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This page is for the nomination of "comprehensive articles." For a list of "comprehensive articles," see Category:Wookieepedia comprehensive articles.


What is a "comprehensive article?"

A "comprehensive article" is an article that contains all information regarding the topic. Often, "comprehensive articles" cannot reach Featured or Good Article status due to their limited content. This process is intended to recognize articles that contain all relevant canon information, yet are still under the 250 word limit required for a Good Article. The purpose of this is twofold—firstly, to help users distinguish what is a stub, and what is merely a short article with no further relevant material to be added, and, more importantly, to highlight for the reader when they are reading something that has been judged definitely "comprehensive"—that is, a guarantee to the reader that whatever they are reading contains the sum total of all available content on that topic.

Nominations and promotions of the Comprehensive article process are overseen by a collective of users known as the "EduCorps," which is made up of the Inquisitorius, the AgriCorps, and various other experienced users who are considered qualified to adequately judge the nominated material.

Lucasfilm Ltd. and its many licensees continue to expand the Star Wars universe. Since new information might become available, it may be necessary to revoke a "comprehensive article's" status. A forum will be used to nominate articles that have fallen out-of-date. Members of the EduCorps will then post a warning template on that page, and a grace period of one week will be instituted in which the article can be improved. If there is a significant amount of new information, it is likely that once updated, the article will become eligible for Good article status, and thereby ineligible for Comprehensive article status.

READ THIS FIRST!

An article must…

  1. …be well-written and detailed.
  2. …be unbiased, non-point of view.
  3. …be sourced with all available sources and appearances.
  4. …follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia. This is, of course, within reason. If a topic only has a very limited degree of content that cannot be divided up into the relevant article sections, it is not required that it follow the Layout Guide precisely. This is to be judged on a case-by-case basis.
  5. …following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
  6. …not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
  7. …have no redlinks.
  8. …have all relevant canon information presented.
  9. …be completely referenced for all available material and sources. See Wookieepedia:Sourcing for more information.
  10. …have all quotes and images sourced.
  11. …provide at least one relevant quote on the article if available.
  12. …include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
  13. …counting the introduction, the article body, and "Behind the scenes" material, must not exceed 250 words in length (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Any articles exceeding the limit should be taken to the Good article nominations page for consideration.
  14. …if the nominated article reaches 200 words or greater, the nominator must either provide an intro or draft an intro and provide a link to the revision in the nomination, showing that the intro does not elevate the article over 250 words. Exceptions can be made for articles wherein the majority of the text is in the "Behind the scenes" section.
  15. …if an article approaches the 250-word length for Good article nominations, it should not deliberately shortened in order to avoid meeting that word limit.

How to nominate:

  1. First, find an article you find is worthy of comprehensive status. Nominated articles must meet all seventeen requirements stated above.
  2. Add {{CAnom}} at the top of the article you are nominating and save the page. NOTE: If the article you are nominating has been nominated for CA one or more times previously, you will need to specify a new subpage name as a parameter in the template (e.g. {{CAnom|Lorum ipsum (second nomination)}}).
  3. Open the redlink (in a new tab or window, if possible) and fill out the form according to the instructions provided.
  4. Copy the code provided to the bottom of this page.
  5. Purge the article to update the template.
  6. Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article in accordance with the established rules.
  7. Nominators and supporters will adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied. Objectors may also make alterations—if there is any reason for contention on a given point, it should be settled in a civil manner in the nomination field itself.
  8. Users may not vote on their own articles.
  9. There is no limit to the amount of nominations a given user can submit at any given time.

