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Barsen'thor (Galactic War)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 07:41, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Only took me a year and a half to finish this. I've tried to make sure that this reaches the nomination page as smooth as possible, and I believe I have achieved the goal.

(0 Inqs/0 Users/0 Total)

(Votes required: 3 Inqvotes required to reach minimum. Additional 4 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)

Support

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • While often used informally, "they" and "their" are not proper singular pronouns in formal writing. Please go through the article and change all instances of this.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:36, August 31, 2014 (UTC)
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:49, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • It looks like these got fix somewhere along the way.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:41, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Similarly to EJ's comment, "the individual" is also really not a good way to refer to the character. For one thing, you seem to by and large not mention the fact that the Consular's going to places with a companion. Up until the Carida, it's always Qyzen, and the rest of the time it should be something like "the Consular and a companion" when you first introduce a planetary storyline. That then opens up several additional terms you can use besides "Jedi", "Consular" - duo, pair, the two. I'm still seeing quite a few theys in there.
    • "Up until the Carida, it's always Qyzen," Not true. C2-N2 is technically a healer companion. Yes, his AI sucks and he tends to suicide a lot by trying to punch people with his bare fists, but he can be used, so we can't assume the player always runs with Qyzen until Tharan. I'll look at the rest of the objection later. Just wanted to get this part out of the way first. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 19:06, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
      • I think it's safe to say that the in-continuity player characters never used their ship droids in combat, as the droids even say that they're not designed for combat. Their use as companions is really just game mechanics. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:10, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
        • All parts of the objection should be addressed now. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:41, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
          • I'm still seeing a number of "individuals", and also, the game goes out of its way to never call the Consular player a Knight, so I'm not sure it's appropriate to call the Barsen'thor one. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:39, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
            • Alright, I have cut down the usage of "individual" considereably (from 88 to 22, at the moment). Out of those, a number refer to other individuals beside the Consular. The most part of the remaining instances are either at the start of the biography, where none of the Jedi titles apply to the character yet. I have kept some uses of the word later as well, just to avoid repetition between constantly referring to the character as a "Jedi", a "Consular" or the "Barsen'thor." Regarding the other point raised, I honestly don't see any reason why we can't call the character a Jedi Knight. We know he was promoted to a "full member of the Jedi order" or whatever the game calls it after Tython, but he was only promoted to Jedi Master at the start of Chapter 2. So what rank could he possibly have held in between Tython and the Fortitude? He was obviously a Jedi Knight even if the game doesn't explicitly state he was one. I'm not going to argue this case, and I've changed the article, but I honestly think it's a case of the duck test, IMO. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:47, February 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • Also, a number of the images are only tangentially related to the character, like that Alderaan one. I'm currently playing through the Consular storyline, and will supply images from the game like I have with the Hero. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:05, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
    • The reason for that is that I decided to write this article to status only after I had already completed the class story. Naturally, I never bothered with taking screenshots as I was playing, and I wasn't going to to go back and play through it again with another character just to obtain images for the article. I decided that I could get away with whatever relevant images I could find already uploaded on the site, but if you have the ability to provide better images, that's great. Go ahead. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:41, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
      • No problem; you should've seen my original version of the Hero. I think I just used the Holonet images of planets. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:47, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
  • No mention of Head Jailer Tarinn in the Imperial Holding Facility on Balmorra? He's got a (silent) cutscene and everything. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:39, February 12, 2015 (UTC)
  • Okay, I've trimmed a bit, but the intro needs to be cut down some more. Right now it's about 1,200 words, which is a FAN in of itself. Conversely, the Hero's only about 815, and Revan is around 835. You should cut back on some of the details. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 20:29, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
    • Alright. I think I've pretty much cut every possible extraneous bit of detail, leaving the intro at less than 1000 words. Everything else is necessary context in my opinion. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:16, June 6, 2015 (UTC)


  • So, huge news for the Barsen'thor and this nomination. The Star Wars: Force and Destiny Core Rulebook contains an excerpt from Rediscovering the Jedi, a work by the respected historian Professor Belys Harand who was known for his expertise on Xim. Rediscovering the Jedi was published during the era of the Empire, and was subsequently banned. Here's the important part:
    • Chandrila's Jedi Tomb: Although his true name has been lost to time, the third Barsen'thor, or Warden of the Jedi Order, is thought to be entombed on Chandrila, somewhere in the famous Crystal Canyons. He was famous for a number of ancient diplomatic victories, and for an equal number as a battlefield general.
  • With Knights of the Fallen Empire forthcoming and its condensing of class stories into a single story about the Outlander, I think we can effectively say that the canon storylines of the eight classes are over. With that, and this source stating that the Barsen'thor is a male, I believe we can take that information as valid; thus, this article needs to be updated to reflect that. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:29, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • Also, the Chandrila mention is clearly meant as a reference to the Dead Jedi Knight and the Chandrila Jedi tomb, so I think that these can be merged. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:30, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
    • Well, now this nomination and Jaden Korr are connected to each other. I'm just going to say that I totally foresaw that that would happen with my Force sense. Jokes aside though, I've updated the article with the new information, both in terms of adding the Jedi Academy stuff and interspersing masculine pronouns throughout. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:39, August 26, 2015 (UTC)
Culator finds player character articles annoying
  • This is not an objection, just an observation: There were many, many typos and grammar issues here, and I haven't even done a full copyedit, just a quick automated scan: indvidual → individual, Leiutenant → Lieutenant, 'returned back' → 'returned' (2), presense → presence, ressurrect → resurrect, 'the the' → 'the' (2). Please be mindful of this, thanks.
    • Noted. Thanks for catching those.
  • You have a ref name="The Bounty Hunter's Daughter" that references "Conversation with Qyzen Fess: "A Taste of Medicine"" and a ref name="A Taste of Medicine" that references "Conversation with Qyzen Fess: "A Taste of Medicine"" so I'm guessing one of those is wrong. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 17:18, July 25, 2015 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Before I even begin reviewing, please go through the article and split up your paragraphs. They're gigantic even in Monobook, not to mention in the default Wikia skin. Considering 99% of our readers use the Wikia skin or the mobile skin, this article should consider the aesthetics from their perspective. Please view the article in the Wikia skin.
  • Furthermore, I see some sections with 6-7 huge paragraphs. These could definitely use further subsectioning, which will allow more quotes and images to be used in the article.
  • All references with external links require a backup link as per WP:S. 1358 (Talk) 21:28, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

  • Copycat! :P But anyways, great work. In the past few weeks, we've filled almost 300 redlinks, leaving us only 3200 left for TOR. I'll be sure to review this soon. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:28, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
    • Oh, actually, there's another cut thing from the files—during Corellia, the First Son originally was supposed to send a fleet to attack Sarkhai, causing Nadia to depart temporarily as your companion to go and help her homeworld. It's not entirely clear, but it looks like your actions (i.e. alignment choices) would affected whether Sarkhai won easily or only barely succeeded. Cade StupidRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 14:31, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • May I ask why you use "They" or "their" when referring to the Barsen'thor? Winterz (talk) 00:03, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • Because we don't know the Barsen'thor's gender, singular they is used to refer to the character in a gender-neutral manner. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 07:19, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • I might be unable to address any future objections on this and my other noms until the end of the month due to studies. I know I've been pretty much inactive on the wiki anyways—kind of lost interest in the Star Wars universe after the new canon took over—but I have been checking my nominations occassionally. However, I'll probably be unable to do even that in the next few weeks. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:16, June 6, 2015 (UTC)
    • Back to a previous contributing capacity. Starting off with a sizable expansion/rewrite/clarification of certain points. New redlinks will be dealt with soon. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:49, June 27, 2015 (UTC)


Voorpee

  • Nominated by: ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:53, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Good article nomination that, quite simply, got too long. Well, in any case, before the nomination was closed, I had gotten support from one AgriCorp member and three regular users and didn't have any outstanding objections. Still, I'd be happy to address any other concerns that may be brought up. The original nomination can be found here. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:53, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

(Votes required: None. Required vote total reached, but current outstanding objections.)

