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The featured articles of the wiki are articles that represent the best Wookieepedia has to offer. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like.

So just what makes a featured article? Well, we've prepared a list just in case someone should ask that, and it is as follows.


An article must…

  1. …be well-written and comprehensively detailed.
  2. …be unbiased, non-point of view.
  3. …have comprehensive Appearances and Sources lists.
  4. …be fully referenced, including all quotes and images. See Wookieepedia:Sourcing for more information.
  5. …follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
  6. …following the review process, be stable, i.e. it does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
  7. …not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
  8. …have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic and can be used for the Main Page's "Article Showcase."
  9. …have no redlinks.
  10. …provide at least one quote on the article. A leading quote at the beginning of the article will be required only if there is quotable dialogue by or about the subject. Although quotes may be placed in the body of the article, a maximum of one quote is allowed at the beginning of each section.
  11. …include a "Personality and traits" section on all character articles.
  12. …ideally include a "Powers and abilities" section for Force-sensitive characters and a "Skills and abilities" section for non–Force-sensitive characters, where said powers and/or abilities are stipulated.
  13. …include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
  14. …include a reasonable number of images of the highest quality to illustrate the article, as source availability permits.
  15. …counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, be at least 1000 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc).
  16. …be properly titled in accordance with Wookieepedia's treatment of Canon and Legends articles; i.e., no nomination may have "/Canon" in the title.

For more information on what makes a featured article, see What is a featured article?


How to nominate:

  1. First, find an article you feel is worthy of featured status, putting it at the bottom of the list below; see criteria above. Note that a previously featured article cannot be featured on the Main Page again; however, it can be restored to featured status.
  2. Add {{FAnom}} at the top of the article you are nominating and save the page. NOTE: If the article you are nominating has been nominated for FA one or more times previously, you will need to specify a new subpage name as a parameter in the template (e.g. {{FAnom|Lorum ipsum (second nomination)}}).
  3. Open the redlink (in a new tab or window, if possible) and fill out the form according to the instructions provided.
  4. Copy the code provided to the bottom of this page.
  5. Purge the article to update the template.
  6. Others will object to the nomination if they disagree that the article is good enough; they will then supply reasons for doing so, and ways to improve the article (errors, style, organization, images, notability, sources).
  7. Supporters adjust the article until the objectors (with reasonable objections) are satisfied.
  8. The article is placed on the featured article list and added to the front page queue.
  9. Be sure to place your signature in the "Nominated by" line when the nomination is posted for voting.

How to vote:

  1. Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
  2. Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
  3. Please note that in order for your vote to count, you must have 50 mainspace edits.
  4. If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved. Please cite which rule your objection falls under, if possible. Failure to do so may result in your objection being considered invalid.
  5. As stated above, any objections will be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
  6. Once the minimum nomination period has passed, an article that has achieved the required number of supporting votes and has no outstanding objections will be added to the queue and be officially known as a "featured article." A nomination will be considered successful if one of the following criteria is met:
    • five supporting Inquisitor votes and no outstanding objections after at least a week;
    • four supporting Inquisitor votes, plus two additional supporting votes and no outstanding objections after at least a week;
    • three supporting Inquisitor votes, plus four additional supporting votes and no outstanding objections after at least a week; or
    • seven supporting Inquisitor votes and no outstanding objections after at least two days.
  7. Per Inquisitorius consensus, no Inquisitor may use their Inqvote on their own nominations.

Also remember to add {{FAnom}} at the top of the article you are nominating.

Every day the next article in the queue will be highlighted on the Main Page as featured, marked with the {{FA}} template and removed from the list of nominations. The beginning of the article then appears on the Main Page via the {{Featured article}} template. Nominations that are inactive with outstanding objections for three weeks will be eliminated from the nominations list by the Inquisitorius.

All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to removal by Inquisitorius vote if objections are not addressed after a period of 3 weeks.

Note: All reduxed articles require only four support votes to maintain their Featured status, at least two of which must come from Inquisitors. Reduxed articles will be subject to removal if objections are not addressed after a period of 4 weeks, pending the support of at least three Inquisitors.


Featured article nominations

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Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic (comics)

  • Nominated by: Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 16:06, November 1, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: An awesome comic series. I honestly don't remember why I started this; it and Revan will be my largest and probably only contributions to WP:KOTOR. Mr. Miller's production notes were a fantastic help. Also, yes, the article is 350kb in terms of characters, but over 100kb of that is references, images, quotes, and formatting—I've checked.