How to vote:

  1. Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
  2. Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
    • If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
  3. As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
  4. There are several ways in which an article can receive the required number of votes. Within a 48-hour period of nomination, only EduCorps votes will count towards the total, although anyone may choose to vote in that window. If four members of the EduCorps support a nomination in that window [0 to 48 hours post-nomination], and there are no outstanding objections, the article can be considered a "Comprehensive article" and be tagged with the {{Eras|comp}} template 48 hours after the initial nomination. The talk page will also be tagged with the {{CA}} template. When the 48 hours are up, any user's votes will contribute towards the total. If two EduCorps member has voted for an article after a week, three regular votes will be required. After a week, an article can also pass with just three EduCorps votes.
  5. Once a nomination is successful, it will be placed on the Comprehensive article list. Instructions on how to archive nominations, successful or otherwise, can be found here. Anyone can archive a nomination—just make sure it has the correct number of votes, has been nominated for at least a week (or 48 hours if there are four EC votes), and that there are absolutely no outstanding objections. If you are not sure how to do this, just ask, and someone will likely be more than willing to help you. Also, if you think you can slip one past us, think again—someone is always watching you.


All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to instantaneous removal by EduCorps members if objections are not addressed, or at least not answered, after a period of 1 week.

Please remember to archive your nomination beforehand if you plan on taking it to the Good Article Nominations page.


Comprehensive article nominations

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Instamist generator

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:30, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 06:21, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 17:33, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:49, April 8, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • The devices could also be used to create a thick smog, which could then use to cover an escape.: Could you reword this sentence a little bit?
  • Context for the Galactic Civil War. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:08, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • You make no mention of what was in the cartridges, you just mention that there are also water vapor cartridges. Please at least specify that the contents were not water.
    • It doesn't say what's in the cartridges just that they generate the mist, which I've changed the wording to reflect. We don't know that the mist generating capsules don't contain any water so I'm not sure that it should be added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • "catologue" is not an American English spelling. It is "catalog".
    • Sorry, I didn't realise. Thanks for fixing it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • "first shown" - please explain this better in the BTS. It was included in a section on buyable equipment, and also received an image.
  • Please give a timeframe for when it was produced; even if that's just "produced by the company Agrierd Intergalactics by the time of the Galactic Civil War between..." Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:33, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Unidentified clone trooper (Geonosian kill)

  • Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 01:28, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:1/3 unidentified clones from RepCom

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:07, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:26, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:17, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:32, April 21, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Code-8
  • The intro should be shortened to a couple of sentences, and some of the information is in there that isn't in the bio. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 05:25, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
    • How's that? Manoof (talk) 08:10, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • You should link to the Battle of Geonosis in the intro and body.
    • Is that ok?
  • In the P&T you should have links to Imperial standard meter and Phase I clone trooper armor. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 06:55, April 4, 2014 (UTC)
  • Links to 22 BBY are in the wrong order in the bio.
    • Fixed
  • I'm pretty sure we don't usually use a characters birthdate if all we know is that it's before the year they died. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 07:41, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
    • Removed
      • Kamino should be removed from the birth section as well in the infobox as it just repeats what we know the homeworld section says
  • Human needs to be mentioned somewhere in the bio.
  • Mention that RC-1138 was nicknamed Boss properly in the bio as it is in the intro
  • The blaster he's holding should be mentioned, and perhaps that and the Phase 1 armor bit should be put in an equipment section. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 08:30, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
Lee's charge
  • Context for Geonosis in the intro and body. "Planet" should do.
    • Done
  • Source for the date? If it is not explicitly said in the game that the battle took place in 22 BBY, you need a reference.
    • Pretty sure the game mentions 0 hr - geonosis at the start, would have to check though. Is that enough?
      • It would be clearer if you make a reference like you did for his birthdate.
        • Done
  • Mention his birthdate in the bio.
    • Already there
      • You mention that he was born on Kamino but not when.
        • Ah, my bad, fixed
  • Take a look at the quote description and change the error. Boss's number is RC-1138 right?
    • It's both, though most referenced as RC-1138. I think the only canon mention of RC-01/138 is at the start of the game. Changed to RC-1138 anyway.
  • Full title in the infobox, please.
    • Not sure what you mean, so added the full name as it appears for the article.
      • Sorry, "name" would have been clearer.
  • Place of death missing in the infobox too.
  • Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:43, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • You don't need to source the intro.
    • Refs removed
  • (First appearance) tag is missing.
    • Added
  • You should link gunship to LAAT/i. Also find a way to link to clone trooper and Sexes in the intro. Suggestion: He was deployed and replace "he was killed" with the clone trooper was killed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:35, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
    • How's that?
  • Also, please reload your infobox. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:36, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
    • I don't know what this means? :( Manoof (talk) 22:56, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
      • Click on the source link in at the bottom of the infobox. The link will lead you to an infobox. Remove the old one and fill out the new one. Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:08, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • You refer to him as "he" three time in the bio. Please change at least one of those. Clone Commander Lee Talk 00:44, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • IMHO "out" needs to be decapitalized in the quote? Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:06, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
    • Agreed, fixedManoof (talk) 04:16, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • The clone trooper was a male Human clone of the Mandalorian bounty hunter, Jango Fett. Cloned sometime before 22 BBY: Look at the GA objections. :P
    • Done like the others
  • Could you give a little bit context for the Geonosian in the intro. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:17, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
    • Context as in who the geonosian is or what he did? Manoof (talk) 02:27, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
SE
  • In the third sentence of the bio, can you switch up some of the in's?
    • How's that?
  • Can you link to the unidentified Geonosian in the body? Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:57, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
    • Gah, missed it, thanks! Manoof (talk) 04:45, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Can you also switch up some of the "him"'s in the last sentence of the bio? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:50, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
    • Better? Manoof (talk) 11:35, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • References go after commas and other punctuation. "... [[Kamino]]<ref name="Enc" />," should be [[Kamino]],<ref name="Enc" />"
  • Just citing "Encyclopedia (StarWars.com)" is unacceptable. Please look at other clone trooper status articles and use the correct citation.
  • You need to mention his heritage in the intro, and his species in both the intro and body, which will push it over 250. Please take this to the GAN.
  • 22 BBY should be linked in the infobox.
  • I'm not saying you have to, but it might be useful to create a Category:Unidentified clone troopers category from the contents of the clone troopers category. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:22, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments


