This is also kind of POVish. Please reword: "would be hard to argue against."
Reworded and broken up, but the sentences are paraphrasing Rusti's opinions.
That's fine. In that case, I would recommend keeping what you had, but word it to show its from Rusti's perspective. "According to Rusti," or whatever. Toprawa and Ralltiir 13:24, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
Can we specify exactly what this relationship was instead of relying on the later "opposition" explanation? "Although he was unaware of the true relationship between the Empire and SoroSuub Corporation"Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:41, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
The second to last paragraph of "The Great Bantha Breakfast Biscuit Run" has a really long run of participial phrases in a row; "Determined to save the ship, Bung...", "Startled by the lifeform, Bung...", "Cornered by the Giant Amorphous Bantha Breakfast Biscuit, he...", etc. The paragraph after that starts with two more as well. Can you break some of those up for sentence variety? - Lord Hydronium 05:12, 26 June 2008 (UTC)