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Unidentified Sith Saber (Luke Skywalker victim)Edit

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Next part of the never-ending LeeProject Sith Sabers

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)Edit

SupportEdit

1. Nice little article.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:46, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
2. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:24, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
3. I enjoyed every single bit of this book. Plagueis327 05:26, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:46, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
5. Good work, Lee. Have you ever written a battle article? Why not give First duel in Kesla Vein a try? Do it! Menkooroo 07:10, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

ObjectEdit

Return of the JediEdit

• "A Sith Saber was a male Human who served in the Lost Tribe of the Sith around the time after the Second Galactic Civil War." - This can be better worded more like the Bio. As it stands, it sounds like you're describing a Sith Saber in general, not this particular one. Something like "A Human male Sith Saber served..."
  • Please try it now. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:35, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
• On that same note, the opening of the Bio and the opening of the intro sound a lot alike. They will especially once you make the change to the intro. Perhaps changing around some of the wording at the end of the sentence on one of them.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:34, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • Varied. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:35, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

Approved by AgriCorps 20:05, January 17, 2012 (UTC)