The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Republic diplomatEdit

• Nominated by: OLIOSTER ^(talk) 19:41, November 17, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Pretty much a carbon copy of his Sith counterpart.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)Edit

SupportEdit

1. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:59, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
2. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 21:58, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
3. Great job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:35, December 6, 2010 (UTC)
4. MasterFred^(Whatever) 19:38, December 7, 2010 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 05:25, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

ObjectEdit

MoffshipEdit

• Please break up the rather large paragraph in the bio into two (or more, if necessary) smaller paragraphs.
  • Broken up. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 20:18, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
• It should be mentioned earlier on (in the bio, rather than the P&T) that the judges on Ahto High Court were Selkath.
  • Referred to them as Selkath judges. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 20:18, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
• Nothing in the official strategy guide?
  • Not that I can see. In fact, I don't even think his Sith counterpart is mentioned. I think Cylka might have been thinking of the Sith representative during the Sunry trial when she added that. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 20:18, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
    • Then you should probably verify that for the Sith representative. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 21:58, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
• That's all. Nice work. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 17:47, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

ToprawaEdit

• Can we fill in the "skin" field in the infobox?
  • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 13:25, December 6, 2010 (UTC)
• Is the character included in the KOTOR game guide?
  • Per above, he is not. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 13:25, December 6, 2010 (UTC)
    • Sorry, I don't read previous objections. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:35, December 6, 2010 (UTC)
• Also, can we mention in the BTS what the game refers to this character as? For example, the Unidentified Bith scientist is called "Bith Scientist." Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:59, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
  • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 13:25, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ecks DeeEdit

• Judging by the infobox image, the eye color in the infobox seems incorrect.
  • Damn color blindness. What do you think it is? Maybe brown? OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:44, December 6, 2010 (UTC)
    • Yes, it's brown. ;) 1358 ^(Talk) 19:09, December 7, 2010 (UTC)
      • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:34, December 7, 2010 (UTC)
• Rather nitpicky, but the fact that Revan was visiting Manaan is currently intro-only. Perhaps "As the diplomat began the hearing by claiming he had three soldiers in the infirmary, Revan, a Padawan of the Jedi Order who was visiting Manaan, entered the court and witnessed the proceedings." in the body would be good?
  • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:44, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

1358 ^(Talk) 20:03, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

Approved by AgriCorps 05:25, December 8, 2010 (UTC)