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Dron[]
- Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:01, June 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:TCW.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:21, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
- I like it! --Gmalek (The ability to edit does not make you intelligent) 05:47, July 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:51, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 02:07, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
Object[]
Kasra's list is so whack…[]
OtU: Context on Ventress and Dooku needed in 2nd paragragh.- I've contextified them as "Confederate "troublemakers"" which is what the source itself provides. I was thinking that was sufficient, but I understand if not...?
- It's fine. I was thinking along the lines of Dark Jedi and Sith Lord, but it's probably unnecessary.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 10:44, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
- I've contextified them as "Confederate "troublemakers"" which is what the source itself provides. I was thinking that was sufficient, but I understand if not...?
A disturbance: allowing General Reus to land on the planet and assist her Padawan… Who's Rues' Padawan? Please mention him or her somewhere.- Added a bit of earlier context.
- Otherwise, great job, Fourdot. Good read.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:43, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Thefourdotelipsis 06:48, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Bagel[]
Is the bit about the Jedi's race really needed? I don't think it's necessary.- Heh, no, I was just trying to cover my ass should I refer to them by their species later on. But then I didn't. Axed.
Is there an article for this battle? It needs to be linked to if so, and if not, created.- Pipelinked.
What are your thoughts on changing "it was later purchased by agents of the Confederacy." to "it was later purchased by Magistrate Passel Argente of the Confederacy." It's more specific, and meshes a bit better with the bio, I feel.- Good idea. Changed.
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:49, July 10, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 00:46, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:51, July 20, 2010 (UTC)