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Battle droid dispenser

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:54, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Previous CAN/GAN
  • Word count at nomination time: 1028 words (93 introduction, 785 body, 150 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1237 words (146 introduction, 941 body, 150 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG, WP:CIS

(0 Inqs/1 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 3 Inq vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)

Support

  1. As always, just check my edit :) Great work! Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 12:14, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

Manoof
  • Great job so far! Ok so the ensuing blaster fire bit, you need to establish what is happening here and that they engaged whatever enemy. The but you added is great! Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 03:02, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Awesome just look over my edits and make sure you're happy :) Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 09:39, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Looks like you missed this objection "BTS notes that it doesn't deploy more than 3 droids at a time, which is redundant to the description part of the body" Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 03:02, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed objections. Thanks for all the support! AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 03:21, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Did I imagine but wasn't there a bit in the BTS noting the dispensers would spawn infinite droids until destroyed? I think its relevant and should be noted Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 09:39, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
    • I added it back. I had previously removed it due to confusion with one of your objections. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 13:20, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Can we add to the intro a brief mention of their use in the takeover of the Prosecutor and Kashyyyk, and try rewording some of the sentences as all but one start with "The", which makes it feel almost like a list of facts. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:05, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Just double checking the game does use "him" when referring to Boss, confirming the pronoun use is correct. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:05, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Can you clarify if the dispenser boss shot and dropped gets destroyed or damaged (assuming it doesn't dispense droids) Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:05, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Hangar D, from memory this was a mix of dispensers, can you clarify this and any other bits where other dispensers where used in conjunction with the battle droid dispensers Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:05, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Can you please clarify that they saved the prosecutor by calling reinforcements that destroyed the attacking ship? Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:05, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Kashyyyk you mention the mission being completed but don't really provide context on what the mission was. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 13:05, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed. People use he/him pronouns when referring to Boss in the game. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • Could you split the intro into two paragraphs?
  • Barring the date, the 'Chaykin Cluster' paragraph is unsourced Lewisr (talk) 06:57, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
  • I noticed there were multiple instances of slavers being used, per the new standard being implemented you'll need to update the wording of these to enslavers Lewisr (talk) 15:01, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Per the top quote, it seems that sometimes, they're simply called "droid dispensers." It'd make sense then if it was noted as a shortened version of the name, ie. (also known simply as droid dispensers…)
  • I think the sentence making up the second paragraph of the intro can be split up a bit. With a bit more breathing room that that would provide, we can also see one or two BBY dates added to the intro.
  • That top paragraph of the History should be under a subsection, so that every part of the article is under some sort of section.
  • Seems like the BtS is large enough to use an image down there, even if that's just of the game cover.spookywillowwtalk 01:32, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
Dani is working towards that Dathomirian nom
  • Shouldn't the clone not recongizing the dispenser (lead quote) be prosified? NBDani Team Fireball(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:15, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • Is it possible to get a better (more centered, no logo in the bottom right) screenshot for the infobox? Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 10:59, 11 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Hamato Xiono

(3 Inqs/1 Users/4 Total)

(Votes required: Additional 3 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)

Support

  1. Inqvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 01:25, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Good stuff Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:33, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:15, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
  4. Bonzane10 Sabine Starbird (holonet) 13:56, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Bramato Xiono
  • Context needer for D'Qar.
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:37, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Reading through Son in the Resistance, the chronology of events is a bit all over the place here. I think you should move the context of Kaz's mix up to before you introduce him contacting his father, and also move the change of mind part to after Hamato's berating. This is just to order all the events, plenty of precedents for this as well. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:52, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
    • I'm having difficulty understanding what you mean here, and I'm kind of failing to see an issue with how things are organized on the article now. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:37, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
      • After re-reading it, I see what you meant and I've revised the section accordingly. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:14, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
Dani
  • The trailer for Season 2 is missing 1stp, which the bts will need to address too. Unsure if it needs the Hologram only bit? NBDani Team Fireball(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 13:44, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 16:53, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • He's actually First ID'd in Part 1 of "The Recruit," in the credits. NBDani Team Fireball(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 21:50, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Review Note: I've added some sources. If you need help accessing these sources please don't hesitate to reach out via Discord. I also plan to review the French novels as I'm sure two of them will feature him. NBDani Team Fireball(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 14:30, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
  • We avoid mentioning channel names for premieres (Disney Channel) outside of D+ as current precedent. NBDani (talk) 12:16, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Removed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:27, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • "Tzi Ma provided the voice for the politician." Provided you immediately discuss Live Action protrayal after this, I think it could use some specifying language. NBDani (talk) 12:16, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Adjusted. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:27, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Can you discuss the concept art similar to how Unidentified casino gambler does it? (Note: gambler only links to the art because it won't fit in the BTS.) NBDani (talk) 12:16, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:27, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • You need to specific which gallery image you're referencing with {{C|Slide X}} NBDani (talk) 12:16, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:27, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Not certain how others feels, but I'd feel better sourcing his traits of human, male, and TNR affialiations to his databank. NBDani Team Fireball(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 00:56, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Switched. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:46, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • The oldversion of the databank calls Hamato an "elite politican." Do you know if any other source mentions that and is that reflected in the article? NBDani Team Fireball(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 00:59, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Added oldversion citation. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:46, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Editor
  • His mention in Station Theta Black about how even data about FO weapons would not convince him they are a threat, according to his son. Does not need to go under biography, but should be added to personality and traits. Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:48, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 03:04, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
  • His appearance in Ahsoka has given us new P&T info, including Hera's speculation he was willing to sit the war out and see who came out on top Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:34, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:49, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Avoid the word "This" in article bodies since it is present tense. Replace with "that," "it," or anything that fits Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:36, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:07, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • Hamato being from Hosnian Prime is infobox exclusive, I think it's also worth noting in the intro
    • Did this a bit ago, not sure if your objection was made before then or not but it's there now irregardless. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:01, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Hosnian Prime in the intro
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:01, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Can we be sure Hosnian Prime was the capital of the New Republic at the time of Kaz being born and raised there? Lewisr (talk) 02:52, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Removed mention of it being the capital from that excerpt, and moved mention of this to the section involving its destruction. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:01, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Having black hair is currently infobox exclusive
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:07, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
  • I think the intro could use a bit of Ahsoka info and some dating for that and for the Hosnian Cataclysm
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:54, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
  • The 2nd paragraph in "Father to a pilot" could be restructured a little I think to mention that Hamato expected Kaz to follow in his footsteps, and include what that refers to, but then Kaz decided to do his own things (the stuff you mention) Lewisr (talk) 15:50, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • I kept it in the same place it was in the second paragraph, though I rephrased it to state that Kaz's aspirations were in spite of Hamato's own intentions for Kaz, and I specified what said intentions were. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:53, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Hamato clearly display some anti-droid sentiment in Part Seven, this should be included in his personality and traits Lewisr (talk) 14:45, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:57, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
  • The Cold War and Starkiller Base could use some context
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:21, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Corellia being a planet isn't citable to Part Three
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:21, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Hamato's first pronouns usage in the body needs to be cited to a source that does use them, as Part Three doesn't
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:21, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Since Kaz was born after the events of Ahsoka, it would be better to move mention of being Kaz's father to after the Ahsoka stuff in the intro
    • Moved. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:21, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Kaz serving in the New Republic Starfighter Corps is only mentioned in the intro Lewisr (talk) 16:09, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:21, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Picking up on Fred's point about the images, I spoke with another Inq about it also, and we do think that you should enlargen the images as they are a bit too small Lewisr (talk) 20:18, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Yeah I ended up going back and doing it earlier today anyway - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:14, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
  • The information about Hamato not serving on either side of the GCW should be mentioned before his service in the New Republic Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Adjusted. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:49, 24 November 2023 (UTC)
      • I still think it needs a little more, since it should be in chronological order of happening. I would just mention that he lived during the GCW (with context for who fought in the war) and that he did not serve on either side. Then say by around 9 ABY he had become a senator etc Lewisr (talk) 03:50, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
        • Adjusted further. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:48, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • It looks like some of the databank references will need changing to the older version, example: the BTS one confirming that the Xiono in Ahsoka is indeed Hamato Lewisr (talk) 05:04, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Appears to have just been that one after I went through everything sourced to it, though I did move some more refs around since there were some that didn't match up. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:14, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Great thanks, also did a little bit myself since some of the info is still there in the present entry Lewisr (talk) 05:23, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • I've come across a podcast interview with Nelson Lee that will need to be investigated in the event of relevant information here Lewisr (talk) 05:30, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Just want to mention that I have noticed this objection and have been chipping away at it for a bit; it is taking a bit of time due to my busy schedule IRL and the podcast length. I will provide another comment on this page once I have fully addressed this objection. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 08:30, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Fully addressed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:13, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Missing initial bio subsection. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:43, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:02, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't love the opening line - we're being introduced to this subject, so I would recommend not using definition by negation, ie defining something by what it's not.
    • Reworded. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:22, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
  • The way the bts is worded implies that Xiono's picture in the trailer was created for the trailer itself - you should explain that it was previewing an episode for that season for which the clip of Xiono was created. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:42, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:22, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • So excited to be finally reviewing this now that Ahsoka S1 is over. First item: combining the first two sentences of the intro would probably make it flow a little better. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 18:06, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Done. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:42, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
  • "Fortunately for him, Xiono and the rest of his family had survived the cataclysm by being off-world." This information is essentially repeated in the following paragraph, and so this sentence, which also feels a little POV due to "fortunately," can probably just be removed. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 21:47, 5 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Removed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:42, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
  • The image in P&T is significantly larger than the rest. I feel like the rest could stand to be enlarged to match it. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 04:52, 7 October 2023 (UTC)
    • I went ahead and cropped and re-sized that image to fit with the rest rather than changing the rest of the images to fit with it; the version that was there was not the version (or size) I added initially. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:27, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
      • It's still noticeably larger than the others due to it's taller dimension, and I still feel the others could stand to be a little larger, but I won't hold up the nomination over it. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 19:38, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The intro is only at 175 words for a 2000 word body, could be expanded a bit to elaborate on the Ahsoka content
    • Expanded it a bit, though admittedly not by much primarily as expanding it further would make the intro needlessly detailed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:56, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
  • For the first body paragraph it might be helpful to specify that the Alliance won the war and transitioned into the New Republic
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:15, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Notes and references could use a scrollbox Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:44, 3 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Page has been updated to reflect new DB info; no oldversion refs necessary as the same info that was cited to the DB before is still present, none of the info removed from the DB was cited to it here. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 16:34, 24 November 2023 (UTC)


