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Tonzet[]
- Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 14:10, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:TCW. Part of my ongoing Act on Instinct series. If you're not bored now, you will be soon enough.
(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)[]
Support[]
- I won't be bored by your good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:39, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
- I'm still waiting for you to write real TCW articles. ;) -- 1358 (Talk) 05:54, June 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 23:25, June 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Well done VadersFist666 07:02, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 07:16, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
- JangFett (Talk) 00:52, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 01:31, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
Object[]
Xd1358[]
Only one thing: "..Tonzet was somehow injured on the head." Eh, do you really find "somehow" necessary? It doesn't sound good. -- 1358 (Talk) 05:46, June 14, 2010 (UTC)- Gone. Thefourdotelipsis 05:52, June 14, 2010 (UTC)
VadersFist666[]
The only problem I have is this part of the sentence, " ,and Sanya arrived, pointing out that the crops themselves had no allegiance to anyone." I believe it would sound better as, " , and when Sanya arrived, she pointed out that the crops themselves had no allegiance to anyone." fix that and it should be fine, thanks. VadersFist666 18:55, June 23, 2010 (UTC)- Good suggestion. Changed. Thefourdotelipsis 06:45, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you VadersFist666 07:02, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Good suggestion. Changed. Thefourdotelipsis 06:45, June 24, 2010 (UTC)
Eyrezer[]
"Tonzet watched the news frequently, and formed his own political ideas based on what he had heard." Is this bit really justified? The frequent watching of news? Or does he just watch it once in the comic? --Eyrezer 21:21, June 27, 2010 (UTC)- Hmm, badly worded anyway. I've tweaked it for neutrality. Thefourdotelipsis 23:51, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
Glorious Follower[]
"He had no love for the Galactic Republic and argued against Ukio's willingness to supply the Grand Army of the Republic with victuals during the Clone Wars. In spite of his anti-Republic view and his reluctance to embrace foreign interference in Ukian affairs, he maintained a friendship with Sanya, a representative of the Jedi Order's Agricultural Corps." These few sentences in the intro seem like they should be in a P&T, rather than in an intro. If you could, perhaps you could rewrite some of it? Other than that, great work. JangFett (Talk) 00:48, June 28, 2010 (UTC)
Comments[]
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:32, June 28, 2010 (UTC)