Support

  1. It's nice to see a less serious article every so often. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:19, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 23:35, July 31, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:44, August 1, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote This... this is a thing. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:25, August 6, 2016 (UTC)
  5. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:31, October 30, 2016 (UTC)
  6. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 11:45, November 7, 2016 (EET)
  7. Great stuff! --Lewisr (talk) 01:10, January 25, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • The intro should be updated to include information about the cloning and talent show. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:22, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
  • I would reword the bts concerning Brown saying pets would appear in the third book as it is currently a bit confusing to read and not entirely clear that the Phantom Bully is the third book unless you follow the link. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:22, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
  • Is it clear if the original Voorpee is the one that is kept, or could he be amongst the ones returned to the zoo or the rescue organization? If it isn't clar you should at least mention this in the behind the scenes and maybe even in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:22, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
    • Well, I tried something like that, but if you look back at Manoof's objections on the original Good article nomination, I ended up getting rid of it because if nothing is stated either way, then the custom is to not say anything at all. And the book really doesn't. After the whole mess happens, Voorpee himself isn't mentioned again at all. It's entirely unclear whether they ever even found the original Voorpee. ProfessorTofty (talk) 19:37, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Can we get a timeframe in the intro?
  • "In the second semester, Novachez, who had been struggling with his friendships," What do you mean by this? Was he struggling to make friends or having issues with the friends he had?
    • Reworded to make it clear that he was having issues with the friends he already had. ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:21, July 29, 2016 (UTC)
  • No quote for the P&T? I know he doesn't speak himself, but I'm sure there are lines said about him. IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:08, July 29, 2016 (UTC)
    • Good idea. Quotation for the P&T section has been added. ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:21, July 29, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • The biography section needs to be subsectioned. Ideally, each section should have its own quote, provided there are enough quotes about Voorpee. I would think you could easily get at least three sections from what is there now.
    • Well, it was originally back when had nominated it for good article, but it was said that I didn't need them because the article wasn't long enough to merit it. I'll go ahead and get that taken care of. ProfessorTofty (talk) 22:40, February 11, 2017 (UTC)
  • If there are interviews with the author, it seems to me that you could add a quote to the BTS about Voorpee from one of them.
    • The interview in question is one that I did. Voorpee is only mentioned in one question and with the way that the question was answered, I don't think adding a quote is really going to enhance the article in any way. ProfessorTofty (talk) 22:40, February 11, 2017 (UTC)
  • If "This article is non-canon within the Star Wars Legends continuity.", then please mention this in the BTS and provide a source for it. If it is one of the books that state this, then just source it to the book in question. Without a source, it just looks like an assumption.
    • Added this to the behind-the-scenes and linked it to the previously mentioned interview, which references the fact that the story is not canon. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:20, February 12, 2017 (UTC)
  • You should try to limit the amount of times that you include a word in the main section in quotes. It doesn't seem necessary some of the times you are doing it. I think it would be easy to reword some of these sections to prevent the need for the quotes.
    • I can only find five instances of this and, I'm sorry, but in each case, it seems fitting. To explain further though, the character claim they are taking him for "walks," but said "walks" are actually an excuse to torture him. Another is "new pet," which again, I think makes more sense in quotation marks. Finally, I believe "commands such as 'jump' or 'roll over'" would be standard usage. ProfessorTofty (talk) 22:40, February 11, 2017 (UTC)
  • You have quite a few missing links in the article. Normally I would fix them myself, but there are a lot for an article this close to passing. For instance you are missing links to Torture, Week, Zoo, etc. You also have things that are linked in the introduction and not in the body. Everything needs to be linked once in the infobox, once in the introduction, and once in the body.
    • Everything done (and I think maybe one or two other things), except for "zoo." This is only ever referenced as "Naboo Zoo" throughout the article. Should I just link the "Zoo" at one point? I thought about adding something stating something like "a zoo based on the planet Naboo," but this almost seems like adding information that should be completely obvious simply for the point of getting a reference to "zoo" in there. Still need to do the sections - will take care of that later this evening or early tomorrow. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:20, February 12, 2017 (UTC)
      • Never mind on that last bit - I found a way to work in links for zoo that feel reasonably natural. ProfessorTofty (talk) 01:08, February 14, 2017 (UTC)
  • I realize that this nomination had enough votes to pass, but I believe that these deficiencies need to be addressed before it can be considered a featured article.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 00:01, February 9, 2017 (UTC)
    • Sure, I don't mind doing that. I'm all about making sure we have it as good a quality as possible. I just hope it can be handled with good speed since I did already have enough votes to pass. Anyway, gotta go right now, but I will take care of / reply to the rest before the end of the evening. ProfessorTofty (talk) 22:40, February 11, 2017 (UTC)
  • "Students at the academy were encouraged to care for Voorpee at the academy's care center, feeding him a preferred diet of live insects and keeping his soft fur clean." I'm seeing some of this information in the body, but some of it seems to be exclusive to the introduction.
    • Added an item regarding the care center and keeping his fur clean in the "Academy arrival" section. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:38, May 26, 2017 (UTC)
  • "arriving from the zoo with the other students at the beginning of the school year." This makes it sound like the students and Voorpee all went from the zoo to the academy at the start of the school year. Is this the case? If not, please reword this.
    • Ambiguous syntax, I suppose. I reworded it to just say that he arrived "at the Jedi academy" rather than "from the zoo," which is unnecessary since it already says he was on loan from the zoo. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:38, May 26, 2017 (UTC)
  • I believe you should keep the date consistent between reference 2 and the body of the article. In the reference, you have 196 BBY, while you link to 200 BBY in the body and introduction. You should probably just pipelink to 196 BBY in the body and introduction.
    • Hmm. Not sure what happened here, other than just trying to go with a nice round number Changed it to 196. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:38, May 26, 2017 (UTC)
  • If there are other quotes related to Voorpee from the novels, please provide those for the subsections in the biography section.
  • Does The Essential Atlas say that voorpaks are small, fuzzy creatures? That is what reference 3 seems to be saying in the biography right now.
    • No, you're right, that's only to source the fact that Naboo is Mid Rim. I changed that to reference from Return of the Padawan. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:38, May 26, 2017 (UTC)
      • You are still sourcing the fact that they are native to Naboo to the Atlas.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:29, July 11, 2017 (UTC)
        • How I am doing that? I now have the Essential Atlas reference directly after "Mid-Rim" and then have "planet Naboo" and following that, the reference to The Official Star Wars Fact File 106. Sorry, I'm just not sure what I'm missing here. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:07, July 17, 2017 (UTC)
          • Right now you have "native to the Mid Rim" sourced to just The Essential Atlas. "Native" cannot be sourced to that.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:35, August 24, 2017 (UTC)
  • The third and final paragraphs of the biography would benefit from being reordered to present the events in a more chronological order. If would make sense to display the information in the current way if the article was about Novachez or someone else who found the information out in the presented order, but since this is outlining the events of Voorpee's life, a chronological ordering makes more sense. Just because a novel present the information in one order, does not mean that the article needs to as well.
    • Are you referring to the paragraphs "Return to school" and "Cloned chaos"? Because, if so, I'm not sure what you mean. Everything is in order both in terms of how it's presented in the novel and in terms of the actual chronology except for the very last sentence about how "It was later revealed that Cronah and Ronald Rinzler, a fellow student who styled himself as a politician, were responsible for the pranks, part of their continued effort to humiliate Novachez." Do you want me to move just the information in that sentence? Or is there something else I can do to make the timeline more clear? ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:38, May 26, 2017 (UTC)
      • What I am asking is for you to present the information in the order that it happens to Voorpee, not the order that it is mentioned in the book. You mention that Voorpee went missing and then reveal how that happened. You also mention the clones after you mention instances where the clones appeared. Writing it this way feels like a condensed version of the novel and not an article about the subject, which is what you should be aiming for.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:29, July 11, 2017 (UTC)
        • Ah, I got it now. Okay, how's that? ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:07, July 17, 2017 (UTC)
          • That is better. The second paragraph of Victim of bullying should be reordered in a similar fashion.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:35, August 24, 2017 (UTC)
            • Done. Only seemed to require a slight rewording, but let me know if you still feel anything's wrong. Otherwise, should be good to go. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:07, August 28, 2017 (UTC)
  • You should not use contractions in a Wookieepedia article outside of quotes.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 23:37, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
    • If this is true, I'd like to see a guideline in the Manual of Style or wherever saying such. I don't personally agree with this and I feel writing without contractions simply for no other reason than writing without contractions sounds forced and unnatural. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:38, May 26, 2017 (UTC)
      • This is actually a valid point, and until it is addressed I will have to withdraw my support as well. At the very beginning of our manual of style there is a reference that states "For information on the most basic writing techniques and styles, which are used here, see Wikipedia's Manual of Style." Encyclopedic writing is expected to follow basic rules of formal writing, and even putting aside rules imported from Wikipedia, avoiding contractions in encyclopedic/professional writing is a fundamental rule of style shared by APA, AP, IEEE, and other professional style guides. Contractions are only for informal/non-academic use. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 15:19, June 4, 2017 (UTC)
        • You didn't have to withdraw your support. I would have been happy to just corrected it. The only reason I did not do so immediately was because I did not believe it to be a rule. I did know that it was a rule on Wikipedia, but as we all know, Wookieedpedia is not Wikipedia. Nevertheless, it does appear based on what you're saying that Wikipedia's manual is considered to be the bedrock unless specifically contradicted, so I made the correction. I still retain my original opinion, but the rule trumps that. Anyway, I corrected it, though I feel the need to point out that there was only a single contraction of my own doing in the article to begin with. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:59, June 4, 2017 (UTC)
          • Thank you very much for being reasonable about this. And I mean that in a totally honest and non-sarcastic way that probably doesn't come across well in plaintext, especially given my reputation. ☺️ Disputes like this have historically tended to become entrenched, so I removed my support vote preemptively and that was probably premature. And WP:NOT is why I provided other references for standards of academic writing. I have unstruck my vote and look forward to this article's promotion. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 22:14, June 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • "It was not until towards the end of the school year that Cronah and Rinzler were the ones responsible for the prank." I think something is missing in this sentence.
    • Yeah, "were discovered to be the ones responsible." Fixed. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:07, August 28, 2017 (UTC)
  • The image quality for the images used in this article is pretty low. Were some of these images taken with a phone? In any event, the images should be replaced with higher quality scans.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:35, August 24, 2017 (UTC)
    • No, not with a phone, but perhaps not the greatest quality scanner. I've replaced three of them with images taken directly from the eBook version. I think the other two are okay, but if you feel otherwise, let me know, and I'll replace those as well. (The other two are the main image and the one showing all the clones, which I think is already from the eBook version.) ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:07, August 28, 2017 (UTC)
      • If I may interject here, to respond to Tofty's latest comment, it is now site policy that images added to articles be "as high quality as possible, as source availability and technical restraints permit." If you have reasonable access to digital eBook versions of this stuff, there's no excuse for any of the images in this article to be anything but. In other words, you need to be uploading digital versions of all of these images. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:34, August 30, 2017 (UTC)
        • And on that note, all images in this article now originate from the eBook versions. ProfessorTofty (talk) 14:25, August 30, 2017 (UTC)
  • "...trained here under Jedi Master Yoda and various other Jedi, including Mr. Garfield and Principal Mar." The last part of this sentence contains detail that does not seem to be important to the article subject. It would probably be better to just note that Yoda and various other Jedi trained the Padawans, rather than mention two of those Jedi.
  • If the class pet program was started by Gaiana, it seems to me that should be mentioned earlier in the article. This fits in more with the part about the Naboo Zoo loaning Voorpee to the academy.
    • How much earlier would you have me mention it? It's already in the first paragraph, right after I mention Gaiana and the school newspaper. Or do you think it should go in the intro? ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:13, September 9, 2017 (UTC)
  • "...but per his own journal, he was not the culprit." Since you have already established in the article that he did not kidnap Voorpee, I don't think this adds anything.
    • Good point, that's a relic of when the order of events was listed differently. Removed. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:13, September 9, 2017 (UTC)
  • "Despite his anger and dismay, however, Novachez became disillusioned with the two bullies, whom he suspected did not really care about his feelings." Could you try and shorten this and merge it into the next sentence? You should note his motivations, but I do not believe that this level of detail is required.
  • "Lilly, a new student who was also with Gaiana and Roan, was not impressed by this teasing and asked Cyrus why his friend was so mean." How is this in any way related to Voorpee?--Exiled Jedi (talk) 13:07, September 9, 2017 (UTC)
    • I think I was just trying to explain the scene and give background, but yeah, it's not really related it, so I took it out. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:13, September 9, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The article can do a more precise job of dating the events therein. If Jedi Academy says Yoda is 700 years old, then that places that book in 196 BBY, not "approximately" 196 BBY, as the reference states. Moreover, the summary of Return of the Padawan clearly states that its events take place the following school year, which would be 195 BBY; and The Phantom Bully is the next year after that, 194 BBY. The article should affix these dates throughout the Bio with proper referencing for each date, modeled after the current date reference. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:57, August 30, 2017 (UTC)
    • Again, perhaps I'm missing something here, but if it states that he's 700 years old, how does that automatically place it in 196 BBY, or at least the entirety of it? For example, say that you know that a person was born on September 21, 1970. In our example, they're 46 years old, but that could make the current year either 2016, or the current year could be 2017, if it's January, February, March, etc., any date of the year before September 21, 2017. ProfessorTofty (talk) 14:25, August 30, 2017 (UTC)
      • Then call it circa 196 BBY, circa 195 BBY, and circa 194 BBY. Even that nails it down more narrowly than what the article is currently doing. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:46, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
        • Alright, changed to say "circa" instead. ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:13, September 9, 2017 (UTC)
        • Okay, I think I got it right now and changed it to 195 BBY. If that's still not it, could you just state straightforward exactly what it is you're saying or just make the change? Sorry, but things have been kinda hectic lately and I feel like I've just lost the thread at this point. ProfessorTofty (talk) 16:25, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Request to strike Exile Jedi's objections

Okay, this is why I start to get a bit irritated. I get distracted and neglect to check on the objections for jefflac for a little while and the nomination gets archived faster than I can blink. I know that you are supposed to be responsible for checking that and I blame myself too, but if I had just received a friendly note or anything, I would have been happy to take care of it. And I was in IRC several times last night also and nobody mentioned anything about it to me. I know there's procedures and all, but given the general apathy lately regarding the status articles process, it doesn't always pay to cling to procedure. Meanwhile, I've had these objections addressed for over three months and yet nothing has been done. If we're going to be so quick to enforce the one side, then the people who are responsible for doing the reviewing need to do their part too. In any case, before these objections came, I had the required votes to pass. I have addressed the objections and there has been no response. I am asking that the objections of Exiled Jedi be struck as having been addressed and un-responded, and if there are no other objections, then for the nomination to be passed. ProfessorTofty (talk) 14:45, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

  • After a conversation with Supreme Emperor, I have decided as a show of good faith to strike this request for now and give Exiled another chance to respond. ProfessorTofty (talk) 18:01, May 20, 2017 (UTC)


Holshef

  • Nominated by: ProfessorTofty (talk) 01:07, November 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A good article nomination that got too long. The original nomination can be found here. Since the Servants of the Empire series has now ended, I think it's safe to say Holshef's story has most likely come to a close. ProfessorTofty (talk) 01:07, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

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  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:53, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

