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This page is for the nomination of Good articles. A Good article is an article that adheres to certain quality standards but cannot reach Featured status due to its limited content. This page is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like. For a list of Good articles, see Wookieepedia:Good articles.

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An article must…

  1. …be well-written and comprehensively detailed.
  2. …be unbiased, non-point of view.
  3. …have comprehensive Appearances and Sources lists.
  4. …be fully referenced, including all quotes and images. See Wookieepedia:Sourcing for more information.
  5. …follow the Manual of Style, Layout Guide, and all other policies on Wookieepedia.
  6. …following the review process, be stable, i.e., does not change significantly from day to day and is not the subject of ongoing edit wars. This does not apply to vandalism and protection or semi-protection as a result of vandalism.
  7. …not be tagged with any sort of improvement tags (i.e. more sources, expand, etc).
  8. …have a proper lead that gives a good summary of the topic if the length of the article supports it. This may not be appropriate on articles with limited content.
  9. …have no redlinks.
  10. …provide at least one quote on the article if available. A leading quote at the beginning of the article would be preferred, though not required if no quotes are available. Although quotes may be placed in the body of the article, a maximum of one quote is allowed at the beginning of each section.
  11. …ideally include a "Personality and traits" section on all character articles if information is available.
  12. …ideally include a "Powers and abilities" section for Force-sensitive characters and a "Skills and abilities" section for non–Force-sensitive characters, where said powers and/or abilities are stipulated.
  13. …include a "Behind the scenes" section for in-universe articles.
  14. …include a reasonable number of images of the highest quality to illustrate the article, as source availability permits.
  15. …counting the introduction and "Behind the scenes" material, be at least 250 words long (not including captions, quotes, or headers, etc). Alternatively, a Good article cannot exceed 1000 words. Articles that do so should be nominated for Featured status.
  16. …be properly titled in accordance with Wookieepedia's treatment of Canon and Legends articles; i.e., no nomination may have "/Canon" in the title.

How to nominate:

  1. First, select an article you feel is worthy of Good article status. Your nominated article must meet all seventeen requirements listed above to become a Good article.
  2. Add {{GAnom}} at the top of the article you are nominating and save the page. NOTE: If the article you are nominating has been nominated for Good article status previously, you will need to specify a new subpage name as a parameter in the template (e.g. {{GAnom|Lorum ipsum (second nomination)}}).
  3. Open the redlink (in a new tab or window, if possible) and fill out the form according to the instructions provided.
  4. Copy the code provided to the bottom of this page.
  5. Purge the article to update the template.
  6. Per AgriCorps consensus, non-AgriCorps members are restricted to four nominations on the GAN page at any one time. Once one nomination is removed from the page as either successful or unsuccessful, another may be added.

How to vote:

  1. Before doing anything, be sure to read the article completely, keeping a sharp eye out for mistakes.
  2. Afterward, compare the article to the criteria listed above, and then either support or object the article's nomination.
    • If you object, please supply concrete reasons for doing so, and how it can be improved.
  3. Any objections may be looked upon by the nominator, supporters, and anyone willing to improve the article, and action will be taken to please the objectors. Do not strike other users' objections; it is up to the objector to review the changes and strike if they are satisfied.
  4. Once a nomination has a total of five votes, with at least three votes coming from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members—two of which must be AgriCorps votes—after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the {{Eras|good}} template. The talk page will also be tagged with the {{GA}} template. Alternatively, if a nomination receives a total of five AgriCorps/Inquisitorius votes—three of which must be AgriCorps votes—with no outstanding objections before one week has passed, the nomination will be considered successful.
  5. The article is placed on the Good article list.


All nominations will be considered idle and are subject to removal by AgriCorps vote if objections are not addressed after a period of 2 weeks.


Good article nominations

To nominate an article for Good article status, place the {{GAnom}} template on the top of the article and then follow the instructions above. Nominated articles must meet all seventeen requirements stated above. If an article has a total of five votes, with at least three votes coming from AgriCorps or Inquisitorius members—two of which must be an AgriCorps vote—after at least a week since it was nominated (beginning the day of its nomination) and no objections (or the objections have been stricken or overridden), the article will be considered a "Good article" and tagged with the {{Eras|good}} template. The talk page will also be tagged with the {{GA}} template. For complete instructions on archiving nominations, please see here.

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Trandosha

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 02:08, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:A CAN that got too long. The original nomination can be found here.

