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Striker (clone trooper)[]
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn (Talk) 19:34, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Gotta love the main pic.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:04, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Cylka-talk- 01:06, September 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Grunny (talk) 10:06, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:36, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 15:21, October 8, 2010 (UTC)
Object[]
I have just one: Both the intro paragraph and the bio paragraph end the same way "...and the Republic won the battle." Vary it up a little bit. Other than that, nice job.IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 19:49, September 18, 2010 (UTC)- Reworded the intro slightly. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 16:22, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358[]
"Vane was also killed by the Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker, and the Republic won the battle." Who else was killed? :O- Well, I guess many people died, but that's beside the point. Addressed. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 15:58, September 25, 2010 (UTC)
- I'll review it fully when
I'm not lazyI have more time. :P 1358 (Talk) 18:59, September 22, 2010 (UTC) One more: First you say "Around 22 BBY, Striker participated in an attack on Harko Station in…" and later "...to destroy Harko Station only as a last resort." The first part kinda implies that their aim was to attack Harko Station while the second says that it was the last resort. Perhaps reword the first sentence to avoid confusion? 1358 (Talk) 13:37, October 3, 2010 (UTC)- Try this. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 13:34, October 8, 2010 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:21, October 8, 2010 (UTC)
- I'm not going to put this down as an objection, but is there enough information to create an article about the signal that forced the neebrays to attack? Cylka-talk- 01:06, September 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Umm…I don't think it's really necessary. It's not like the Valahari used some sort of special signal, they just imitated the call of a nesting neebray brood mother. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 18:53, October 1, 2010 (UTC)