Taron Malicos

  • Nominated by: TomotronRevanchist SithStar Forge 06:25, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First FAN!
  • Word count at nomination time: 3369 words (370 introduction, 2321 body, 678 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(0 Inqs/1 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 3 Inq vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)

Support

  1. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 11:46, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

AC
  • Congratulations on this ambitious nom!
  • You should provide context on Order 66 and should also state that the Clone Wars was between the Galactic Republic and Confederacy. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 12:14, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
    • For Order 66, you should state that it was an order in the behavioral modification chips in the brains of the Republic's clone troopers. Currently in the article, there is no connection to Order 66 and the clone troopers attacking him. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 20:42, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
      • Done.
        • I tweaked your context which you can see in the cop-edit below.
  • You’re also going to need context for Nightsisters and Nightbrothers.
  • If I’m not mistaken, you can’t source Dathomir being located in the Outer Rim to the game. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 12:17, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Can you state the model of his ship in the "Jedi General and Order 66" section?
    • It's not specified within the game or elsewhere.
  • You should read over your article for missing links.
    • Fixed?
      • I've only checked over a little bit that you can see in my copy-edit below, but there's still several.
  • The game's databank implies Malicos crashed during Order 66, so you can adjust your article as such. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 20:42, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Please check my copy edit to make sure its ok. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 15:17, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Your copyedit is fine but I've made small adjustments.
  • Context for Tomb of Kujet.
    • Done.
  • Kestis doesn't enter the tomb until his second visit, and the article should thus be tweaked to represent this. His first visit is when the planet is first unlocked, and the second is when the player is forced to return. After you talk about the wanderer's conversation with Kestis, you should explain that Cal left the planet, and then detail that he entered the ruins of the Tomb of Kujet on his return. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 00:46, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Is that better?
  • I don't think the image of Malicos' lightsabers are very fighting for the "Powers and abilities" section. Perhaps you could use this image instead, and maybe move the lightsabers if you have the space? AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 02:41, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
Fan
  • Early in the bio section, Gender is pipelinked through the pronoun 'he'. Recent consensus is that this should no longer be done.
  • Context for Darth Sidious.
  • "The Nightbrothers captured the stranded Malicos, who was brought to their village" If the Nightbrothers were the ones who brought him to their village, it can just say so instead of using the passive voice to say that he "was brought to" it. Fan26 (Talk) 01:51, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • A lot of the "Stranded on Dathomir" subsection is written more about Viscus than it is Malicos. Fan26 (Talk) 03:13, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Better? —TomotronRevanchist SithStar Forge 04:16, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
      • Still seeing some of this. Fan26 (Talk)
        • Should be fixed now.
          • Having spoken with someone more familiar with Fallen Order than I, it seems there's still a lot that's more about Viscus' feelings on the situation than directly relevant to Malicos himself. Fan26 (Talk) 17:58, 27 May 2023 (UTC)
            • I've removed those lines focusing on Viscus, is that better?
  • "through his influence and power alone." this should be reworded to be more encyclopedic.
  • "The wanderer" subsection is too much a play-by-play of the convo between him and Cal in short sentences. I think you can merge some of these sentences to make it flow better. Fan26 (Talk) 22:54, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Both above done. —TomotronRevanchist SithStar Forge 02:32, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
      • The issue raised in the latter objection still needs to be worked on. Fan26 (Talk) 17:58, 27 May 2023 (UTC)
        • Better? —TomotronSith Quad-SunSith Council 00:28, 28 May 2023 (UTC)
          • Not really, now it's just very confusing. For example, "Malicos, pretending, stated that he liked to travel, studying extinct cultures and dead philosophies," What is he pretending, exactly? There's still some cleanup to be done here. Fan26 (Talk) 18:40, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
            • Reworded, I think I was extrapolating there anyway. —TomotronSith Quad-SunSith Council 04:13, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
  • The image of Merrin defeating him should be enlarged just a bit Fan26 (Talk) 20:48, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
  • From the intro: "Malicos eventually ran into the surviving..." This should be reworded to be more formal, something like "encountered Cal" or similar.
  • "After killing Viscus, Malicos usurped control over the Nightbrothers—who laid down their weapons and submitted to him in the Halls of the Nydak—and became the new leader of the clan." This can be split up into two sentences. Fan26 (Talk) 18:25, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
Ratts
  • The Gamemechanics template shouldn't be necessary for the pre-Cal sections. Those events canonically happened whether or not he finds out about them. Similarly, the template should cover the second paragraph of "The wanderer meets Cal Kestis" since that dialogue is optional.
    • Changed
  • "Kestis left the planet to continue his journey." Been a while since I've played Fallen Order, but is there any indication in the game that this must happen? Feasible that a player ignores the planet completely until required to go there.
    • Added "eventually"
      • I should clarify, I don't think you should say Cal left the planet at all, aside from the trip to Ilum, unless the Databank in the game mentions him leaving. RattsT (talk) 16:48, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
        • The in-game databank splits Dathomir into two different visits. The first is when you first unlock on Bogano until the Wanderer, and the second is when the game forces you to return. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 17:15, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
          • Thanks for checking that! Since that's the case consider this objection void, Cal canonically travels to Dathomir between Zeffo and Kashyyyk. RattsT (talk) 21:00, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Powers and abilities section could mention that he was able to simultaneously control one saber telekinetically while wielding the other in close combat, as he sometimes does during his boss fight.
    • Inserted
  • Should mention in the BTS the role Malicos plays in the Battle Grid submode.RattsT (talk) 04:48, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
Marvac
  • Please state that Cal Kestis is a fugitive, not just a former padawan.
  • Is it possible if you could shorten this sentence in the Powers and Abilities section, "Malicos could lift multiple boulders simultaneously and fling them at opponents, which he did to Kestis during their duel, and occasionally threw his lightsabers with incredible accuracy."
  • Please make it clear in your bts that the "Battle Grid" sandbox mode was released after the game and also state when it was released.