(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:51, January 25, 2016 (UTC)
  2. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 07:22, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Because it's the forests, not the game, that make a world a hunter's paradise! Imperators II(Talk) 10:55, January 30, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Added the new character encyclopedia to sources, but there's no new info. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:29, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
  5. ACvote --Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:43, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • I think you should section the article per WP:LG and provide an intro.
  • I don't see where in the source of ref 11 does it say that it was the proximity of Kashyyyk and Trandosha that caused the rivalry of the two species.
    • Cleaned up to be more ambiguous, but I don't care for the wording. This issue will probably be taken care of once I split the article into sections. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:19, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • Hmmm... couldn't the mention of the convor in Missing in Action be interpreted to mean that the bird is native to Trandosha?
    • By that logic, the momong could also be a native life form, as in concept art it is referred to as a Trandoshan monkey. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:19, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • Ref 4 does not confirm/inform that Trandosha orbits a single star like the infobox field does. And adding a source for that (like in ref 2) if you can would be nice. Imperators II(Talk) 09:24, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • Intro shouldn't be referenced.
  • "Dosha" is intro-exclusive.
  • Per WP:LG, info on non-sentient species should be in the Description section, instead. And you could add short bits of context for those creatures, just like you did for Trandoshans. Imperators II(Talk) 23:50, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • Currently, in the intro it is stated that Trandosha was positioned in the same system as Kashyyyk, while the Description section only says Kashyyyk neighbored Trandosha. I believe you should swap the two, since the Description section does not mention that the system was shared and in general it should be more detailed than the intro.
Jorrel
Ecks Dee
  • Some notes on your referencing: I can see at least one place where identical referencing is used consecutively, which means either one of them is wrong or the first one is unnecessary. Please double-check.
    • I was missing a reference to Journey Through Space. This has been corrected. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:42, February 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • As for your references 1+2 and 5+6, I'd recommend you go with just 2 and 6 wherever you currently have both. A well-written reference explains the logic without needing to double-reference. Make sure to link properly in your references too. 1358 (Talk) 21:58, February 11, 2016 (UTC)
    • Killed the double references. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:51, February 12, 2016 (UTC)
      • Linking is still an issue. Everything needs to be linked once in every reference as per WP:S#Rules #7. 1358 (Talk) 18:41, February 24, 2016 (UTC)
Cav
  • First things first - is the Netflix audio description really the only source that Wasskah is Trandosha's moon? Because one ref states that it is in the episode guide for Padawan lost but another sources it to the Netflix audio description.
    • The audio description is the only source that explicitly says that Wasskah orbits Trandosha. I think I fixed your objection. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:00, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
      • Okay, so if its only the Netflix audio that establishes this, how can we be sure its "official" and not written by a Netflix employee? Or is the audio description the same as the audio description that appears on the DVD? Because if that's the case, then adjusting the wording to remove Netflix would be advisable. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:07, June 30, 2016 (UTC)
        • I'm not really using it as a source, so to say, but instead as something that clarifies what I'm seeing on screen. This mode doesn't go around naming background characters for the first time or anything like that. It's literally an audio "description" of what's going on onscreen. That said, if anything contradicts it, I'd treat that source as more accurate. I believe that this feature is exclusive to Netflix. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:09, June 30, 2016 (UTC)
          • You don't need to rely on the Netflix audio, which I don't think should be used either. The third slide of the "Padawan Lost" Episode Gallery identifies Wasskah as a "Trandoshan moon." I'm comfortable with interpreting that as meaning it orbits Trandosha. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:01, September 2, 2016 (UTC)
            • I defer to your judgement. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 01:16, September 2, 2016 (UTC)
  • I made some changes to the wording in places. Nothing wrong with it really except it didn't flow very well. Check out my changes and see what you think. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:50, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • CC and I have just recently started on a campaign to clean up and standardize reference formatting for items from the TCW home-video releases. This involves specifying which commentary/documentary/whatever the information comes from within the set, which should be specified in reference 5.
    • Is there a specific way you'd like this done so I can apply it to my other articles that use TCW home release citations? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 01:20, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
      • The Season One featurettes were all named after the episode they covered, so I need to cite "Downfall of a Droid." - AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:00, October 18, 2016 (UTC)
  • Non-canon material is included in the BTS when applicable. Is there nothing to say for this Freemaker thing?
  • Even though the specific segments of Episode Guides aren't listed in the Sources, it's still a good idea to source by them. Please see The Pilot's Lounge article as a nice example of how the overall Guide is listed in the Sources, but the specific segments, such as Trivia Gallery, are employed in the referencing. This article should revise its referencing to follow suit.
    • This article was one of my earlier efforts, but my other TCW (and Rebels) articles already use this format. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 00:29, October 19, 2016 (UTC)
  • Not an objection, but I've revamped the BTS similar to other nominations of yours that I've reviewed. It's more important to lead off with the most relevant source material for this article subject, which in this case is the TCW episode, rather than robotically listing information chronologically, which isn't always the best method for Canon articles that detail previous Legends material. On that note, I've removed the portion detailing the TCW Season One home-video release. As I also explained to you on previous noms, the way you're framing this information is partly inaccurate. It's not correct to say that Trandosha "became canon" when it was mentioned in this TCW home release, as if it never used to be, because Legends material was fully considered canon by Lucasfilm's standards. With that understanding, it's really weird and confusing to say that something that was already canon "became" canon in 2009 prior to the 2014 canon relaunch. I feel the way I've rewritten the BTS is more accurate and easier to understand, and I would recommend following this system in future articles that you write. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:36, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the critique! I'll try to take care of them in the next few days. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:27, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

  • I don't want to make this an official objection, as I don't want to be redundant, but I agree with Imperators regarding adding an intro. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 09:38, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
    • It will be done. I am currently trying to decide what pictures, if any, I'm going to add to the article. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:23, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • Maybe I'm just not remembering details from the episodes, but can you explain for me exactly how you're deducing that Trandosha is the planet seen in those two TCW episodes? Is it identified by name? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:26, September 2, 2016 (UTC)
    • Your memory isn't fault; however, evidence of this can be found throughout the episode guides for "Padawan Lost" and "Wookiee Hunt." Along with the aforementioned Trandoshan moon bit, the first episode guide show an image of the planet on the slide in the Trivia Gallery while referring to Trandosha. Also, the second episode guide says that "When Chewbacca says his home world is very close, he's not kidding. According to the Expanded Universe, Kashyyyk and Trandosha are in the same star system." Why would that be there if Wasskah wasn't a moon of Trandosha? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 01:35, September 2, 2016 (UTC)
      • Well, my concern is whether any of these Canon sources actually identifies the planet seen in those two episodes as Trandosha. I think the "Padawan Lost" slide is pretty weak to base it on, but I agree at least that this was the creators' intention, so I won't push it. Do any of these other sources listed in the article picture Trandosha or identify it as the planet from these episodes? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:43, September 2, 2016 (UTC)
        • Explicitly, no, but the Databank entry for Trandosha says it appeared in TCW (while incorrectly picturing Wasskah). - AV-6R7Crew Pit 01:46, September 2, 2016 (UTC)


