After thousands of years of trying to take over the galaxy without really succeeding, you'd think the Sith would just give up and live peaceably. Meh, but then there would be no Star Wars.--Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 14:34, December 20, 2011 (UTC)
"In 44 ABY, the Sith member was chosen to accompany High Lord Sarasu Taalon's convoy of eleven ChaseMaster frigates to ally with Jedi Grand Master Luke Skywalker for a mission to find the dark side being Abeloth before betraying and killing Skywalker and forcing Abeloth to serve the Sith Tribe." - This sentence seems to drag on and gets rather confusing towards the end. Who betrayed and killed Skywalker? Who forced Abeloth to serve the Sith Tribe? Things like this are not clear.
"The Sith was Force-sensitive and very powerful, since Taalon had only selected the strongest Sith to accompany him on the mission to Abeloth's planet." This sentence kind of makes it sound like he was Force-sensitive and very powerful because Taalon had selected him. Please reword this sentence.--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 23:43, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
Yes, that's the case. This sentence says that he had to be poweful, otherwise Taalon would not have taken him. Or is there another problem? Clone Commander LeeTalk 09:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
I reworded the sentence a bit. Have a look. Ah, and thanks for the review. Clone Commander LeeTalk 09:50, January 3, 2012 (UTC)