  • Please rewrite this sentence in your bts as it doesn't seem to make sense, "The developer, "CG_Coffee," had a difficult time defeating Malicos in Fallen Order who then insisted that he would be "really good" for the game." Marvacian Archivist (talk) 16:04, 16 July 2023 (UTC)
    • All done. —TomotronSith Quad-SunSith Council 01:17, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
      • Hi. I am not seeing the last objection really being addressed. What I recommend is break it into two sentences and show how they are related to one another. Maybe say something like, "The developer named "CG_Coffee" had a difficult time defeating Malicos in Fallen Order. Because of this, he insisted he would be "really good" for the game as..." I think providing an explanation why the developer insisted that Malicos should be added helps provide much needed context to tie the subsection "Liam McIntyre interview and Star Wars: Galaxy of Heroes" and I think is necessary overall for the article. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 21:29, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for the Halls of the Nydak please. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 08:13, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Please add a disambiguation template as there appear to be multiple articles that share the word "Taron" such as Taron, Taron Malicos's lightsabers, Tarong, Taronda system, Taronda, Taronda mining settlement and Battle of Taronda.
  • There appears to be a referencing error in the first paragraph of the "Duel with Kestis and entombement" subsection. The "In actuality..." sentence isn't referenced in Fallen Order so please provide an alternate reference. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 08:13, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Above done.
      • Oh sorry I should have been clear regarding the last objection, I meant that the entire sentence "In actuality, the mass slaughter was orchestrated by the Separatist Confederacy and its leader—the Sith Lord Count Dooku—who ordered the Kaleesh cyborg General Grievous to annihilate the Nightsisters." is not referenced in Fallen Order so you are going to need a separate reference.Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:18, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  • In the same subsection mentioned above, I think its important that you add a {Gamemechanics} template before the "During the duel, Malicos lifted Kestis and slammed him onto the ground" and describe in the alternate scenes section the various moves Malicos used to try and kill Kestis. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 08:13, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
    • I don't think this is necessary since the duel is linear; if it had alternate outcomes then sure.
  • This one is an optional objection. Depends on whether you want to add it or not but you could act the fact that Malicos closely resembles Jorus C'baoth in the Star Wars Legends continuity. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 08:13, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
    • If there was a notable connection between C'baoth and Malicos, I would, but sadly there isn't. —TomotronSith Quad-SunSith Council 09:50, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Please check this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g5ildUmMak0 and see whether there is any info about Malicos you did not mention. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 10:51, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • 'Malicos was incredibly powerful with the Force, and highly competent in the use of telekinesis' Are the 'incredibly' and 'highly competent' citable to a source? Because otherwise they border on not being a NPOV Lewisr (talk) 02:39, 18 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Removed "incredibly" and "highly", although, he was competent in telekinesis from a visual POV. —TomotronSith Quad-SunSith Council 06:21, 18 August 2023 (UTC)
      • That I agree with, just the "highly" and "incredibly" are a bit subjective unless stated within a source Lewisr (talk) 15:26, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Have you checked trailers/YouTube videos from EA/StarWars either pre or post release incase Malicos is in any of them? Lewisr (talk) 15:30, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
  • It's noted in a conversation between Cere and Greez that she was familiar with his name and that Malicos 'had a knack for strategy.' I also think it's worth checking out the part where she talks about getting accustomed to fame and glory, as it could be relevant to Malicos. Convo linked here Lewisr (talk) 17:15, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Viscus' pronouns aren't citable to the game Lewisr (talk) 05:05, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

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Operation Ringbreaker

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:28, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This hunking master plan of Chalis's forms a fair portion of Twilight Company's narrative and becomes a pivotal piece in Hazram Namir's character arc; a lot of stuff to summarise in an article.
  • Word count at nomination time: 2833 words (318 introduction, 2503 body, 12 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:MD, WP:NOVELS, WP:SWBF

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Lew
  • I think you should establish from the start in the intro that it was a failed rebel campaign, you don't mention the Alliance until the second paragraph
  • Since the entire camapign was in 3 ABY, do you think it would be moving the begin and end dates into the date field and instead just leaving the battles where it began and ended in those 2 fields?
  • As Nien Nunb is listed as a commander, would it be fair to include the Sullustan resistance somewhere in the infobox? Lewisr (talk) 15:50, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
Thrawn
  • perhaps File:Unlimited-97thlegion.png would be a better fit than the current image in the "a change in goal" subsection? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 02:34, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Agreed, changed.
  • Haven't read the books but my understanding that the picture mentioned above depicts the early part of the Siege of Inyusu Tor, which is part of the Operation. Therefore the Star Wars: Unlimited card should be listed with {{Po}} in sources? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 02:34, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
    • The legion appears in a series of interludes that cover a trooper on Sullust in the runup to and during the Siege of Inyusu Tor. So we can't confirm that this image is specifically from anything. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:34, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I did a text search of BTC, and I didn't find any mention of "Driveyards". Did you mean "Drive Yards"? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 14:35, 7 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Main thing to note is the Overview section, which I believe there might be a few words about. There's nothing in the layout guide covering campaigns to my knowledge and this makes a really good summary of the tactics of the operation in one go. It was inspired by the section's use in Operation Fracture. As for the list thing I made, I did that because it's easier to read than trying to prosify; I for one am not one who likes fishing through paragraphs for info that can just be laid out in a nicer way. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:28, 13 July 2023 (UTC)


Catarine Towani

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:16, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "Oh, we're on a moon where we have no idea if there are murderous creatures nearby. Let's leave our children alone for a bit and hope everything turns out fine and dandy!"
  • Word count at nomination time: 1468 words (178 introduction, 1171 body, 119 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ewoks, WP:WOMEN