(0 Inqs/3 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. Apologizes for taking so long to finish looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 20:51, March 28, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Coruscantfan (Talk) 08:59, April 7, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Manoof (talk) 23:28, July 11, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Exalted: Why is Rime Feeorin italicized?
  • Damn you, Cade, I don't have time for this. Will continue with Vindication. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:01, May 2, 2014 (UTC)
  • Vindication: It is a little bit unclear why Q'Anilia dies. Is this said in the comic?
    • Explained.
  • That's it for the plot. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:12, May 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • Zayne: others rescue Jarael and a number of Jedi from Flashpoint.[29] After the group rescues Zayne's father Arvan from the Moomo Brothers on Telerath: Can you change one use of rescue? Plus is knighted really capitalized? Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:32, May 21, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done, and yes, I believe so. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:26, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
So long -_-
  • Commencement: "...who are wearing red space suits identical to the foreseen Sith Lord..." Umm, when were they wearing the suits?
  • Commencement: Could you possibly clarify that T1-LB is the same Elbee that appears later?
  • Flashpoint quote: Shouldn't Zayne's name be mentioned first in the quote attribution since he speaks first?
  • I'll continue from Day's of fear later. 501st dogma(talk) 14:21, July 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nights of Anger: "...whose illness is growing steadily worse..." You might want to explain before that Camper is ill, or just reword it here to inform the reader for the first time that Camper is ill.
  • "... Mandalore explains that he has turned the Questioner into a martyr that has Mandalore and his lieutenant Cassus Fett helped spread the Neo-Crusader philosophy and armor throughout the Mandalorian ranks..." It's not really sounding right here. I'm pretty sure helped should be before Mandalore and not before spread, but remedy it however you see fit. 501st dogma(talk) 17:41, July 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done up to Knights of suffering. 501st dogma(talk) 17:41, July 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Knights: "Upon recognizing Del Moomo..." Uh, since when was Moomo on Taris?
  • Still Knights: "...and Hierogryph keeps hold of the detonator as they flee..." Um, the detonator to what?
  • Exalted: "...Carrick has been in the Sanctum of the Exalted, he cannot be harmed by weapons..." Any particular reason? Is it a tribe tradition? :P
  • I'll start with Prophet Motive later. 501st dogma(talk) 22:35, August 1, 2014 (UTC)
  • Swoop racing part: "Dyre is reinvented as the swoopduelist "Spikes," and Carrick is surprised when Goethar Kleej threatens and coerces him into protecting his son Aubin in the Tandem Open." Could you clarfiy if "Spikes" or Carrick was assigned to protect Aubin? It's vague at the moment.
    • Done.
  • Masks: Context on Wor Tandell?
    • Done.
  • "To her surprise, when she returns to the Hot Prospect, Jarael encounters Malak, and Carrick is surprised..." Could you kill a surprise?
    • Done. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 21:47, September 21, 2014 (UTC)
      • Killed one of two encounters in close proximity.
  • Done up to Main Characters. 501st dogma(talk) 22:38, August 26, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done up to Malak. 501st dogma(talk) 00:03, October 2, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done up to Development. 501st dogma(talk) 14:38, November 9, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Article needs to be updated from the following:
    • The Insider 153 and/or 154 stuff. I told you many weeks ago that this needed to be done and you did nothing, so I can't remember which one it is now.
      • Nothing to update from either of those. 154 is just a general summary of Dark Horse; a KOTOR cover is the only thing related to KOTOR in that. 153 is just an offhand mention of KOTOR with no new info.
    • This. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:49, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
      • Added a mention. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 00:20, January 11, 2015 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Commmencement—"an action that severely damaged T1-LB's programming and brain." Since droids don't have a brain, shouldn't the sentence end at programming? Manoof (talk) 08:54, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • The last two sentences regarding The Last Resort's capture need to be reworded, you need to clarify exactly what happens as without having read the comic, it is confusing to follow what happens—what does surrendering to the masters have to do with the pirate? If the release has been negotiated, how is it carrick can attempt to steal the ship? Manoof (talk) 08:54, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • "he executes Ying to eliminate witnesses before preparing to kill Carrick." I assume here Ying is the only witness? Manoof (talk) 08:54, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Flashpoint—"flee on one of the last remaining ship" needs to be fixed, I'm not sure if there was only one ship remaining, or several? (remove "one of" or add an s to ship?) Manoof (talk) 08:54, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Daze of hate—Is the word "to" correct from the source in the quote for this section? Manoof (talk) 08:54, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Knights of suffering—In the last paragraph, you mention a Togruta, with no previous mention of which character is of this species. I'm guessing by the following language the character is Tey? Manoof (talk) 08:54, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Vector—"she is forced to execute the constable when she is infected" needs to be clarified as to who kills whom. I'll continue with Prophet Motive at another time. Manoof (talk) 08:54, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Prophet Motive—You say "A month after Vindication". Assuming the entire plot should be written IU, this needs to be rephrased, unless Vindication is an IU term for the events in the comic of the same name of course. I'll have to get back to this when I have more time. Manoof (talk) 10:09, June 9, 2015 (UTC)
  • References to other works—You start using WEG without specifying it stands for West End Games. Could you please clarify this somewhere. Manoof (talk) 04:22, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Reception—I don't know who Thomas Lorraine is, but I don't think having a random quote by a random person should be used here. Could you please use a quote by someone notable (why should we believe this person nobody has heard of before?) or at the very least, justify why this quote was used above all other quotes, other than the fact that you personally like it (It IS a nice quote after all). A quote from an editorial review would probably be better. Manoof (talk) 04:22, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Legacy—You don't seem to mention to any extent Knights of the Old Republic (Star Wars Miniatures), which drew heavily from the comics as well as the game. Manoof (talk) 04:22, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Media—The colour code key at the top seems redundant and I would recommend removal of it - Story arcs can easily be seen by the comic title, all issues can be seen to be collected in a trade paperback from the table, with the exception of course of the handbook. Finally, the series is finished (and DH no longer has publishing rights) so future issues holds no meaning. For linking purposes, I am happy for the story arc title to be left in the table. Manoof (talk) 04:22, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
  • Not so much an objection as a recommendation to make sure all links you reference are backed up on webarchive.org, and perhaps make use of the backup links in your citations in the event the page is removed. I'm done, good job as always! Manoof (talk) 04:22, June 28, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:47, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

  • We at WP:KOTOR appreciate your hard work and dedication, Cade. I'll review soon.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 17:02, September 16, 2014 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote Unaddressed objection over a month old. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:40, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:42, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:42, November 6, 2016 (UTC)


Barsen'thor (Galactic War)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 07:41, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Only took me a year and a half to finish this. I've tried to make sure that this reaches the nomination page as smooth as possible, and I believe I have achieved the goal.

