The first sentence in the intro is quite a run-on. On the other hand, the second is quite short, so maybe you could do some tweaking there.
I feel like linking the Destruction of Anaxes in the word "created" is a bit wrong. Even linking the word "remnants" would be better, but maybe there's an even better option.
The second sentence of the description is also quite a run-on, further exaggerated by the numerous references. See if you can do something about it.
Last sentence of History has similar issues of being a run-on and quite choppy.
The Bts image caption is not a full sentence and does not require punctuation at the end. 1358(Talk) 22:56, February 27, 2017 (UTC)
All objections addressed. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:45, March 13, 2017 (UTC)
One more, for good measure. "Later, two of the rebels, Jedi Kanan Jarrus and his Padawan Ezra Bridger, returned to PM-1203 to draw the Grand Inquisitor away from the Ghost, which had rescued Tseebo, a defecting Imperial Information Office worker carrying top-secret information, from the Empire." Very choppy sentence. See if you can do something about it.1358(Talk) 13:49, April 25, 2017 (UTC)