Sakas

(2 ACs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Cwedin(talk) 23:02, March 27, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:49, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:16, April 8, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Manoof (talk) 09:53, May 10, 2016 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:06, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
    ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:35, June 29, 2016 (UTC)
  6. Assuming the remaining objections are handled. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 23:21, August 29, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Manoof
  • Should you have Alliance Special Forces in the infobox, as a bullet point between the alliance and pathfinders. Otherwise it seems Pathfinders are a stand-alone branch of the Alliance, rather than a specific branch of the SpecForces. Manoof (talk) 07:32, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
  • I would recommend making sure your urls are backed up on the archive. Also, does tumblr count as a social media site, and so requires a screenshot? Manoof (talk) 07:32, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
    • There isn't really a mechanism to do either of these things right now because we don't have a Tumblr template, unless you have an alternative suggestion. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:10, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
      • I went ahead and made sure the url is backed up, and added it to the reference. Manoof (talk) 22:12, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
  • Can we say somewhere what species Dameron and Solo are? Manoof (talk) 07:32, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
    • That seems like unnecessary detail. To my knowledge we don't require species-level context for each character who is referenced. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:10, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
      • I consider it minimum context for characters, but I leave it up to you. Manoof (talk) 22:12, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
        • I think the rank info, which is provided, is more appropriate context since it reflects what they do and how they relate to Sakas. If someone wanted species info they could look at their respective pages. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 22:17, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
  • In the P&T, can you say something about what sort of fighter she was? Manoof (talk) 07:32, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure what you mean by "what sort of fighter" she was. Other than being in the Pathfinders, which is referenced in the biography, we don't know much about her. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:10, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
      • She seems skilled with a blaster rifle, did she demonstrate hand to hand combat skills at all? Is it worth mentioning or not really? Manoof (talk) 22:12, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
        • She didn't demonstrate hand to hand combat skills, no. I feel like "skilled with a blaster" is already implied. She didn't demonstrate any particular skills of note, so the fact that she's Alliance Special Forces can speak for itself IMO. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 22:17, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
  • What do you mean by "black site", is this something that should be an article? Manoof (talk) 22:12, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
    • In real life, a black site is a secret base where secret projects are conducted. For example, there are CIA black sites where less-than-good operations have been conducted. What that means in the Star Wars galaxy, though, was never stated. We didn't learn anything about the base beyond the fact that it's an ISB black site, so the most we could do with creating an article is a dictionary definition. In terms of giving more detail about what black site means in this article, we have nothing Star Wars-related to source that to. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 22:17, May 6, 2016 (UTC)
  • My apologies, I know I struck and support voted, but I must not have submitted. Manoof (talk) 09:53, May 10, 2016 (UTC)
Floyd
  • "Nearly three weeks after the Battle of Endor, the battle in which the Alliance delivered a devastating blow to the Empire by destroying its Death Star II superweapon and defeating Emperor Palpatine, Sakas served with the Pathfinders, an Alliance Special Forces unit under the command of General Han Solo, in a raid on an Imperial Security Bureau black site at the Wretch of Tayron, located in the Outer Rim Territories." This is the unwieldiest sentence ever Brandon
  • Is the Wretch of Tayron the black site itself? The way this is worded it makes it seem like the Wretch of Tayron is a larger location that houses the black site. If so, I think the actual facility itself could use a link.
    • It's unclear if the Wretch of Tayron is the location of the black site or the black site itself. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:12, May 29, 2016 (UTC)
  • Is there really nothing else you can put in the P&T? She seems to have at least a few speaking lines.
    • The lines are pretty straight-forward, and about the actions being taken. Sakas doesn't have much in the way of characterization. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:12, May 29, 2016 (UTC)
Cav
Toprawa
  • I didn't want to have to do this, but I wasn't able to get a hold of Brandon today, so I'm leaving this as a formal objection and striking my support vote for now. Cav's objection above regarding the use of an Equipment section should be followed as he originally requested. Sakas' use of an A280 should be mentioned in this section, as should the fact that she wears the standard uniform of every Endor Rebel soldier. That's the purpose of an Equipment section, and mentioning the A280 in the Bio should not preclude its implementation. In fact, I wouldn't recommend even mentioning specific weaponry in the Bio in an article this short, because then it just becomes redundant. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:12, July 19, 2016 (UTC)
    • How would you advise sourcing the fact that it's the standard uniform for every Endor Rebel soldier? That can't really be sourced to Shattered Empire or Return of the Jedi. Should a reference note be used to say it's similar? Also, so you're aware, I am on vacation without internet access (just phone) starting tomorrow (Thursday) through Tuesday, so I will not see your response to this until Tuesday. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 04:01, July 28, 2016 (UTC)
      • The crux here is less on sourcing and more how you word it, which I would prefer to leave up to you. Sakas and all of the Endor Rebels, both in ROTJ and Shattered Empire, are wearing the same basic, standardized camouflaged uniform. That's what I'm looking to see reflected here in Equipment. If this were a ROTJ-exclusive character, that fact can be sourced to ROTJ, which shows us as much; I'm assuming the same holds true for Shattered Empire. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:51, September 27, 2016 (UTC)
  • I'd like to see the Biography divided into two subsections, which would be best accomplished by inserting a paragraph break in the second paragraph. "Solo and the rest of the Pathfinders..." is a natural division point. This will also allow you to use additional images and quotes if available, which I presume they are. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:54, September 27, 2016 (UTC)
    • Added. There are no additional quotes or images. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 23:30, November 20, 2016 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • "Sakas was present in the command center" - would that be the ISB base's command center? If so, please add the context.
    • Yes. I think it's pretty straightforward as-is, but I've added a word to clarify. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 04:01, July 28, 2016 (UTC)
  • if "Dameron told the story of how he and Sakas raided the base to his son, Poe Dameron," in Before the Awakening, why is the book not listed in Sakas' Appearances section? Imperators II(Talk) 08:03, July 27, 2016 (UTC)
    • She wasn't mentioned, but their actions were. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 04:01, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote Unaddressed objections for almost two months now. Imperators II(Talk) 23:17, November 20, 2016 (UTC)
    • Wasn't aware that Tope had replied to me. I've addressed the objection. I know that AC/Inqs don't like it when objections are addressed after a removal vote has begun. So, I'd just take this opportunity to remind everyone, before there are any comments about it, that it also took Tope two months to reply to the question that I left for him—and no vote to strike those objections or change anything about the nomination was commenced. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 23:29, November 20, 2016 (UTC)
      • Good thing you noticed the vote then, if not the objection. ;) Imperators II(Talk) 23:39, November 20, 2016 (UTC)


Ello Asty

(2 ACs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 16:35, August 29, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Nice work, though I'm worried that, since he's confirmed to be mentioned in upcoming sources, the article may need an update. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 18:00, August 29, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Great stuff! Lewisr (talk) 01:17, August 30, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:01, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
  5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, September 3, 2016 (UTC)
  6. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:39, September 14, 2016 (UTC)
  7. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 15:01, October 19, 2016 (EET)

Object

Imperators II
AV

Previews from the upcoming book Star Wars: Poe Dameron: Flight Log have clarified that Asty is from Abednedo; this will need to be added to the article. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:19, August 27, 2016 (UTC)

Cevan
  • Asty's final words shouldn't be under the 'New Republic service' section. Assuming you still want to include that quote in the article, have it moved to the appropriate section, and, if possible, try to get a quote from Bloodline that's relevant to Asty. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:28, August 27, 2016 (UTC)
  • Is there any chance of getting another image somewhere in the article? Perhaps a behind the scenes image, or a full-body shot of Asty in his flightsuit (such as the one featured in the Abednedo article. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:25, August 30, 2016 (UTC)
Ayrehead
Floyd
Toprawa
  1. Some basic formatting issues:
    • I would strongly recommend going no further than two or three cascading bullets deep in the infobox's Affiliations field. Wikia skin's very narrow margins make the article's current presentation look terrible. I'd suggest toggling back and forth between skin views to see what I mean. Just stick to his most critical affiliations. Things like "Resistance military" are entirely unimportant here.
    • The Biography has more than enough space to be subsectioned, which will allow you to use more quotes and images if available. More to the point, this will set you up to use some image in the Bio, which is more important than sticking an image in the P/T if you have to choose between them.
      • Well, the bio did have a couple short sections. I was asked above to remove them and just have one bio section. You still think I should re-add them? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 15:28, September 29, 2016 (UTC)
        • I didn't realize another reviewer made this objection. I can talk to him if need be, but yes, I absolutely think you should reintroduce subsectioning. Five paragraphs is a relatively long Bio as far as GAs ago. Anytime a GA goes past three, I typically recommend it. I suspect this is also a case where Wikia skin plays a factor, since formatting between skins can be so radically different. If you toggle to that skin, you'll immediately see the need to divide this section. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:37, September 29, 2016 (UTC)
    • Once the preceding objection is handled, the article will most likely be more aesthetically prepared for a minor expansion to the intro. Two sentences is pretty short for a Bio so long. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:04, September 27, 2016 (UTC)
      • Sounds good, thanks. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 15:28, September 29, 2016 (UTC)
        • You should do more to expand the intro. The focus isn't so much how many sentences there are as how many lines of text there are, which is a variable factor depending on the infobox, images, etc. In this case, two or three more lines of text in the intro would do good to complement the Bio aesthetically. The "eye test" applies here. Again, this is all with regards to using Wikia skin. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:37, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
          • Ok, added a couple more sentences.

