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Aldanna[]
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn (Talk) 09:08, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: CA-to-GA Project Part 5
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
- YAY Dark Horse! :P Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:54, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 00:56, April 23, 2011 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 20:21, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Couldn't make anything witty this time. –Tm_T (Talk) 05:44, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
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Kilson[]
"When Vane arrived, Skywalker engaged him in a dogfight. Meanwhile, Vane's squadron, Tofen's Raiders, attacked Aldanna's forces." You should combine these two sentences.- Done.
I noticed when you mentioned Brian Kolchak in the Bts, the link was a redirect to Brian Koschak. I never read the comic, so I'm not sure if you're not referencing the correct artist or just misspelled his name.- The artist is actually credited as Brian Kolchak throughout all the comics he's worked on. I was going to say that I had no idea where the alternate spelling came from, but then I stumbled upon this post. So, yeah. Way to go, Dark Horse. You can't even spell your artist's name right.
- And that's it. Once again, good job. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 11:09, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
- Once again, thanks for your review. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:55, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
The nitpicker's nostril[]
Yes, totally nitpicky, and very minor, but the second sentence in the intro is rather long, I wonder if it could be split.(:) –Tm_T (Talk) 13:31, April 28, 2011 (UTC)- Done. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 14:40, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:07, April 29, 2011 (UTC)