The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

LarryEdit

• Nominated by: —Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 03:15, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: You asked for more featured articles. You got more Ewoks.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)Edit

SupportEdit

1. Now do Moe and Curly! ~Savage 15:38, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:17, December 1, 2011 (UTC)
3. Brilliantly silly. Menkooroo 20:11, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
4. More Stooges!—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:59, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:56, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
6. "One is a genius, the other's insane... and the other one's Larry!" -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 15:03, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

ObjectEdit

Prepare to be savaged…Edit

• Since his species name is based on a misidentification by the Kagles, should it go in quotes in the infobox?
  • Yeah, I wasn't sure how to handle that one, but that makes sense to me.
• In the intro, it sounds like Larry crated one spirit, but the Kagles thought it was several. Can you clarify this? ~Savage 14:45, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
  • How's that? Thanks for the copy-edit and review!—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 15:08, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

LarryEdit

• This is incredibly minor, but the intro states that he assumed the persona of spirits (plural) while the bio asserts spirit (singular). Which is correct?
  • I don't think it's ever clarified which he intended to assume; but the episode, before revealing Larry, implies multiple individuals, and the Kagles always referred to them as "Shrieks" in the plural, so I'll keep it as that.
• I feel like the article doesn't really indicate what species Larry is. It presents the "Shrieks" as a kind of made-up evil spirit rather than a species, and the reader is left confused as a result. I think the bio (and possibly intro) should introduce him early-on as a member of a purple-furred , three-eyed species. Thoughts?
  • Sure, that makes sense. Would it make sense to you to pipelink purple-furred, three-eyed species as such?
    • Yeah! I like it. Menkooroo 20:11, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
• Great work! Menkooroo 02:26, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks, Menk!—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 02:18, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

Approved by Inquisitorius 21:40, January 17, 2012 (UTC)