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Support

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • While often used informally, "they" and "their" are not proper singular pronouns in formal writing. Please go through the article and change all instances of this.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:36, August 31, 2014 (UTC)
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:49, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • It looks like these got fix somewhere along the way.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:41, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Similarly to EJ's comment, "the individual" is also really not a good way to refer to the character. For one thing, you seem to by and large not mention the fact that the Consular's going to places with a companion. Up until the Carida, it's always Qyzen, and the rest of the time it should be something like "the Consular and a companion" when you first introduce a planetary storyline. That then opens up several additional terms you can use besides "Jedi", "Consular" - duo, pair, the two. I'm still seeing quite a few theys in there.
    • "Up until the Carida, it's always Qyzen," Not true. C2-N2 is technically a healer companion. Yes, his AI sucks and he tends to suicide a lot by trying to punch people with his bare fists, but he can be used, so we can't assume the player always runs with Qyzen until Tharan. I'll look at the rest of the objection later. Just wanted to get this part out of the way first. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 19:06, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
      • I think it's safe to say that the in-continuity player characters never used their ship droids in combat, as the droids even say that they're not designed for combat. Their use as companions is really just game mechanics. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:10, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
        • All parts of the objection should be addressed now. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:41, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
          • I'm still seeing a number of "individuals", and also, the game goes out of its way to never call the Consular player a Knight, so I'm not sure it's appropriate to call the Barsen'thor one. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:39, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
            • Alright, I have cut down the usage of "individual" considereably (from 88 to 22, at the moment). Out of those, a number refer to other individuals beside the Consular. The most part of the remaining instances are either at the start of the biography, where none of the Jedi titles apply to the character yet. I have kept some uses of the word later as well, just to avoid repetition between constantly referring to the character as a "Jedi", a "Consular" or the "Barsen'thor." Regarding the other point raised, I honestly don't see any reason why we can't call the character a Jedi Knight. We know he was promoted to a "full member of the Jedi order" or whatever the game calls it after Tython, but he was only promoted to Jedi Master at the start of Chapter 2. So what rank could he possibly have held in between Tython and the Fortitude? He was obviously a Jedi Knight even if the game doesn't explicitly state he was one. I'm not going to argue this case, and I've changed the article, but I honestly think it's a case of the duck test, IMO. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:47, February 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • Also, a number of the images are only tangentially related to the character, like that Alderaan one. I'm currently playing through the Consular storyline, and will supply images from the game like I have with the Hero. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:05, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
    • The reason for that is that I decided to write this article to status only after I had already completed the class story. Naturally, I never bothered with taking screenshots as I was playing, and I wasn't going to to go back and play through it again with another character just to obtain images for the article. I decided that I could get away with whatever relevant images I could find already uploaded on the site, but if you have the ability to provide better images, that's great. Go ahead. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:41, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
      • No problem; you should've seen my original version of the Hero. I think I just used the Holonet images of planets. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:47, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • No mention of Head Jailer Tarinn in the Imperial Holding Facility on Balmorra? He's got a (silent) cutscene and everything. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:39, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
  • Okay, I've trimmed a bit, but the intro needs to be cut down some more. Right now it's about 1,200 words, which is a FAN in of itself. Conversely, the Hero's only about 815, and Revan is around 835. You should cut back on some of the details. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 20:29, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
    • Alright. I think I've pretty much cut every possible extraneous bit of detail, leaving the intro at less than 1000 words. Everything else is necessary context in my opinion. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:16, June 6, 2015 (UTC)


  • So, huge news for the Barsen'thor and this nomination. The Star Wars: Force and Destiny Core Rulebook contains an excerpt from Rediscovering the Jedi, a work by the respected historian Professor Belys Harand who was known for his expertise on Xim. Rediscovering the Jedi was published during the era of the Empire, and was subsequently banned. Here's the important part:
    • Chandrila's Jedi Tomb: Although his true name has been lost to time, the third Barsen'thor, or Warden of the Jedi Order, is thought to be entombed on Chandrila, somewhere in the famous Crystal Canyons. He was famous for a number of ancient diplomatic victories, and for an equal number as a battlefield general.
  • With Knights of the Fallen Empire forthcoming and its condensing of class stories into a single story about the Outlander, I think we can effectively say that the canon storylines of the eight classes are over. With that, and this source stating that the Barsen'thor is a male, I believe we can take that information as valid; thus, this article needs to be updated to reflect that. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:29, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • Also, the Chandrila mention is clearly meant as a reference to the Dead Jedi Knight and the Chandrila Jedi tomb, so I think that these can be merged. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:30, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
    • Well, now this nomination and Jaden Korr are connected to each other. I'm just going to say that I totally foresaw that that would happen with my Force sense. Jokes aside though, I've updated the article with the new information, both in terms of adding the Jedi Academy stuff and interspersing masculine pronouns throughout. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:39, August 26, 2015 (UTC)
Culator finds player character articles annoying
  • This is not an objection, just an observation: There were many, many typos and grammar issues here, and I haven't even done a full copyedit, just a quick automated scan: indvidual → individual, Leiutenant → Lieutenant, 'returned back' → 'returned' (2), presense → presence, ressurrect → resurrect, 'the the' → 'the' (2). Please be mindful of this, thanks.
    • Noted. Thanks for catching those.
  • You have a ref name="The Bounty Hunter's Daughter" that references "Conversation with Qyzen Fess: "A Taste of Medicine"" and a ref name="A Taste of Medicine" that references "Conversation with Qyzen Fess: "A Taste of Medicine"" so I'm guessing one of those is wrong. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 17:18, July 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

  • Copycat! :P But anyways, great work. In the past few weeks, we've filled almost 300 redlinks, leaving us only 3200 left for TOR. I'll be sure to review this soon. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:28, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
    • Oh, actually, there's another cut thing from the files—during Corellia, the First Son originally was supposed to send a fleet to attack Sarkhai, causing Nadia to depart temporarily as your companion to go and help her homeworld. It's not entirely clear, but it looks like your actions (i.e. alignment choices) would affected whether Sarkhai won easily or only barely succeeded. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:31, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • May I ask why you use "They" or "their" when referring to the Barsen'thor? Winterz (talk) 00:03, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Because we don't know the Barsen'thor's gender, singular they is used to refer to the character in a gender-neutral manner. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 07:19, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • I might be unable to address any future objections on this and my other noms until the end of the month due to studies. I know I've been pretty much inactive on the wiki anyways—kind of lost interest in the Star Wars universe after the new canon took over—but I have been checking my nominations occassionally. However, I'll probably be unable to do even that in the next few weeks. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:16, June 6, 2015 (UTC)
    • Back to a previous contributing capacity. Starting off with a sizable expansion/rewrite/clarification of certain points. New redlinks will be dealt with soon. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:49, June 27, 2015 (UTC)


Jaden Korr

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:28, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: So, to sum things up. He's a dude chasing a clone of himself, who gets killed by another clone of himself. He then gets his memories transferred into that clone's body, so he becomes a clone of himself. Oh, and he might have been a clone to begin with. And he also finds out about a potential clone of Xizor. Enjoy the cloneception.

