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Jallar Golin[]
- Nominated by: Xicer9(Combadge) 17:43, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another minor Emperor's Hand.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- Good to have some of these at Hand. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:08, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:52, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
- JangFett (Talk) 00:37, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
Object[]
Farl[]
Bio, 2nd paragraph: You use the word "shuttle" six times. Couldn't you replace some of them with a synonym or something? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:26, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
Just one. As far as I understand it, we typically capitalize "Master" when being referred to as someone's literal Jedi/Sith Master. Is this an appropriate case here? "and shared a slight connection with his master through the Force."Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:57, May 21, 2010 (UTC)- I don't know whether Palpatine was his formal Jedi/Sith Master, the term is never used in the adventure. All it says is "…he was trained by the Emperor to be a Hand." So Palpatine was his master in the sense that Golin was trained by him in the Force and served him as an operative, but I wouldn't say Palpatine was his "Master" master. So in this case, I think it's appropriate to leave it undercase. Xicer9(Combadge) 20:06, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Very well. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:08, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
- I don't know whether Palpatine was his formal Jedi/Sith Master, the term is never used in the adventure. All it says is "…he was trained by the Emperor to be a Hand." So Palpatine was his master in the sense that Golin was trained by him in the Force and served him as an operative, but I wouldn't say Palpatine was his "Master" master. So in this case, I think it's appropriate to leave it undercase. Xicer9(Combadge) 20:06, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:06, May 28, 2010 (UTC)