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Lew
  • Please combine the date note for the death field
    • Done.
  • If she was identified by her surname in the Encyclopedia then the sources should indicate this Lewisr (talk) 03:43, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  • You have info in the P&T that's somehow not in the infobox, so a reverse infobox exclusive situation:P also is it not possible in any frame to get her eye colour? Lewisr (talk) 05:14, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed, thanks. There wasn't any frame where I felt comfortable making a call on eye color, no. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:26, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
      • Fair enough! Thanks for checking anyway Lewisr (talk) 23:31, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Unless I'm unaware of something, the Star Wars Encyclopedia reference shouldn't be including the page number Lewisr (talk) 23:42, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed, it should probably be in the same camp as CSWE but for now it's not.
      • Understood thanks, we'll see what comes up later I guess Lewisr (talk) 21:42, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
  • In the intro you refer to the Gorax as its but in the body you use his etc, just wondering if one needs to be changed? Lewisr (talk) 23:42, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
CC-8
  • With an 1000 word+ body the intro should be a bit longer than 162 words
    • I've added a little but it's fairly detailed in the body, which is why the ratio might seem a bit off.
  • P&T could use a bit extra, such as her relief when she saw her children again and regret for leaving them behind Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:26, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

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Akwin

  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:46, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My second Twin Stars FAN!
  • Word count at nomination time: 1427 words (107 introduction, 1231 body, 89 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Aliens

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Fan
  • Missing link in the intro
    • Could you elaborate/be more specific? - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:34, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I think explicitly identifying the human population as Lazerians would be beneficial so the phrase "human population" doesn't have to be reused so soon Fan26 (Talk) 06:00, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Adjusted. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:34, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
      • This can be used to refer to them, instead of saying vaguer terms like "the human population" and such. Fan26 (Talk) 20:31, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
        • The use in the intro provides context as would the first instance in the body; other instances are to provide variety to prose so "Lazerians" isn't said every time. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:23, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
          • Variety in the pose shouldn't trump clarity and avoiding awkward phrasing, both of which are lost here by not simply using the term "Lazerians" at least once more. Fan26 (Talk) 21:30, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
            • You're going to need to be more specific about which specific portion of the text you're referring to then, because from where I'm standing it reads clearly to me. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 11:24, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
              • The second-to-last sentence of the intro refers to "the human population of the planet" and "[the Awkin's] land-dwelling neighbors". One of these phrasings can be swapped for just saying "Lazerians". Variety in prose doesn't trump clarity, and leaving this wording as it is harms the encyclopedic tone of the article. We should always present the information succinctly to the readers. Fan26 (Talk) 21:16, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
                • Adjusted that bit. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:17, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
                  • Apologies it took me nearly a month to get back to this; I consider it to have been addressed now. Fan26 (Talk) 04:16, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Their status as sentient, a key piece of information about their species, is currently infobox-exclusive info save for the categories the article is placed in. Fan26 (Talk) 06:04, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added, not sure why I missed that. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:34, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • The mention of the New Republic era is intro-exclusive.
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:03, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Would like to see History receive some subsectioning.
    • Sectioned. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:03, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
  • CSWE reference needs to include page number. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 08:57, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:00, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
  • You have a duplicate reference under Life with Lazerians. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 06:37, 24 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:00, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • I think you can incorporate a couple more details from society/culture in the intro.
  • "had the potential to be a possible cause" - I think there's some redundancy here we can remove.
    • Removed "possible." - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:30, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
  • You should move the context for Lazerian IV to its first mention in the body.
    • Moved. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:30, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
  • "The creatures that comprised an Akwin's diet were raised by the species on underwater 'ranches,'" - I'd recommend rewording this clause to avoid the passive voice.
    • Can you be a bit more specific? Bit confused on what you're referring to here. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:30, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
  • If the New Republic era is citable to the sourcebook, you don't a date note to explain like you currently have – you can just cite "after NR formation" to the sourcebook and the date directly to NEC.
    • Revised. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:30, 13 March 2024 (UTC)
  • The bts doesn't need to mention what other pages do, you can just say "this article..." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 07:58, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Changed to "this wiki" rather than "this article and other pages." Still covers the scope of the subject matter as a whole without being overly specific. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:30, 13 March 2024 (UTC)

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Oshi Karmo

  • Nominated by: spookywillowwtalk 22:45, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Their level of exhaustion is something I both respect and relate to.
  • Word count at nomination time: 1308 words (204 introduction, 1045 body, 59 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:THRWP:PRIDE

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Tierny

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Fred strikes back
  • "Once Ryvora and the colleagues she had been intending to meet—Yeager, Xiono, and CB-23—Tierny confronted her about the betrayal." There should be a verb somewhere in the first clause of this sentence. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 23:46, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

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Ema

  • Nominated by: spookywillowwtalk 15:30, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 2084 words (314 introduction, 1756 body, 14 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:WOMEN

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ThrawnChiss7
  • Because she was 14 years old in 13 BBY, we can't say she was born "in 27 BBY", as she could have been born in 28 BBY, so a "c." phrasing should be used. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 15:10, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Tweaked; though will look further into tying this via Qi'ra to Yavin specifically, since the date of her age mention is within a major film.spookywillowwtalk 18:12, 25 February 2024 (UTC)

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Raith

  • Nominated by: spookywillowwtalk 20:24, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Episode 200 of something failing to be a GAN.
  • Word count at nomination time: 1177 words (178 introduction, 862 body, 137 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:RESISTANCE

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  3. Inqvote Pros: My vote brings this article closer to FA status. Cons: Another WP:Resistance FA means Dani is gonna be happy. Fan26 (Talk) 23:25, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
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Editor
  • I don't see any use of singular they on slide 11 but do on slide 10, did you mean to cite that? Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:54, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
    • My bad forgot to change the slide number when copy pasting; fixed.spookywillowwtalk 01:22, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • "As the interrogation begins, the temple explorer calls to the troopers, holding the artifact. They demand she hand it over, so she obliges." I'm not really sure if it's fair to assume Raith's pronouns based on this. Raith is the one who verbally asks Mika to hand over the relic, but I feel like this may just be a plural they referring to "the troopers" from the previous sentence. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:44, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Curiously, I'd left it out originally under that reasoning, but ended up adding it back in post-nom after talking with Lew and Dani. I do somewhat agree that it's in a place that would make sense for a pronoun to be (it could've been "he demands she hand it over" or "Raith demands..."). I'm not too fussed either way but might be good to get some wider opinions so whichever it is will stick.spookywillowwtalk 15:06, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
      • One point Dani brought up, which I think is fair, is sticking with the current for now, and if another source down the lines uses he/him pronouns (for example) in regards to Raith then being open to switching to using those instead as it is more clear cut. Lewisr (talk) 16:27, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
        • I just think the use of a singular pronoun wouldn't make sense here as the episode gallery mentions the Raiders only as a group without singling out any of them, but sticking with "they" for now sounds good to me. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:32, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
Fan
  • Is it possible to give further context for who "Doza and Fenris's droids" were, like I assume this means their astromechs? Fan26 (Talk) 20:27, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Fair enough, added with their names to USWNE.spookywillowwtalk 22:01, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • I know it's been brought up before but I do have to object to the use of singular they. Pronouns require a noun beforehand to introduce the subject. Raith is never even mentioned in the entire slideshow, but the Raiders as a group are. Even if in the episode only has Raith making the comment, the slideshow is clearly attributing it to the group. I think it's best to remove they/them as their pronouns in the infobox and categories and just them as placeholder pronouns in the prose. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 06:05, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Is what the last was about that. Which I don't currently have much to add to.spookywillowwtalk 14:15, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
DFaceG
  • I think it would be worthwhile to mention Kaz's affiliation with the Resistance; "spy" is good but it should be noted who he was spying for, especially given the subject's already overarching context of the FO-Resistance War. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:37, 22 February 2024 (UTC)

