The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Freedon NaddEdit

• Nominated by: —Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 13:23, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tryin to get that old thing back. Here's to you, WP:TOTJ!

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)Edit

SupportEdit

1. Pre-nom and all that. Xicer9^(Combadge) 15:57, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
2. Excellent work, Tommy.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:39, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
3. Magnificent. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 00:34, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
4. Per them. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 15:15, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
5. Good, good. The dark side is strong with you...--ID-21 Dolphin ^(Talk) 23:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
6. Cylka^-talk- 04:34, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

ObjectEdit

TrayusEdit

• A small one for now: Is the Jedi Civil War section aptly named? The events described take place several years after the conflict's official end. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 21:09, July 24, 2010 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Thanks for the review, DLT. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 01:32, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

CylkaEdit

• Nadd followed his feelings and eventually came across - could you make this a clearer that Nadd literally followed his feelings, in a physical sense.
  • Addressed.
• You talk about the Ketos coming to Onderon with a stolen spellbook, and then a couple of lines later you say that Nadd returned the spellbook to them. When was it taken from them? This needs to be cleared up.
  • Addressed.
• Absolutely fantastic article, Tommy! Cylka^-talk- 22:38, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
  • Thank you very much for the review and praise, Cylka. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 18:14, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

• Before anyone asks, no, there is not any extra BtS information to be added. No interviews, no new tidbits from obscure sources, nothing. Believe me, trust me, I checked. Many thanks to Xicer9 for his assistance in that endeavor.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 13:23, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved by Inquisitorius 04:34, September 21, 2010 (UTC)