FE-9Q
- Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 02:12, November 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
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No one cares, Effie!
- Reload that infobox.
- Done.
- His nickname of Effie isn't mentioned outside of the leading quote. It should be in the bio and even bolded in the intro.
- Done.
- On calling him FE throughout the article: Is he ever called just "FE" in canon? I feel like the full name of FE-9Q would be best. I've always seen using full droid names as akin to using last names for real boys and girls.
- Done. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 03:31, November 20, 2013 (UTC)
- Could anything serve as a quote for "In the service of the Doshuns?"
- Species identifiers are used for a few of the Starhoppers, but the word "Human" doesn't appear once in the article. I think it would be appropriate to call the Doshuns (or just Jimm) Humans on their first mention.
- "Reluctant starhopper" goes into some play-by-play that's doubly inappropriate since it's not even about Effie: "Doshun demanded to know where Solo's starship was, presuming that it would be used to spirit them away from Aduba-3, but the Corellian pointed out that he had not said anything about them leaving the planet."
- How does Jimm react to Effie's destruction? Seems like it would be good info for the end of the bio.
- In Behind the scenes, how about mentioning that Effie is one of a group of characters that pay homage to The Seven Samurai? You can source it to
The Clone Wars Episode Guide: Bounty Hunters on StarWars.com (content now obsolete; backup link). - The "Characteristics" section should describe some of his hardware (treads), sensor color, plating color, gender programming, and a host of other stuff that's currently exclusive to the infobox. If you don't mind some self-tooting, see Proto One for an example of this in action.
- Since the categories name him as a fifth-degree droid, I'd like to see that reflected in the article. He's obviously never directly named as a fifth-degree droid, but he is named as a labor droid, and the New Essential Guide to Droids does name Labor Droids as fifth-degree'ers. Catch my drift? Menkooroo (talk) 14:46, November 18, 2013 (UTC)
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- First nomination. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 02:12, November 2, 2013 (UTC)