? Strange. Also, I heard that Denal possibly dies in Cargo of Doom, but of course, that could be fake/speculation from the CoD clip. We'll wait and see. :) JangFett ^(Talk) 20:39, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Denal page.

Hi. I was trying to add a quote, picture and edit Denal's article and I was informed by someone that I have to ask your permission first. --Butters4115 ^{(Well hiya there, fellas!)} 15:40, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

• Thank you. Your work on the article is great. Denal is awesome.--Butters4115 ^{(Well hiya there, fellas!)} 17:34, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Denal

QuiGon, I feel that I need to inform you that in its current state, the Denal article is not factually correct. I'm going to avoid posting spoilers here, but I hope you realize that the events at the end of "Cargo of Doom" are not at all what they seem to be. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 22:49, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

• I can understand why you're not putting in 22 BBY as his date of death yet. But at least put the information on the Devaron mission after the info on the mobile game. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:50, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Here are your requested images. There are two of Denal "apprehending" Bane. The first is an earlier frame and is the clearer/sharper of the two images. The second is a little less sharp because Bane is moving, but showing Bane with arms raised showed a little more that Denal was capturing Bane. Take your pick as to which you want to use. I'll get the sound files shortly. :) - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 14:58, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

• You'll want to replace File:Resolute briefing CoD.png with the native JPG format version. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 15:52, October 6, 2009 (UTC)
• Just briefly looked over your Denal article. You have certainly put a lot of work into it. I would like to suggest, however, that when you "standardize paragraph lengths", that you not forget that a length does not necessarily define how long a paragraph should be. Proper English grammar dictates that paragraphs have a main idea and supportive details. Topic sentences bearing a paragraph's main idea usually begin at the start of the paragraph. The supportive details then follow in compound sentences, combined sentences, and simple sentences, adding a variety of sentence structure to entertain the reader. There is a break (ending one paragraph and beginning another) when there is a change in action or thought in the body of the article. Paragraphs use transitions to move from one idea to another, carrying on where the previous paragraph left off, but still keeping the underlying theme in focus. This is where the paragraph uses a transitional phrase. For a short lesson on transitioning paragraphs, see the following link. http://www.bobbrooke.com/WritersCorner/paragraphtransitions.htm —Gethralkin^Hyperwave 13:27, October 7, 2009 (UTC)
  • As you requested, here are the grammatical suggestions:

Mission to Skytop Station—"...Nachkt hoped to sell the droid to the Separatist General Grievous. *new paragraph* Infiltrating the station with..." (transitioning from Gha Nacht's reason for going to Skytop to Denal's action there)

Mission to Skytop Station (cont.)—"...them to plant charges while he went in search of R2-D2. *new paragraph* Denal and the others soon reached a door that was ray-shielded. Tano instructed R3-S6 to disable the shield, but the droid, who was in fact a Separatist spy, instead stalled them until battle droids arrived. Denal was first to hear them coming and warned his teammates. *move paragraph break from here* Denal suggested hot-wiring the door, but R3's seeming ineptitude blocked it. *to here* The group was outnumbered, yet were able to use EMP grenades to disable the battle droids. At this point, Grievous..." (new paragraph should encapsulate the sabotage of R3 at the door) —Gethralkin^Hyperwave 15:17, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

• That was all I noticed after looking through it carefully after I got the chance. The rest is very well done. The following are a few grammatical errors involving missing words:

Personality and traits—"...Denal was quick to figure out how to use magnetic boots..."

Devaron—"...due to the fact that Cad Bane did not send for reinforcements,..."—Gethralkin^Hyperwave 15:19, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

• I also wanted to point out that Denal's death at the hands of Cad Bane are not mentioned, and that the mission listed after the Devaron section needs to be listed as apocryphal (at least any parts that place Denal as being alive after the his death on the frigate).—Gethralkin^Hyperwave 16:25, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

• Understood. I have a solution for a fix that will use no speculation either way:

Devaron—"...Skywalker and Tano reached the shuttle and witnessed, appearently, a the wounded Denal shooting Bane, supposedly killing him. There was no time to recover the holocron from the his lifeless body that fell to the hanger floor; therefore, after picking up Denal the survivor, the Republic troops escaped from the frigate, right before it exploded.—Gethralkin^Hyperwave 17:23, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Poor Denal and Koho.

