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Police probe[]
- Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 02:09, February 7, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: COPS is filmed on location with... droid cameras?
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- Master Jonathan Council Chambers Thursday, February 9, 2012, 04:39 UTC
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:36, February 29, 2012 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 14:12, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:29, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
- —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
Object[]
From the Council Chambers:[]
You say in the intro that the droid "inform[ed] other CSF forces of the situation", but this is not mentioned in the body.- Done.
Also, how did the droid do that? If it did so by means of electronic transmission, then its ability to make such transmissions should be mentioned under "Description".- Done.
Sorry to be picky, but do we know that the antenna is what allows it to make transmissions? I know it seems like a reasonable assumption, but unless a source explicitly says so, we can't connect them like that.Master Jon Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, February 9, 2012, 04:27 UTC- Ok, try now.Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:37, February 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.
- Otherwise, looks good to me. —MJ— Jedi Council Chambers Thursday, February 9, 2012, 04:14 UTC
- Thanks for the review. Coruscantfan (Talk) 04:20, February 9, 2012 (UTC)
Jangeth[]
Before I can give this a review, please make sure you've checked every TCW kiddy UK magazine and the US magazine. JangFett (Talk) 15:29, February 9, 2012 (UTC)- I already did that while also checking appearances for the police droid. Coruscantfan (Talk) 16:07, February 12, 2012 (UTC)
Lee's charge[]
As the CSF is part of the Galactic Republic, the Republic needs to be in the infobox. Also include this in the history section.- Done.
That Satine is Duchess of Mandalore is intro-exclusive.- Done.
Context for the Death Watch.- Done.
Context for C-3PO and R2-D2.- Done.
- Maybe it would be better if only say that they were two droids and leave the stuff about Skywalker and Amidala out. Otherwise you would have to context them as well. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:11, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
- Ok.
- This remains. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:38, February 28, 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry about that, though I fixed it. Done now. Coruscantfan (Talk) 14:40, February 28, 2012 (UTC)
- This remains. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:38, February 28, 2012 (UTC)
- Ok.
- Maybe it would be better if only say that they were two droids and leave the stuff about Skywalker and Amidala out. Otherwise you would have to context them as well. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:11, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.
You have to source the airing dates of the episodes.- Done.
Plus, you should mention that the CSF was the "police" of the Republic somewhere.Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:11, February 27, 2012 (UTC)- Well, they are only the police for Coruscant so the context is in their name itself. But I did add a link for "police" in the intro and the description. Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:27, February 28, 2012 (UTC)
- All from me. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:38, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:37, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
Cav[]
A little something on the resolution of Satine's mistaken identity would be appreciated.- Done.
Another probe was present in the Coruscant market when the droids C-3PO and R2-D2 went there to buy jogan fruits for Senator Aang. A think a little expansion her would be good. The jogan fruits were for a cake commissioned by Padme for the Senator as I recall, not directly for the Senator.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:51, March 7, 2012 (UTC)- Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
Return of the Jedi[]
Do you have at least an approximate date you could add in the article? Otherwise, "Rise of the Empire era" is infobox exclusive.- Done.
- Coruscantfan, could you please correct the date? We don't know when those events took place, so we have to go by the SW Annual 2011 magazine, which places some battles of TCW in 21 BBY. So therefore, we must say this event took place around 21 BBY for now. JangFett (Talk) 04:00, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Also, while you're putting a ref on that, could you rephrase it to something like "On the planet Coruscant in the year 21 BBY, during..."? I think that will sound a bit smoother.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:53, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Done, I keep forgetting about the whole sourcing the date/timeline problem. I added the magazine source and adjusted the wording. Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:17, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
- Also, while you're putting a ref on that, could you rephrase it to something like "On the planet Coruscant in the year 21 BBY, during..."? I think that will sound a bit smoother.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:53, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Coruscantfan, could you please correct the date? We don't know when those events took place, so we have to go by the SW Annual 2011 magazine, which places some battles of TCW in 21 BBY. So therefore, we must say this event took place around 21 BBY for now. JangFett (Talk) 04:00, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.
"The police probe is similar in design to the Galactic Senate cam droids." - You currently only source this to "Duchess of Mandalore." Does that episode show a Senate cam droid? If not, there should be another ref pointing to a source that has one, so it can be compared.- Yep, it does appear.
It would be good to see a link to Coruscant in the body.- Wow... I cannot believe it just took me 10 minutes to figure out how where I could put a link for Coruscant :P
- That's it from me. Good work.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 01:53, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:22, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
- The parentheses are unnecessary if there are no other known police probes. -- I need a name (Complain here) 11:22, February 7, 2012 (UTC)
- Ok, well I'll try moving it back. Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:34, February 9, 2012 (UTC)