"A Sith Saber was a male Human who served in the Lost Tribe of the Sith around the time after the Second Galactic Civil War." - This can be better worded more like the Bio. As it stands, it sounds like you're describing a Sith Saber in general, not this particular one. Something like "A Human male Sith Saber served..."
On that same note, the opening of the Bio and the opening of the intro sound a lot alike. They will especially once you make the change to the intro. Perhaps changing around some of the wording at the end of the sentence on one of them.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 21:34, January 10, 2012 (UTC)