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Floyd
  • First impression is that the intro could be expanded with more details of the escape. As of right now, it's a bit disproportionately small in comparison with the body.
    • Good point. I think I wrote that back before the release of The Secret Academy and never updated it. Updated now to include details from that title. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • The P&T seems like it could also be expanded. For instance: "He griped that "Today's youth are always in a hurry," and began gathering stacks of his poetry, only for her to stop him, saying that they didn't have time to take anything. He asked if he could just take his latest and she knew it would be better to allow this small demand rather than let him wheedle for hours. When, however, he tried to take an entire year's worth of poems, she cut him off at one week." This alone illustrates some traits that could easily be added in.
  • Need context on the Gray Syndicate, as well as Merei Spanjaf.
  • Do we have any sort of timetable in regards to when these events occurred (i.e. how long after the Empire took control over Lothal?)
  • "When Holshef learned that the Empire was poisoning Lothal's air and water when it would have taken so little to preserve them," How were they poisoning the environment?
  • Please avoid contractions.
    • Hmm. I've heard this before, but as I've mentioned before in other article nominations like this, I can find nothing in the manual of style, the nomination guidelines, or anywhere else on the site specifically stating that contractions should be avoided. So I'm not going to avoid contractions for the sole purpose of sounding "more encyclopedic," nor replace contractions in cases where I would otherwise use them. Contractions are a natural and accepted part of the English language. That said, I'm willing to listen if you feel that removing any particular contractions would improve the article, but I'm just not sure removing contractions for the sake of removing contractions really does anything to serve our readers. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • "At some point after this, Laxo sold Holshef to a bounty hunter" What do you mean by this? Did he literally sell Holshef to the bounty hunter like a slave, or just the rights to protect him?
    • This question came up in the original good article nomination as well. The book phrases it as such: "Laxo opened his eyes. They were like chips of ice. 'I just sold Holshef to a bounty hunter,' he said. 'The hunter will be here in a hour. You're going to take him to your poet friend's latest hideout... and stay while he collects the bounty.'" So I guess the idea is that what he was really selling was Holshef's location, with the idea that the bounty hunter would turn Holshef in and then give him a portion of the bounty. I've edited the article to reflect that.
  • A lot of the bio seems to focus more on Spanjaf than Holshef. For instance, the raid at the end of "A fugitive artist": How does it affect Holshef? Furthermore, the entirety of "A need to escape" is written from Spanjaf's POV.
    • Well, I guess the reason for that is that it's really impossible to tell Holshef's story without Spanjaf because everything we're told revolves around her. It seems to me that if I cut the information from that paragraph, we'd be losing crucial information, but the fact is that there are only about three or four scenes that actually have Holshef present. I did add some more about Holshef at the end of the paragraph you mentioned though; and I'd welcome more direction on this topic. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • The quote in the P&T seems like it would be much better as the main quote than the one you have, where neither of the speakers are Holshef.
    • Fair enough. Made that the main quote and added a new quote for the personality and traits. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
  • I also think you're too play-by-play narrating everything that's said. Unless what they're talking about is really important, you'd do better just to stick to the actual actions of the story. IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:32, June 3, 2016 (UTC)
    • Alright, I've tried to chop it down. Let me know what you think now. ProfessorTofty (talk) 05:20, June 15, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:54, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Quite right. I seem to recall voting in favor of that myself. Redlink taken care of, and while I was it, I also made a few other tweaks to the article. ProfessorTofty (talk) 14:03, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • Please add images. This is FAN rule 14, and an article this long simply cannot do without being illustrated. For ideas, out of the subjects linked in the intro, Lothal, Merei Spanjaf, Jho and Garel all have images that can be used here. Imperators II(Talk) 15:55, August 30, 2017 (UTC)
    • All good suggestions. I added the first three, but decided to skip Garel since the only place that seems right for that is where I already have Old Jho. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:16, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
      • There's still a lot more room for images. Remember that you should preview the article in the Oasis skin for optimal image placement, since it's the most widely used one by the readers by far. I think the Merei and Jho images should both be moved up a section each (they're introduced there so they'll fit in just fine), and then there'll be room for the Garel image, as well. Heck, if you can think of any other appropriate images, the article will most probably be able to support those, as well. Also, please pay more attention to our policy on image caption punctuation. Imperators II(Talk) 10:49, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
        • Alright, how's it looking now? And as far as I can tell, everything I have is fine in regards to the caption punctuation. ProfessorTofty (talk) 18:28, September 10, 2017 (UTC)
  • Is there really no quote for the "Early life" subsection?
    • I've added a quote related to the sap collecting mentioned in that section which I think works. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:16, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
  • Why do you have two dating references? It seems to me you could do with just the "fourth year BBY" reference.
    • Hmm. I'm sure my reasons for doing it that way made sense to me at the time, but now that you ask, I don't know why. It may have something to do with the fact that in the "Personality and traits" section I said "five years," but that's not right. Corrected and switched to just the one reference. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:16, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
  • Please add a backup link to the Amazon template.
  • Please switch to the {{Tumblr}} template for the Tumblr citation and the {{JCFcite}} for the Jedi Council Forums citation.
    • And that has been switched. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:16, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
      • You didn't switch to JCFCite. Imperators II(Talk) 10:49, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
        • Oops, don't know how I missed that. Okay, that's now switched as well. ProfessorTofty (talk) 15:28, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
  • Review note: I've removed the homeworld reference because you only used information from The Secret Academy in it. The Secret Academy reference is sufficient. Imperators II(Talk) 14:33, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
  • Why do you put Old Jho in quotes in the intro, but not in the article body? Imperators II(Talk) 14:38, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
    • I'm not really sure. In any case, it's taken care of to make it more like it is in the actual article about Old Jho himself, mostly referring to him as simply Jho, except where needed. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:16, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
  • In the intro, you say Holshef escaped to Garel, but in the article's body you just say he was supposed to meet the Spectres in the Garel system, while ending the History section by saying he escaped Lothal. Imperators II(Talk) 14:45, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
    • Alright, I've edited in all those parts to be consistent. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:16, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • There's no longer any need to use the phrasing "the fourth year before the Battle of Yavin." That was our own way of getting around the fact that Canon was initially reluctant to adopt the BBY/ABY system. Now that it officially has, all instances of his this phrasing should be changed to just say 4 ABY, etc. Please make the necessary changes to this article. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:28, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Per the discussion at the featured article nomination for Voorpee, I have gone ahead and removed all non-quoted instances of contractions from this article. ProfessorTofty (talk) 15:48, June 28, 2017 (UTC)


Fenn Booda

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  1. Never knew there was this much info on this guy. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:20, November 9, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Cevan
  • I assume Booda is meant to have said "Suit," rather than "Suite," in the quote under the 'Detainment of Aurra Sing' subsection? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:47, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
    • Yes. I just re-checked the comic it looks like I copied it down wrong. My mistake. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 23:50, November 8, 2016 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • Please create a category for wardens, if there isn't one already.
    • Created.
  • Please add a backup link to the ign.com citation.
    • Is that formatted right?
      • Argh, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. No, it's not formatted correctly. {{Cite web}} is probably one of the best-documented templates we have, so please take the time to read it.
  • The dating ref of 22 BBY is insufficient - what has Episode II got to do with Jedi: Aayla Secura?
    • Uuuh, I dunno. I'll check this and update this accordingly. Meanwhile, I think I got the others.
      • Alright, proper date source. Hope it's worded okay. Found a nugget of interesting, though, that I apparently skipped over before. TNEC claims Booda accepted Sing's offer and released her after a few months. Coruscant Nights has her in prison until she's freed. TNEC also mentions Sing trying to kill Anakin during the Cortorsis Battle Droid incident, given her appearance The New Droid Army, which occurs after the Aayla Secura story. Coruscant Nights seems to have skipped over the NEC and The New Droid Army to put her back in Desolation Alley. I wrote it as a "discrepancies" section, as I don't know if we can just extrapolate that she was released and randomly imprisoned again, though I suppose that could have happened and Booda did in fact free her. Wouldn't be much to rewrite. I might just do that before you reply, even. I ramble in these things. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 16:21, September 10, 2017 (UTC)
  • "A male[1] member of a tall, thin species," — this would be perfectly at home in the P&T section.
    • Okay. How does that look? "Gaunt"'s definition sort of includes thin/lean/skinny/pencil.
  • The number of Booda's digits should be mentioned.
    • Done.
  • Imho, the lead quote and the caption of the first body image should be changed to reflect that Booda was not talking to a non-descript prisoner, but Aurra Sing. Imperators II(Talk) 15:36, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
    • I had thought about it, but my reasoning for not doing so was that given both the quote and the image being a part of the first paragraph, which hasn't introduced Aurra Sing yet, it would make more contextual sense to not mention her. However, I believe the image is larger than what is shown (This is the image that existed before I wrote the article and changed the infobox image), so I could maybe move it down and replace it with the full image of Booda talking to Sing and then change the caption. Yes? No? Thoughts? --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 02:18, September 9, 2017 (UTC)
      • I recommend you leave the image in the first section and just change the caption to reflect that what we see in the image is Booda fullfilling his duties as a warden or something like that.
  • Bio: "as the intergalactic Clone Wars raged on after it sparked on the planet of Geonosis during the year.[9]" — neither "intergalactic", "Clone Wars", nor "during the year" can be sourced to Episode II.
  • BTS: "Sing remained imprisoned in Oovo IV until she was freed by Darth Vader" — did the novel actually say that Sing remained on Oovo IV from her imprisonment during Jedi: Aayla Secura? If not, then you're just combining two non-conflicting pieces of information and the note under the Discrepancies section is unnecessary. Imperators II(Talk) 22:30, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Halle Burtoni

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  1. Nice job! - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:27, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Indeed! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 02:57, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Looks good! Cevan IMPpress (talk) 02:54, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Fantastic! Shayn Mikel (talk) 22:20, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Object

AV
  • Can you find a quote for the Bts section, perhaps from one of the Blu-Ray TCW sets?
  • Mention that phase II armor was specifically an improvement over phase I?
    • I feel like that's implied with "upgrade over." - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:17, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
      • The reason I say this is because it currently links clone trooper armor while Phase II specifically improved on Phase I. Mayeb change it so that it says "an upgrade over Phase I clone trooper armor"?
        • I changed it so the word "standard" links to Phase I. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:24, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
  • Maybe mention Mot-Not Rab at the end of the first paragraph in the Biography section along with Amedda and Deechi? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 02:44, December 30, 2015 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Just one question I'd like to see addressed: How was Teckla Minnau an example of the war harming the people of the Republic? IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:59, July 2, 2016 (UTC)
    • Just saw this now. I didn't add the specifics because it seemed superfluous for this character's article. I can add it, though. Just need to double check the episode as a reminder. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 14:37, August 7, 2016 (UTC)
Cevan
  • What exactly is the emboldened part of the following sentence trying to say?
    "Senator Amidala gave another speech before the full Senate, arguing that the financial costs for a troop increase would cripple to the conflict, and that more clones would only escalate the Clone Wars." Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:58, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Height appears to be infobox-exclusive.
  • This is minor, but the term "the continuation of the Clone Wars" is used twice in close succession in the intro. Can we have some variation here?
  • Some thoughts on capitalization of titles, specifically the three following: senator, loyalist, chancellor
    • "senator" appears to be consistently capitalized, no matter if it's used as a title (Senator of Kamino) or as a description (Kaminoan Senator). The article should probably reflect this. (see Burtoni's DB entry for instance)
    • "loyalist" also appears to be capitalized even when not using the full name (Loyalist Committee); Bail Organa's DB entry uses "Loyalist factions" for examples, so one could probably apply the same standards for "Loyalist senators"
    • whereas Supreme Chancellor is always capitalized in that way, I'm not 100% the same goes for Chancellor, even though I would assume it does. Thoughts?
  • Check your image caption punctuation. Only full sentences get a full stop.
  • Reference 13 is completely broken.
  • All references with external links, including IMDb, require backup links. 1358 (Talk) 18:39, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Mee Deechi

  • Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:14, December 31, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Apparently I'm on a bit of a TCW political kick lately. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:17, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

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  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 00:19, May 8, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:51, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 02:06, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Object

AnilSerifoglu
  • Exact date of death can be added. I think it is "c. 21 years before the Battle of Yavin", regarding the timeline of canon media. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:07, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure how I would source that. The timeline of canon media is saying "Senate Murders" is at least 1 year into the war, not that it's circa 21 years before the Battle of Yavin. What would you recommend in terms of satisfying this objection?—which I would also note that, had there not been a question about it, would have easily been a "sofixit" objection that you could have added to the page on your own. I'm glad you brought it up here since there is a question about it, but that's something to think about for the future. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 23:40, May 7, 2016 (UTC)
      • I agree with you, it should stay as it is. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 00:19, May 8, 2016 (UTC)
AV
  • Could we get air dates for the episodes in the Bts? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:35, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • I don't see why that's relevant. Do other articles use air dates? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 22:53, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • The date of death is infobox-exclusive, and it can't be sourced to Senate Murders.
    • Someone else added that during the course of this nomination. I know of no sourceable way to pinpoint exact Clone Wars dates at this time, so I've reverted it back to how I had it originally. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:03, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
  • Please add backup links to the IMDB templates, or better yet, change the episode airdate references to a more reliable source. Imperators II(Talk) 15:49, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

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L'ulo L'ampar

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 08:51, January 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first character nom

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  1. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 02:51, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Figured it was high time I reviewed this considering events in the comic from earlier this year. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:07, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
  3. A interesting character. JS-4422 (talk) 10:19, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Manoof
  • Straight off the bat, this page is in a maintenance category (templates with invalid url parameters). You'll have to go through your urls and fix this. It'll probably be one of your references, check the template page as it probably doesn't need the full url. For example, the starwars.com links don't need the http://www.starwars.com/ section of the url, and including it adds it to the category. I only noticed as I'm cleaning these categories up. As it's a nomination, I thought I'd drop a note so you can keep it in mind for future edits/nominations :) Manoof (talk) 10:17, April 19, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:56, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Alright, I think I snagged 'em all. - Cwedin(talk) 01:57, October 5, 2016 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • "Near the war's end, Lieutenant L'ampar participated in the Rebellion's attack on the Galactic Empire's second Death Star in the Battle of Endor," I feel like it's not entirely fair to call it "near the end" as it went on for another year and Endor can be considered the tipping point.
    • Fair point, fixed.
      • Is there some sort of more specific canonical timeline for this? I gather from the bio that three months after Endor, L'ulo was informed there was no foreseeable end, and then that the war ended "less than a year later", which could mean 3+10 months for example (making "final year" inaccurate). If you can't find a more specific timeline, I suggest replacing the "final year" with just 4 ABY.
        • Lost Stars states that Jakku was a year and four days after Endor, so I'd say "less than a year" is accurate. I would use "nine months later," but it isn't clear when the NR was formed.
          • Erm, how exactly is "a year and four days" less than a year? Either go with penultimate, or better yet, just "4 ABY".
            • My intended wording was "less than a year [after Bey resignation and the NR's formation], Jakku happened." Since Bey resigned 3 months after Endor, and Endor was 12 months before Jakku, it has to be less than a year... Also, 4 ABY wouldn't be correct in this instance, so I've just rephrased the sentence to be in relation with Endor.
              • I'm talking about the intro. "In the war's final year, Lieutenant L'ampar participated in the Rebellion's attack on the Galactic Empire's second Death Star in the Battle of Endor"
  • " which former–Rebellion leader Leia Organa viewed as a threat to the New Republic." I'm not entirely sure what purpose the dash here serves.
    • It served absolutely none, and it's gone.
  • "L'ampar's comrades mourned his death, and Dameron located Tekka on the desert planet Jakku, completing Black Squadron's mission." This almost makes it sound as if Dameron wasn't one of the comrades mourning his death. You need a better way to connect the first clause with the rest of the sentence.
    • I've broken it up into two sentences and rephrased it a bit.
  • The MoS stipulates that ranks only be capitalized when they precede a name. Not the case here: "Holding the rank of Lieutenant, L'ampar flew as a Rebel pilot in Green Squadron"
    • Fixed.
  • In the same sentence, you have two consecutive clauses with flying/flew; please reword: "L'ampar flew as a Rebel pilot in Green Squadron, flying an RZ-1 A-wing interceptor"
    • I've changed the instance of "flying" to "operating."
  • I don't think Battle of Endor is linked in the body at all. I'd sofixit but I'm not sure where to put it.
    • Done.
  • "the Executor, an Executor-class Star Dreadnought[9] and the mightiest ship in the Imperial Navy." Can "mightiest" be sourced to whatever it's sourced to right now? In any case, I recommend finding a better description such as being the command ship in the Battle (Encyclopedia-Logo Super Star Destroyer in the Encyclopedia (link now obsolete; backup link))
    • I've updated the description as suggested.
  • Based on the body, L'ampar automatically assumed/was given command as a result of Green Leader's sacrifice. I feel like this could be better explained in the intro (maybe "assumed command"?).
    • Done.
  • "When L'ampar was approached by Green Four Shara Bey, she inquired if she could join the festivities." This needs to be reworded: She approaches L'ampar TO inquire; this can probably be fixed by removing the "When" and and replace the "she" with "who".
    • Done.
  • "Informed of their new mission, the troops, led by Solo and the Pathfinders, launched an assault on the outpost. Aided by the Ewoks, the Rebels defeated the remaining Imperials, only to discover Imperial data and communications confirming that the war was not yet over." This is not particularly relevant to L'ampar and can be condensed into a single sentence.
    • Done.
  • "Seventeen days after the Battle of Endor, L'ampar commanded Green Squadron, and with the BTL-A4 Y-wing assault starfighter/bombers of Feral Group, he engaged Imperial starfighters in the battle of Cawa City. The capital of Sterdic IV, Cawa City was was dominated by persisting Imperial forces." Several issues here. The second sentence exists only to give context here and it feels out of place especially as it comes after the first mention of Cawa City. Furthermore, naming the starfighter model of Feral Group is probably not important here; it can be mentioned later on. The battle of Cawa City is also a conjectural name and linking it like that is discouraged.
    • I've restructured the phrasing and moved the links around.
      • Was L'ampar also commanding Feral Group? If not, you should probably move the "alongside Feral group" to after the endash clause to make it clear.
        • Done.
  • "Soon after, the Rebellion formally created the New Republic" As far as I know, the rebellion turned into the New Republic rather than creating the NR as a separate instance, which is what it sounds like here.
    • Fixed.
  • In "Mission to the Crèche", you have two consecutive sentences where something's being created. This gets a bit repetitive.
    • Changed "created" to "organized."
  • "Black Squadron then lost contact with Dameron, and a moment before L'ampar entered the cavern to find him, the transmission was restored." Did he enter the cavern anyway? This is either a tense issue or very unclear.
    • He did not enter the cavern. I've reworded it, but I'm not sure if it's any clearer.
  • "Dameron reported that he was fine, but he found a tracker on his ship, and the First Order was likely to arrive soon." Same issue here. Did he find it after reporting he was fine? Or should it this be more like "that he was fine but that he had found a tracker..."?
    • The second one. I've rephrased it that way.
  • re[[fuel]] This kind of linking is discouraged as the first part of the word does not become part of the link. Please pipelink the entire word.
    • Fixed.
  • Can we please replace the parenthetical clause with endashes instead? (or anything else for that matter)
  • Halfway there. I'll go over the first half once more once these are addressed. 1358 (Talk) 21:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
  • For what it's worth, it's not necessary to list every single organization in the command tree in the affiliation section in the infobox. Right now, words get cut off due to the indenting. I'd recommend removing the Military/Fleet and Military/Navy bullets.
    • Done.
  • Right now Palpatine's death is kind of intro-exclusive; it's only implied in the bio. I'd recommend replacing "Succeeding in their mission" with something like "With the superweapon gone and Emperor Palpatine dead..."
    • Done.
  • "The attack brought down the Executor's shields, and Crynyd, seeing a chance to even the odds, sacrificed himself in a suicide run to destroy the capital ship's bridge" This is referenced to the Databank but I can't see it there.
    • It's from the image 5 caption in the history gallery. The A-wing Databank page/gallery is referenced a few times, so I just lopped them into a single reference. Should they be broken up a bit?
      • Ah, didn't see that. It's fine as it is.
  • "Not wanting to leave unfinished business, General Han Solo held a briefing in Bright Tree Village, for which L'ampar was present." Can this be rewritten from L'ampar's perspective, i.e. "L'ampar was present at blah blah"? 1358 (Talk) 10:05, September 6, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • I'd like to see the biography further subsectioned. "Empire's end" can be split into an Endor section and a post-Endor section. "Mission to the Crèche" and "Visiting Grakkus" can both be split into two, and Legacy can be its own subsection.
    • Done. I'll look into grabbing some additional quotes.
      • Leaving this unstruck until quotes are found.
        • Quotes are now in. - Cwedin(talk) 03:39, September 18, 2017 (UTC)
  • "Soon after Dameron joined, he underwent missions allowing the Resistance to intercept intelligence claiming that Luke Skywalker, Organa's exiled brother and the last Jedi in the galaxy, was being searched for by the First Order. Desperate to find him first, Organa tasked Dameron to locate Lor San Tekka, an explorer believed to know Skywalker's whereabouts." Can we condense this a bit? It doesn't concern L'ampar very much.
    • Done.
  • "simply requesting "leverage."" I feel like this stands out a bit. It's pretty clear that he's requesting aid and you should probably just go with that.
    • Not sure why I kept that quote.
  • " the Duros flew past the enemy platform" What platform are we talking about here? 1358 (Talk) 17:27, September 6, 2017 (UTC)
    • The aforementioned First Order transport. I've added a new link and made the word choice more consistent. - Cwedin(talk) 03:05, September 9, 2017 (UTC)
  • Good job so far. I'll continue with my review shortly. 1358 (Talk) 19:42, September 14, 2017 (UTC)
Ecks Dee, part deux
  • "Once the squadron arrived in the space station which operated the prison" This needs to be clarified. How does a space station operate a prison? A cursory glance at the space station article seems to indicate the space station merely projected an anti-gravity field on the surface prison to protect the prisoners from the high gravity outside the field.
  • "However, the guards had been bribed" Do we know who bribed the guards?
  • "The Grakks then picked up L'ampar and the other pilots" Where do they get picked up? The prior sentence indicates they entered the castle but this one explicitly says Dameron entered his home.
  • "When L'ampar questioned if they should enter Grakkus' fortress and check on him, but Pava replied that trusting Dameron was a safer option than facing the mob of prisoners. As Pava finished" Finished doing what? Talking? Also, "When…, but" isn't a proper sentence construction.
  • It's been a while since Terex was mentioned and I for one had to scroll up to find out. Maybe some brief context could be useful when he's reintroduced here.
  • In general, "Visiting Grakkus" is quite PBP in some parts and you should take a look and see if you can make it more concise. You don't need to cover every remark L'ulo makes to Dameron and vice versa.
  • "and the crowd of prisoners outside Grakkus' walls began to break into the enclosure. L'ampar and the rest of Black Squadron were quickly outnumbered, so Dameron told his squadron to retreat into Grakkus' fortress" What exactly is the enclosure here? The fortress? Then how can they retreat into the fortress in the second sentence?
  • "also telling the Duros to retrieve guns for them." From where?
  • "Fully armed, Black Squadron shot down the door to Grakkus' fortress" I'm not sure you can shoot down a door; that's generally reserved for air/space combat. I would've changed it to "destroyed" but I'm not familiar with the source so I don't know if they destroyed it or just shot a hole in it.
  • "Black Squadron returned to the orbiting station, finding a shuttle for the Hutt." How did they return there? They arrived on the planet with a ferry, but how did they get back? Did they find a shuttle on the space station or was the shuttle used for getting into orbit?
  • "When L'ampar and the rest of Black Squadron discovered Dameron's plight" How did they discover it?
  • The PBP issue mentioned earlier is also present in "Sacrifice". You don't need to tell the reader about every single line of dialogue shared between Black Squadron. 1358 (Talk) 13:48, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