Hey man, I'm about to finish Koho. I don't recall the episode that well (Just Koho and Denal scenes), and did both Denal and Koho appear together in two scenes? I remember when: Rex sent them to find Anakin, and then both spotted Bane before their deaths. My CoD iTunes is in poor quality, and I'm also replying on the Ep Guide. :) JangFett ^(Talk) 16:16, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

• In the ep guide, it says they both encountered him. I don't think Koho could have escaped; that's interesting. JangFett ^(Talk) 16:29, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Republic Heroes

Just one thing. Had you a problem to activate the fisrt generator in the first Ryloth mission. I have a problem and I want to know if you must do something special or there is just a problem with the game. --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:50, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

• Well if I press the force button, it does nothing and if I keep it pressed a while the force goes out. Possible a game problem ? --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:55, October 12, 2009 (UTC)
  • Thank you Qui-Gon, it works now. --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:54, October 13, 2009 (UTC)
    • Sory for being a pain, but what do you have to do in the S.O.S. level on Juma 9, with the stones. Have you to jump or then ? --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:03, October 14, 2009 (UTC)
      • Nevermind, I get past this and I am now in the last battle with Kul Teska on Behpour. --Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:33, October 18, 2009 (UTC)
• Thanks for updating both Christophsis and Vassek's third moon. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:22, October 13, 2009 (UTC)
  • ...Did I remove that? I don't think I intended to. Is it specifically capitalized and stated as "a mission to Skytop Station"? (I need to verify to make sure which way to capitalize it in the article.) Also, I'll try to incorporate the new info for Bane, but I'm extremely hesitant about putting it in the bio when so much else of the game has contradicted the TV series. It's going to require too much fanon to link the two storylines together, so it's probably going to end up in the Bts. Thanks, though. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:40, October 15, 2009 (UTC)
    • Okay; thanks. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:23, October 15, 2009 (UTC)
    • Is there anything (relevant to Bane) that happens after he tells Amidala and Fisto of Juma 9? He seems to just mysteriously disappear after that. Also, if you get the chance, could you do a quick check on Bane's Bts for factual correctness? Thanks in advance. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:59, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
    • Since you're more familiar with the DS storyline than me, would you be willing to update Gree as well? I can copyedit it after you're done. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:03, October 18, 2009 (UTC)
      • When you get the chance, could you check the Battle of Ryloth's Bts as well for factual correctness? Thanks in advance. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:21, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
      • Also, does Loathsom appear in the DS version? CC7567 ^(talk) 05:45, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
• I think I've gotten all of it in. Thanks very much again, and congratulations on your WotM award as well. It's very well-deserved. :) CC7567 ^(talk) 19:28, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Rianna Saren

I know Rianna Saren was your first GA, so I don't want to edit it without consulting you. A couple items. The image of her beating down the stormtrooper, I'd like to lower that to just below the "Working for the Rebellion" heading for layout reasons, so it's in a more accurate placement for the image. Secondly, the image itself. If you look at this image, it's a great promotional shot of Zeeo. I've got a similar shot of Rianna whooping that stormtrooper, but it's more complete and on a neutral white background. However, it is a bit smaller than the current one cropped from the promotional wallpaper. Do you mind me replacing the image with the more complete, slightly smaller, white background version? - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 05:53, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Fil in Republic Heroes

Hey, Qui-Gon. Since you're familiar with the DS version of RH, does Fil appear in the game? Seeing that the Mission to the third moon of Vassek appears in the game, it's quite possible that he makes an appearance. JangFett ^(Talk) 21:18, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Grievous

Hey, thanks for updating Grievous with Republic Heroes info. :) Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:49, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] TCW young readers

Hey QuiGon. Since you seem to have possession of R2-D2's Adventure and Rescue in the Sky, is Rex in either of them? CC7567 ^(talk) 04:51, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

• Okay; thanks very much. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:12, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Nefta

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Nefta has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:06, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] WP:TCW

Hello everyone, this is CC7567 from WookieeProject The Clone Wars. It is currently six months after the project was started, and the number of individual projects is steadily growing. While I am happy that so many of you are writing for the WookieeProject, the majority of articles there have been sitting there for months. Several users even have ten projects or more at the moment, and I am frankly just disappointed at the level of inactivity that is befalling our articles. I understand that many of you have other obligations, and while I respect that, the responsibility falls to you to judge whether or not you're still capable of writing all of these articles, whether in time or in energy. For this reason, I once again urge you to reconsider your current projects. The criteria should be that you have the unrelenting intent to finish all of your projects within the next month. I myself have had to reconsider my own projects on account of real-life time constraints. I do not want to have to set a limit to the number of projects per user, but if it comes down to that, I will, because I do not want to see the project deteriorate and hope that you do not want to either. Thank you. CC7567 (talk) 19:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] TCW mobile & Jedi Alliance info

Hey, Qui-Gon. Sorry this took so long, but I found very little new information regarding Waxer and Boil in "Battle for Ryloth." The book takes place throughout the Ryloth trilogy arc. While the new Republic Heroes information is not seen in the book, that Ahsoka helping Waxer situation is not there. But here is something new/different from the "Innocents of Ryloth" episode: instead of Waxer wanting to take Numa, both Waxer and Boil were hesitated at first; however, they took her to Obi-Wan immediately. As for my question, do you still have the TCW mobile game and Jedi Alliance game? I am in need of Ahsoka information. I.e, what did she do in those games, any quotes. Thanks, man. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:34, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

• Thank you so much, QGJ. :) And yes, I could probably use a screenshot. Is there a scene where Denal is with Ahsoka? Or possibly Ahsoka talking with the Jedi. JangFett ^(Talk) 15:48, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] WotM

Congratulations on being Wookieepedian of the Month for November, QuiGonJinn! Very well deserved :D. Grunny ^(Talk) 00:00, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

• Congratulations indeed. :D JangFett ^(Talk) 00:02, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
  • Thanks, guys. I really appreciate your recognition of my efforts. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:37, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Belth Allusis

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Belth Allusis has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 18:21, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] A small request

I'd like to ask for your opinion on something I've brought up on Raid on Ziro the Hutt's Coruscant club talk page. If you wouldn't mind taking a look when you get a chance, I'd appreciate it. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 16:06, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] You're a staffie, right?

