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Jester[]
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)[]
Support
- IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 05:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 13:30, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 01:28, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
- —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 01:35, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
- MauserComlink 00:35, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:57, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
Object
- IFYLOFD:
Biography quote is messed up.- Addressed.
"After the clone troopers returned to the base, Jester cleaned his blaster as his habit after every battle." Is this really notable enough to put in the intro?- Yes, because it's a "habit"; I don't see why not. It makes him different from the others, which is why I put it in.
Context needed on North and south towers.- Again, self-contextualizing until I see why it's necessary.
Explain why Cody and Rex would suspect there was a spy in the ranks.- See above...somewhere.
Are the nicknames for Cody and Rex really necessary?- Nice work. IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 21:13, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
- Mauser
In the bio you should say that he was Jango's clone, born on Kamino and trained to be a part of the future GAR - all the same as for Chopper (and other clones too).- Otherwise very nice. MauserComlink 11:28, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
One more thing. Have you considered moving the article to Jester, and that one - to Jester (Carrack-class)?Makes sense to me. MauserComlink 12:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
- From the Council Chambers:
In the intro, you say that Punch vouched for him, but the body says that Sketch vounched for him. Which is correct?- Gah; good catch. It was Sketch.
- Otherwise great. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 21:11, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:57, 29 July 2009 (UTC)