- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
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CT-1409[]
- Nominated by: Squishy Vic | message 07:00, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Probably one of my favorite clone troopers, had to do his canon article justice! If you have objections about the images, please note them here instead of changing them, as widescreen images (16x9 or wider) look great at 300px and don't show enough detail at anything smaller. They have been meticulously chosen and placed throughout the article to make the article as beautiful as possible. Thanks! Squishy Vic | message 07:00, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
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Support[]
- Although Echo will undoubtedly be in upcoming Clone Wars Legacy stories. Great job! Nivlacanator(talk) 04:55, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
- Excellent work. It's not every day that you wake up to a featured article quality canon article. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:42, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
- ID-21 Dolphin (Talk) 12:59, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
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AV-6R7[]
Purkell was the headquarters of the Techno Union. The article should be edited to reflect this. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:49, June 23, 2015 (UTC)- Added! Squishy Vic | message 10:04, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
At the panel where the "Bad Batch" story arc first premiered, it was mentioned that there was originally a scene where Echo officially joins Clone Force 99, but it was cut from the final release of "Unfinished Business". I don't know how you would cite that, but it should belong in the Bts section. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:55, June 23, 2015 (UTC)- Added it and sourced it! Thanks! Squishy Vic | message 10:59, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
Clone fly-by[]
- There are a bit too many images in the article. The general precedent is to use an image every 3-4 paragraphs, or one per section, whichever fits better. Images should be used only as embellishments of the text, and anything more frequent than that causes the images to become rather crowded and take attention away from the text, especially since the article uses images in extreme widescreen format. Please try to remove a few of the images. CC7567 (talk) 22:17, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
Comments[]
- Great job on this! - Brandon Rhea(talk) 01:34, June 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks! Squishy Vic | message 01:49, June 20, 2015 (UTC)
- Edited the page for a minor thing. Hope I didn't step on your toes. Just to clarify, Wat Tambor was the foreman of the Techno Union, and the Emir of Ryloth. I swapped Emir for foreman and added Emir before the first mention of Wat Tambor. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:09, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks, I updated the intro to reflect this as well. Didn't know they were two separate titles until now. Squishy Vic | message 10:05, June 23, 2015 (UTC)
- The Anaheim Bad Batch panel is available in the videos section of starwars.com, if you want to use that instead of the youtube channel. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:50, June 24, 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks, updated with that one instead.Squishy Vic | message 07:06, June 24, 2015 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)[]
The Inquisitorius decided via IRC vote to remove this nomination for idle objection(s). Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:46, January 6, 2016 (UTC)