Operation: Freefall

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:03, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 02:14, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Long as all objections are satisfied. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:29, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:33, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
  5. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 06:33, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • The SIS recovered files on the Sith Empire during the operation: Should this be "files of the Sith Empire"? Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:43, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
    • The files were about the Empire, so either is true. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:52, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
501st
  • Once again, picky: Could you add that Kaas City was on Dromund Kass? 501st dogma(talk) 23:24, April 12, 2014 (UTC)
Code-8

Comments

Venix

  • Nominated by:
    Jorrel FraajicWookieepedian
    Apr 8, 201409:17:59 UTC
  • Nomination comments: How do you write an article on a ship whose entire known history is the name's use as a disguise?

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:10, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote I'm astounded by the amount of context you crammed into that first sentence. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:44, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
  3. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 01:22, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Not sure the paragraph split is necessary, but otherwise well done! Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:14, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:07, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 22:59, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • You need a "1st" tag.
    • Done.
  • Something is wrong with the quote.
    • If you mean the quotes, it's that way in the source. Looks terrible, I know. Am I allowed to delete it?
    • Nevermind. Found and fixed.
      Jorrel FraajicWookieepedian
      Apr 8, 201409:53:16 UTC
  • Can we source 3 ABY to the game?
    • We can source the Battle of Hoth, but I've added clarification for the 3 ABY part.
  • NOTOC?
    • Forgot that was a thing, or I'd have used it. Fixed.
  • Release date for X-wing in the BtS? Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:41, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
501st
  • "...Antan Azzameen, co-owner of rival company Twin Suns Transport Services..." Picky, but please say that Twin Suns was the rival of Viraxo. Because of the paragraph split, and the talk about Hoth, its not exactly clear at the moment.
    • Attempted clarification and relinked some of the body to adequately match this clarification.
  • You talk about a raid at Denbo. Is there an article for that? If not, please create one.
    • There wasn't. There is now.
  • Also, please do not link to something in the quote atrtibtuion if you already have it linked in the body. Viraxo industries and Ace should not be linked. 501st dogma(talk) 12:29, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
    • Though nothing in the MOS specifically forbids linking in quote attributions, I was going off of the "old" unwritten rule, which I see has been largely replaced. As such, I've removed the linking. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 04:56, April 19, 2014 (UTC)
    • You can keep the link to the droid if you wish, as it is not linked to in the body.
  • Its 205 words now. :P That means you need an intro, preferably a short one that doesn't take it over the 250 limit. 501st dogma(talk) 23:35, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
    • Intro added and BTS reworded to keep the article from repeating itself so much. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 03:44, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • "... in a Raid on Viraxo 54 on a Viraxo platform." I believe you are missing a pipelink her on the raid link. :P
    • It took me like 5 times to read that over to see what you meant. Wow. Fixed. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 21:07, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • Also, please note in the future that when pipelinking, always capitalize the first word: i.e [[Water|cloud]]. I caught a few on this article. 501st dogma(talk) 20:54, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
    • Didn't know, has been noted. Thanks! JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 21:07, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Bro, check your BTS. Italicize those ship names. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:32, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Shoulda checked myself before I wrecked myself, bro. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 09:51, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