(0 Inqs/1 Users/1 Total)

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Support

  1. ID-21 Dolphin DolphinJedi(Talk) 12:57, August 19, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Cav
  • A couple of preliminaries:
  • Korr's birth year is listed as c. 1 ABY, referenced to Crosscurrent as a character pegged him as forty years old. However, this means he was 13 during the events of Jedi Academy, correct? But the character model for the game doesn't really support this age for the character at all. What is the exact quote for his age from Crosscurrent? Is there some leeway to list his birth at prior to 1 ABY rather than circa? If not, some mention in the BTS about the character model seemingly not supporting the character's age should be mentioned. Of course, the clone angle might account for the discrepancy, but that was never confirmed.
    • Here's the exact quote from the novel: "Before Khedryn could raise a hand in greeting, a human thrust himself into Khedryn's space. The man was taller than Khedryn by a head. His neatly trimmed beard and short brown hair book-ended intense, haunted gray eyes, the kind Khedryn had seen in religious fanatics. Khedryn put him at forty years, maybe, about the time human men looked back on their lives, found them wanting, and turned stupid." Of course, Khedryn's guess might be wrong and Jaden could be older, but it's the only estimation we have. Mentioning the discrepancy in the Bts sounds like the best approach. Will work on that in a bit. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:41, August 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • For the Jedi Academy stuff, shouldn't there be 100% completion templates around it? As far as I remember, the player did not have to complete all the missions to proceed, and they could be done in any order. I know you list this in the BTS, but the article body should reflect this as well. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:37, August 14, 2015 (UTC)
    • Added the necessary templates to paragraphs dealing with optional missions. The intro on Yavin, as well as the missions to Hoth, Vjun, Taspir III and Korriban are left out, as they are required to progress the plot. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 19:01, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • Can you check these edits for accuracy? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 01:50, June 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Those were mostly correct. I've now adjusted the flow of events to how they actually transpired in the novel. My bad for getting that part wrong. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 21:19, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Nom Anor

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 21:11, January 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM. After 1 year, 3 months, 8 days, it is finally done. I apologize in advance for length (40 k words ish) and realize that this will not be passed for a long, long time. Thanks go to all those who helped me with sources and whatnot, especially Cav, for tolerating my constant source requests. Also, if this article goes too in depth in places with unnecessary info, just call me out, as I had a little trouble determining what was relevant and what could get cut....

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Support

Good job. I liked it. The article was descriptive and answered all of my questions. -Joe bob frank Unsigned comment by 70.172.240.61 (talk • contribs). (Vote struck per policy: Unregistered users ineligible to vote -- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:44, January 9, 2015 (UTC))
  1. The All-knowing Sith'ari (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Object

SE
  • "He rose through the ranks of the caste, and he was soon awarded the rank of Executor among the Yuuzhan Vong, and given the job of the first advance scout of the Praetorite Vong, a group from the intendant caste; at that time, the Yuuzhan Vong were preparing to invade a galaxy other then their own to establish a new home. " Can you break this into two sentences?
    • Done
  • Same paragraph, why did he gouge his eye out with a burning stick?
    • Reread the text, looks like he was feeling devoted that day.
  • Did Anor create the plaeryin bol? Our article on it only refers to him as a notable user.
    • Seems I misread that part.
  • Where did he meet Carnor Jax?
    • I'm pretty sure the source never said where they met up, but I can't find the source to verify at the moment. If you want to be super sure, I'll track down where I got the info it had about Nom from.
      • Yes please, just to be sure. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:40, September 14, 2016 (UTC)
        • Thanks to a helpful Shien from the IRC, confirmed that no place is mentioned. 501st dogma(talk) 18:46, October 2, 2016 (UTC)
  • "and the Yuuzhan Vong met briefly with Carivus" by Yuuzhan Vong are you referring to Anor, or multiple other Yuuzhan Vong? Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:51, August 8, 2016 (UTC)
    • That's Nom Nom. Added "agent' to clarify. Thanks for taking a look at a stupidly long article. 501st dogma(talk) 00:48, August 21, 2016 (UTC)
  • Under "The rise of Nom Anor, and initial scouting", can you clarify what Jax was emperor of?
    • Added Galactic in front of Emperor. Hope that indicates well enough that he was the aspiring emperor for the Galactic Empire.
  • Is there any clarification regarding why Anor decided to try to form an alliance with the Sith?
    • Nope. I assume it was for nefarious purposed though.
  • "a member of the council, whom he had follow a set of instructions" What instructions and why did he follow them?\
    • It's unclear on what exact instructions carivus followed, but they were meant to move the man into power among the council. I've edited to clarify that.
  • Why did he assassinate Burr Nolyds?
    • Clarified, it was meant to push Carivus into power.
  • What was the significance of him using an explosive device with the designation of Kanos on it? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:40, October 21, 2016 (UTC)
    • Done. 501st dogma(talk) 15:38, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

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  • Wavering Loyalties section has no quote because I literally could not find a quote that fit that section... 501st dogma(talk) 21:11, January 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • Probably too many images of things only slightly related to Nom Anor, such as an image of the Jedi Temple. Maybe keep 2/3 of them.ID-21 Dolphin DolphinJedi(Talk) 12:51, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
    • Without them, it would be walls of text, which it already is in some sections. It's standard procedure to add images of things in the text that are not of the subject if there are not enough images available of the subject. 501st dogma(talk) 13:08, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
      • Right, but maybe it could do with a little fewer in some sections. But it's your call, I won't micromanage.ID-21 Dolphin DolphinJedi(Talk) 09:34, August 21, 2015 (UTC)


