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"Gunman"Edit

(5 Inq/3 Users/8 Total)Edit

Support

1. --Eyrezer 10:35, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
2. Cull Tremayne 10:39, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
3. Amazing job culling this much info on him from what amounts to a handful of message board posts. Good work. jSarek 04:46, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
4. Not a huge fan of the small paragraphs, but good stuff. Thefourdotelipsis 07:25, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
5. ^Jorrel _Fraajic 02:52, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
6. Chack Jadson ^Talk 00:53, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
7. Hmm, slowly making my way through these FAN's :S Greyman^(Paratus) 01:00, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
8. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 00:14, 29 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Ref the affiliations section of the infobox. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 04:16, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Done --Eyrezer 04:49, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
2. Real minor things: Change the caption about the thermal gel, it's too similar to the last sentence of the paragraph next to it. Also, remove the parentheses from "sometime after the Battle of Endor" in the paragraph next to the pic of the gel (about the Moff). And finally, the sentence" Guardsmen were only at half strength, but managed to fool Gunman's squad into thinking they were at full strength via doubler suits," should be rephrased, as it sound repetitive (change the second strength to something similar). Like I said, real quick grammar fixes. Overall it's a very interesting and well-written article. Chack Jadson ^Talk 01:48, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
   • I changed the caption and the Ailon Guardsmen sentence. I'd like to keep the BoE brackets though as it is one of the few missions that has any kind of dating attached to it. In my mind it adds info, without detracting from the article. --Eyrezer 04:29, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
3. Just a couple of things:
   • Combat missions, paragraph 6 is unsourced.
   • Combat missions, paragraph 7: "While working for the Alliance, he also helped to swipe a number of message droids containing AS-M12 message droids." Message droids containing message droids? Like those little Russian dolls? :P Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:00, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
     • Addressed. --Eyrezer 23:59, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 00:16, 29 September 2007 (UTC)

• You should totally put that image of the kidnapped guy in there... :-P Cull Tremayne 10:39, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
  • BTS? --Eyrezer 04:49, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
• Are we sure this meets rule 17 :P ? Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 04:15, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
  • Heh, for sure :) I've written shorter FA's then this! :P Greyman^(Paratus) 00:27, 26 September 2007 (UTC)