I found a certain anonymous user who was vandalizing Stormtrooper Corps. And my message on his talk page wasn't exactly official, so could you do an official Vandalizing Warning on his page?—B-Boba Fett! He'll kill us all! 12:44, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, okay.—B-Boba Fett! He'll kill us all! 17:53, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:Ahsoka

Yes, I am aware of the spoiler policy. The entire spoiler tag, however, was listed for the entire season, not just specific episodes. Although, I did move the spoiler tag down to the newest episode. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:57, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Waxer/Boil audio

Might I suggest combining both their lines into one sound file/quote on both their articles for the "Landing at Point Rain" audio? - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 21:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Clone of Ysanne Isard

Hi QuiGonJinn, you recently added X-wing Rogue Squadron 35: Mandatory Retirement, Part 4 as a mention of Isard's clone, however searching comic book I wasn't able to find that info, like I wrote befroe in the article entry. Can you please tell me the page her clone is mentioned on? Also I noticed you put The New Essential Guide to Characters as a source for her clone appearance as well. Can you tell me in under what characters entry her clone appeared? Thank you.--Jedi Marty 17:24, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Rex in Republic Heroes

I bet you're sick of me bugging you for Republic Heroes info, so here's the last time I'm probably going to ask. :P Is Rex featured in any other missions besides Skytop Station and the first to Vassek's moon? I can only remember (and find the info) on those two off the top of my head. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:23, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

• Sure, no problem. :P The three troopers are all mentioned in the appearances section of their respective episodes and are also given short blurbs, but the only one that may present new info is Denal's: "A veteran clone trooper under Rex's command, Denal finds himself forced to improvise after R3-S6's repeated failures during the Skytop Station mission." Waxer's and Boil's only confirm that they were in the 212th Attack Battalion and that they were sent to search for Separatist units in a Twi'lek village. The Official Episode Guide is the only one I have time to check right now; I'll get back to you on the others soon. However, you might want to ask someone else that's more familiar with the Atlas; it may take me a little while to find the info in that one, since the formatting takes some getting used to. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:20, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The info about Teska is as follows: "Kul Teska is a Skakoan rogue scientist and assassin known for his ruthlessness and excessive methods. He is a master of technology with nothing but contempt for Force users. Teska wears a bulky armored suit equipped with a vast array of weapons." The Battle Tips for him: "Kul Teska is a stubborn mercenary. He's as tough as they come but rarely changes his tactics, even across several encounters." (All on page 8.) The rest of that section is basically game mechanics that don't have specific in-universe relevancy. Here's the info that may be of use to you from the actual plot:

• When he is sucked out of a window on Juma 9 and into space, his suit protects him and he simply "zooms away." (p 69)
• During his fight with Skywalker and Tano at the Behpour base: "Before Teska can attack, someone steps in and blasts Teska's jet boosters, stranding him on the inner ring of the platform. It's Cad Bane, and he's finally gotten payback for Teska's earlier transgressions." Teska is later "knocked back onto his weapon's firing beam." (This scene was a bit confusing, so I think that clarification will help.) (p 137)

The rest from the Prima Guide is basically just paraphrasing of the storyline. Looking at The New Essential Chronology, it states this on page 154: "Worse, Krennel was in league with a clone of Isard, grown through unknown means years before Grand Admiral Thrawn had activated the Mount Tantiss cloning facility. In exchange for the destruction of her clone and the humiliation of Krennel, Isard agreed to assist Rogue Squadron members in their mission." It goes on to say that "The attack on Krennel's base succeeded. The admiral and the Isard clone both died." All the Atlas says is that Krennel "schemed with a clone of Isard"; she doesn't get another mention. I hope all of that helps; that should satisfy the debt that I've earned with you from all of the DS Republic Heroes stuff. :P CC7567 ^(talk) 03:18, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

[edit] E-mail

Hey QuiGonJinn :). I was wondering if you could shoot me an e-mail through my Wook account? I've got some questions for you and would like to put the interview on Wookieepedia Newsnet. Let me know. Thanks in advance! Grunny ^(Talk) 16:30, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Bah, yes I did. I just realized my email moved it to the junk folder :|, sorry about that. I'll send off the questions later today :-). Cheers, Grunny ^(Talk) 20:02, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

And it's up on the Newsnet. Hope you like it :-). Grunny ^(Talk) 09:51, December 2, 2009 (UTC)