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Immobilizer 418 cruiser

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Lew
  • You should remove the year introduced date in the infobox, it's redundant to list it was introduced by the year it appeared in a story Lewisr (talk) 23:56, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't think you need to note the first interior depiction in the BTS Lewisr (talk) 23:56, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    • It was first depicted/pictured in On the Front lines. I originally put "depicted" but UberSoldat added that the "interior" was depicted and I thought that there was no harm in the "interior" phrasing. If you feel strongly against it, I can remove it. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 23:12, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Sorry I specifically meant the interior part. Unless there's prior precedent I still feel it's unncessary, but will ask Uber also Lewisr (talk) 23:48, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
        • Sorry for the delay, did discuss with Uber and then another Inq, happy to keep Lewisr (talk) 03:50, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Emperor Palpatine is only mentioned in a caption (and unlinked), so you'll either need to mention him in the body or just link it in that caption Lewisr (talk) 23:56, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Per precedent, it should be noted that Musmuris later reflected on the events at Jakku Lewisr (talk) 23:56, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Musmuris' squad is notable for a page Lewisr (talk) 23:48, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
Vitus
  • Information from "Starships of the Empire and the Rebellion" needs to be added in the body and as a source. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:31, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    • I don't have access to Starships, could you please provide the relevant information for me to add? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 23:37, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Thanks to some help with translating I was able to acquire the info from the source. I do not know myself what is the new info but here it is: Lewisr (talk) 23:07, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
        • 'The first cruisers of the Interdictor class, constructed by Sienar Fleet Systems, received the designation Immobilizer 418 and were equipped with four antigravity well projectors that concentrated the energy of an immense generator. Each device is housed inside an inlaid cylinder inside the hull of the ship whose appearance was otherwise the same as a Star Destroyer but a little smaller.'
        • 'The Immobilizer 418 displayed a length of about 600 meters. Its basque chassis is an economical choice, if this term can be applied to the vessels whose cost also remains exorbitant: it was deemed very easy and fast to adapt to new functions but also to repair. As for maintenance, it is handled using common components.' Lewisr (talk) 23:07, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
          • Thanks Lewsr, I've updated the page now. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 22:01, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
            • All good, thanks for doing that! Will leave it to Vitus now Lewisr (talk) 22:07, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • "despite being considered an older model." Specify who "considers" it an older model according to the source. If the source does not use the word specifically, reword the sentence to eliminate it. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 16:21, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Reworded
  • Here's something I'd like to confirm: What name does Rules Companion use? In Legends, the ship had several different names. If I recall correctly, Heir also only identified it as an "Interdictor cruiser" or something similar. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 07:47, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Also confirm first visual depiction, as far as I know it's not either of the two sources specified above. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 07:56, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
      • The Rules Companion just uses the term "Interdictor" (it is the immobilizer because it has the same RPG stats as the Imperial Sourcebook immobilizer), Heir also uses something to that effect. As for visual depiction and "Immoblizer 418" designation, both of those originate with the Imperial Sourcebook, as mentioned in the article. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 01:22, 20 January 2024 (UTC)
Tommy
  • Our page for Interdictor line mentions that the Interdictor-class Star Destroyer was an evolution of the Immobilizer 418 cruiser, sourced to Star Wars: Build the Millennium Falcon 87. Is the info on that page accurate? If so, it should be incorporated into this article. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 11:33, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Under "Skirmish with the Desert Jewel "Its successor model, the Interdictor-class Star Destroyer, was also discontinued in time as well." ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 12:12, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
      • OK I probably could've phrased that better; I more meant whether it would be warranted to reference the Interdictor line on this page, including the infobox. Just depends on how the magazine phrases things in regard to the line itself. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 12:26, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
        • BMF 87 establishes separately that the Interdictor-class Star Destroyer was an evolution of the Immobilizer 418 and that the Interdictor-class Star Destroyer was a part of the Interdictor line. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 12:33, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
          • Hmm ok, that's fine then, thanks. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 14:03, 18 February 2024 (UTC)

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Unidentified Mon Calamari cruiser (Geist)

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:49, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 1622 words (163 introduction, 1192 body, 267 behind the scenes)
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  • The intro could use a date, we know both the Mon Cala and Mako-Ta events take place in 1 ABY per Timelines Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
  • The same date can be applied in the body, Jedha is also in 1 ABY per Timelines, so you can remove the 0 ABY mention Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Please can you remove the gender pipelink onto the he pronoun for Lee-Char Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Can the first usage of pronouns be cited to the sources currently cited? I know for example Hera's cannot be to issue 50 Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Is the 'commander of Sector Command' necessary to be included? Referring to Jan as a general is enough context already Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Shu-Torun and Luke Skywalker needed Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Linked Kingdom of Shu-Torun instead of Shu-Torun --Vitus InfinitusTalk 00:10, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Since you need it for the intro also, I think it's worth readding the planet Shu-Torun (it would also help with the kingdom). Luke's will need citing to a source since the issue doesn't call him a Jedi, plus he becomes a commander after the battle:P Lewisr (talk) 01:04, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Context in the BTS for Leland Chee Lewisr (talk) 15:17, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
  • There's some repitive info in the first and second paragraphs of 'Escape from Death Squadron' Lewisr (talk) 01:04, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Star Wars 48 needs a full release date in the BTS, to Marvel.com is fine Lewisr (talk) 01:04, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
Braha
  • I'm a bit iffy on the reasoning "as being similar in size to both models of MC80s" for approximating the length of the vessel. There's multiple factors in this like perspective etc. and I don't think the reasoning you give really justifies the estimation here unless you want to say "around 1200-1500" and/or "c. 1200-1500". Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:59, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
    • It looks like this was fixed. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 04:19, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Looking at some scales in the issues mentioned on that note, I don't think we should be trying to make deductions on the length with datenotes, there's different perspective levels and some cruisers next to each other aren't even the same length. I feel like it's better to just remove the length stuff. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:50, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
        • The art has been pretty consistent with the sizes save for the panel noted in the Behind the Scenes section and some wonky art in Star Wars 49. Star Wars 50 and onwards is pretty consistent so I disagree in removing the estimated length. If you insist, I'll remove it. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:33, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
          • As much as I'd love for us to be able to have as much info about ship-classes as possible, I think it's safer to wait for more explicit info in this case. Sorry for nuking your big ref-note. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 17:03, 23 December 2023 (UTC)

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  • I will be on vacation and unable to access Wookieepedia from November 11th to November 26th/27th, but will be able address any objections when I return. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 04:34, 9 November 2023 (UTC)


