The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

GrievousEdit

1. MarcK 06:07, 12 Oct 2005 (UTC)
2. Gwai Lo 02:47, 6 Nov 2005 (UTC)
3. Cato Neimoidia 10:27, 27 Nov 2005 (UTC)
4. Darth Monkey 01:35, 30 Nov 2005 (UTC)
5. OOM-9 01:47, 6 Dec 2005 (UTC)
6. Comedy240 20:33, 4 Jan 2006

Comments

• Sorry, but needs a lot of work. The prose is a bit clunky for my liking, and it goes into overly-minute details for combat (it gives a blow-by-blow account of the Battle of Hypori.), while neglecting other information. QuentinGeorge 10:57, 15 Oct 2005 (UTC)
• Did some changes.TIEPilot051999 03:15, 25 Oct 2005 (UTC)
• I like the photo where you see Grievous before a cyborg. I found some information about Grievous that I might add. Darth Monkey 01:35, 30 Nov 2005 (UTC)
• Oppose, a large portion of the artticle is devoted to his ...lightsaber collection. --Imp 22:26, 30 Dec 2005 (UTC)