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Killun 71[]
- Nominated by: MasterFred(Whatever) 01:07, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The GAN is too empty. Let's fix that.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)[]
Support[]
- AV-6R7Crew Pit 05:42, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Astrowin. Imperators II(Talk) 09:49, September 3, 2017 (UTC)
- --DarthRuiz30 (talk) 19:58, September 3, 2017 (UTC)
- Jim The Lamproid (talk) 21:29, September 3, 2017 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:43, September 22, 2017 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 23:19, September 22, 2017 (UTC)
Object[]
AV[]
Could we get a date for the events of "Double Agent Droid" in the History section?- Ah yes, done.
Could you croup out the gray framing on the concept art?- AV-6R7Crew Pit 01:26, September 2, 2017 (UTC)- I can. I was thinking the border and label made it look more like concept art and less like every other image of the moon, though. I can crop it if you still feel it needs it. MasterFred(Whatever) 02:15, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
Will AV's reign of terror finally be over?[]
Unfortunately, Humans are infobox-exclusive."relevant to the planet Lothal" — was the stuff (codes etc.) the rebels wanted to get from Killun 71 relevant to Lothal itself or to the rebels?"the rebel cell known as Phoenix Squadron" — in the article's body, you say Killun 71 was infiltrated by a rebel cell known as the Spectres, which is a part of Phoenix Squadron. This should be worded consistently.- You know, after reading the below comment... never mind. Imperators II(Talk) 09:41, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
"a larger, white celestial body" — wait, why can't you just say "planet" here? what else can a moon orbit?"the Galactic Empire maintained an outpost on Killun 71 prior to the Galactic Civil War" — the DB entry this is sourced to doesn't say anything about the GCW.The other current "Double Agent Droid" GAN makes me suspect the episode number and the season number can't be sourced to the episode itself.Please add {{Imagecat}}.Please create a category for moons affiliated with the Empire. Even in Canon there's more than one.Imperators II(Talk) 09:38, September 2, 2017 (UTC)- Objections handled via IRC. Imperators II(Talk) 09:49, September 3, 2017 (UTC)
Jim The Lamproid[]
Killun station has no link to its article in the introduction.Jim The Lamproid (talk) 11:21, September 3, 2017 (UTC)- Wow, nice catch. Fixed.
I think the 'Behind the scenes' could do with being split up into two sentences.Jim The Lamproid (talk) 11:21, September 3, 2017 (UTC)- Fair enough. Split. MasterFred(Whatever) 21:25, September 3, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
For starters, the BTS image should crop out the SW.com frame.- Cropper.
SW.com Databank entries are listed by alphabetical order in the Sources list, per the Layout Guide.- Alphabetized.
Are there no quotes to add to the article? The lack of a 1stm tag in the Sources suggests that the name is used in the Rebels episode, which means there should be at least one quote to use. I'm guessing something could be used for the Description and/or Bio as well.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:57, September 14, 2017 (UTC)- I'm looking into this as soon as I get somewhere with enough time to watch through the episode. MasterFred(Whatever) 23:57, September 18, 2017 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:19, September 22, 2017 (UTC)
- I have a question, since AP-5 is not part of the Spectre crew, would it be better to replace Spectres with Phoenix Squadron? Both Spectres and AP-5 were part of that unit--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:22, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Good catch. Technically, yeah, AP is not a Spectre, but he is in Phoenix Squadron. I've updated the article thus. MasterFred(Whatever) 02:29, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Does the "operating around the planet Lothal" really still work as a descriptor in reference to Phoenix Squadron? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:49, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- I wanted to keep the bit about Lothal, since it's why the information at the base was important to them. I've clarified that the Spectres were interesting in the base, but that they were part of Phoenix Squadron. MasterFred(Whatever) 04:30, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Could you specify that the codes were for Lothal? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:41, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Done. MasterFred(Whatever) 05:33, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Could you specify that the codes were for Lothal? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:41, September 2, 2017 (UTC)
- Good catch. Technically, yeah, AP is not a Spectre, but he is in Phoenix Squadron. I've updated the article thus. MasterFred(Whatever) 02:29, September 2, 2017 (UTC)