Alderaan Enclave

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Ayrehead
  • You don't mention the spy in Organa's group in the body, only the intro. This could be fixed with a mention of the message between Tula and Tace that Covis finds. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, April 9, 2016 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure the Alderaanians were looking to hide from the Imperial presence when they first arrived on the planet, where they? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, September 10, 2016 (UTC)
  • History section needs sub-sectioning with more quotes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, September 10, 2016 (UTC)
  • Covis intercepts the transmission from the Lord Juun not the shuttle. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, September 10, 2016 (UTC)
  • Might be worth mentioning that Bornae and others are killed in the fight. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

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Voorpee

  • Nominated by: ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:53, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Good article nomination that, quite simply, got too long. Well, in any case, before the nomination was closed, I had gotten support from one AgriCorp member and three regular users and didn't have any outstanding objections. Still, I'd be happy to address any other concerns that may be brought up. The original nomination can be found here. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:53, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

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  1. It's nice to see a less serious article every so often. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:19, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
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  4. Inqvote This... this is a thing. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:25, August 6, 2016 (UTC)
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Ayrehead
  • The intro should be updated to include information about the cloning and talent show. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:22, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
  • I would reword the bts concerning Brown saying pets would appear in the third book as it is currently a bit confusing to read and not entirely clear that the Phantom Bully is the third book unless you follow the link. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:22, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
  • Is it clear if the original Voorpee is the one that is kept, or could he be amongst the ones returned to the zoo or the rescue organization? If it isn't clar you should at least mention this in the behind the scenes and maybe even in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:22, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
    • Well, I tried something like that, but if you look back at Manoof's objections on the original Good article nomination, I ended up getting rid of it because if nothing is stated either way, then the custom is to not say anything at all. And the book really doesn't. After the whole mess happens, Voorpee himself isn't mentioned again at all. It's entirely unclear whether they ever even found the original Voorpee. ProfessorTofty (talk) 19:37, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Can we get a timeframe in the intro?
  • "In the second semester, Novachez, who had been struggling with his friendships," What do you mean by this? Was he struggling to make friends or having issues with the friends he had?
    • Reworded to make it clear that he was having issues with the friends he already had. ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:21, July 29, 2016 (UTC)
  • No quote for the P&T? I know he doesn't speak himself, but I'm sure there are lines said about him. IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:08, July 29, 2016 (UTC)
    • Good idea. Quotation for the P&T section has been added. ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:21, July 29, 2016 (UTC)

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Cornelius Evazan

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 04:37, August 22, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: With all the previous objections taken care of and other aditions, the page exceeded 1,000 words. Thus, I am running this for FA status.

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  4. Squishy Vic talk 18:44, December 19, 2015 (UTC)
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Jang
  • I'll post this here instead of the KB, but in the Annotated Screenplays, on page 44, he's called a "Human." Lucas doesn't give him any other description, but he's later described as "unpleasant" when Obi-Wan intervenes. JangFett (Talk) 06:07, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
    • Revised Fourth Edition, I assume? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:14, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
      • This will be an interesting case because most screenplay drafts, with complied edits and changes, are marked with the same date, even outside Star Wars. Unless we can track down and find all of the edited fourth draft screenplays, including the revised ones, it'll be tough to precisely determine the title. The Annotated Screenplays doesn't actually say where "Human" is from, unfortunately. Both it and this script dated January 15, 1976, both use "Human." Using the data I've collected from the Screenplays (listed in your KB), both "Human" and "Int. Death Star corridor" are used in the website, so it's safe to say Revised, although I'm not sure of the date. On another similar note: I'm not sure where "grubby" came from, if you want to keep that. JangFett (Talk) 06:25, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
        • Intresting. I've done as you've requested and did a little clean up in that area. The descriptor "short, grubby Human" is given in the script you've posted a link to, so do you think that would be OK to use? Also, I'm thinking of replacing the Bts quote with a sentence from the original novelization. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:35, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
          • Re: "grubby"—Ah, cool, I've missed that. Yes, it's safe to use. Source it to the website. But since we can't pinpoint the dates (I wouldn't trust what the website says in this case), a ref note needs to be used instead of a direct ref to Annotated Screenplays. It doesn't need to be complex, just one indicating the inaccurate dating. Using the website and what the Screenplays says, you can assume that they're both in one of the Revised Fourth Drafts. As for the quote, that would work better, since you're using Legends information. JangFett (Talk) 06:43, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
            • I've put up a quote from the novelization. Just to clarify, the above description is used in the draft included in the Annotated Screenplays and I need to source the online script? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:15, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
              • Try this: The ref note should go after "In the Revised Fourth Edition script for A New Hope," and then you can source "grubby" and "unpleasant Human" to the website, since they're both present there. JangFett (Talk) 14:24, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
                • Ok, cool, but how would you word the ref note. I've never written one before, so an example that could be used in the article would be appreciated. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:33, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
                  • Something along the lines of: "Several revised fourth drafts were released from mid-1976 to 1977, per the Screenplays, but the actual content of these scripts are unknown. A copy of a revised fourth draft shows identical descriptors present in Screenplays, but the date is incorrect. Therefore, this article assumes that only the identical descriptors are correct. JangFett (Talk) 14:48, November 10, 2015 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Posting this first because it might take the article under 1000 words, but I think the intro could be condensed a bit, especially the section about the cantina incident. Right now it's a little out of proportion with the Bio. IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:00, September 27, 2016 (UTC)
    • Condenced the cantina episode. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:54, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • "they became wanted men, and by then Evazan had been sentenced to death in twelve star systems." By when? IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:02, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

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Didn't want to add this as an objection as I have no idea if there's more information available on Cornelius from Star Wars: Complete Locations (2016), maybe worth asking User:LelalMekha if you don't have a copy as I imagine he would be happy to help you out --Lewisr (talk) 19:06, October 5, 2016 (UTC)



Tula

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:34, November 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another Princess Leia nom.

