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Unidentified T-series tactical droid (Quell)[]
- Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 19:16, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:--This is taking too long. Support that article. --But there are still hundreds of objections to address! --I dont care.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- Kilson 01:01, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
- —Tommy 9281 Saturday, April 9, 2011, 17:38 UTC
- Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 19:43, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:46, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 20:27, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
Object[]
Attack of the Clone[]
I believe that the droid is mentioned or referenced in some form in the majority of the Sky Battle of Quell sources—potentially in some other publications too—so you're going to want to check those. Let me know if you need help, but please see what you can do.CC7567 (talk) 19:20, March 24, 2011 (UTC)- Oh crud, I didn't even thought about that. Ye, I'll see what I can do. Thanks for offering help. Kreivi Wolter 19:38, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson[]
You need to mention in the intro that Secura's entire fleet was wiped out during the battle.- Done.Kreivi Wolter 13:24, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
In the History section, "However, Skywalker, Secura and a small group managed to escape..." A small group of what? Please clarify this.- Done. Kreivi Wolter 13:24, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
In the Characteristics section, "the tactical droid changed plans and ordered the Liberty to be targeted and destroyed immediately." Targeted and destoryed how? You need put "turbolaser bombardment" or something along those lines into that sentence.- Well, it wasn't needed here in every last section. It has been already mentioned in the Bio, why it should be mentioned again? Kreivi Wolter 13:24, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Fair enough Kilson 01:01, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
- Well, it wasn't needed here in every last section. It has been already mentioned in the Bio, why it should be mentioned again? Kreivi Wolter 13:24, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
In the Bts you said the tactical droid first appeared in the TCW episode, but in the Appearances section you say he was first pictured in Headgames. Which is?- And done. Kreivi Wolter 13:24, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- That's all I have. It's a pretty nice article Wolter. Kilson 02:43, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
GTQ[]
The only thing i have to say is maybe say he was aggressive more directly in characteristics other than that good job. Also it is not huge but i think there should be a link to the battle of Quell GTQ 13:28, April 2, 2011 (UTC)- There's already a link, both in the intro and the bio. Also, what do you mean, "aggressive"? Kreivi Wolter 14:12, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Hmm sorry my bad missed the link sorry. I mean it is clear the droid was aggressive and ruthless and cared little for his droid companions and though you say this essentially i feel you should mention it more directly. Also do you know what series of tactical droid it is if so that should be in the title GTQ 14:49, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Uh, what? The series is already in he article. And seem to me, the characteristics is fine as it is. Kreivi Wolter 14:58, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Hmm sorry my bad missed the link sorry. I mean it is clear the droid was aggressive and ruthless and cared little for his droid companions and though you say this essentially i feel you should mention it more directly. Also do you know what series of tactical droid it is if so that should be in the title GTQ 14:49, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- There's already a link, both in the intro and the bio. Also, what do you mean, "aggressive"? Kreivi Wolter 14:12, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship[]
Is there any reason why you call him "green-plated" when his body is painted green and white?- Not really. Added white. Kreivi Wolter 13:55, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
The current wording of the bio implies that both the Republic and the Separatist fleets were stationed in Quell's atmosphere before the battle even began; I assume this is not the case. Please reword/clarify.- Better? Kreivi Wolter 13:55, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
It's still rather confusing. Do we not know which fleet was stationed at Quell first? If not, this needs to be reworded to something like "This droid led a fleet of Separatist ships into battle with a Republic force under Secura in Quell's upper atmosphere," thereby removing any uncertainty.Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 20:19, April 12, 2011 (UTC)- Hopefully done now. Kreivi Wolter 16:22, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Much better. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 19:43, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Hopefully done now. Kreivi Wolter 16:22, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Better? Kreivi Wolter 13:55, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
I think the second paragraph of the bio could be split into two paragraphs, if only to get rid of a huge block of text.- Roger roger. Kreivi Wolter 13:55, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
"He was not controlled by a central control computer, which allowed him to think and function independently." - this can be misinterpreted as meaning that a central control computer would allow him to think and function independently; please rephrase.- Rephrased. Kreivi Wolter 13:55, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
- That's all for now. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 19:55, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
Might we provide an article for his specific Munificent frigate command ship? Seems notable and information-intensive enough.Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:32, April 14, 2011 (UTC)- Yep. Kreivi Wolter 09:40, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- The article should link to this ship upon mention in the intro as well, which unfortunately will require the redlink to be filled in. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:15, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Yep. Kreivi Wolter 17:44, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- The article should link to this ship upon mention in the intro as well, which unfortunately will require the redlink to be filled in. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:15, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Yep. Kreivi Wolter 09:40, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:30, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Darn, darn, DARN! Now I managed to mess this nomination up by moving the article. What should I do now? Can anyone help me? Kreivi Wolter 12:46, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Phew. Nevermind, managed to fix that up. Please note that while the article is now moved to more appropriate name, this nomination page still uses the old name. Kreivi Wolter 12:55, April 2, 2011 (UTC)