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Paarin Minor[]
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:26, August 27, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Attempt number 4 to promote this article to GA or CA status. Or as I would call it: There and Back Again. Thanks to ExiledJedi for beefing it up.
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Support[]
- 3rd time I've looked at this article. Please pass so I don't have to look at you anymore. :P 501st dogma(talk) 01:10, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
- Cade Calrayn 00:37, September 30, 2014 (UTC)
- --Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 00:41, September 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:44, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
- This article's multi-nomination history was a travesty of poor research and missing information. I'm glad to be done with it. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:20, October 7, 2014 (UTC)
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Ecks Dee[]
I feel like the intro focuses too much on giving context to things instead of actual information. See if you can cut the context for Clone Wars and add something else instead.1358 (Talk) 17:41, September 4, 2014 (UTC)- Well, the only thing I could do is remove the mention of the Clone Wars. Otherwise, there is not really stuff to add. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:48, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Changed somehow after IRC discussion. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:45, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Winterz[]
The Galactic Empire is probably worth a bit more context seeing that it was the Republic's demise.Winterz (talk) 17:36, September 24, 2014 (UTC)- Better? Clone Commander Lee Talk 19:15, September 24, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth[]
The maps on pg 212 of Warfare show two different time periods. The upper map, which includes Paarin Minor, is set in 12 ABY—during the Orinda campaign—not in 17 ABY. Cade Calrayn 17:07, September 25, 2014 (UTC)- Corrected. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:01, September 25, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi[]
Was the clone trooper commander in the quote present at the battle? If so, you could mention that he was present at the battle in the history section.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:05, October 6, 2014 (UTC)- We don't know. The "we" he uses can indicate that he or his unit was present, but as he is talking to Shryne, it is also possible that it refers to the Republic overall. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:34, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
- Okay, just checking to make sure.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:44, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
- We don't know. The "we" he uses can indicate that he or his unit was present, but as he is talking to Shryne, it is also possible that it refers to the Republic overall. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:34, October 6, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
The Atlas Online Companion does not say that Paarin Minor is located in the Outer Rim, the Paarin Minor system, the Cademimu sector, or grid square M-6; it says that the Paarin Minor system is located in the Outer Rim, the Cademimu sector, and grid square M-6. You either need to provide a manual ref note for Ref 1 or choose a source that explicitly states that the planet is within these locations.- Example: Morvogodine#Notes and references, Ref 2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:23, October 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Thx for the example, done.
- Example: Morvogodine#Notes and references, Ref 2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:23, October 7, 2014 (UTC)
The infobox's affiliation section and body are in error. Paarin Minor is not stated to be part of the Galactic Empire on page 212 of Warfare. The Imperial Remnant is not the same thing as the Galactic Empire. Unless you can provide a source that actually says this, this information should be removed.- 212 can't, 112 (as the reference) says, can. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:58, October 7, 2014 (UTC)
The citation used to source this sentence, "By the year 12 ABY and beyond, the planet was under control of the Empire's successor regime, the Imperial Remnant, led by Admiral Gilad Pellaeon," is insufficient. Page 212 of Warfare does not say that the Imperial Remnant is the Empire's successor state. I've also added a bit from that page specifying that the Remnant is under Pellaeon's control, but you now need to find a proper source to cite the fact that he's an admiral.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:35, October 6, 2014 (UTC)- Have a look now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:25, October 7, 2014 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:20, October 7, 2014 (UTC)