Quick note. Although there's no way to know for sure at this point, it's very possible that the Duros on the cover of Star Wars: Poe Dameron 3 is L'ulo. If he's in multiple issues of the Poe Dameron comic, which wouldn't surprise me given his connection to Shara, then this nomination will no longer satisfy FAN requirement #6. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:40, April 2, 2016 (UTC)

  • I've noticed that too. Hopefully we get an answer come Wednesday! (In the meantime, I'll be copy-editing the article. It could use a cleanup.) - Cwedin(talk) 17:06, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
    • Want me to do a copy-edit? Whenever I write something, I always miss things that other people end up finding for me. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:11, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
      • That would be fantastic! Also, if you have any tips on updating the article's images, that would be great. (I feel they're poorly utilized at the moment.) - Cwedin(talk) 17:20, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
        • Think I'll do a quick run-through after Brandon. Great Job, Cwedin! Nivlacanator(talk) 22:36, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
          • Haven't looked at this yet (sorry!), but as it turns out, the Duros in Poe Dameron IS indeed L'ulo. So he'll likely be recurring for awhile now. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:31, April 6, 2016 (UTC)
            • Yup, I just picked up a copy. I'll try to keep the article maintained with each issue's release (life allowing). :P - Cwedin(talk) 17:39, April 6, 2016 (UTC)


Volik

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 16:48, January 18, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "Are you tired of your stressful life in the Core? Then come visit our wonderful resort on Volik! Hunt bountiful game, engage in a challenging climbing experience, and dine on exotic food! Updated: Please beware of the local pirates and smugglers, it appears they are very active this season."

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  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:18, June 4, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:48, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Excellent work. This is why I love Star Wars canon. An utterly minor and insignificant topic given minute level of historical detail. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:12, August 30, 2017 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote 1358 (Talk) 19:22, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

Object

SE
  • Can you add the system into the intro?
    • Added, although I really think it's unnecessary.
  • "Wildlife on the planet included predators that stalked their prey on the plains" Do we know what kinds of predators, or does it just refer to predators in general?
    • The source just mentions "predators", birds & other flying creatures, and the herbivore reyko. Imperators II(Talk) 06:43, February 2, 2017 (UTC)
  • Is there an article for Vader's attack on Volik? Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:56, February 2, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I think it would be better for this sentence to specify who discovered it: "...the mask of Darth Nihilus, which was ultimately discovered in the remains of the Nashuaga." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:12, August 28, 2017 (UTC)
    • Added.
  • I regretfully feel I need to suspend my review in order for you to handle this objection before I proceed further. Twelve of the Bio's fifteen paragraphs start out with virtually the exact same wording: "Around this time," "During that time," "At some point," "During the reign," etc. It gets really repetitive after a while. Please find different ways to vary how these paragraphs start out. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:54, August 28, 2017 (UTC)
    • I guess that's a common pitfall when writing about many short, unrelated events. Should be okay now, please take a look. Imperators II(Talk) 13:59, August 29, 2017 (UTC)

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Shara Bey

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:37, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
  2. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 02:56, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Cwedin(talk) 03:08, April 21, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Harshg (talk) 18:50, April 23, 2016 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:38, July 18, 2016 (UTC)
  6. --Lewisr (talk) 00:04, July 24, 2016 (UTC)
  7. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 15:52, October 21, 2016 (EET)

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Cevan
  • The opening credits of the third issue of Shattered Empire reveals that Bey and Dameron joined the Alliance prior to the Battle of Hoth, so it may be wise to somehow work that into the first section of the biography. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:19, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
    • Good catch. Added. And thanks for adding all those links. Honestly I generally have no idea that half of these pages even exist. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:35, April 2, 2016 (UTC)
Floyd
  • "One of the operations Bey undertook was the Beltire Liberation. Seventeen days after the Battle of Endor, Bey flew in a battle in Cawa City on the planet Sterdic IV." Are these two the same thing? If not, I think this could be rewritten to differentiate these better.
    • They're not. I'm not sure how best to rewrite it. Any suggestions? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:13, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
  • Seeing some linking issues. I've added some that you missed, but you should give it a once-over.
    • This is generally something I'm bad at since most of the subjects I miss are so minor, so thanks for adding what I (and Cevan, who also helped out) missed. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:13, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
  • I haven't read these comics, but Bey seems like she's a relatively major character. As such, the P&T looks very skimpy. IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:36, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
    • She is the main character. This is a comprehensive (if not brief) overview of her personality. This may not be something you can answer without having read the comic, but if you have suggestions for how to expand it then that'd be great. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:13, June 7, 2016 (UTC)
      • I would suggest doing another read-through of her comic appearances, and focus specifically on trying to parse through what she says and does to find aspects of her personality. That's usually what I do. No offense, but this reads like you wrote the bio and then kind of did this as an afterthought. IFYLOFD (Talk) 23:21, June 9, 2016 (UTC)
        • Forgot to update here, but I'm working on this. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:35, June 20, 2016 (UTC)
          • Shooting to finish this today. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 13:48, July 13, 2016 (UTC)
            • I've expanded the P&T. It's somewhat redundant to information throughout the article (which was why I kept it brief in the first place), but hopefully I've written it in such a way that makes up for that. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 19:05, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi

Comments

The article has been updated to include new information from Star Wars: Poe Dameron: Flight Log. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 20:34, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

  • The reason I bring this up here is because it was added long after I voted in support, but I notice someone has added Rampant Squadron to her affiliation list however it's not mentioned in the main article. Does flying assist for a squadron make her a part of that squadron? Seems better to remove that from the infobox --Lewisr (talk) 13:06, June 9, 2017 (UTC)
    • Flying assist would not make her part of that squadron, no, so I removed it from the infobox. I did, however, add the fact that she flew assist into the Biography. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 15:24, June 9, 2017 (UTC)


Rescue of Tseebo

  • Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:33, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I think I started writing this 8 or 9 months ago, but I got super lazy with it. So I'm glad it's finally finished. Thank you to Cevan for giving it a once-over and link check before I posted this nomination. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 03:33, April 5, 2016 (UTC)

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  1. Harshg (talk) 10:20, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  2. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 14:00, April 5, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Lewisr (talk) 00:19, June 1, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Seems I forgot to actually put my name down for supporting this nomination, but here it is now. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 21:20, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

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Ecks Dee
  • Question: Do you think a better image could be found for the infobox? Maybe one with more action?
  • Another question: Do you feel like it's really necessary with having a main bullet and a sub-bullet for the Inquisitor, Tseebo, and Tano in the Strength section of the infobox? I feel like you could just go with one top-level bullet for each. Using sub-bullets makes sense for groups with more than one individual/vehicles/etc, but I don't think they add anything in this case.
  • The word "rescue" is used three times in the first two sentences; any chance of some variation here?
  • The term "the rebels" is also overused in the intro. Would it be possible to name the Spectres and then use their name in some places?
  • "the city was locked down after the rebels bombed an Empire Day parade." This feels a bit disjointed. When did the bombing happen? During the escape? Please connect this better to the rest of the intro.
  • "The rebels eluded the ISB Agent and escaped onto the Ghost, whose pilot and captain, Hera Syndulla, rescued her crew from the Imperial pursuit." This is a bit unclear. Did they first make their way onto the Ghost and then Syndulla arrived to rescue them? The body makes it sound like Syndulla arrived in the Ghost just in time to save the day. Maybe something like "Eluding the ISB Agent, the rebels were rescued from Imperial pursuit by the arrival of Hera Syndulla..." would make this clearer?
  • "The Ghost escaped, but" Escaped where?
  • Since I'm not familiar with SWR... did the rebels eventually do anything with Tseebo's data that could be mentioned in the intro?
  • "and the information he received in the headpiece overwhelmed his mind." I'm not exactly sure what's being said here? It almost sounds like he went insane. Can you clarify this a bit?
  • "as the Jedi hunter suspected that the Ghost would be waiting to rendezvous with its crew. As the Grand Inquisitor prepared to chase them" Two consecutive (even if they're in different sentences) that start with "as the". Please vary.
  • I believe mentions such as "the ISB Agent" should not capitalize the title of agent; "Agent Kallus" is fine but Kallus' DB entry doesn't seem to capitalize "agent" when it's used on its own.
  • Halfway there. 1358 (Talk) 17:03, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

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J'Quille

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:24, April 9, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: When I started writing up this article I did not realise Tim Dry had written an entire book about it.

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  1. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 16:42, June 11, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:38, October 30, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Awesome! - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:35, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

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Jorrel
  • "Early in the war, the Whipid witnessed the Sith Lord Darth Vader visiting Jabba in order to request the services of the Hutt's best bounty hunters, but was expelled from Jabba's throne room along with the rest of the court so that the pair could speak in private." - Reads a bit awkwardly. Maybe split into two sentences? JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 15:10, June 11, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Per FAN rule 9, this article cannot have any redlinks.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:57, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:03, October 4, 2016 (UTC)
      • It looks like another one was added since you fixed the earlier ones.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:37, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
        • Damn I was hoping someone else would do that before an objection was made. Oh well, after an entire Sunday morning 'tis done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:17, November 6, 2016 (UTC)
AV
  • According to Pablo, 100 Scenes is actually pre-Story Group; that source will have to be removed and the article updated to say the updated Char Encyclopedia was the first ID. - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:41, February 7, 2017 (UTC)
    • My internet is finally fixed! And so is this article! Good times. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:13, February 7, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • The backup links for the Whiphid and Saelt-Marae DB entries need to be fixed.
    • Fixed them, although I can't get the id=bts field to work. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:13, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
      • That was because the functionality of including the "id" parameter in the backup link was not present in the DB template at the time. I tried adding it, but it still didn't work. :P Imperators II(Talk) 19:11, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • Any way to restore the "Sean Crawford's website" link? Imperators II(Talk) 16:27, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done and added the proper webcite template. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:13, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • Jabba's full name in the infobox can't be sourced to the ROTJ. I urge you to take this as an opportunity to double-check whether all the other proper names and terms in the article are properly referenced.
    • Fixed and checked through and everything looks good to me. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
      • I pipelinked the Alliance to the Rebel Alliance, I hope that's still supported by the referencing?
  • Vader's dating ref needs some more work. It needs thorough linking and some restructuring, since it awkwardly uses two clauses with "as" in the same sentence.
    • Changed it up a bit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
      • OK, as I understand it from the note, the Galactic Atlas establishes a "no later than" date of 0 ABY for Vader's visit to Tatooine. The other thing needed, then, is a "no earlier than" date of 0 ABY for that visit. I take it that's established by Darth Vader 1 (btw, what kind of lame comic title and subtitle combination is Darth Vader 1: Vader? :P), but is the comic explicitly set in the year 0 ABY, or is just "after the Battle of Yavin"? If it's the latter, you should add a source in that explains what "0 ABY" means and therefore why everything happening after Battle of Yavin must be ABY. Imperators II(Talk) 10:58, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
        • Galactic Atlas, as our only actual source of dates also establishes that, which I've added in. God to I miss the far more regular official dating of events in Legends. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:18, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
  • "The Rebels arrive" section needs an image. (Look at the article in the Oasis skin.)
    • Added 2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
      • Nice! Can you please vary the captions of either the Vader pic or the Leia pic so that they're not so similar?
        • Ah good point. Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:18, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
  • The ref for 4 ABY needs to be expanded into a note since it doesn't mention J'Quille... you know the drill.
  • In the intro you say Vader's visit happened "early in the war" but there's nothing in the article's body that supports this.
    • Changed to the year. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • Unless it's stated in canon that J'Quille was also subjected to B'omarr's practices, I don't really see how the mention of those practices is relevant to the character. Imperators II(Talk) 19:11, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
    • It seems like important context for the order, but I've removed it for now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:31, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • Please create a category for members of the B'omarr Order. Imperators II(Talk) 19:40, September 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • Please add {{Imagecat}}.
  • Did Vader ask for two specific bounty hunters or just the two of the best?
  • Wouldn't "ordered the execution" be more appropriate than "demanded" (both in intro and article's body)?
  • Solo's profession is intro-exclusive. So is Chewbacca's status as Solo's companion. Imperators II(Talk) 10:58, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The intro is 369 words long, while the Bio is 787. That's 47% of the Bio's length. For an article this size, that's way too long of an intro. I'd suggest opening this article up in Oasis skin to get a better idea of what most of our readers are seeing. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:46, September 16, 2017 (UTC)
    • Cut it down, is that enough? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:53, September 16, 2017 (UTC)
      • It's good, but I'd probably recommend cutting out the part about being present for Vader, which isn't a major detail. That will make it easier to combine the rest of that paragraph with either the end of the first or the beginning of the last. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:23, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