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SE
  • Can you give some context on the Melodic order?
  • Is there a way to determine how long it was until Tace learned about the Death Star's destruction? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:50, September 14, 2016 (UTC)
    • All we know is that is was shortly after the Battle of Yavin. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:56, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

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Darth Bane

  • Nominated by: Ruthless Xero(Talk) 03:26, November 11, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The only reason given for it's FA removal was an update for The Clone Wars Season 3, which had been added three days after it was stripped. I've updated the article with the relevant information from Book of Sith and the Encyclopedia so I see no reason it shouldn't be restored to FA status. Ruthless Xero(Talk) 03:26, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

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  • Oddly Bane's Encyclopedia entry reveals he was defeated by the Jedi. Perhaps worth noting the inconsistency in the BTS? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:25, November 13, 2015 (UTC)
    • I'm not too sure honestly. I added it, but it was reverted with the reasoning that the Encyclopedia was a Canon source and the information should be left out of the Legends article. Ruthless Xero(Talk) 06:12, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
      • The Encyclopedia is both a Legends and Canon source, so feel free to restore your edit. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 07:55, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
        • That being said, the Encyclopedia was never written to accommodate Legends, least of all in March 2014 when Bane appeared in The Clone Wars, so—Hanzo—that's the angle I'd take when you mention it in the BtS. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 15:53, November 21, 2015 (UTC)


Holshef

  • Nominated by: ProfessorTofty (talk) 01:07, November 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A good article nomination that got too long. The original nomination can be found here. Since the Servants of the Empire series has now ended, I think it's safe to say Holshef's story has most likely come to a close. ProfessorTofty (talk) 01:07, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

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Floyd
  • First impression is that the intro could be expanded with more details of the escape. As of right now, it's a bit disproportionately small in comparison with the body.
    • Good point. I think I wrote that back before the release of The Secret Academy and never updated it. Updated now to include details from that title. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • The P&T seems like it could also be expanded. For instance: "He griped that "Today's youth are always in a hurry," and began gathering stacks of his poetry, only for her to stop him, saying that they didn't have time to take anything. He asked if he could just take his latest and she knew it would be better to allow this small demand rather than let him wheedle for hours. When, however, he tried to take an entire year's worth of poems, she cut him off at one week." This alone illustrates some traits that could easily be added in.
  • Need context on the Gray Syndicate, as well as Merei Spanjaf.
  • Do we have any sort of timetable in regards to when these events occurred (i.e. how long after the Empire took control over Lothal?)
  • "When Holshef learned that the Empire was poisoning Lothal's air and water when it would have taken so little to preserve them," How were they poisoning the environment?
  • Please avoid contractions.
    • Hmm. I've heard this before, but as I've mentioned before in other article nominations like this, I can find nothing in the manual of style, the nomination guidelines, or anywhere else on the site specifically stating that contractions should be avoided. So I'm not going to avoid contractions for the sole purpose of sounding "more encyclopedic," nor replace contractions in cases where I would otherwise use them. Contractions are a natural and accepted part of the English language. That said, I'm willing to listen if you feel that removing any particular contractions would improve the article, but I'm just not sure removing contractions for the sake of removing contractions really does anything to serve our readers. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • "At some point after this, Laxo sold Holshef to a bounty hunter" What do you mean by this? Did he literally sell Holshef to the bounty hunter like a slave, or just the rights to protect him?
    • This question came up in the original good article nomination as well. The book phrases it as such: "Laxo opened his eyes. They were like chips of ice. 'I just sold Holshef to a bounty hunter,' he said. 'The hunter will be here in a hour. You're going to take him to your poet friend's latest hideout... and stay while he collects the bounty.'" So I guess the idea is that what he was really selling was Holshef's location, with the idea that the bounty hunter would turn Holshef in and then give him a portion of the bounty. I've edited the article to reflect that.
  • A lot of the bio seems to focus more on Spanjaf than Holshef. For instance, the raid at the end of "A fugitive artist": How does it affect Holshef? Furthermore, the entirety of "A need to escape" is written from Spanjaf's POV.
    • Well, I guess the reason for that is that it's really impossible to tell Holshef's story without Spanjaf because everything we're told revolves around her. It seems to me that if I cut the information from that paragraph, we'd be losing crucial information, but the fact is that there are only about three or four scenes that actually have Holshef present. I did add some more about Holshef at the end of the paragraph you mentioned though; and I'd welcome more direction on this topic. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • The quote in the P&T seems like it would be much better as the main quote than the one you have, where neither of the speakers are Holshef.
    • Fair enough. Made that the main quote and added a new quote for the personality and traits. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • I also think you're too play-by-play narrating everything that's said. Unless what they're talking about is really important, you'd do better just to stick to the actual actions of the story. IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:32, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
    • Alright, I've tried to chop it down. Let me know what you think now. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:54, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Quite right. I seem to recall voting in favor of that myself. Redlink taken care of, and while I was it, I also made a few other tweaks to the article. ProfessorTofty (talk) 14:03, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

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Fenn Booda

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  1. Never knew there was this much info on this guy. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:20, November 9, 2016 (UTC)

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Cevan
  • I assume Booda is meant to have said "Suit," rather than "Suite," in the quote under the 'Detainment of Aurra Sing' subsection? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:47, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
    • Yes. I just re-checked the comic it looks like I copied it down wrong. My mistake. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 23:50, November 8, 2016 (UTC)

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Halle Burtoni

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  1. Nice job! - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:27, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Indeed! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 02:57, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Looks good! Cevan IMPpress (talk) 02:54, November 6, 2016 (UTC)

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  • Can you find a quote for the Bts section, perhaps from one of the Blu-Ray TCW sets?
  • Mention that phase II armor was specifically an improvement over phase I?
    • I feel like that's implied with "upgrade over." - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:17, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
      • The reason I say this is because it currently links clone trooper armor while Phase II specifically improved on Phase I. Mayeb change it so that it says "an upgrade over Phase I clone trooper armor"?
        • I changed it so the word "standard" links to Phase I. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:24, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
  • Maybe mention Mot-Not Rab at the end of the first paragraph in the Biography section along with Amedda and Deechi? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 02:44, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Just one question I'd like to see addressed: How was Teckla Minnau an example of the war harming the people of the Republic? IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:59, July 2, 2016 (UTC)
    • Just saw this now. I didn't add the specifics because it seemed superfluous for this character's article. I can add it, though. Just need to double check the episode as a reminder. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 14:37, August 7, 2016 (UTC)
Cevan
  • What exactly is the emboldened part of the following sentence trying to say?
    "Senator Amidala gave another speech before the full Senate, arguing that the financial costs for a troop increase would cripple to the conflict, and that more clones would only escalate the Clone Wars." Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:58, October 27, 2016 (UTC)

