The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Treuten TeradocEdit

• Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 03:37, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Costello! Hardy! Allen! Lewis! Sonny!

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)Edit

Support

1. Xicer9^(Combadge) 05:49, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
2. I see a red Stardestroyer and I waint it painted black. No colors anymore I want them to turn black (The Palpatones) Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:39, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:28, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 22:40, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
5. Nicely done. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 13:31, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
6. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 12:28, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. What nomination? We are the nominations! (Farlstendoiro)
   • "Teradoc beat Rogriss at Junction, winning him the allegiance of a number of Zsinj's ships, but Ackbar in turn soundly defeated him". Defeated whom? Teradoc, I guess, but could you please specify?
   • When you mention "red Victory-classs Star Destroyers", I would expand on the unusual fact that they were red: "Red-hulled" at least, or "that he ordered to paint red".
   • "beneath the last officer he had served, Grand Admiral Thrawn". Suggestion: "Previous" instead of "last"? Thrawn was the last then, but not historically.
   • Good job.Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:47, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
     • Fixed them all, and thanks. - Lord Hydronium 07:22, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
2. "the Aggregator was ambushed and driven to retreat" Is there a link for this battle? Otherwise, nice. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 23:58, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
   • Yep, linked. - Lord Hydronium 00:11, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 12:28, May 16, 2010 (UTC)