  1. It's probably worth it to populate a "Viraxo starships" category. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:44, April 13, 2014 (UTC)


Dragon's Teeth

  • Nominated by: - Princess GLG 21:15, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Haven't done a CAN in a while...

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:21, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:31, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:32, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
  4. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 01:19, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 23:41, April 21, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Can we source the date to the novel.
    • The entire novel took place in 23 ABY according the The Essential Reader's Companion. Should I source the date to the ERC then?
  • Maybe an link for the ocean.
    • Added.
  • Context for Jaina and Co.
    • Better?
  • Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:19, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the quick review.- Princess GLG 23:03, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
Master of the universe
SE
  • Great to have you back.
    • Thanks, though I'm not sure how much I'll be able to edit.
  • Can you mention that M-TD was on the boat as well? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:27, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • What's the reason for the double-citation on the first sentence?
    • No reason really, just that that info was contained in both sources. I removed one of them.
  • Pretty good work. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:38, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Three-eyed Kinyenian potato

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:03, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A return to Dex's

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:05, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Unless context is needed for potato. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 12:12, April 17, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:34, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:50, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 20:55, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Object

501
  • "The Besalisk chef and owner of the diner, Dexter Jettster, served the salad, including the potatoes, as a lunch and charged..." Kinda awkward with all of the commas, so kill some please.
  • 501st dogma(talk) 23:45, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • This goes for all of your nominations—please slow down. When you have this many objections consistently on all of your nominations, you cannot batch-nominate them.
  • How exactly is it "found on" Coruscant? That's speculation.
    • I added it since it's used there, but removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • The very name of the potato — Kinyenian — means that the potato is from Kinyen. "Kinyenian" is a relational adjective.
    • Changed to reflect this. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • I don't see why Dex's Diner is listed in the affiliation. Just because it's used in a dish there doesn't mean it's affiliated with the restaurant.
  • Please give context on Star Wars Hyperspace.
  • "The article does not state any connection between the potatoes and the plant besides the vegetable's name." - this is moot now thanks to my previous objection, but I'm pointing it out anyway. Please slow down and proofread.
    • Removed that part of the bts like you said. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • Dining at Dex's is italicized in the BTS, but you don't italicize it in the Sources section. Please find the correct formatting and use it for all of your articles.
    • It's italicised in both? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • I find it rather speculatory that you're saying he sold the salad up until the diner's destruction. What's your evidence for this? If you don't have any specific evidence, then you can only say that he sold it at one point. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:46, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Changed to say it was served at one point. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Atomically aerated cream

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:11, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Sounds so artificial

