The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Jor TorlinEdit

• Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:40, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part 1 of "Project: A Boy and His Mouse."

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)Edit

SupportEdit

1. —MJ— ^{Jedi Council Chambers} Monday, July 23, 2012, 17:24 UTC
2. Plagueis327 (talk) 22:18, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
3. Loving the Legacy spree. Menkooroo (talk) 02:50, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
4. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:02, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
5. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:10, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
6. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:08, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
7. And onto FAdom! Cade Calrayn 01:44, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

ObjectEdit

FloydEdit

• "who sought to use Skywalker's abilities with the Force to heal himself." Why would Darth Krayt need to heal himself? Context please.
• You mention in the intro that Corde had been retired, but not in the body, where you just mention that she had been "reactivated" without any explanation what had happened to her.
• Nice work. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 21:37, August 20, 2012 (UTC)
  • Both taken care of. Thanks for the review!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:06, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

CadeEdit

• Two things: first, "Jor Torlin, a Human male, was an agent for..." The placement of his species and gender seems kind of awkward... Is is possible to rework it into the sentence?
• Second: Category:Scoundrels is a redlink. Torlin's the only article in it, so are you intending to create it or was it a mistake? Cade Calrayn 20:38, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Taken care of both. I honestly thought we had a category page for scoundrels. Thanks for the review!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 01:35, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

• Many thanks to both Master Jonathan & Menkooroo for pre-nom copy-edits and reviews.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:40, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
• Some WP:LE goodness, combined with WP:AMB.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:48, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Approved by Inquisitorius 01:53, September 19, 2012 (UTC)