- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Battle of Foerost (Great Sith War)[]
- Nominated by:—Tommy 9281 (Mechno-chair) 05:46, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A current GA that I brought to 1,079 words, thanks to new information from the latest issue of KOTOR.
(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)[]
Support
- Good job as usual, Tommy. Gotta love KotOR.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:36, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
- LtNOWIS 22:25, March 22, 2010 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:50, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Well done. Jonjedigrandmaster (We seed the stars) 01:09, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 22:42, March 30, 2010 (UTC)
- — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 15:39, April 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Grunny (talk) 06:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)
Object
- LtNOWIS
- Just a few word choice issues.
For hundreds of years, the facility had churned out warships – "churned out" could probably be replaced by "produced" or something to be more encyclopedic.- Addressed.
The shipyards were quickly overrun, due largely to the savagery of the Mandalorians. – this seems to be in violation of NPOV- Try that.
The Krath forces then pulled out, abandoning the ravaged shipyards. – "ravaged" as well is a POV term.- Addressed.
- Other than that, it looks good. -LtNOWIS 03:40, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)