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Mee Deechi

  • Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:14, December 31, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Apparently I'm on a bit of a TCW political kick lately. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:17, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

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AnilSerifoglu
  • Exact date of death can be added. I think it is "c. 21 years before the Battle of Yavin", regarding the timeline of canon media. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:07, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure how I would source that. The timeline of canon media is saying "Senate Murders" is at least 1 year into the war, not that it's circa 21 years before the Battle of Yavin. What would you recommend in terms of satisfying this objection?—which I would also note that, had there not been a question about it, would have easily been a "sofixit" objection that you could have added to the page on your own. I'm glad you brought it up here since there is a question about it, but that's something to think about for the future. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 23:40, May 7, 2016 (UTC)
      • I agree with you, it should stay as it is. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 00:19, May 8, 2016 (UTC)

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L'ulo

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 08:51, January 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first character nom

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Manoof
  • Straight off the bat, this page is in a maintenance category (templates with invalid url parameters). You'll have to go through your urls and fix this. It'll probably be one of your references, check the template page as it probably doesn't need the full url. For example, the starwars.com links don't need the http://www.starwars.com/ section of the url, and including it adds it to the category. I only noticed as I'm cleaning these categories up. As it's a nomination, I thought I'd drop a note so you can keep it in mind for future edits/nominations :) Manoof (talk) 10:17, April 19, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:56, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Alright, I think I snagged 'em all. - Cwedin(talk) 01:57, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

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Quick note. Although there's no way to know for sure at this point, it's very possible that the Duros on the cover of Star Wars: Poe Dameron 3 is L'ulo. If he's in multiple issues of the Poe Dameron comic, which wouldn't surprise me given his connection to Shara, then this nomination will no longer satisfy FAN requirement #6. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:40, April 2, 2016 (UTC)

  • I've noticed that too. Hopefully we get an answer come Wednesday! (In the meantime, I'll be copy-editing the article. It could use a cleanup.) - Cwedin(talk) 17:06, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
    • Want me to do a copy-edit? Whenever I write something, I always miss things that other people end up finding for me. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:11, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
      • That would be fantastic! Also, if you have any tips on updating the article's images, that would be great. (I feel they're poorly utilized at the moment.) - Cwedin(talk) 17:20, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
        • Think I'll do a quick run-through after Brandon. Great Job, Cwedin! Nivlacanator(talk) 22:36, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
          • Haven't looked at this yet (sorry!), but as it turns out, the Duros in Poe Dameron IS indeed L'ulo. So he'll likely be recurring for awhile now. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:31, April 6, 2016 (UTC)
            • Yup, I just picked up a copy. I'll try to keep the article maintained with each issue's release (life allowing). :P - Cwedin(talk) 17:39, April 6, 2016 (UTC)


Volik

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 16:48, January 18, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "Are you tired of your stressful life in the Core? Then come visit our wonderful resort on Volik! Hunt bountiful game, engage in a challenging climbing experience, and dine on exotic food! Updated: Please beware of the local pirates and smugglers, it appears they are very active this season."

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Shara Bey

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  5. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:38, July 18, 2016 (UTC)
  6. --Lewisr (talk) 00:04, July 24, 2016 (UTC)
  7. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 15:52, October 21, 2016 (EET)

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Cevan
  • The opening credits of the third issue of Shattered Empire reveals that Bey and Dameron joined the Alliance prior to the Battle of Hoth, so it may be wise to somehow work that into the first section of the biography. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:19, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
    • Good catch. Added. And thanks for adding all those links. Honestly I generally have no idea that half of these pages even exist. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:35, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
Floyd
  • "One of the operations Bey undertook was the Beltire Liberation. Seventeen days after the Battle of Endor, Bey flew in a battle in Cawa City on the planet Sterdic IV." Are these two the same thing? If not, I think this could be rewritten to differentiate these better.
    • They're not. I'm not sure how best to rewrite it. Any suggestions? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:13, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
  • Seeing some linking issues. I've added some that you missed, but you should give it a once-over.
    • This is generally something I'm bad at since most of the subjects I miss are so minor, so thanks for adding what I (and Cevan, who also helped out) missed. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:13, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
  • I haven't read these comics, but Bey seems like she's a relatively major character. As such, the P&T looks very skimpy. IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:36, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
    • She is the main character. This is a comprehensive (if not brief) overview of her personality. This may not be something you can answer without having read the comic, but if you have suggestions for how to expand it then that'd be great. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:13, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
      • I would suggest doing another read-through of her comic appearances, and focus specifically on trying to parse through what she says and does to find aspects of her personality. That's usually what I do. No offense, but this reads like you wrote the bio and then kind of did this as an afterthought. IFYLOFD (Talk) 23:21, June 9, 2016 (UTC)
        • Forgot to update here, but I'm working on this. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:35, June 20, 2016 (UTC)
          • Shooting to finish this today. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 13:48, July 13, 2016 (UTC)
            • I've expanded the P&T. It's somewhat redundant to information throughout the article (which was why I kept it brief in the first place), but hopefully I've written it in such a way that makes up for that. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 19:05, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
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The article has been updated to include new information from Star Wars: Poe Dameron: Flight Log. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 20:34, December 1, 2016 (UTC)


Rescue of Tseebo

  • Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:33, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I think I started writing this 8 or 9 months ago, but I got super lazy with it. So I'm glad it's finally finished. Thank you to Cevan for giving it a once-over and link check before I posted this nomination. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:33, April 5, 2016 (UTC)

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  1. Harshg (talk) 10:20, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  2. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 14:00, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Lewisr (talk) 00:19, June 1, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Seems I forgot to actually put my name down for supporting this nomination, but here it is now. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 21:20, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

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J'Quille

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:24, April 9, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: When I started writing up this article I did not realise Tim Dry had written an entire book about it.

