Welcome, WiseOne26!
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Mission to Sernpidal
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Hey WiseOne26, I saw your forum post, but thought that it was more appropriate to reply here rather than in the forum. I did some minor tweaks on the article, but overall you did a nice job of expanding it :D. I just have a few points, which I hope will help you with any future project you plan to undertake.
- Remember to write in the past tense, as per Wookieepedia's Manual of Style, more specifically here.
- When writing, always do your best to write with a Neutral point of view. Try to avoid flowery descriptive words in the article, titles, etc.
- Every article that has more than one Appearance and/or Source needs to be provided with Citations, as per Wookieepedia's Sourcing Policy.
Like I said, I hope that these points are helpful, and that you enjoy your time contributing here on Wookieepedia. Again, good job on taking the initiative with the Mission to Sernpidal article. Cheers, Greyman(Paratus) 11:45, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
- Hey, I think the article looks good now. Excellent work! Chack Jadson 14:53, 3 July 2007 (UTC)