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RB-551[]
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn (Talk) 17:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Look, it's RB-551. No wonder he got dropped from the CAN... (I don't have a punchline)
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Support[]
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:53, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Very good work. Graestan(Talk) 20:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
- Menkooroo 14:34, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 14:15, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 15:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
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551[]
- Excellent work!
Two small things --- even if their names aren't known, the opening quote has more than two speakers and should use the dialogue template per the MOS.- Roger, roger.
"He was an older model..." --- As he wasn't always an older model, could you maybe lead this sentence with "By 21 BBY" or something?Menkooroo 16:30, March 18, 2011 (UTC)- Good point. Addressed. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 13:07, March 20, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship[]
While the quote is somewhat amusing, it should be shortened to focus more on RB-551 and less on the droids who discover his remains. I suggest cutting it down to just the first two lines.- <Sigh> And that makes my efforts in changing the quote formatting completely pointless. Addressed :)
His masculine programming should be mentioned in both the intro and the bio.Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 00:22, March 22, 2011 (UTC)- Done and done. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 11:53, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
- One question: Isn't it Syndulla and his fighters who destroy the patrol then Windu? I can't remember a fighting scene between the trooper/Windu and the droids. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:57, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
- D'oh! *smacks head* Of course those were the Tw'leks. Thanks for catching that, Lee. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 19:25, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:07, March 17, 2011 (UTC)
- D'oh! *smacks head* Of course those were the Tw'leks. Thanks for catching that, Lee. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 19:25, March 15, 2011 (UTC)