This article seems like it could use a copy-edit to check for linking and context, as well as infobox-exclusive information. 1358(Talk) 22:28, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Gossam: Needs an update for Star Wars: Darth Plagueis. I feel like the "Sources" section could use some beefing up, too, with Episode II and III material. Granted, most are probably (Picture only) sources that won't really add anything to the article, but still.
Gank: There is another article for these guys at Gank Killer, which has two items in the "Sources" section that Gank does not. They should be checked for new info and added. The correct name of the article should also be 100% determined, and the loser article turned into a redirect. Menkooroo 00:08, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
Oric Harfard - Recently had a somewhat large piece of text added to it by an anon. I'm not sure if it should just be reverted as unnecessary, or if it's an update from Apoclypse, or what. I don't have Apocalypse yet, so I can't check on that account. I suppose the original nominator or someone else who's more familiar with FOTJ would know better.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 01:46, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Everything in that edit is from Outcast, specifically pages 149 and 271 of the hardcover. —MJ—Jedi Council ChambersThursday, March 15, 2012, 02:48 UTC
It was excessively pbp and irrelevant to the P&T, so I removed it. Jonjedigrandmaster(Talk) 04:26, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Darth Drear - Cleanup tag. Also, there was recently some anon editing on it that removed info from the article. Might be worth checking into further to see if it was correct or not.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 15:23, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Vaala Razelle - Apocalypse update needed, though I can't remember if we give one-month grace periods here too (Apocalypse only came out on the 13th). CC7567(talk) 18:24, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
I would suggest being more specific in regards to what "cleanup" means if you want us to take something like this seriously. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:51, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
General copy-edit and lack of context in various places. Hanzo Hasashi 20:06, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
As a specific example, nowhere is the Clone Wars even mentioned explicitly in Mapper's body. The same thing I said above applies to every other one listed. Hanzo Hasashi 20:09, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
Examples like this are what we need, since we rarely have time to read through an entire article before meeting time. Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:10, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
Keep: Horak-mul, Kao Cen Darach, Duel on Coruscant (Inter–Sith Wars Period), Zellos, Battle of Bothawui (First; Great Galactic War), Invasion of the Minos Cluster
Probe: All currently listed, including perhaps Vaala Razelle
Have fun, guys. CC7567(talk) 18:24, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
Jangeth
Keep: Like Grunny and CC. Horak-mul, Kao Cen Darach, Duel on Coruscant (Inter–Sith Wars Period), Zellos, Battle of Bothawui (First; Great Galactic War), Invasion of the Minos Cluster