Since his species name is based on a misidentification by the Kagles, should it go in quotes in the infobox?
Yeah, I wasn't sure how to handle that one, but that makes sense to me.
In the intro, it sounds like Larry crated one spirit, but the Kagles thought it was several. Can you clarify this? ~Savage 14:45, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
How's that? Thanks for the copy-edit and review!—AxinalConvocation Chamber 15:08, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
This is incredibly minor, but the intro states that he assumed the persona of spirits (plural) while the bio asserts spirit (singular). Which is correct?
I don't think it's ever clarified which he intended to assume; but the episode, before revealing Larry, implies multiple individuals, and the Kagles always referred to them as "Shrieks" in the plural, so I'll keep it as that.
I feel like the article doesn't really indicate what species Larry is. It presents the "Shrieks" as a kind of made-up evil spirit rather than a species, and the reader is left confused as a result. I think the bio (and possibly intro) should introduce him early-on as a member of a purple-furred , three-eyed species. Thoughts?