Comments

Cevan
  • I'm not going to add this is an objection since you aren't guaranteed a response, but you may want to try and contact Pablo Hidalgo or someone else who works at Lucasfilm and may know the answer on Twitter as to why Asty's callsign is Red Six, but he's said to be part of Blue Squadron. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:02, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
    • I already did, and was ignored. :( Maybe @WookOfficial could try? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 16:09, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
      • If that works, I have a list of unanswered questions for @WookOfficial. :P - AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:21, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
        • I don't like to bother creators with continuity questions on the Wookieepedia Twitter, so I'd rather not tweet the question. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:57, September 2, 2016 (UTC)
  • Okay, just to be sure before I make the edits: Poe's Flight Log puts Ello in Red Squad. Since this is the most recent source, ok to overwrite the other sources which put him in Blue Squad? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 21:26, December 3, 2016 (UTC)


Phatrong

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:39, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Revisiting one of my previous nominations.

(2 ACs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote The bit about Embo doesn't feel like it belongs anywhere. :/ Imperators II(Talk) 16:01, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cwedin(talk) 07:18, September 12, 2016 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 05:38, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:38, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • "Inhabitants" was in desperate need of a paragraph break. I guess Tope would say you should subsection it now. :P Imperators II(Talk) 06:44, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
    • Of course; I'll handle that tomorrow (aka when I get up). I'll also see if I can reorganize any of the info or add some to help the flow. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:48, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • Intro should include words about the planet's description and its government (and maybe affiliation).
  • "Though they weren't monolithic some regions had more traditional structures with integrated militaries clovocs were common in several of the largest nations." - what's happening here?
    • Semi-colons are my friends. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 07:07, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
      • Now it's unclear as to who "they" are: "Though they weren't monolithic;" Just go sleep already, AV. :P Imperators II(Talk) 07:10, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
        • Commas are cool, too. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 07:16, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • This article names Ekaqume a "house" while its own article identifies it as a clovoc. Which one is correct? (Currently, the first sentence of Locations contrasts "houses" and clovocs.)
  • Last sentence of Locations is a bit longish. Can you rework it? Maybe put some of the info in Inhabitants? Imperators II(Talk) 07:04, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
Floyd
  • As per the Layout Guide, this article needs a History section. A lot of the information in Inhabitants would fit; as such, this article is going to need to be reworked rather thoroughly. IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:59, September 13, 2016 (UTC)
    • I shuffled some info around if you want to take a look. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 00:14, September 20, 2016 (UTC)
The Brave Goldfish
  • That bit about Embo really doesn't belong there. Also, the proposed quote from the comments could be added. Despite that it's a perfect article. - The Brave Goldfish (talk) 18:35, October 26, 2016 (EET)
    • Please note that what is provided in the comment section below is not an allowable quote for the article body per the Manual of Style. Imperators II(Talk) 16:54, October 26, 2016 (UTC)
      • Oh, OK, so only Embo's bit should be edited. - The Brave Goldfish (talk) 11:26, October 27, 2016 (EET)
        • The Embo bit is relevant to the subject, so it should stay, even if it does seem out of place. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 08:29, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

  • Is there a quote available, or is the indirect mention within the prose? - Cwedin(talk) 07:13, September 12, 2016 (UTC)
    • Prose: "He was a Kyuzo, a species that originated from a gravity-heavy world." - AV-6R7Crew Pit 07:16, September 12, 2016 (UTC)


PM-1203

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 05:21, September 3, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A CAnom that ran too long.

(2 ACs/5 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote They say those are the best CAnoms. Imperators II(Talk) 05:48, September 3, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:41, September 3, 2016 (UTC)
  3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 06:39, September 7, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Cwedin(talk) 07:14, September 12, 2016 (UTC)
  5. --LelalMekha (talk) 18:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)
  6. --The Brave Goldfish (talk) 15:47, October 16, 2016 (EET)
  7. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:08, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • I would say that you could include a Locations section here with information about the base and perhaps other landmarks if they exist. IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:38, September 13, 2016 (UTC)
    • It's doable, but I don't believe its really necessary in this case, especially since Fort Anaxes is the only location of note on PM-1203. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:05, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Hobin Carsamba

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:57, September 18, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A brief break from Leia before I get round to finishing Junn.

(2 ACs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote I put the video game under the Non-canon appearances subsection per the new addition to WP:LG. Imperators II(Talk) 11:53, September 18, 2016 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 23:43, September 19, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:48, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • This is one case where I don't think the Bio needs to be subsectioned. You've only got a few really short paragraphs. IFYLOFD (Talk) 23:18, September 19, 2016 (UTC)
    • It still looks a little chunky in Wikia skin, but removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:29, September 19, 2016 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • We implemented GAN Rule 14 to make sure we never have another image like the one currently found in this article's infobox. I realize it's being cropped down, but there's no reason why it can't be much higher resolution, especially now that we have home-video access to the film. In addition, we recently passed a new image policy requiring images to be a minimum of 400px when possible. This image can certainly meet that standard, though it does not currently. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:11, September 28, 2016 (UTC)
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:27, September 28, 2016 (UTC)
      • The body image, too, naturally. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:57, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
        • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:41, October 7, 2016 (UTC)
          • Is that the best we can get for the Bio image? It looks really blurry. If you're altering it in any way besides just cropping, such as zooming in, don't, because it makes it look bad. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:13, October 8, 2016 (UTC)
            • Without zooming the previous version was the best I could get it to look, although I'll admit I'm no expert at these things. Which is preferable? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:36, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Rilo Tang

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Support

  1. Andykatib 20:49, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • Check your quotes for missing punctuation, and make sure to use "[...]" if you omit anything from the original quote.
  • "Moff" is capitalized inconsistently.
  • Tang's species should be mentioned in the article's body.
  • Make sure that all characters are referred to (after their introduction) by their last names, not their first names.
  • You shouldn't present the parts about Tang being sent by his parents to the academies as fact, since it's just a guess by Rath Velus.
  • It should be indicated clearly that not only Tang's survival but his work in trash compactors was only rumored, not proven fact.
  • The last sentence of the Bio section isn't really relevant to Tang.
  • I believe that the previous Rath Velus' paragraph in the novel would be a better choice for the "Personality and traits" section quote - it's more specific, and actually describes Tang instead of the Imperial academies.
  • Also, I'd refrain from using "boy" to refer to Tang in your text and instead use "young man" or something to that effect. Seeing how Tang had become an Imperial gunnery officer, after all, it seems unlikely to me Rath Velus used the primary meaning of "boy" as "male child" to refer to Tang. Imperators II(Talk) 22:52, November 20, 2016 (UTC)
  • Oh, and please vary the way you refer to Tang throughout the article. You simply use "he" or "him" too many times in a row, and sometimes it can even lead to some confusion as to who exactly are you talking about. Remember that you can use "he/him" or "Tang", "the young human", the "young officer", "the gunnery officer" or any other variation thereof you can think of. Imperators II(Talk) 22:58, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Rennek

  • Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:19, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First in a long time