Purrgil Ultra

  • Nominated by: CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 23:21, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 966 words (147 introduction, 733 body, 86 behind the scenes)
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Lew
  • The "Search for Thrawn" section could use some sectioning Lewisr (talk) 04:55, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added two headings, let me know if you're happy with them or would like to see a different approach. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 18:06, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Is it possible to maybe get it 2 paragraphs per heading? It would look a bit better layout wise Lewisr (talk) 05:25, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
        • I get that, I just thought it fits better like that. I moved the second heading to the section above, let me know what you think about that. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 23:58, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
          • Fair, though it looks much better now thanks Lewisr (talk) 02:26, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Sabine Wren, World Between Worlds, and Jedi Archives could use context Lewisr (talk) 04:55, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added, thanks. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 18:06, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Coruscant needs some now Lewisr (talk) 05:25, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
        • How deep can this nesting get? :P CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 23:58, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I think there's a fair bit of underlinking in the Ahsoka events, Sabine Wren, History of the Galaxy, Parts One, Two and Three, Hyperspace transport ring for example Lewisr (talk) 04:55, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
    • No idea how I missed those, thanks. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 01:16, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
OOM
  • My copy-edit here. I think the "class" infobox field should just list purrgil instead, since that is the more immediate and important information for readers regarding this one's biology. Plus, "whale" in the real-world is an informal grouping (I learnt this recently).
    • Thanks. But can we do this if purrgil are never specified as a real "class" in Star Wars? CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 21:39, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Hmm, good point. I suppose it wouldn't be really accurate to call it a "classification." Maybe, since purrgil were a species classified as whales, it would be better to do "Whale (purrgil)" instead? OOM 224 (he/him) 23:13, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
        • Sounds good to me, changed to that. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 15:05, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
  • A bit of a strange request, but do they make noises? If so, then I think it's worth a mention.
  • I don't think you should specify that Vizago was a Devaronian, since that introduces a consistency issue about other individuals' species not being mentioned.
  • The first sentence of the "Skirmish on Seatos" is a bit of a run-on and should be split up/re-arranged, as you see fit.
  • There's a bit too much context in the second paragraph here. All it needs to address is that Sabine was persuaded to hand over the map to Baylan, Baylan destroyed the map, Sabine was taken aboard the Eye of Sion, and that the ring jumped into hyperspace despite the New Republic's efforts. Details about the reflex point and the duel aren't relevant for how the Purrgil Ultra got involved.
    • Shortened, let me know if you're happy with it. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 21:39, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Did Ahsoka travel inside a Purrgil Ultra or a regular purrgil. The article isn't really clear.
  • Looking at similar concept design text on the FA Lotho Minor, I don't think the "a concept designer for Lucasfilm Animation between 2015 and 2018" part is necessary. OOM 224 (he/him) 19:31, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Location context for the Jedi Temple would be good. OOM 224 (he/him) 23:13, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
ThrawnChiss
  • You should specify when the episode guide was released. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 03:31, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Do we have release dates of the episode guides? CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 14:07, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
      • I'm not sure, but you can use archive dates to say it was released "by" a certain time, like Magaloof. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 14:11, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
        • Ok thanks, added the earliest date I could find. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 17:01, 22 February 2024 (UTC)

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Willrow Hood

  • Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 20:32, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Ice Cream Man. The Myth. The Legend. RIP Egbert Sen.
  • Word count at nomination time: 4252 words (314 introduction, 2966 body, 972 behind the scenes)
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  • First order of business: Please include filming information for Hood's scene in the BTS. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 10:52, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
    • I added what year the movie was filmed and where the Cloud City scenes were shot, but this scene is not directly referenced in The Making of Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back which is the only source I'm aware of that would have when it was filmed. I checked thoroughly before nominating and did not want to assume the 'Lando orders evacuation' scene or the 'R2 lays down fog scene' were the same scene or filmed at the same time due to the nature of things being filmed out of order, etc. I can make that assumption if there's some sort of reasoning or precedent or something. Panther436 (talk) 21:12, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
      • I've consulted Ayre on if there is more info available, will let you know when he responds. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 12:44, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Alright, so the "Lando Orders an Evacuation" scene indeed has specific dates available, as well as the stage, so you need to include those in the article. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 07:28, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
        • Like I said in my response, I'm aware of that scene having information. However, it is very likely that it is not the same scene Hood appears in because it's in a different location and there's a bunch of scene numbers skipped and not included in The Making of the Empire Strikes Back. Unless there's some sort of reason, I'm not comfortable assuming the scenes are the same just because they occur after each other in the movie. Panther436 (talk) 02:26, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
          • Struck for now, but I was more talking about the scene where Hood briefly runs past Lando and the others. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 09:50, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
            • That's what I was talking about too. Hood's running scene is the one without info Panther436 (talk) 18:37, 20 December 2023 (UTC)

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Insurrection on Culroon III

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Mindoku

  • Nominated by: DarthSkyll (talk) 20:40, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 1131 words (161 introduction, 930 body, 40 behind the scenes)
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  • (Review note) Welcome to the FAN! Glad to see you here. Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The intro could use a bit of expansion Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Jedha as his homeworld is currently only mentioned in the infobox Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
  • There's a few duplicate links that need to be removed Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Per the layout guide, the P&T section should come before the powers & abilities ones Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the information, I expanded the intro, moved the P&T section, removed a few links (I hope I didn't miss one) and I added that Mindoku was living on Jedha to the intro and the body. DarthSkyll (talk) 23:42, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
      • The mention of him living on Jedha should be in the biography. I think the intro is still a bit short and could do with further expanding, summarising his role in the story Lewisr (talk) 23:38, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
        • I added that he lived on Jedha to the biography and expanded the intro. DarthSkyll (talk) 15:23, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
          • I still think it needs further, probably another paragraph at least Lewisr (talk) 04:09, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
            • I expanded the intro and split it in two paragraphs. DarthSkyll (talk) 12:01, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Jedha needs context in the intro Lewisr (talk) 23:38, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
Panther
  • (Reviewing note) Careful about contractions, we do not use them for formal writing
  • Intro could use more context for the Brotherhood of the Ninth Door.
  • Each section of the history only has one paragraph but the paragraphs of the second two sections are very large. Should probably split the paragraphs in some way and maybe adjust the sectioning to spread the information more evenly.
  • If you keep it in three sections, it could probably use another image, perhaps one of Kradon.
  • I think you can get a better/more specific date note since the short story seems to be set during the attack on the peace summit, current one only says "around 382 BBY." With this, you can probably combine the peace summit note into the date one Panther436 (talk) 02:16, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I will be more careful not to use contractions in future edits.
    • I expanded the intro.
    • I split the two sections into two paragraphs and added an image of Kradon.
    • I combined the two date notes. DarthSkyll (talk) 10:21, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
  • (Reviewing note) Just a heads-up because I saw it a few times, when referring to the Force, the 'F' should always be capitalized even when you're using hyphenated words like Force-sensitive.
  • The second sentence of the Powers and abilities section seems redundant to the first, section should be reworked Panther436 (talk) 22:28, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
    • I reworded the sentence in the Powers and abilities section. DarthSkyll (talk) 22:35, 1 February 2024 (UTC)

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Petyr

  • Nominated by: OOM 224 (he/him) 10:20, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Petyr the Great brings you spoilers for Dark Droids! A neat little (~1300 words) article that outlines the saga of the Scourge. Also, I love mouse droids!
  • Word count at nomination time: 1335 words (178 introduction, 1039 body, 118 behind the scenes)
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Editor
  • We should not put "possession" as a death equivalent in the infobox. In addition to it not killing you, it would imply like C-3PO, Lobot and Magna Tolvan would be listed as dead via possession when that is not the case.
  • You should note that, with the Scourge's destruction, all infected droids were freed. Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:26, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Ooh, good points. Both done. OOM 224 (he/him) 08:58, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Unless I'm missing it, not seeing R2-D2's pronouns in DD issue 5 (though they are sourceable to issue 2). But in case I did miss it, didn't want to introduce a ref so figured I'd leave it as a point here.spookywillowwtalk 02:15, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Thanks, yeah issue 5 doesn't seem to give Artoo's pronouns, but the sentence was a bit wordy anyway so I've shortened it and removed the need to use pronouns. OOM 224 (he/him) 13:22, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • The 3rd issue doesn't identify Mustafar as a planet Lewisr (talk) 00:58, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The language for mouse droids beeps is Cruly-3 which can be noted with the name cited to the by the numbers video like Ketwol Lewisr (talk) 00:58, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Oooh, didn't know that. Added! OOM 224 (he/him) 16:29, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Thanks! Lewisr (talk) 19:09, 29 January 2024 (UTC)

