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Niner (clone)[]
- Nominated by: JangFett Talk 16:57, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: One of the last clones from "Lair of Grievous"
(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)[]
Support
- Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 00:37, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 05:35, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
- Liked this one. MauserComlink 10:26, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 20:54, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:45, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 16:19, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
- I don't know why I'm wasting my time with this vote, but it's a good article. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 03:33, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
- User:Capt.Scout (User talk:Capt.Scout 18:46 30 July (UTC)
Object
- The Grand Master
Niner's first line of the lead quote appears to be wrong. "Copy this is Rogue Base, over." It sounds like there should probably be a period or comma after the "Copy". Could you check this?- Yes, Niner did pause in the episode.
Intro: "Before the group entered a castle on the moon belonging to Confederate General Grievous in search of Gunray" The wording you have implies that the moon belonged to Grievous. I'm pretty sure it was just the castle. If this is the case, it should be reworded.- Addressed
Also, from the bio quote: "It matches the description of General Grievous' fighter, it's headed our way." The comma should probably either be a period or a semi-colon, depending on how the line was spoken. Could you check this?- I checked this quote as well :) Fixed
- Nice work :). Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 23:56, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Jonny :)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:59, 30 July 2009 (UTC)