(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:01, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 23:03, April 17, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 23:47, April 21, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
Code-8
Cadeth
  • How exactly is the cream's homeworld Coruscant?
    • Changed to right section of infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • Dining at Dex's is italicized in the BTS, but you don't italicize it in the Sources section. Please find the correct formatting and use it for all of your articles.
    • Corrected to italicised. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • "The dish also included namana custard and was served for 3.7AurebeshSans-Serif credit at the eatery known as Dex's Diner on the planet Coruscant[1] until the diner's destruction during the first two years of the Galactic Empire's reign.[2]" My objection about the destruction stands, but if you find evidence to keep the destruction part, please split this setence.
    • Split and destruction fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:30, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • Context on Hyperspace.
  • "Atomically aerated cream was first mentioned in the 2009 Star Wars Hyperspace exclusive article, Dining at Dex's, which was written by Gregory Walker." As Dining at Dex's is not the only Hyperspace-exclusive article, you cannot put a comma between article and Dining.
  • Hyperspace-exclusive should have a dash. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:02, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Cidri

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:39, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The first of various noms from the newest FFG adventure.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

  1. 8 noms in one day... Not even close to Cade. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:07, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:26, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Master of the universe
501st
  • I'm going to echo one of Lee's comments from Henna I believe: Cloud City is technically not on Bespin, so that should be clarified. A little context should be given to explain that it floats above the gas giant. 501st dogma(talk) 23:53, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
    • Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
      • Not quite what I wanted, so I changed it a bit - check it out. 501st dogma(talk) 20:58, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • "and the Bothan's gender is not clarified." Clarified is the wrong word to use here—there's no information at all, so there's nothing to "make understandable" or "free of confusion". The proper word would be stated or specified.
  • "a commercial corridor in Cloud [[City|City's]]" - this pipelink is unnecessary. Use "[[City]]'s. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:54, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Henna

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:45, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The partner of Cidri

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

  1. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:08, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:01, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • Same objection as the one for Henna's partner.
    • Changed to floated. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:58, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
      • Gas giants such as Bespin don't have surfaces, so you might want to change that. :P
  • "Henna was a Bothan jeweler who ran the jewellery company Bothawui.... and the pair ran the jewellery business together out of a weathered..." It's repitive that you twice state that he/she/it ran the company. Change it so that you only mention it once.
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:58, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
      • Well... now there is no mention that both the Bothans ran the shop together, like in Cidri's article. It would be nice if you could find a way to do that. 501st dogma(talk) 21:04, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • Unidentified/Undefined gender category is needed. 501st dogma(talk) 23:58, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • jewelry is the proper American English spelling.
  • Same objection about clarified as Cindri. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:05, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Tezli Odo

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:47, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: As always I've started with vendors

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

  1. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:09, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Although I'm unsure if Cloud City is technically "on" the planet Bespin. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • Same objection as all the other Bespin related noms. Please go through and change it accordingly Ayrehead. 501st dogma(talk) 21:05, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth

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Hobi Rann

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:49, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not really sure why this guy was included in the book.

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  1. That's what I think whenever I see stuff from RPGs here. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:10, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

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Cadeth

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Rowralorr

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:50, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The only merchant with no associated shop.

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  1. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:11, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:04, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

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The Hatchery

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:53, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Odo's shop

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  1. Sounds like it sells chicken. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:13, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:04, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

Object

  • The owners should be in the infobox.
  • Context on Cloud City. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 04:44, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

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Bothawui Jewellers

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:57, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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  1. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:14, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:05, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:57, April 21, 2014 (UTC)

Object

  • The business doesn't operate on Bespin. Please give context on Cloud City and actually introduce it before the end of the paragraph.
  • The owners should be in the infobox. 04:48, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

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Hobi Rann's Fine Imported Goods

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Junk shop

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  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:05, April 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 23:20, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

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Code-8
Cadeth

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Visara

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  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:03, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:46, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

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Lee's charge
  • Can we source the date to the book?
    • The date is sourced to the book itself as it mentions the Battle of Yavin as two years ago, i.e. "one thing she had learned in the two years since the Battle of Yavin".
      • I'm fine with the sourcing, but I'm not sure if Yavin being in 0 needs another source. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:03, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
  • It would be nice to give context about the Galactic Civil War, like it was fought between Rebels and Empire.
    • Done.
  • A little bit context for Arnot Station please.
    • Done.
  • Nice to see a CAN from you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:37, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Could you clarify that Organa wasn't on the Gamble when the Imperial captured it before saying he tried to lure her back? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:58, April 23, 2014 (UTC)

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