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  • You're all going to hate me, but I have to ask it. Where was it confirmed that Petyr is the mouse droid seen in issue three? Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:24, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
    • How did i never notice the little mark and cracks on his body before Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:54, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Heh, now that you mention it, I've had the article detail the dents and cracks on his body as well. OOM 224 (he/him) 09:03, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
        • Maybe it doesn't matter, but you could also mention the little gray mark on one of his triangle indents, as seen in infobox image Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:29, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
          • Ooh yeah. That mark is consistent across the comics too. OOM 224 (he/him) 11:08, 1 January 2024 (UTC)


Ailee

  • Nominated by: spookywillowwtalk 01:17, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 1116 words (161 introduction, 878 body, 77 behind the scenes)
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  • Uses both pronoun sets since there hasn't been a CT disallowing such so it's allowed; and both sets were acknowledged by author. Worked on wording collision as much as possible so the cases in which each are used should be pretty clear what's referring to who. But generally, a good trial run since there's droids such as 5A-G3 based on irl people using several pronoun sets, so this's a case study in that it can work in a Wook article, to then honor/reflect what the namesakes' of characters prefer to use.spookywillowwtalk 01:17, 5 January 2024 (UTC)


Nenavakasa Nalor

  • Nominated by: OOM 224 (he/him) 11:49, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first Resistance nom, from my favourite episode of the series. Massive thanks to Dani for their help and encouragement along the way and Fred for providing the images!
  • Word count at nomination time: 4068 words (197 introduction, 3591 body, 280 behind the scenes)
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spookly
  • I think, especially given the amount of focus there is on her being a sharp engineer, there should be enough content for a skills section.
  • The episode guide cite should be citing the specific slides of story gallery/concept art or whatnot such as done here rather than the main page.
  • Given it gets concept art for an ID and gets used enough—her blaster can get stubbed and added. It's listed on the Resistance's scope spreadsheet anyhow, vaguely having recalled it being added after finding said art.spookywillowwtalk 06:04, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Thanks, all added! OOM 224 (he/him) 15:07, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Homeworld to be infobox'd.
  • I feel like the fact she'd been tracking the Colossus for days should be introduced in that first paragraph of the article, because—even though they discover it later in the episode—it chronologically occurs before the distress call sent.
  • It might be helpful to contexualize Neeku on first mention as a mechanic as well, to better give sense to why he'd be the one working with her.
  • Per Pamarthen bantha stew we normally give Aunt Z's full name them "Aunt Z" after in quotes, similar to how Chiss core names get treated.
  • Thoughts on splitting the Pirates insolence section into two sections with two then three paragraphs? Four is—okay, in some rarer circumstances, but we don't really do five so much nowadays.
  • It's become precedent to swap the term "disabled" out for a symonym.
  • Context for 4D-M1N.
  • Seems like the Instagram cite has a slight error because it's showing a {{{description}}}spookywillowwtalk 18:55, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Gotcha, thanks. The first mention of Neeku does mention that he's a mechanic along with Kaz though. OOM 224 (he/him) 23:41, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
Dani
  • From Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition, "There are dining establishments and taverns such as Aunt Z's." This implies there are multiple taverns so I think its unfair to say "the station's tavern" NBDani Team Fireball(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 00:17, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Better? OOM 224 (he/him) 12:38, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • Where Nena was first identified needs to be documented Lewisr (talk) 18:58, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Hmm, I thought the wording "X appears in Y"—rather than "first appeared" and without specifying the identification of the name—suffices if there's only a single appearance, unless the trailer changes things? (added for now) OOM 224 (he/him) 19:02, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Generally we'd say "appeared/mentioned in" if there was only the one app/source overall. Since there's other trailers/clips etc that Nena is in we include the first, or per Voxx Cluster you could use introduced or a variant. In regards to ID, since there are those trailers/clips pre episode release, we usually include the 1stID even if is in the episode, see Mika Grey for example Lewisr (talk) 04:31, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
        • Fab, thanks! OOM 224 (he/him) 17:07, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
          • No worries! Lewisr (talk) 20:13, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The pronouns for Captain Doza, Opeepit, Aunt Z, Vusk and Kragan aren't citable to the episode itself Lewisr (talk) 20:13, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Done OOM 224 (he/him) 20:56, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Last thing, there's a disabling in the "Repercussions" section, if you wouldn't mind changing that please Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Done OOM 224 (he/him) 16:25, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
Tommy
  • In the first sentence - "Bright" has four uses as an adjective, relevant here as it isn't immediately clear whether it means clever or cheerful. I'd recommend swapping it out.
  • Some context for Tierny and Pyre would be good (will finish this review soon, sorry time ran out on me). Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 14:11, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
    • No worries, thanks for reviewing! Both addressed. OOM 224 (he/him) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
  • I started adding individual context for the pirates but I've realised there are too many and it's just getting repetitive. I think it might be better to introduce them all by name (and possibly species for extra context) when the Warbird gang is first mentioned. What do you think?
    • Good idea. It'd be ideal if I could specify who the scout trooper pirate is, but I can't even tell the species except that they're not a human. OOM 224 (he/him) 10:19, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
  • "Xiono tried to warn the rest of the Colossus about Nalor's secret alongside CB-23, who asked for elaboration" - this currently reads as CB-23 asking for elaboration, but I assume it's the rest of the Colossus, since the droid was with them in Nalor's ship. If so, could you rephrase. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 17:02, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Sorry about that paragraph, it wasn't really clear that it was indeed CB-23 who was asking so I've hopefully rephrased it for the better. The episode didn't really show Kaz himself warning the rest of the Colossus, only that he intended to do so. CB-23 also disappeared after the conversation so I've made it clearer that Kaz alone went down into Engineering. OOM 224 (he/him) 10:19, 10 March 2024 (UTC)

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Phase connector

  • Nominated by: spookywillowwtalk 03:44, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: THERE ARE DAYS AND THERE ARE DAYS.
  • Word count at nomination time: 1217 words (214 introduction, 974 body, 29 behind the scenes)
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Aurin

  • Nominated by: spookywillowwtalk 01:04, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It's funny because, I read Path of Deceit thinking this would be a CAN. Got to Path of Vengeance, told a friend it'd surely be a short GAN. And here we are.
  • Word count at nomination time: 1076 words (170 introduction, 691 body, 215 behind the scenes)
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  • No quotes for P&T? From reading this article, it seems like there might be something you could put there.ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 03:43, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Despite the article length, Aurin's appearances are very brief and every quote that was tangentially relevant was used.spookywillowwtalk 07:27, 23 February 2024 (UTC)


The Promotion of Lieutenant Veers

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:54, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Haven't counted but this article might be longer than the short story itself.
  • Word count at nomination time: 1398 words (224 introduction, 1174 body, 0 behind the scenes)
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  • According to our AT-AT article, the walker can have two separate configurations of blasters, so I'm not sure if you should link that specific model of blaster in the article.
    • Changed
  • Review note: Cleaned up Appearances and added some more that were missing. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 11:31, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Thank you, can never get all of them on OOU articles
  • I have some bad news: Veers is a colonel in Empire at War and the Skirmish on Carida is identified as the "first full test" of the AT-AT, so that's another apparent contradiction. Here's a video. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 11:48, 30 January 2024 (UTC)

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  • Haven't found any mention of the short story itself in any reviews of The Star Wars Sourcebook Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:54, 23 January 2024 (UTC)


Rokrul

  • Nominated by: Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:44, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Turns out this one needed some upgrades that put it over the word limit.
  • Word count at nomination time: 1052 words (210 introduction, 752 body, 90 behind the scenes)
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Rothana

