The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

PernicarEdit

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 05:48, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:NSW to the rescue.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)Edit

Support

1. Absolutely. Love the character and the article. QuentinGeorge 07:08, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
2. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 00:15, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
3. Grunny ^(Talk) 23:58, September 12, 2009 (UTC)
4. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:48, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
5. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 11:03, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
6. I can't believe nobody made the "Jedi so nice they killed him twice" joke yet. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 00:10, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Grunny:
   • Early life: "Pernicar had three brothers." This really just sticks out in the paragraph and doesn't flow. Can you find somewhere else to integrate it, maybe into a longer sentence?
     • Addressed.
   • Life as a Jedi: In the first two sentences of this section can you change one or more of the "rank"s?
     • Addressed.
   • Life as a Jedi: "Mortull, noticing his former master, ran toward Pernicar, smiling and laughing as he made his way toward Pernicar." Can you vary one of the "toward Pernicar"s?
     • Addressed.
   • While I'm guessing there's not enough info for a P&a, is there any info on his powers or abilities that could be given a mention in the P&t? Maybe if he was able to use a lightsaber or something.
     • There's really nothing of note. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 00:39, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
   • Grunny ^(Talk) 08:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
2. Attack of the Clone
   • "In 1,010 BBY, Pernicar fought in a battle against the Sith." Can this battle get an article? The lack of a known location shouldn't stop it from being at least linked.
     • No article; created and linked.
   • Please vary all the "after"s in Death and legacy. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:18, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 23:37, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved by Inquisitorius 00:10, September 21, 2009 (UTC)