(1 ACs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Rennek's a lot more scruffy lookin' than this article. -- Dr. Porter Resistance starbird (Talk|Contribs) 07:06, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 12:20, October 6, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:18, November 11, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:08, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • "Boushh" didn't bargain with Jabba for Solo's freedom, but rather for the bounty of Chewbacca.
    • Fixed, elaborated about the negotiation and her true intent later.
  • I'm not sure what the last two sentences of the Biography section have to do with Rennek. Imperators II(Talk) 16:47, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
    • Rennek was there when Leia threatened Jabba with a thermal detonator. As for the last sentence, it's just the closure for Leia that evening. We don't see Rennek during that so I guess it could be removed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:43, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
      • Meh. I guess it can stay, if only because it complements the "ostensibly" bit. Imperators II(Talk) 12:20, October 6, 2016 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • With regards to Legends material, we longer apply our self-created "ambiguously canonical" label to items. Something is either canon or non-canon. You should move the Lapti Nek video into the Appearances list and detail whatever information comes from it in the article body. If there's nothing to say in the Bio, the BTS could certainly mention something. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:09, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
    • Done. That music video was just an alternate angle of the original Lapti Nek that was later replaced by Jedi Rocks. Doesn't seem to be any real new info worth putting into the article text. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:43, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
JangFett
  • Perhaps you can beef up that intro. Add another sentence or two to be proportional to the bio.
  • "when several allies of the Hutt's prisoner, Han Solo," Are you sure Han was Jabba's only prisoner? This also applies to the similarly worded biography sentence
  • "The Human male Rennek lived during the Galactic Civil War fought between the Alliance to Restore the Republic and Galactic Empire." Maybe I'm reading this wrong, but the way this is worded makes it seem that he's fighting for both the Rebels and Empire.
  • Hi Hanzo JangFett (Talk) 03:13, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
    • Hi Jang. Welcome back. All objections taken care of. Note that I wrote of Leia's intentions of freeing Solo in the intro as, while it wasn't what she communicated to Jabba, it was still her true purpose of going to the palace. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:51, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
      • Came to check the place out :) JangFett (Talk) 23:50, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Could you mention where in the throne room he is? Since there are so many extras in Jabba's palace I've always thought it useful to direct readers as to where to look for the character. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:54, November 10, 2016 (UTC)
    • Updated.
  • I'd actually go a little further with the final sentence of the biography and include that Jabba is killed, since this seems relevant to Rennek given his employment. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:54, November 10, 2016 (UTC)
    • Particularly given how after Leia's arrival we don't see Rennek again nor do we see him on the sail barge, I kind of think that's kind of too much passage of time with Rennek not being so much as seen or mentioned by other stuff to continue his biography beyond Leia's capture. I think Jabba's article obviously mentioning his fate is enough. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:10, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

  • From rewatching the film scenes, while Reshad and Thryss are visible surrounding Luke's arrival and fight with the Rancor, Rennek is not. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:19, October 5, 2016 (UTC)


Mikkian

  • Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 18:02, October 7, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Let's do it while there's still little to say about them.

(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Still a little disappointed they didn't win the Uprising vote—I would've liked to have learned what planet they were from. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 18:49, October 8, 2016 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 13:27, October 14, 2016 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 23:15, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
  4. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 12:59, October 27, 2016 (EET)
  5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:59, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • You forgot to mention the eye color in the article body.
  • I'm not sure if this is mandatory, but I still feel it should be noted somehow that the site containing the release date for "The Unknown" is in German.
    • Not sure how I can do that, but I'll think of something. --LelalMekha (talk) 22:56, October 8, 2016 (UTC)
      • I tried something there, but I'm not certain that's exactly what you were looking for. --LelalMekha (talk) 23:03, October 8, 2016 (UTC)
        • Why not just use this? Imperators II(Talk) 23:07, October 8, 2016 (UTC)
          • Because I'm not clever enough to think of such an obvious solution! :p Done now. Thanks! --LelalMekha (talk) 23:28, October 8, 2016 (UTC)
  • Just wanted to check: in "Destiny", does Yoda's vision only depict Tiplee/Tiplar (i.e., no new info)? Imperators II(Talk) 22:38, October 8, 2016 (UTC)
    • Nothing relevant to the species. In Yoda's vision, he just sees a bunch of Jedi he knew standing there and chatting in a courtyard near a tree. That's why I didn't feel the need to include the vision in the article body. --LelalMekha (talk) 22:56, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Rigosso

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Support

  1. Good job. -- Dr. Porter Resistance starbird (Talk|Contribs) 08:53, October 18, 2016 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:18, October 30, 2016 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:52, November 9, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Dr. Porter

Looking pretty good, though I found some minor mistakes.

  • Pretty common mistake because of its counter-intuitive nature, but "itergalactic" should be changed to "intragalactic". Though, it's use in the intoduction should be removed all together because of its redundancy "intragalactic Clone Wars waged through the galaxy".
    • Hm, that's a new one, but I like the sound of it. Fixed.
  • "dictator" should probably be linked to Politics#Dictatorship.
    • Done.
  • For the 600,000 credits figure, you should be citing Rigosso's encyclopedia entry.
    • That does make more sense. Consider it done.
  • "Rigosso introduced himself and Lord Blank to the bounty hunters and briefed the bounty hunters on the mission objectives,..." best to change the second mention of "bounty hunters" to just "the group" or something similar so that it reads better.
    • Ah, I do try to avoid that usually. Thanks and fixed.
  • I don't think change of heart is hyphenated, though I could be mistaken.
    • No, you're right. Fixed.
  • "...concerned with Sodi's safety, is was only in the interest of Blank..." "is" should be changed to "it".
    • Whoops, fixed.
  • "eyes" should be linked to Eye.
    • Done.
  • Bounty's episode number and date of release should be included in BTS. -- Dr. Porter Resistance starbird (Talk|Contribs) 05:55, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
Imperators II
Floyd
  • Context on the Kage Warriors? IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:10, November 7, 2016 (UTC)
    • Added some, though I assumed it was a bit of a given. But I suppose I was wrong. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 23:02, November 7, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

  • Seeing as it could come up, I also wanted to ask if there should be a page for the Belugan government/organization. They rule the planet and have some kind of military system. They also have the emblem as seen on Rigosso's chest plate. Not sure it would be something to make a page for or if it's something for the page on Quarzite in general, under a politics section. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 06:25, October 17, 2016 (UTC)
    • Personally, I like having pages for those sorts of things so that they can be categorized and linked to, but like you said, the information could be covered in the Quarzite article. -- Dr. Porter Resistance starbird (Talk|Contribs) 08:53, October 18, 2016 (UTC)
Dates

So... Should I math out a date for Rigosso's death? Though, I'm not sure if "One year into the Clone Wars" means 22 BBY or 21 BBY. So maybe not. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 04:23, November 6, 2016 (UTC)

  • Shouldn't it be 20 BBY per this forum? Imperators II(Talk) 07:03, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
    • You're right, I see. Hm, I'm not sure how to write out the notes, and with something apparently called "War On Quarzite" (according to the Atlas' appearances section) I might just have to find a copy of this myself or ask around. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:08, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
      • Well, I sort of have one general Date note, now. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 23:02, November 7, 2016 (UTC)
        • Correct me if I'm wrong, but the first three sentences of the note look redundant now. Imperators II(Talk) 07:52, November 8, 2016 (UTC)
          • I believe it depends on what the Atlas actually says. It may only mention events from the surrounding episodes, at which point we need only to consult the Episode Order Guide. Alternatively, the book supposedly mentions a "War on Quarzite," which I'm guessing is the Belugan-Kage conflict that is so far unconfirmed in its scale. Otherwise we can probably just cite the date of the war in the Atlas and leave it at that. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 15:27, November 8, 2016 (UTC)

Holdan

  • Nominated by: Sol PacificusFirestorm 07:22, October 18, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first article nomination, so pardon me if I followed the instructions incorrectly.