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  • "From 31 ABY" sounds off to me; I think that "in" would be a better choice of word. What do you think? ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 22:24, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I'm trying to convey a time range, so "from" makes more sense to me.
  • The mention in Chronicles of the Jedi can surely be used as a quote in the "corporate politics" section, and maybe deserves a mention in the body. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 22:24, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
    • The Chronicles mention isn't a quote from a character as far as I know, so can't be used in {{Quote}}. I also think that the sheltering thing is more relevant to the walker and RHE than the planet, which is why I've omitted that info. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:18, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
      • I don't have Chronicles, but Roland Quarry treats it as a quote from Harli Cogra in their in-universe Chronicles of the Jedi. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 16:50, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
        • I've looked it over a bit but to be completely honest, the text in which the walker is mentioned comes across a bit non-fictional for me to want in the article, even if that in itself is technically IU writing. I also think that it's not that relevant to the article's body as it's just the walker being noted. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 02:06, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
          • Eh, I dunno. I think it would be better to use for the quote and mention it in the body as because it is an IU writing, but I don't have super strong feelings about it. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 03:11, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
  • It's also mentioned in book by Poe Dameron, in RHE's name with regards to the LAAT/i and the AT-TE. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 23:09, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Currently links to a Legends page. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 13:32, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
      • The link has been fixed, ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 13:35, 12 February 2024 (UTC)
        • Just looked at the info for this one too, and I'd say it's also not relevant to the body as it's just the fact RHE produced the two being noted and nothing specific to the planet Rothana itself. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:36, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
Imp
  • Seems like the Galactic Republic planets category is missing.
  • Can some of the infobox fields be populated to support the Ice planets category and reflect the physical description info that's present in the Description section? Imperators II(Talk) 09:41, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
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Heff Tobber

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:17, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Really happy that it turned out that not only was Tobber in the film but was that he was also the only "unnamed" Blue Squadron pilot we see in-cockpit
  • Word count at nomination time: 1278 words (180 introduction, 932 body, 166 behind the scenes)
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  1. That leaves Taslet Colb, Antoc Merrick, Robich Duggsin, Calum Gram and Paril Ritta. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 11:20, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 01:52, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
  3. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 16:10, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote spookywillowwtalk 00:47, 8 March 2024 (UTC)

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Uber
  • "Entry denied"'s second paragraph has a duplicate reference (Green Squadron bit).
  • Eadu is introduced without any context.
    • Added a mention of the Eadu mission further up since he might have been part of it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:51, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Battle of Yavin should be given a date. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 09:23, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
Tommy
  • The infobox says he had "fair" skin but the article body says it was "light." I'm not sure which we favour now, but I think it ought to be consistent whichever we choose. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 12:44, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Changed to light, which is atleast what I stick with at the moment. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Oh, likewise, the infobox says he had black hair but the body says it was brown. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 12:45, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed, and good to see you back on the nomination pages! Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

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Trymant IV

  • Nominated by: spookywillowwtalk 02:46, 7 February 2024 (UTC) Lewisr (talk) 02:48, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Trymant, my child. Writing this in a week-long binge session was hella fun.spookywillowwtalk Always a pleasure to be collabing on these big pages, especially THR! Lewisr (talk) 02:48, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Word count at nomination time: 4521 words (391 introduction, 3777 body, 353 behind the scenes)
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  1. Superb work on this. Would love to see more. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 15:10, 8 March 2024 (UTC)

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ThrawnChiss7
  • I'm pretty sure that only the first use of 232 BBY should be linked in the infobox. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 02:53, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Removed the other links Lewisr (talk) 02:58, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
Uber
  • If I recall correctly, the Legacy Run wasn't exactly "attacked," it was a collision planned by Ro. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 19:34, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Slightly tweaked, does that work? Didn't need an extra cite since Timelines mentions that Ro takes credit for the Disaster Lewisr (talk) 04:04, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Precedent is to note what the planet looked like from orbit (e.g. Trigalis, Chorin). UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 07:14, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
  • "Jedi Knight Vernestra Rwoh reviewed the files of the Trymant IV disaster. Rwoh felt that the attack in the Trymant system did not match the marauders' standard raid patterns, similar to the ones she had encountered on Wevo" This is a little confusing to follow. Are the patterns on Wevo similar to the ones on Trymant?
  • I'm noticing a lot of play-by-play and somewhat-irrelevant details throughout the article. Take, for example, the section "Homesick blues," much of it goes into detail about character interactions that 1.) do not take place on Trymant 2.) do not fall under the general scope of a planet article and 3.) don't even mention Trymant to begin with. Generally speaking, character thoughts and feelings aren't really relevant to a planet's history if they don't directly concern it to begin with. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 11:30, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Gave it a decent haircut; I think most of the rest can be justified in some form though, Trymant itself is mentioned a lot narratively, and most points make the later aspects of the article seem a bit more contextualized.spookywillowwtalk 03:55, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
  • You now have two consecutive images aligned to the same side (after "Impending doom"). I honestly think there should only be one image under "Search for safety." UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 10:45, 7 March 2024 (UTC)

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  • Also a sidenote that yes, the infobox is cursed. But combinably with RTCT content and the author stating it was intentional that the planet was super dead, it's safe to say that all (aboveground) brushery and trees were zapped.spookywillowwtalk 02:50, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Continue from "Idyllic refuge." UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 19:34, 25 February 2024 (UTC)


Jaldine Gerams

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:18, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Hope its confirmed at some point that Gerams, Raner, and Tobber actually survived
  • Word count at nomination time: 1086 words (189 introduction, 771 body, 126 behind the scenes)
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  • Just the smallest, most minor thing. First usage of Gerams' pronouns are different than the infobox; would be best if consistent.spookywillowwtalk 20:43, 13 March 2024 (UTC)

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Laren Joma

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:37, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Surprised Joma's actress didn't get credited since pretty much all the other speaking pilots did
  • Word count at nomination time: 1096 words (149 introduction, 811 body, 136 behind the scenes)
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Barion Raner

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:44, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The only confirmed Blue Squadron survivor of Scarif so far
  • Word count at nomination time: 1460 words (221 introduction, 1070 body, 169 behind the scenes)
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  • I think you should mention that Blue Squadron actually didn't participate in the Battle of Yavin, instead of the ambiguity currently present. (it was Red, Gold and Green squadrons). ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 18:56, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
Uber
  • If he was born on Ord Mantell, the birth field should be filled out. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 09:12, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Huh, always thought birth was just for the date. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:22, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
      • It includes location too, always has. We've seen characters with a different homeworld and birthplace. UberSoldat93 Din Djarin's clan (talk) 11:15, 18 February 2024 (UTC)

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Shalla Ro

  • Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 02:48, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Pushed over by word count
  • Word count at nomination time: 1082 words (140 introduction, 790 body, 152 behind the scenes)
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Lew
  • There's room for an image to be added in the legacy section Lewisr (talk) 04:33, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
  • I think it'd be worth finding a place to include High Republic Era Lewisr (talk) 04:36, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Got those two. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 14:03, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
      • I think the mention should be moved to the start because it currently otherwise suggests that the preceding events weren't during that era Lewisr (talk) 04:13, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

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Constrainer

  • Nominated by: Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 11:20, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Yes, I'm back! Hopefully not too rusty, it's been a while since my Inq days. Glad to be able to nominate something from Rebels that isn't one of those ugly giraffe ISDs, I have a lot of nostalgia for this show.
  • Word count at nomination time: 1394 words (194 introduction, 905 body, 295 behind the scenes)
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Unidentified smuggler (Imperial-class Star Destroyer)

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 15:38, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
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  • Word count at nomination time: 1248 words (117 introduction, 971 body, 160 behind the scenes)
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