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Unidentified Trade Federation squad[]
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 10:16, June 20, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: My is just a sad story of CANs that get too big.
(1 ACs/2 Users/3 Total)[]
Support[]
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:45, June 23, 2014 (UTC)
- QuiGonJinn (Talk) 08:50, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
- Rearranged a thing or two. Try to avoid passive voice. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:31, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
Object[]
Lee's charge[]
the squad[3] participated in the Trade Federation's illegal effort to colonize the moon Alaris Prime.[1] There the squad[3] was given the task of exterminating the gundarks, a predatory species that had been attacking the Trade Federation.[1] The squad[3]: Can you vary the use of squad here?These Wookiees were colonists led by the Wookiee Chewbacca and advised by Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn, who were legally colonizing the moon: Can you reword this a bit, e.g. but the stuff about their colonization earlier?- Done both. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 10:25, June 23, 2014 (UTC)
- A story I know well. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:21, June 20, 2014 (UTC)
Emperor's advice[]
Be sure to fix every dupplicated links on the bio.--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 22:18, June 25, 2014 (UTC)- I can't see any, and you may have the wrong article; this one doesn't have a bio. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 22:31, June 25, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
- You have a double reference in the History section.
- Your copy-and-paste method of mass nomination, which repeatedly results in the same mistakes that you refuse to recognize or even be aware of since I doubt you even read these comments, continues to nauseate me. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:37, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
Comments[]
- I no longer have any interest in this article. May an AC please archive this. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 06:06, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- I would be willing to watch over this article and do my best to address objections. Would be a shame it that work would go to waste. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:47, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- I have to ask, what exactly makes this squad notable enough for an article? Because if there's a valid reason, I'm not seeing it after reading through this article. Winterz (talk) 19:06, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Well, I have no answer for that. TC it. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:10, August 12, 2014 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)[]
- Unaddressed objections for over two weeks. 1358 (Talk) 17:31, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:31, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
- grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:37, August 23, 2014 (UTC)