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Object

  • Best if you remove the mention of Mission and Carth from the final body paragraph, as we don't know if they were present or not. T3-M4, Bastila or Zaalbar could have also attended.--Jace Onasi (talk) 10:03, November 29, 2016 (UTC)
    • I included that information to be more comprehensive, but you could argue that it is sufficient I already mentioned it in the BtS. Although we don't know if Mission or Carth were truly present or not, since our policy is to assume 100% game completion for our articles, I thought that in light of that, we might also assume that whoever had additional dialogue were there to voice them. However, one might counter that certain companions' dialogue might contradict one another (that is if one says it, the other would not have said it). I did not specify that T3-M4, Bastila, or Zaalbar were not there by the way, only that Mission and Carth were. (The assumption that I prefer is actually that usually everyone is there and the fact that Revan can only choose 2 companions is just gameplay mechanics). Anyways, I removed it ^_^, good catch regardless. Sol PacificusFirestorm 16:59, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Ice

  • Nominated by:Sol PacificusFirestorm 15:25, October 18, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I looked to the featured article Deadeye Duncan for some guidance. I found that article to have more detail than I expected. It was from that article's example that I explained a bit more about the Attack on the Endar Spire that led to the Sith quarantine, but I fear that this isn't relevant enough to Ice's story or her perspective to be explained. One other concern I have is the note in the BtS about how her hair is brown in the Xbox version. I have the Xbox strategy guide where the pictures show her with a head like that of Iceman.

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Support

  1. Probably best if you remove the part about Bastila, and merely include the information about the occupation and the blockade. Other than that, all good.--Jace Onasi (talk) 09:55, November 29, 2016 (UTC)
  • Done :). Thank you for reviewing it by the way. This has been up here forever. >_< Sol PacificusFirestorm 17:02, November 29, 2016 (UTC)
  1. Good work! Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:27, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Cevan
  • Just to verify, it's actually stated that Ice is from Taris, correct? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 15:44, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • It may be wise to establish that Revan was an amnesiac Sith earlier on, at his first mention. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 15:44, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
    • Done. I have look at past GA reviews for some other KotOR character articles where people have said that that information isn't relevant enough to be included in the first place. I'm guessing we don't have a standardized practice for it? Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:50, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
      • Now that you mention it, you could probably leave out that bit of info. Knowing that Revan is a former Sith isn't really necessary to understanding anything spoken of in this article. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:09, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • The behind the scenes section will need some tweaking since KOTOR isn't canon. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 15:44, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
    • You mean not canon to Canon right? I removed the mention that she's canonical, but I didn't mention she's from Legends, not sure if it's necessary. Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:50, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
      • If you want to add in that she is a Legends character/KOTOR is a Legends game it wouldn't hurt anything, though I'm not certain if that's necessary—clarifying that may make it a little easier for this next part, however. For the second paragraph of the bts section, about the dark side ending, you may want to rephrase that slightly to make it clear that the "non-canonical" bit refers it being non-canon in the Legends coninuitiy or something to that effect. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:09, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
        • Do you think that is necessary given that there is already that tag at the top of the article identifying it as a Legends article? It seems a bit awkward to say "In the dark side outcome that is non-canonical in the Legends continuity" (which seems to suggest that it is canonical in Canon continuity even if it is obvious to us that doesn't make sense). Actually we might want to double-check if we're ever supposed to refer to Canon vs. Legends in articles at all. Sol PacificusFirestorm 07:42, December 2, 2016 (UTC)
          • I've gone ahead and reword the second paragraph in the behind the scenes section a little. You can take a look and see what you think. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 13:57, December 2, 2016 (UTC)
            • I just edited it. I removed the additional line specifying that it's unclear if Revan "canonically" participated in the dueling ring. I think since it has already been noted that we are only assuming 100% completion in the body paragraph, this makes this line in the BtS to be unnecessary, maybe even redundant. It would also cause confusion to have "canonical" in quotation marks. I think we might check up on others later whether it is fine to use the word canon within the Legends continuity. Really, the main reason why I removed the line though is because in light of all these complications, I suppose at the end of the day, we don't really have to say whether it was canonical or not? I did add that the player earns dark side points for it, and I had originally intended to edit the line to say that we are assuming 100% light side choices so that we treat it as non-canonical, but then I recalled that our assumption is only for convenience's sake when writing the body paragraph. It is canon (in Legends) that Revan had the light-side ending, but he might have made a dark side choice here and there along the way, and that's really my main mistake with calling it non-canonical. Anyways, let me know what you think. Sol PacificusFirestorm 01:23, December 4, 2016 (UTC)
              • Looks all right to me. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:27, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

  • I think I should point out that the featured article of another duelist Deadeye Duncan doesn't bother to say that that is his alias. More notably, in the infobox his name isn't in quotations. I really think that we should be consistent in this. Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:50, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
    • I've gone ahead and removed the quotations from around Ice's name to keep it in-line with Deadeye Duncan. As far as calling it her alias, I'll leave that up to you to decide how you want to handle it. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:09, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

FN-417

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, October 19, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Pretty sure this is the first person Rey directly kills.

(2 ACs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote The first step on the road to the dark side. Imperators II(Talk) 22:19, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Nice work. -- Dr. Porter Resistance starbird (Talk|Contribs) 23:22, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Cwedin(talk) 23:26, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 21:19, October 23, 2016 (UTC)
  5. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 19:17, October 27, 2016 (EET)
  6. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:58, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Dr. Porter
  • In the biography section, "human" should be referenced.
  • Some context on the First Order please.
  • "As the attack on the castle began FN-417 began moving into the surrounding forest..." a comma should come after the first "began". Also, I would suggest replacing the second "began" with something else so the sentence reads better.
  • "...attempted to shot the stormtrooper,..." oノ( ゜-゜ノ) you dropped this :)
  • In the biography, a reference to TFA should come before "NN-14".
  • The equipment section needs a reference to TFA. -- Dr. Porter Resistance starbird (Talk|Contribs) 07:49, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review! Should all be sorted now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:41, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
      • Dr. Porter, feel free to add missing letters and commas yourself. :) Imperators II(Talk) 22:08, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • The fact that FN-417 received orders through radio (if it was indeed radio) should probably be mentioned in the article body, as well. Imperators II(Talk) 22:08, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Mul Sanaka

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:44, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Damn, somehow I completely missed that IFYLOFD had replied to the objection. Outstanding objections addressed in the comments.