  • I could not find the ISBN for Tim Dry's book anywhere and I'm not sure one even exists since it's only an ebook. I've included the ASIN instead since I wasn't sure what to include, but if it needs removing then let me know. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, April 9, 2016 (UTC)


Naga Sadow

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:29, May 31, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Finally done after way too friggin' long.

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  1. Brandon Rhea(talk) 02:23, June 1, 2016 (UTC)

Object

  1. Categories were removed when you added your rewrite. I re-added what was there beforehand but—since I don't know the subject matter—can you check to make sure those are still correct and up to date, now that the article has been revamped? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 14:28, May 31, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Both the ref named "dlots5" and the ref named "dlots3" reference Tales of the Jedi: Dark Lords of the Sith 5: Sith Secrets. I could make an assumption as to what's what here, but I'd rather not, and I can't even begin to run any cleanup tools on this article without this ref being fixed. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 12:01, June 4, 2017 (UTC)
    • Fixed. IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:21, June 6, 2017 (UTC)
    • After your first major edit of this article and ever since, there has been an unclosed ref in the BTS section. I restored the original references with this edit, but feel free to adjust/undo that if necessary. Just a note while I continue reviewing this thing. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 00:55, June 7, 2017 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Reference 39 should use {{Cite_web}} and include a backup link etc. Reference 47 lacks text altogether.
  • At least some of the Databank entries listed in the Sources have broken backup links. You'll need to use IA and find the latest working version and add it to the templates.
  • I'm not sure what the deal is with Holonet icon allegiances Khem Val on The Old Republic Holonet (link obsolete; backup link) in the Sources, but the original link seems to work just fine.
  • You should use {{CSWECite}} in the Sources and include the entry name (but not the page number), as per the MOS. 1358 (Talk) 22:04, September 18, 2017 (UTC)
    • Disregard this, it turns out Sadow has his own entry in the CSWE. 1358 (Talk) 22:11, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

  • I already tried to address this on the article's talk page, but to no avail. Although I realize that the current infobox picture is the most detailed and awesome headshot of Sadow we can get, it is also inaccurate. On that pic, his skin is pale yellow, when Sadow was clearly described as red-skinned in multiple sources from the original Tales of the Jedi: The Golden Age of the Sith to the more recent Lost Tribe of the Sith series. When I GANd Hakagram Graush, I was asked to move the picture of Ajunta Pall beheading him because it contradicted a single textual evidence. This headshot, however, contradicts many sources. I don't want to add this as an objection (because I think it's high time Sadow becomes an FA, and the article rocks), but still wanted to point it out. --LelalMekha (talk) 08:10, May 31, 2016 (UTC)
    • Good point. I'm going to leave it up for now simply for lack of options, but if I can find a suitable one I'll swap it out. The problem, as you know, is that there aren't any really good headshots of him - even the New Essential Guide to Characters basically depicts him as looking human. IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:21, June 3, 2016 (UTC)


Arkanian Legacy

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 16:48, June 13, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This one goes out to my boy Cody Rhodes.

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Exiled Jedi
  • The description mentions that it could house up to 104,179 people and that it had a crew of 5,000. Is the 5,000 crew included in the 104,179 people? That is what the article seems to state currently.
  • Reference 16 and the external link lead to a 404 error. Is it possible to find a backup link or another source for this?
  • Please provide archive links for references 14 and 15 per the sourcing policy.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 01:13, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

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Eejee Vamm

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 06:22, June 22, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: WHOOOOAH BLACKBETTY VAMMALAMM

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Ecks Dee
  • Some of the paragraphs are pretty huge, especially when you look at them in Oasis. Considering 99% of our readers use Oasis or the mobile skins, this is an issue Monobook editors need to keep in mind.
  • I feel like the article would benefit from at least one additional image. A section break could allow another quote as well.
  • Just asking: Can 3963 BBY be sourced to whatever it's being sourced to right now?
  • While emdashes are cool, too much is too much. Please remove at least a couple of them. Also keep in mind references go before the dash.
  • Reference 11 requires a backup link as per WP:S. 1358 (Talk) 19:44, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

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HK-24 series assassin droid

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:40, July 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Here's a first: Floyd doing a droid class article.

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Ecks Dee
  • Most of our other droid class articles employ a Role section. I feel like it would be appropriate here, as some of the stuff in Description would be a better fit in Role.
  • Can we include the estimated value from the infobox somewhere in the body?
  • Just checking: Can the year 3963 BBY be sourced to Knights of the Old Republic 13: Days of Fear, Part 1?
  • Like Eejee Vamm, this article is very emdash-heavy. They break up the flow of the text and should be used sparingly. Furthermore, references go before the dash, not after.
  • Reference 10 needs a backup link. 1358 (Talk) 19:52, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

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Seregar

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 13:17, July 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Real bush territory.

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  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:07, November 1, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:53, December 9, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote 1358 (Talk) 11:03, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:10, September 7, 2017 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:11, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

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Toprawa
  • It would be nice to see the History and maybe even Locations subsectioned.
  • The source explicitly states Type I atmosphere? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:50, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

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Malakili

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  1. Nice work. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 18:39, August 12, 2016 (UTC)
  2. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 21:55, October 25, 2016 (EET)
  3. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:10, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Never expected this guy to have such a life --Lewisr (talk) 01:12, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
    • Probably one of my favorite background characters in the whole saga, and a great article to go along with him! --Jabot164 21:23, November 23, 2016 (EST) (Vote struck per policy: User has not made 50 main namespace edits -- Darth Culator (Talk) 18:36, January 8, 2017 (UTC))
  5. --Lelal Mekha The Uprising crest (Audience Room) 20:13, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

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AV
  • Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know confirms that Pateesa was a male rancor; as such, this should be mentioned in the article and all instances of "it" in reference to Pateesa should be changed to a male personal pronoun. - 17:56, August 12, 2016 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • The article is going to need a update due to Star Wars: Complete Locations (2016). The book still claims that Malakili and Porcellus start up a restaurant in Mos Eisley after the rancor's death. It also shows his room which should probably be mentioned in some way, perhaps its location in the castle at least. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, October 9, 2016 (UTC)
    • Alright, thanks for the heads up! (again) - Cwedin(talk) 16:18, October 9, 2016 (UTC)
Cevan
  • A canon page will need to be made for mayor. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:37, October 28, 2016 (UTC)
LelalMekha
  • The Force Awakens: Head-to-Head has a few elements you should add to the article: he weighs 95 kilograms and is described as an antisocial who only shows tenderness and sympathy towards animals. He felt sorry for the rancor's brutal existence, and planned to one day escape with the beast. --Lelal Mekha The Uprising crest (Audience Room) 09:11, April 3, 2017 (UTC)
    • Thanks for finding that! At this rate, Lucasfilm might as well make Malakili: A Star Wars Story. - Cwedin(talk) 20:22, April 3, 2017 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Preliminary objections: Do we really need to employ a scroll box for the Notes and references? There's no scrollbar at all in Monobook and the LG recommends no scrollbox with less than 40 references.
  • The External links sections appears a bit overpopulated. Not every cursory mention on SW.com requires listing. See if you can cut it down to the most relevant stuff.
  • Instead of listing just "Star Wars: Card Trader" in the Sources, you should use {{Topps}} and list individual cards.
  • Do we really need to include (Formerly) in the infobox? From our point of view, everything happened a long time ago.
  • Can you cut down on the intro a bit? It's quite long for an article with just two Bio sections.
  • No quote for "Beastmaster for the Hutts"?
  • The first half of the Bio is really emdash heavy. Emdashes are useful but should be used sparingly as they break the flow of the text. See if you can remove at least some of them. 1358 (Talk) 20:03, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

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Taris Resistance

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 16:48, June 13, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: These guys got their shit wrecked.

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Rys

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:39, August 31, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Apparently I can't count

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 21:45, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Emperor Jarjarkine MP-Mandalorian Senate Hall 21:57, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Eddiebox28 (talk) 17:41, December 30, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Nice work! - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 15:02, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

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Cevan
  • Any chance of getting a higher quality and/or larger version of File:Clones fight on Rugosa.png? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:13, October 26, 2016 (UTC)
    • I've uploaded an uncropped version of the shot, is that any better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:12, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
      • Yeah, that's definitely clearer-looking. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 21:45, October 27, 2016 (UTC)
  • Could you add in that Rys was a clone of Jango at the beginning of the biography section? Also, the info about Rys being born on Kamino will need to have a citation for Episode II or the Clone Troopers Databank entry, and the bit about the Coruscant Guard operating on Coruscant will need to have a citation for something else as well. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:13, October 26, 2016 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • I'd like to see the intro condensed a bit. The article isn't that long and Rys is only mentioned in the last sentence of the second paragraph of the intro.
    • Done. How's it look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:30, September 21, 2017 (UTC)
  • "Rys was assigned as a clone shock trooper" You're assigned to something, not as, so you'll have to change something here. You could say he was assigned to the Coruscant Guard, but this needs some restructuring.
  • "In the year 22 BBY,[4] Rys was one of three clones from the Guard picked to accompany the" I think you should introduce the two other clones here instead of later on.
  • "a moon close to the planet Toydaria." It's been too long since I saw "Ambush", but can this be sourced to the episode itself? If not, Rugosa's DB entry would work.
    • I thought it was in the opening narration but apparently not, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:30, September 21, 2017 (UTC)
  • "and as they opened fire on Yoda" This sounds like the clones opened fire on Yoda.
  • Rys isn't even mentioned in the last paragraph of the bio. You'll need to use something like "Rys and his squadmates" or something instead of just "the clone troopers".
  • The IMDb reference requires a backup link.
    • Replaced with a better reference more consistent with other status articles. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:30, September 21, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nine years since TCW premiered, damn... 1358 (Talk) 19:07, September 21, 2017 (UTC)
    • Sadly there's nothing I can do to change the passage of time. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:30, September 21, 2017 (UTC)
  • "picked up by Republic forces arriving to reinforce them." The reinforcement part is technically exclusive to the introduction right now—and I don't even remember if the episode established whether they were there as reinforcement or just to pick them up—so you could probably just remove it altogether.
  • Reference 1 talks about his place of birth, but is also used for referencing other things, like his height. You'll need to reword it or use separate references.
  • Reference 6 has some funky italics right now and the SW.com link should probably include a backup link to be on the safe side. 1358 (Talk) 22:18, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

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B1-268

  • Nominated by: Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:14, October 28, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Rest in peace to what may be the last command battle droid.