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  1. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 16:42, June 11, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:38, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

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  • "Early in the war, the Whipid witnessed the Sith Lord Darth Vader visiting Jabba in order to request the services of the Hutt's best bounty hunters, but was expelled from Jabba's throne room along with the rest of the court so that the pair could speak in private." - Reads a bit awkwardly. Maybe split into two sentences? JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 15:10, June 11, 2016 (UTC)
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  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:57, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:03, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
      • It looks like another one was added since you fixed the earlier ones.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:37, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
        • Damn I was hoping someone else would do that before an objection was made. Oh well, after an entire Sunday morning 'tis done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:17, November 6, 2016 (UTC)

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  • I could not find the ISBN for Tim Dry's book anywhere and I'm not sure one even exists since it's only an ebook. I've included the ASIN instead since I wasn't sure what to include, but if it needs removing then let me know. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, April 9, 2016 (UTC)


Dromboid

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 19:09, May 25, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Since L'ulo's on standby, I figured I'd complete the Gormaanda-Dromboid-Krelman triumvirate!

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  1. This might be the worst segment in the special. Good job, in any case. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 03:50, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

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  • I'm not positive it is incorrect, but I haven't seen too many, if any, status articles (Or more recent ones, anyways) that make use of parenthesis. However, judging the way the sentences they are in are built, I don't think you even need them and can just incorporate that information normally. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:31, October 14, 2016 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure either, but I've gone ahead and changed it. - Cwedin(talk) 03:03, October 16, 2016 (UTC)
      • In any case, the sentences look better aesthetically, whereas the parenthesis impeded flow to a degree. Good work on the article! --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 03:50, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

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Naga Sadow

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:29, May 31, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Finally done after way too friggin' long.

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  1. Brandon Rhea(talk) 02:23, June 1, 2016 (UTC)

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  1. Categories were removed when you added your rewrite. I re-added what was there beforehand but—since I don't know the subject matter—can you check to make sure those are still correct and up to date, now that the article has been revamped? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 14:28, May 31, 2016 (UTC)

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  • I already tried to address this on the article's talk page, but to no avail. Although I realize that the current infobox picture is the most detailed and awesome headshot of Sadow we can get, it is also inaccurate. On that pic, his skin is pale yellow, when Sadow was clearly described as red-skinned in multiple sources from the original Tales of the Jedi: The Golden Age of the Sith to the more recent Lost Tribe of the Sith series. When I GANd Hakagram Graush, I was asked to move the picture of Ajunta Pall beheading him because it contradicted a single textual evidence. This headshot, however, contradicts many sources. I don't want to add this as an objection (because I think it's high time Sadow becomes an FA, and the article rocks), but still wanted to point it out. --LelalMekha (talk) 08:10, May 31, 2016 (UTC)
    • Good point. I'm going to leave it up for now simply for lack of options, but if I can find a suitable one I'll swap it out. The problem, as you know, is that there aren't any really good headshots of him - even the New Essential Guide to Characters basically depicts him as looking human. IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:21, June 3, 2016 (UTC)


Arkanian Legacy

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 16:48, June 13, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This one goes out to my boy Cody Rhodes.

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Eejee Vamm

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 06:22, June 22, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: WHOOOOAH BLACKBETTY VAMMALAMM

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HK-24 series assassin droid

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:40, July 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Here's a first: Floyd doing a droid class article.

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Seregar

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 13:17, July 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Real bush territory.

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Malakili

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  1. Nice work. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 18:39, August 12, 2016 (UTC)
  2. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 21:55, October 25, 2016 (EET)
  3. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:10, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Never expected this guy to have such a life --Lewisr (talk) 01:12, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  5. Probably one of my favorite background characters in the whole saga, and a great article to go along with him! --Jabot164 21:23, November 23, 2016 (EST)

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  • Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know confirms that Pateesa was a male rancor; as such, this should be mentioned in the article and all instances of "it" in reference to Pateesa should be changed to a male personal pronoun. - 17:56, August 12, 2016 (UTC)
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  • The article is going to need a update due to Star Wars: Complete Locations (2016). The book still claims that Malakili and Porcellus start up a restaurant in Mos Eisley after the rancor's death. It also shows his room which should probably be mentioned in some way, perhaps its location in the castle at least. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, October 9, 2016 (UTC)
    • Alright, thanks for the heads up! (again) - Cwedin(talk) 16:18, October 9, 2016 (UTC)
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  • A canon page will need to be made for mayor. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:37, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

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Taris Resistance

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 16:48, June 13, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: These guys got their shit wrecked.

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Rys

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:39, August 31, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Apparently I can't count

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 21:45, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Emperor Jarjarkine MP-Mandalorian Senate Hall 21:57, October 27, 2016 (UTC)

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  • Any chance of getting a higher quality and/or larger version of File:Clones fight on Rugosa.png? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:13, October 26, 2016 (UTC)
    • I've uploaded an uncropped version of the shot, is that any better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:12, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
      • Yeah, that's definitely clearer-looking. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 21:45, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
  • Could you add in that Rys was a clone of Jango at the beginning of the biography section? Also, the info about Rys being born on Kamino will need to have a citation for Episode II or the Clone Troopers Databank entry, and the bit about the Coruscant Guard operating on Coruscant will need to have a citation for something else as well. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:13, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

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B1-268

  • Nominated by: Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:14, October 28, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Rest in peace to what may be the last command battle droid.

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  1. Great stuff Cevan! --Lewisr (talk) 02:35, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Agreed. Fantastic work! - Cwedin(talk) 02:39, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Very surprising that B1-268 has this much of behind-the-scenes info! --TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 16:38, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  4. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 19:43, October 30, 2016 (EET)

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Haydel Goravvus

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:54, November 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Green alien dude.

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Maketh Tua

  • Nominated by: The Brave Goldfish (talk)
  • Nomination comments:I really liked her. Too bad she died so soon, she had a great potential.

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  1. Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (Talk) 18:05, October 16, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Shayn Mikel (talk) 16:01, October 19, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Harshg (talk) 09:12, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

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