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Support

  1. ACvote Let's try this again, shall we? Imperators II(Talk) 21:56, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 20:11, November 3, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Comments

  • In response to IFYLOFD's objection, there's no indication that he necessarily even knows about the bounty, his comments on profit are solely related to the band playing at the club. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:44, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure if Xd's objection is still outstanding as there is now an archive link in the reference thanks to Imperators. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:44, October 22, 2016 (UTC)


Guts and Glory: A Chronicle of The Amazing Story of The Twisted Rancor Trio

  • Nominated by: Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:56, October 22, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: An article that exceeded the word limit for a comprehensive article nomination. "This article was nominated before. I tried to address the points raised in the previous nomination. I am unsure of the proper layout for articles concerning books. Also, I was very skeptical of referring to this as a "book" in the first place, as the only known version we find is a draft that is only a several paragraphs long. I mentioned this in the article's talk page. I suppose the author intended it to be a book eventually."

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Object

Exiled Jedi
  • The introduction to this article should be expanded.
    • I've expanded it as asked. I'm still not accustomed to how much detail an introduction should incorporate. Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:26, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • There is some context about the band in the Slugthrowers article that should be mentioned in this article.
    • I cannot find any mention of this band in the slugthrowers article. :-/ Sol PacificusFirestorm 20:49, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
    • Oooh my bad. I did not realize you meant the reference article at StarWars.com. I used that source to describe the band as a jatz band, but I'm not sure if more should be mentioned. Refer below, this article pertains to the book, not the band itself, which is something I'm being careful about. Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:26, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • The 3956 BBY date cannot be sourced directly to the game.
    • The game and Revan's events on Taris are set in 3956 BBY is it not? I did not write that the book was written or authored or published in 3956 BBY, but only that it was a "work in progress in 3956 BBY" meaning that at some point during that year, the book was not yet completed. We don't know when he began the book or when he finished it, but we know that Revan found it as a work in progress in 3956 BBY. Sol PacificusFirestorm 20:22, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • Its mention in the Slughthrowers article should be mentioned in the BTS.
    • I can find no mention of it in the slugthrowers article, and there is no relevance of the band or the book to slugthrowers in the game.Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:26, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
    • Nevermind, I missed that you were referring to the reference article on StarWars.com. I have done as requested, but double-check that I did the citation correctly, as I have trouble with the proper format of citations that use templates.Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:26, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • Please include an image of the datapad from the game as it is an image of the work.
    • I will need help with this as I have no experience with retrieving images. I assumed that the process involved screen-shooting, pasting onto a document, then using some image editor to convert it to some means by which it can be uploaded. However, for whatever reason, any attempts to take a screenshot in the game results in a black-screen image. I did not formerly have this trouble with the game on this PC years ago. I'm actually not entirely sure we should include the image of the datapad in the first place. It shares the same image of datapad as many other datapads in the game. Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:26, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • Please provide a quote for the contents section.
    • Done, but I'm not sure my choice of quote is the best one.
  1. "The origins of what would eventually become the most famous band in the galaxy are surprisingly humble. The brains behind the group, manager Gilthos Uksaris, founded the Trio to earn a date with a young singer named Elinda." (introduction)
  2. "Davik asked Gilthos to bring his group in for a command performance. Gilthos agreed, realizing this could be the band's big break. Unfortunately, Elinda had heard certain unsubstantiated rumors about Davik Kang and his connections to the Exchange. Fearing for her life, she refused to go to his estate to perform." (6th line)
  3. "Many felt that without Elinda's singing the band would crumble. But Gilthos came up with a brilliant plan to save the group by hiring Elinda's sister, Ashana, as the new lead singer on the eve of their scheduled appearance at Davik's estate." (7th line)
  4. "Gilthos knew he was taking a risk. If Ashana couldn't perform at Elinda's level, Davik's infamous temper could have dire consequences for the entire band. However, if Ashana could match her sister's performance then Davik was likely to sign the band to a big time touring contract." (8th line)
  5. "It was a risk, but The Twisted Rancor Trio was founded on "Guts and Glory". (9th and last line)
I personally thought the last line was perfect as the introduction quote in the article. I preferred the 8th line for the Content section's quote, but I'm afraid that it may be weird given that it leads directly to the quote we have in the introduction section. I currently am using the 7th line. I considered using the first line of "the origins of what would [...]" but thought that might be too tame. Which line do you think is best? Sol PacificusFirestorm 21:08, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • Looking at the text from the in-game item, it looks like there is more detail that should be added to the article.
    • I intentionally minimized details from the text from the in-game item because this article deals with the book itself not the Twisted Rancor Trio or its members. The book provides a summary of the history of the band, the article explains the book and therefore explains the summary of the history of the band, not the history of the band per se. In contrast, I explained the narrative of the band and its members in as much detail as I could in their respective articles (save the band itself which I didn't work on). I tried to provide as much detail as I could in accordance with this policy of explaining the book's contents, not paraphrasing what the book narrates. Sol PacificusFirestorm 20:49, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
    • In other words, I am being very careful about making sure the content of this article has the book as the topic, not the band itself. Sol PacificusFirestorm 22:26, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
    • I actually wanted to add that we possibly could go for a "Plot summary" section instead. Since it is an in-universe article, we could write it like how Wikipedia often has a plot summary or synopsis section for books and movies. Maybe this is the better approach. My main reasoning why I did not go this route is because the text is actually quite brief, and I am fairly certain that applying as much detail as possible, the "Plot summary" would actually be longer than the original text itself, which I found awkward as it's meant to be a "summary". xD Sol PacificusFirestorm 01:29, November 17, 2016 (UTC)
  • Have you checked Knights of the Old Republic: Prima's Official Strategy Guide for any mention of the book?
    • I just checked. I can find no mention of it, even in the items section. The strategy guide is for the Xbox version, and I'm not sure one for the PC was ever made. It's entirely possible this little mini-quest was never part of the Xbox version of the game, which is outdated compared to the PC version. Sol PacificusFirestorm 20:49, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • I will look over the article again after you finish with these objections.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 15:28, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

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Skull Squadron

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 03:14, October 26, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:03, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Awesome stuff --Lewisr (talk) 02:50, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  3. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 02:53, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 17:14, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

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Imperators II
  • The chronology note has to be reworded, since only a part of the events described in the article, not all of them, take place in the third year BBY. Imperators II(Talk) 08:11, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

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Kaplan (colonel)

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:02, November 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: To be honest I'm pretty certain this guy died, but with Star Wars you can never be sure.

