- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
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Mee Deechi[]
- Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:14, December 31, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Apparently I'm on a bit of a TCW political kick lately. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:17, December 31, 2015 (UTC)
(2 Inqs/4 Users/6 Total)
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Support[]
- AnilSerifoglu (talk) 00:19, May 8, 2016 (UTC)
- Cevan (talk) 22:51, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
- AV-6R7Crew Pit 02:06, September 24, 2017 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 23:48, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
- Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:33, January 5, 2018 (UTC)
- JangFett (Talk) 23:37, January 19, 2018 (UTC)
Object[]
AnilSerifoglu[]
Exact date of death can be added. I think it is "c. 21 years before the Battle of Yavin", regarding the timeline of canon media.AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:07, April 21, 2016 (UTC)- I'm not sure how I would source that. The timeline of canon media is saying "Senate Murders" is at least 1 year into the war, not that it's circa 21 years before the Battle of Yavin. What would you recommend in terms of satisfying this objection?—which I would also note that, had there not been a question about it, would have easily been a "sofixit" objection that you could have added to the page on your own. I'm glad you brought it up here since there is a question about it, but that's something to think about for the future. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 23:40, May 7, 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with you, it should stay as it is. AnilSerifoglu (talk) 00:19, May 8, 2016 (UTC)
- I'm not sure how I would source that. The timeline of canon media is saying "Senate Murders" is at least 1 year into the war, not that it's circa 21 years before the Battle of Yavin. What would you recommend in terms of satisfying this objection?—which I would also note that, had there not been a question about it, would have easily been a "sofixit" objection that you could have added to the page on your own. I'm glad you brought it up here since there is a question about it, but that's something to think about for the future. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 23:40, May 7, 2016 (UTC)
AV[]
Could we get air dates for the episodes in the Bts?- AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:35, January 29, 2017 (UTC)- I don't see why that's relevant. Do other articles use air dates? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 22:53, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
- Yes; the US date is standard. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 00:07, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
- Added the dates. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 22:42, May 8, 2017 (UTC)
- Yes; the US date is standard. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 00:07, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
- I don't see why that's relevant. Do other articles use air dates? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 22:53, February 3, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II[]
The date of death is infobox-exclusive, and it can't be sourced to Senate Murders.- Someone else added that during the course of this nomination. I know of no sourceable way to pinpoint exact Clone Wars dates at this time, so I've reverted it back to how I had it originally. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:03, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
Please add backup links to the IMDB templates, or better yet, change the episode airdate references to a more reliable source.Imperators II(Talk) 15:49, August 31, 2017 (UTC)- How do I get a backup link for IMDb? Alternatively, if you know if a better source, I'll take a recommendation. StarWars.com does not include air dates. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:03, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
- You can use Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Episode Guide to source any air dates in season 1-5 and the movie. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:10, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
- Can you tell me what it says about Senate Murders? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:11, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
- Senate Murders aired on March 19, 2010. Pursuit of Peace aired on December 3, 2010.- AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:28, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
- Added. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 18:48, September 5, 2017 (UTC)
- Senate Murders aired on March 19, 2010. Pursuit of Peace aired on December 3, 2010.- AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:28, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
- Can you tell me what it says about Senate Murders? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:11, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
- You can use Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Episode Guide to source any air dates in season 1-5 and the movie. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:10, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
- How do I get a backup link for IMDb? Alternatively, if you know if a better source, I'll take a recommendation. StarWars.com does not include air dates. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:03, August 31, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
Now that we have BBY/ABY dates for things and can narrow down the Clone Wars, it would be better for this article to more specifically state that his death and his character's events from TCW took place between 22 BBY-19 BBY, unless we can narrow down these episodes even more narrowly than that.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:21, September 28, 2017 (UTC)- How's this? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 18:07, September 29, 2017 (UTC)
- Firstly, I'd recommend removing the dates from the intro. It's not so critical that they need to be mentioned there for an event so widespread like the Clone Wars. This is more for narrowing down the specific events of these two episodes, which we seem to have dates for. The "Pursuit of Peace" article lists a 21 BBY date (no source, though, so I don't know if that's accurate), while "Senate Murders" has a cited 21 BBY date. This is what should be included in this article, particularly for his death -- if we can specify that he died in 21 BBY, that should absolutely be done. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:26, October 4, 2017 (UTC)
- Done. Let me know if you think the reference note can be improved. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:54, October 17, 2017 (UTC)
- Firstly, I'd recommend removing the dates from the intro. It's not so critical that they need to be mentioned there for an event so widespread like the Clone Wars. This is more for narrowing down the specific events of these two episodes, which we seem to have dates for. The "Pursuit of Peace" article lists a 21 BBY date (no source, though, so I don't know if that's accurate), while "Senate Murders" has a cited 21 BBY date. This is what should be included in this article, particularly for his death -- if we can specify that he died in 21 BBY, that should absolutely be done. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:26, October 4, 2017 (UTC)
- How's this? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 18:07, September 29, 2017 (UTC)
I'd like to see the intro cut down a little bit. It seems kind of long in relation to the size of the Biography. If you combined/reduced the second and third paragraphs to be closer to the size of the first, that would be better.- Done. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:54, October 17, 2017 (UTC)
There's enough space in the last half of the first Bio subsection to hold another image.- Done. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:54, October 17, 2017 (UTC)
Is there no specific items he makes use of to put in an Equipment section? If nothing else, I think you should definitely devote some mention to his outfit, which is clearly inspired from the film's Umbaran character. Both wear that high-collar dealy with a diamond shape across the throat area. I would specifically mention that fact, that his outfit is similar to fellow Umbaran Senate-person Sly Moore.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:26, October 4, 2017 (UTC)- Done, though I'm not entirely sure how to cite the similarity so let me know if it should be changed. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 06:54, October 17, 2017 (UTC)
- Due to some template restructuring, there are now several external links in this article that require Archive backup links. Please also check the existing SW.com backup links to make sure they work, as archived versions of SW.com pages from approximately summer 2017 to present haven't been working (if you let the page load long enough in Archive, it'll end up with a blank white page). Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:31, March 12, 2018 (UTC)
Ecks Dee[]
Reference 2 requires a screenshot of the tweet to be uploaded on Wookieepedia and included in the reference."The Galactic Senate became a political battlefield of its own during the war, with senators from opposing points of view debating the merits of continuing and even escalating the war effort versus seeking a diplomatic solution with the Confederate government." This entire sentence is currently sourced to the aforementioned tweet. Please correct.1358 (Talk) 00:09, November 1, 2017 (UTC)- The above are done. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 00:39, November 5, 2017 (UTC)
Battle of Umbara appears to be a conjectural name and should therefore not be linked as such in the intro.Deechi is mentioned once in all of paragraph two and three in the bio. Either you need to find a way to shoehorn him in there, or you need to cut down on the context (preferred).1358 (Talk) 23:21, November 5, 2017 (UTC)- Both handled. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 23:08, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
Comments[]
Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)[]
- Idle objection past two weeks. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:31, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 19:32, March 26, 2018 (UTC)
- Two weeks is two weeks. 1358 (Talk) 19:42, March 26, 2018 (UTC)