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  1. Great stuff Cevan! --Lewisr (talk) 02:35, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Agreed. Fantastic work! - Cwedin(talk) 02:39, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Very surprising that B1-268 has this much of behind-the-scenes info! --TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 16:38, October 29, 2016 (UTC)
  4. The Brave Goldfish (talk) 19:43, October 30, 2016 (EET)
  5. Harshg (talk) 12:29, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

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A nice character but he is not my favourite. JS-4422 (talk) 03:49, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

That's not a reason to object--201.142.240.228 04:08, September 22, 2017 (UTC)
Objection(s) overridden by Inquisitorius 00:42, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

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  • Someone decided to make Kalani holdout, I added it to the infobox but left where to put it in the article up to you, so you can put it where it feels best. --Lewisr (talk) 11:49, July 24, 2017 (UTC)
    • Thanks for telling me, Lewisr. I've gone ahead and linked it in the article. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 20:01, July 27, 2017 (UTC)


Haydel Goravvus

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:54, November 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Green alien dude.

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  1. Solid as always, Floyd. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 13:44, January 27, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Very nice work. ProfessorTofty (talk) 20:30, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

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ProfessorTofty
  • I found two things that weren't linked that really should have been - "swoop gang" and "politics." I took care of them, but because it wasn't just the one, I'm just going to make a general request that you have a scan through the article and look for anything else that might need linking. I have to log off now, I may be back with more objections later. ProfessorTofty (talk) 00:24, May 31, 2017 (UTC)
  • There seems to be some inconsistency as to whether not "resistance" is capitalized when referring to it as simply "Resistance" and not "Taris Resistance." I can see this in some cases, but in the intro you have "the Mandalorians hit the resistance first," yet later in the article you have "the Mandalorians used that climactic moment to strike directly at the Resistance base." ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:12, May 31, 2017 (UTC)
    • Both should be addressed. IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:21, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

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Lo-Taren

  • Nominated by: Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 05:02, January 11, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:I've actually been working on this while on a vacation.

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:55, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 23:01, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 06:29, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

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AV
  • Could we get air dates for the episodes mentioned in the Bts? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:52, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • Yes. Do you think there should only be the US air dates? Or should I include the others? --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:38, February 2, 2017 (UTC)
      • US is the standard; they're used in the early episode guides and in Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Episode Guide, so I'd use them. If the subject was from the lost missions, where they only aired on TV in Germany, IIRC, I might use those dates. - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:43, February 2, 2017 (UTC)
  • Are we sure that the Richard Green linked is the same one who voiced Lo-Taren? - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 19:59, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
    • Huh, I never even thought to check. From what a few stringent Google searches can bring up, Green the voice actor is not the same as the guy who worked on Rebel Assault. I guess I'll make a new page. Interesting, and thanks. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 21:52, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
Cevan
  • This may not be the easiest thing to do, but a canon page for beach will need to be made. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 15:30, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
    • I created a somewhat barebones article with the sources and appearances I could think of, plus anything related to the obvious beaches, like Kachiro and Scarif. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 19:07, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
Jim The Lamproid
  • The 'Jedi Temple Archives' of the Season 3 blu-ray reveal four deleted scenes that feature Lo-Taren, all being from Padawan Lost. I've ranked them in chronological order.
    • Lo-Taren is met by the other Trandoshans seen in the episode. He explains the Jedi Padawans jumped him. The other Trandoshans say that Ahsoka must have encouraged the others to put up a fight against their captors. They agree to let the Jedi rest for a 'more satisfying hunt'
    • A Snivvian and Sakiyan are eating fruit. They get spooked and run. Shortly afterwards, Lo-Taren and Ratter arrive at the scene. Picking up their scent, They call to the other Trandoshans.
    • Ahsoka is being watched by Lo-Taren, but before he can get a shot off, she uses the force to smash him into the ground.
    • Jinx and O-mer are being chased by Lo-Taren and Ratter, using their ability to appear almost invisible, an idea scrapped in production. They are sensed through the force, and a fight ensues. Lo-Taren gets his blaster kicked away by Jinx, so the fight escalates into physical combat. Just when it looks like the Trandoshans have the upper hand, the Padawans flip above their heads, and use the force to push them off a cliff. As the padawans make their escape, Lo-Taren and Ratter, clinging to the side of the cliff, are collected by Sochek in a hover pod. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 12:39, September 17, 2017 (UTC)
      • I'm not sure how the deleted scenes are presented, but are the Sakiyan and Snivvian Vadoo and Katt Mol? I'm most certain they are, since according to the Ep Guide they were supposed to be in more scenes, including one where they pair up. Thanks, though. This is good info. I'll add it shortly.--Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:24, September 20, 2017 (UTC)
        • Yeah, the Sakiyan and Snivvian are probably the ones you mentioned. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 06:28, September 21, 2017 (UTC)
  • The image captions need full stops. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 19:21, September 20, 2017 (UTC)
    • Nevermind, I know now only full sentences need 'em Jim The Lamproid (talk) 20:05, September 20, 2017 (UTC)
      • Fwiw, the objection is quite valid on this article. :P All the captions in the article are indeed full sentences so they require full stops. Generally if there's a verb in it, it's a full sentence. 1358 (Talk) 20:12, September 20, 2017 (UTC)
        • Huh, not sure why some were and some weren't, but you were right for this one. Just fixed them. Thanks. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:24, September 20, 2017 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Please use {{Topps}} for the Card Trader Sources entry and specify which card(s) the information is from. 1358 (Talk) 19:11, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

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Hey, given that Lo-Taren's date of death differs between Canon and Legends, should I mention that in the BtS? --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 09:15, August 17, 2017 (UTC)


TX-828

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 05:09, January 19, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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  1. Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (Talk) 19:14, March 7, 2017 (UTC)
  2. I like the see also section, something more articles should use. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:18, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
  3. I agree. JS-4422 (talk) 10:42, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
  4. Great stuff --Lewisr (talk) 17:28, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

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Ayrehead
  • Could you be slightly less vague in the last sentence of the intro? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:05, January 19, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Personally I'd say that the Rodian rebel deserves an article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:05, January 19, 2017 (UTC)
  • Will return to finish review later. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:05, January 19, 2017 (UTC)
    • Sorry for the slow reply, I'd some how failed to follow the page and see you'd responded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
  • You have 0 BBY and 0 ABY referenced to Smuggler's Run in the body, but I'm assuming an explanatory reference will be needed, at least for the former? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
    • A note for 0 ABY isn't really needed, but I've added a brief explanation for 0 BBY. - Cwedin(talk) 20:23, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
      • The note explains both well, but I'd just add a mention of Galactic Atlas in since the dating system isn't used in the novel. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:34, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
  • This is almost certainly going to need an update for Han and the Rebel Rescue. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
    • I'm counting on it. I'll update the article with any new information. - Cwedin(talk) 20:23, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
      • Just wanted to make sure you were aware. Weirdly Amazon claims they're going to deliver it to me tomorrow despite it not coming out till May. I assume this is an error, but I'll let you know what needs doing if it does show up early. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:34, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

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The Dragon

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:41, January 25, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I wrote this one over a year ago, but I've updated the comic publication date citations among other changes.

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:46, February 4, 2017 (UTC)

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Ayrehead
  • All three sub-sections of the biography could have relevant quotes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:53, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
    • Couldn't find anything. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 18:02, July 3, 2017 (UTC)
      • You can move the current bio quote to Imperial retribution and then put Thanoth's quote in issue eleven about using the Dragon's data in legacy. You could also have Doowan's quote about his location in the section Dealing with Doctor Aphra, although if you think it isn't relevant enough that's fine. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:13, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
  • Looking at it in the wikia skin, you could probably get at least one more image into the body of the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:53, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

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Karina the Great (Age of the Empire)

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  1. Harshg (talk) 13:55, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Awesome work! - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:02, February 10, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Hopefully we'll see her story continued at some stage. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:12, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

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AV
  • Again, US air dates for the episodes.
  • The Geonosis genocide can't be souced to "The Honorable Ones."
    • Forgot to add Ghosts of Geonosis as a reference to the sentence before that. Fixed. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:35, February 10, 2017 (UTC)
  • 2 BBY can't be sourced to "Ghosts of Geonosis."
  • Can we get a date for the events of the Darth Vader comic? - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 15:20, February 7, 2017 (UTC)
    • A timeline has yet to be established for the events of the comics, so there's no date I can put there. The fact that it's after the Battle of Yavin speaks for itself in the text. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:35, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

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Reklam Station

  • Nominated by: Dr. Porter Resistance starbird (Talk|Contribs) 12:41, January 30, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: About time I got this finished.

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  1. -Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (Talk)
  2. Impressive --Lewisr (talk) 02:44, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Most impressive Cevan IMPpress (talk) 13:16, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

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Cevan
  • Since Reklam Station is a modified construction module, could you reword the beginning of the description section's second paragraph to better reflect that? "The station itself consisted of a large dome-shaped structure identical to that of an Imperial construction module" makes it sound as if it merely looks like a construction module despite it actually being one. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:08, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

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G2 repair droid/Legends

  • Nominated by: Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:15, February 6, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: In commemoration for the 30th anniversary of Star Tours.

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  1. Sorry for the delay. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

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Ayrehead02
  • Where do the names A4-G2 and G2-7T actually come from? Looking in both sources they're referenced to, the images from their articles aren't named anywhere and I find it odd that both seem to have only first pictured listed in their appearances section. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:18, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • The opening sentence of the BTS seems to talk about a specific G2 not the series in general. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:18, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
  • "She went on to speculate that a G2's unending stream of conversation was responsible for problems with ships at Sluis Van Shipyards, out of which several ships had flows out of in the past several weeks, only to experience difficulty with one or more primary systems just after leaving the star system." This sentence needs some work, I assume flows out of is meant to just be flown? I'd also suggest changing up the use of several twice in a row. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:18, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

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EV-9D9

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:37, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

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Fred strikes back
  • There's a redlink in the infobox. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 06:13, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
    • Actually, I'm trying to get this nomination removed, as it is below 1,000 words, but I'll take care of it. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 15:32, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
      • Ah, gotcha. To the GAN.....eventually! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 08:15, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
        • It's already a GA, but thanks. Redlink is taken care of. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 21:29, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

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  • Reintegrating stuff from Beware the Power of the Dark Side! brought it back under, so this will have to be archived. - Pyke syndicate AV-6R7Crew Pit 15:59, February 8, 2017 (UTC)
    • Now sitting at 1,000 words exactly. - Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 21:54, May 17, 2017 (UTC)


Trios

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:48, February 15, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Been meaning to re-nominate this for a long time. Credit and thanks to JRT2010 for recent rewrites of some portions.

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Fred strikes back
  • Could we get just a little context on "War-Faith" in the "Princess of Shu-Torun" section?
    • There really isn't any context to give, the quote on the War-Faith page is the only mention. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:31, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
      • Should "War-Faith" even be capitalized? It's not in the quote. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 07:26, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
        • Like all comic dialogue the whole word was capitalised, but as it was a religion I assumed this would be the correct format. I can change it here and in other relevant articles if you disagree. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:09, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
          • That seems like sound enough logic to pass until we have it confirmed one way or another. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 05:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
  • More to come, hopefully tomorrow. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 09:13, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
  • I don't understand this: "...questioned the choice to spent time such a militarily insignificant location..." MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 05:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
    • Not sure how I missed this mess, I've fixed the sentence now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:59, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
  • Sorry for the delay in striking the objections. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 23:38, June 30, 2017 (UTC)

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  • It appears that Trios will be appearing in the main Star Wars comic run in the upcoming future. --Lewisr (talk) 16:55, August 1, 2017 (UTC)
    • I'll make sure I stay on top of any updates that need to be made. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:13, August 1, 2017 (UTC)


Rook Kast

  • Nominated by: Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:18, February 21, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The other canon Kast.

