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Resilient (Venator-class)[]
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:23, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I just wanted to do a starship.
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Support[]
- --Eyrezer 04:13, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 00:42, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 14:54, October 3, 2010 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 17:59, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:02, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
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Soresu[]
The intro makes it sound like the Republic already knew that the CIS were in control before they were dispatched, but the body seems to imply that they discovered it on arrival. Please clarify.- Addressed.
By the time the Republic forces arrived at Khorm, however, the planet had fallen into Confederate hands, so the Jedi needed to fight for the agrocite. Upon arrival at Khorm, You're kind of going over the same point in time twice. Could they be merged somehow?SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 23:24, September 16, 2010 (UTC)- Addressed. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 12:25, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
Unless Complete Cross-Sections literally says every Republic Venator Star Destroyer ever was manufactured by KDY, I would suggest removing that tidbit from the infobox. If it does support this information, you should specify KDY's involvement in the body of the article.I'm guessing the source does not literally say it was "painted" red. It's an obvious inference, sure, but we should avoid making these extrapolations on our own. I would suggest just saying its hull was "red in color," or something similar: "and its hull was painted in red color."- Fine, changed it.
The Description section should include mention of the ship's complement, namely the V-19s and LAAT/i gunships, rather than the Commanders and crew section.Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:19, September 21, 2010 (UTC)- Moved. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 15:54, September 25, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358[]
No more applicable categories? Not sure, but I think there's something like "Republic (star)ships"…1358 (Talk) 20:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC)- Had to do some searching to find it. Added. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 20:38, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:03, October 4, 2010 (UTC)