- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Battle of Nexus Ortai[]
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn (Talk) 15:49, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: First TCW battle nom.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)[]
Support
- MauserComlink 13:35, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
- Shipyards is actually the best of all TCW graphic novellas :P JangFett Talk 20:10, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
- —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 20:17, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 20:08, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 22:31, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:01, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Object
- Fett
You can expand the intro a little to make it proportionately to the battle.- Ok, I've expanded it a bit. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:28, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
Missing sources. You need to source "c. 22 BBY" to the TCW novel, and then source the rest to Shipyards.- I don't think it is necessary. The opening text of Shipyards states that the events are happening "in the early days" of the Clone Wars, so that pretty much means c.22 BBY. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 17:07, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- I looked at the graphic novella as well, that should be fine then :)
- I don't think it is necessary. The opening text of Shipyards states that the events are happening "in the early days" of the Clone Wars, so that pretty much means c.22 BBY. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 17:07, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- Good work,
I'll give it a another review soon :)JangFett Talk 17:01, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- Mauser:
I'm pretty sure Ghost Squadron is not the same as the Ghost Company. A proper article for the squadrom must be created.- Addressed.
At least one more image for the article is needed.- Added one to the "aftermath" section. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 13:29, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
- MauserComlink 10:32, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
- Attack of the Clone
In the last two sentences of the intro, I'm seeing a lack of specificity with the use of "that", and it would sound better if you try to word it more chronologically, i.e. "After Separatist reinforcements arrived, the Republic was forced to retreat" or something.- Addressed.
Are you sure that Grievous was commanding the Providence? As it was the only of its kind that arrived, it's probable that it was his flagship, but that's not enough evidence. Other than that, nice work.CC7567 (talk) 23:11, 28 July 2009 (UTC)- You are right, there is no evidence. Should be fixed now. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 19:07, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:01, 3 August 2009 (UTC)