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  1. You could probably add another picture, but I'll leave it up to you. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:28, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Great work! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 01:43, June 7, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Let's hope Kast shows up in rebels --Lewisr (talk) 01:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

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Some things
  • Any chance you could expand the intro with contextual info and an oveerall summary on her bio?—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 13:48, February 27, 2017 (UTC)
    • I can try shortening and/or reworking it if you'd like, but how's that? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 18:00, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
      • Definitely needs shortening. I can take a pass at it, if you'd like. I strangely enjoy writing intros. >.> - Brandon Rhea(talk) 18:21, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
        • Yeah, I figured as such. If you'd like to have a go at it, be my guest! Cevan IMPpress (talk) 18:54, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
          • I cut it down to remove over-contexualization, so now it mostly just focuses on Kast while giving some basic context. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 19:29, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
            • Thanks Brandon, that looks great! Is that more to your liking, Jedi Kasra? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:37, February 28, 2017 (UTC)
              • Objection(s) overridden by Inquisitorius 00:42, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Could you subsection the body of the article please? Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:23, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
  • Since Rook appears in every issue of Son of Dathomir, I'm fairly certain the correct formatting is to simply list the series articles in appearances instead of all four issues. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:23, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
AnilSerifoglu
  • Can you please add that Son of Dathomir comics were based on unproduced The Clone Wars episodes? It is very likely that the character Rook Kast originate in those scripts. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

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  • It is only my personal preference, but I agree with Ayrehead02 that the article could use one or two more images. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)
    • Added two more images. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:43, June 6, 2017 (UTC)


Holdan

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  1. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 11:21, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Looks good to me! Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:40, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:28, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
  4. Seriously, kudos to people who write RPG articles. The number of possible situations one has to play through to get all possible outcomes is just exhausting for me to think about. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 00:30, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
    Hehe, I really was reloading game files like dozens of times for each character to get all possible dialogue options down. :P But then I discovered this which made things much easier, being a complete record of every dialogue as well as all game stats of characters, though for some time being as apprehensive as I was, I was still double-check through my own reloads. I thanked the dude that made that guide profusely, but sadly his KotOR 2 one is still a work in progress. Sol PacificusFirestorm 01:34, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
  5. Just letting you know that Dancer (erroneous link removed during my review) refers to Mara Jade's astromech droid. Otherwise good work. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:07, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

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Ayrehead
  • One small thing, could you mention that the bounty was 300 credits in the body of the article? The amount is still accurate even if it's never claimed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:11, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
    • Done. I wasn't sure if that was the best place to put it though, or if it should've been worded "300 credit bounty" instead. Sol PacificusFirestorm 13:32, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

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Krix

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  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:57, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:32, August 21, 2017 (UTC)
  3. Nice one! Jim The Lamproid (talk) 15:22, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

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Toprawa
  • Reference 5 works, but I think you need to qualify that statement. Leland is saying that [X] starship model from [Legends source] retains the same name in Canon, but you should specify what that Legends source is that names this ship model.
    • How does that note read for you? I was figuring I still needed the template.
      • Yes, that was the gist of what I was looking for. I spruced it up a little bit. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:53, August 19, 2017 (UTC)
  • The episode numbers and seasons in the BTS cannot be sourced straight to the episodes themselves. That's not self-sourcing, and the episodes don't give any indication. That needs to be sourced to the episode guides.
    • Ah, alright. Makes sense. Consider it done.
  • Likewise, the archived episode guides don't actually provide airdates. I think they might have at one time, but that information is no longer present. I've advised other nominators recently to source airdate information to the Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Episode Guide, which contains this info in full. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:10, August 11, 2017 (UTC)
    • Alright. I wrote them in per your word. For future reference I also ordered a copy of of that book from Amazon. I don't know if it has any useful trivia in it as of now, though. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 18:45, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
  • I would suggest just removing the quote from the BTS. It's not really illustrating any great point that isn't already being explained better in the section's own wording, and it's kind of a weird, fumbling quote to read anyways.
    • Alright.
  • The article needs to do more to describe the color of his skin than just saying it's blue, because there's obviously a more dominant color there. I'm not sure if you want to call it white or beige or whatever, but that color should be mentioned in the infobox and article body on top of the blue. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:53, August 19, 2017 (UTC)
    • How's that? --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 00:41, August 21, 2017 (UTC)
      • Well, firstly, it's probably inaccurate to call it skin; Trandoshans have scales, so I've modified the wording to reflect this. I also think it's kind of redundant to say "light cream," so I've changed it to just call it cream. I'm not sure what you mean by this new sentence you've added: "The skin on his face had a horizontal-stripe pattern." I'm not exactly seeing horizontal stripes. I see blue mottling around his facial ridges. Is this sentence really necessary? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:23, August 21, 2017 (UTC)
        • Mottling is the correct term apparently, but they're still stripe-ish. I figured it would have been better to just be a bit more descriptive, though I suppose the images speak for themselves as far as how the colors are on his skin/scales. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 14:01, August 21, 2017 (UTC)
          • If you really want to add that in, I would suggest just saying he had cream-colored scales with blue mottling (maybe "striped blue mottling" or "blue striped mottling"?) along his face and body. I'm ok with whatever you choose. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:32, August 21, 2017 (UTC)
  • I actually have two more issues. The first, for reference 10, you should specify what part of the home-video release that information is coming from. For example, please see reference 5 here and format accordingly.
  • Secondly, the TCW home-video releases only need to be listed in the Sources list if they have exclusive information pertaining to the article subject. I see the article is referencing Trandoshan stuff to S3, but is there anything actually in this one for Krix specifically? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:54, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
    • Alright, I'l try to get these answered by the end of the week. Jim the Lamproid was kind enough to extend to me the information (see below), so I've asked him if he could grab the specifics.--Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:10, September 12, 2017 (UTC)
      • Ok. Added the name of the Bonus Feature featurette to to the note. According to Jim, the featurette doesn't specifically mention any of the Trandoshans by name, but refers to them in broader terms (Like being present). Would that just be an Imo tag then? --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 01:21, September 15, 2017 (UTC)
Cevan
  • Should Dar's initiation ceremony have its own article? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:11, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
    • Eh, I wouldn't think so. I think it'd be like having a page for Aang's birthday, which we don't (Or for the banquet he attended). Given the way the guild seems to be, I imagine all new members of the guild would get an initiation, which seems like something for the page on the guild itself. If that was the case, the only thing different about Dar's is that he was Garnac's son. But even so, I wouldn't think it needs an article (We have articles for funerals, though, so...) --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 19:31, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
      • Sounds good to me. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:57, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
Jim The Lamproid
  • The terms 'moved on to' and 'relocated' indicate Krix made Nal Hutta his place of residence, though that wasn't necessarily the case.
    • I agree with "relocated," so I changed that one. I'm not so sure about "moved on to." If I had just said "moved to" then yes, but I think the way it stands makes it clear that Krix just headed to Nal Hutta at some point. I suppose if there was further input on the matter, though.
      • If you don't think that's an issue i've striked the objection. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 21:44, September 15, 2017 (UTC)
  • I think Kirx's cameo in 'FaE' could be expanded on a bit, e.g add Krix was talking with a (Weequay?) outside Bilbousa's saloon. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 16:18, September 15, 2017 (UTC)
    • I considered it, but wasn't sure if it was really worth mentioning, given that the way I worded it inferred he was mingling. But I added the detail anyways, since it fleshes out his FaE appearance a bit more. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 19:49, September 15, 2017 (UTC)
  • Deleted scenes in the 'Jedi Temple Archives' of the season 3 blu-ray seem to show the Trandoshans as being able to appear almost invisible on command, but the idea was obviously scrapped. Worth a mention?
    • It doesn't seem to apply to Krix specifically, so probably not. Especially given his scene of importance is basically as a Trando Uber-service. Would probably make more sense as info on the Trando's guild page.
  • Do you have the access to the Season 3 DVD? according to its article, there's a commentary by Dave Filoni on the naming of the episode's Trandoshans. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 21:42, September 15, 2017 (UTC)
    • No, not the DVD, which why I've tried to reach out for more info. I imagine the information isn't too different than Wookiee Hunt's episode guide which details the history on some of the Trando names. Would Krix have a history? Also, is that commentary only on the DVD? --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 02:52, September 16, 2017 (UTC)
      • The commentary is only on the DVD. Probably would be good to ask around to see if the commentary mentions Krix. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 22:19, September 16, 2017 (UTC)
        • AV-6R7 has agreed to help once he gets a monitor for his disc player. So hopefully we'll have an answer soon. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 19:49, September 20, 2017 (UTC)
  • The image captions need full stops. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 19:22, September 20, 2017 (UTC)
    • The Layout Guide stipulates that only image captions that are full sentences get a full stop; thus the punctuation in Krix is correct as it is right now. 1358 (Talk) 19:26, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

  • Have you watched the behind the scenes of the 'Wasskah arc' in the season three blu-ray? I seem to recall Kilian Plunkett commenting something regarding Krix's stockier build, that could be used as a quote. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 21:35, August 12, 2017 (UTC)
    • Hm, I hadn't considered those, actually. Do you have it on hand? Otherwise I can probably try to look into it myself. Thanks. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 18:45, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
      • "There was more of a concious effort to come up - sort of - different silhouettes and shapes and builds" - Kilian Plunkett on the creation of the Trandoshans in Padawan Lost (including Krix)Jim The Lamproid (talk) 21:13, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
      • What I also found of note is that Pat Presley was responsible for the designs of Krix and all other Trandoshans. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 21:27, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
        • Just curious, is that quote missing any words is that how they said it? Also thanks for the information! --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 16:16, August 16, 2017 (UTC)
          • There's more to the quote but I didn't think it was necessary: "When we knew that we were gonna see more Trandoshans, rather than - sort of - take Bossk and revisit that but no do much to it - erm - we saw it as an opportunity to introduce much harder - sort of - reptillian shapes - erm - into the silhouettes that you see, and also just add a little bit more detail in the head so it wasn't quite as soft as the Bossk character turned out to be in Lethal Trackdown. There was more of a concious effort to come up - sort of - different silhouettes and shapes and builds." :) Jim The Lamproid (talk) 18:08, August 16, 2017 (UTC)
            • Alright, thanks. It's just that it looked like a word or so was missing, but then again, sometimes when speaking words are just plum left out sometimes. I was just wondering. Thanks again! --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 06:24, August 17, 2017 (UTC)
              • Oh sorry, I misunderstood your question. It should be 'come up with' rather than 'come up', and no problem, i'm happy to help. Jim The Lamproid (talk) 08:41, August 17, 2017 (UTC)


Ice (duelist)

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  1. No new objections since my GAN review. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 08:53, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 14:59, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

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Stend VI

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 15:50, September 13, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Celebrating twenty years of Wretched Hives of Scum & Villainy!

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Stend IV

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Attack on Korriban

  • Nominated by: Jace Onasi (talk) 09:15, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

This is the third time this article has been nominated. I'm optimistic, though I cannot state with certainty as to whether this will be the final attempt.

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Imperators II
  • Whatever happened to the higher-quality images? Did you ask the uploaders I mentioned on the previous nomination? Imperators II(Talk) 10:06, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

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  • I've addressed all of Imperators' objections from the previous nomination.--Jace Onasi (talk) 09:15, September 24, 2017 (UTC)


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