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  1. ACvote Nah, let him come back as a cyborg arch-nemesis in Episode VIII. Imperators II(Talk) 20:43, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 03:06, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

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Imperators II
  • Please pay attention to details. The BTS quote is missing some punctuation.
    • Ah good catch, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:16, November 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • Why is the name of Bay 2 inconsistent between the lead quote and the article's body? Imperators II(Talk) 12:53, November 5, 2016 (UTC)
    • Ah I was getting confused between the formatting from different sources. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:16, November 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • I created some nice redlinks for you to fill.
    • I'm fairly certain we've always treated ship's hangars on anything smaller than a space station as something that is just included in the ship's article, but I've gone ahead and made both anyway since there isn't any clear rule. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
      • Can you give me any examples where such uniquely-named locations don't have their own articles? I easily found some examples to the contrary so it's definitely not "always": Bay Alpha Two, Bay One.
  • Can any of these actually be sourced to the film - Kaplan's rank, Lor San Tekka's name and occupation, Hux's first name?
    • The names can be sourced to the credits except Armitage, I have a feeling the occupation can too but I've referenced the dictionary just to be safe. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
      • Ah, didn't check the credits.
  • Have you given a thought to adding the bit about Kaplan's reaction to the escape attempt from the novelization?
    • His reaction is just to stop and look at the ship before delivering his line. I can include the opinions given as narration as his though I guess? I hadn't thought to since the section doesn't exactly seem to be from his point of view. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
      • You know, I agree with you; it's too ambiguous, better leave it out.
  • It seems to me (and is stated by the intro) that there was an explosion in the control room, not just windows shattering, as is stated in the body.
    • I feel the word blast covered this, but added explosion to be more specific. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • The intro and the body slightly differ in their description of what happens to Thanisson during the explosion. The former states that he is thrown to the floor, while the body mentions him being thrown away from his seat. I think the latter wording is more accurate, since it's hard to track Thanisson after his console blows up. Imperators II(Talk) 19:25, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
SE
  • One small thing, in the body you initially say the TIE was attached to a support cable, but later refer to it as a fuel line. Can you clarify what the proper term would be? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:19, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

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  • Correct me if I'm wrong, but I changed "bay two" to "Bay Two" (since that's how the novelization spells it) and added "and" to Kaplan's line, since it is (however weakly) audible. Imperators II(Talk) 19:25, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
    • I was going off the subtitles, but the novel should be fine since it's more consistent with the formatting elsewhere. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:05, November 16, 2016 (UTC)


B1 grapple droid

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 22:45, November 12, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A CAN that got too long.

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:18, November 13, 2016 (UTC)
  2. --Lewisr (talk) 13:05, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Cevan
  • Couldn't the B1 grapple droid's name be sourced to Galactic Defense as opposed to the launch trailer? Both the game and trailer were released on the same day, and I would imagine the actual game should take precedence. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:56, November 13, 2016 (UTC)
    • The droids weren't actually named in the game, so the trailer's all we have. - Cwedin(talk) 01:06, November 13, 2016 (UTC)
      • Interesting. So they weren't named in the game's enemy database? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:10, November 13, 2016 (UTC)
        • Nope. That's why I initially misinterpreted them as plasma battle droids. - Cwedin(talk) 01:17, November 13, 2016 (UTC)
          • Got it—thanks Cwedin! Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:18, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

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Unidentified six-armed alien (Tatooine)

YOLOSWAG Nivlacanator(talk) 21:47, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

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Imperators II
  • GAN Rule 9: no redlinks. Imperators II(Talk) 14:03, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • According to our policy on disambiguation, naming precedence should be granted to this canon guy, while this six-armed Legends dude should receive a parenthetical descriptor.
  • (not an objection) Please note that use of pronoun "this" is discouraged here in keeping with the past tense requirement.
  • Context for Chalmun's Cantina, Boba Fett and Luke Skywalker in the intro.
  • If the alien's skin color is light brown, that's how it should be stated in the infobox. (I think the skin color's light, though...)
  • Please identify Chalmun's Cantina by name upon its first mention in the body. And while you're at it, see if you can reword that sentence so that the date info ("shortly after the Battle of Yavin") is not sandwiched between pieces of location info.
  • This part is clumsy, please reword: "accosted the cantina's patrons for information regarding a local moisture farmer, Luke Skywalker; though that was precisely why Fett had come to the cantina; he did not yet know Skywalker's identity."
  • Don't mix up your chronology—the bit about Wuher happened after Fett's fight with the alien started.
  • Also reword this so that the word "boy" is only used when necessary: "As he harassed an Ithorian for information about the boy, the alien challenged Fett, calling him a boy."
  • (not an objection) I've removed the part about Fett releasing the alien since it's not shown in the comic.
    • Man, I wrote this so long ago in the middle of the night... Nivlacanator(talk) 21:02, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Give a more detailed description of the alien. Eye color and hair information is infobox-exclusive. Describe the pointed ears, the three nostrils, the number of digits, body hair, clothing.
    • Added. Nivlacanator(talk) 22:20, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
      • Almost none of the things I've mentioned have been added. And that kind of info surely belongs in the P&T section, not the Bio, wouldn't you agree?
  • The comic's release date can't be sourced to the comic itself. Imperators II(Talk) 20:27, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
    • That seems obvious in retrospect. Nivlacanator(talk) 21:02, November 16, 2016 (UTC)
      • First of all, the link you've provided doesn't work. You should have checked this when you added it, but it seems to be a case of incorrectly added link to the Marvel template. Please check the template itself and the usage example I've provided below to see how you should add a link to the template.
      • Secondly, per our sourcing policy you should provide an archival link in the Marvel template. Here's an example where this is implemented in a similar context. Imperators II(Talk) 22:03, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

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Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote Outstanding objections after two weeks. Imperators II(Talk) 22:04, December 1, 2016 (UTC)


Attack on Korriban

  • Nominated by: --Jace Onasi (talk) 09:30, November 29, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:My first nomination, so I humbly beg for your mercy.

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  • I suppose it isn't stated anywhere in the game if the Invasion of Ziost occurred before or during the Attack on Korriban? There is a pretty small time frame between Ziost and chapter I of KOTFE, so it is possible that the two were concurrent.--Jace Onasi (talk) 09:30, November 29, 2016 (UTC)


Z9

  • Nominated by: Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:11, November 30, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Decided to knock this guy out before I really get cracking on Gubacher.

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  1. Shayn Mikel (talk) 04:10, November 30, 2016 (UTC) The article is about as comprehensive as it gets for a single-episode background character.
  2. Great work! Nivlacanator(talk) 05:41, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

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Nivlacanator
  • I would identify D-Suad. Something like this: "efforts of D-Squad, a Republic squad of spy droids". Nivlacanator(talk) 05:52, November 30, 2016 (UTC)
  • At the word "boarded", I would suggest making it a link to "Escape from Abafar."
  • A word better than pelted might be better—battered, bombarded.
  • Z9 should also be affiliated with the Republic Military, so that should be added to the infobox, etc.
    • Done. In case anyone should ask, the "military" in "Republic military" is lowercase because, despite the page it links to being uppercase, whoever made that page was in error and it has yet to be uppercase in canon. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 13:40, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

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Imperial Peace-Keeping Certificate

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 05:02, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The long-awaited round two; original nomination can be found here.

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:51, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

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Cevan
  • It may not be a bad idea to mention in the behind the scenes section that the certificate was first pictured in canon in Star Wars Rebels: Rebel Journal by Ezra Bridger. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 15:57, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

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Cradossk

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 10:06, December 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Res Luk Ra'auf, indeed.

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  1. Would be nice if the image of Bossk didn't displace the personality and traits section, but alas. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:14, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

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