It seems to me like it could use a better intro. EAGLES610 00:55, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
I think I've done all I can with this article, but I don't know if I'd say it's good enough to be featured. As for the into...that's not something I'm too good at. If somebody thinks they can improve it, plesae do so. Red XIV 01:54, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
Now that I think about it, something should be inserted about this being the first large-scale battle that Han Solo fought in. Seeing as he later became an important military leader for the Rebellion/New Republic, that's a fairly significant fact in Galactic history. Red XIV 04:40, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
Some of the stuff about Roa seems a little irrelevant to the big picture. Maybe include Bria's theory that this was a plot to ruin Sarn Shild. And more pictures would be nice, but I guess there aren't really any more in existance. Other than that, this is a good, complete article. -LtNOWIS 17:46, 28 May 2006 (UTC)