You should remove the Amazon links, and just source the years of release to the product ref itself.
I talked it over with, I want to say Ayrehead, and they said full release dates are fine when multiple sources that were released within the same year are being mentioned in the Bts. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 09:42, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
Do we want to say he had taken up residence in the tower by 5 BBY, or that it had been abandoned by then? I'll put what you intitially requested in for now. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:51, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
Yeah, saying both is best, although you now need to remove the Ezra link in the quote.
You should remove the full dates in the BTS and just have the year soured the the product itself.—Tommy-Macaroni(TAKE A SEAT) 19:45, March 16, 2018 (UTC)
I think you need to establish the timeline for LothalNet's fall into disuse directly instead of Ezra's residence. "until it was supplanted by a more advanced Imperial network by the year 5 BBY." You also might want to split up the first sentence after this as it's getting rather long.1358(Talk) 12:29, April 2, 2018 (UTC)