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Unidentified clone trooper pilot (Bothawui)[]
- Nominated by: 1358 (Talk) 14:23, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: More unidentified clones? Yes.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 16:50, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:31, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:13, December 8, 2010 (UTC)
- JangFett (Talk) 22:04, December 22, 2010 (UTC)
- --Eyrezer 22:29, December 22, 2010 (UTC)
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Jujiggum[]
Just one: could you add a quote to the bio? What about Skywalker's order to retreat, or something else relating to the squadron as a whole?Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 16:09, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa[]
Just one thing. The beginning of this sentence, particularly, just kind of reads awkwardly to me. Can we tweak it at all? "Before one of Gold Squadron's pilot's starfighter was hit, causing it to crash into another starfighter, the clone trooper pilot told wingmate Gold Six to watch his stabilizer."Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:20, December 7, 2010 (UTC)- Is that better? Thanks for the review and copy-edit. :) 1358 (Talk) 05:36, December 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Works for me. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:13, December 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Is that better? Thanks for the review and copy-edit. :) 1358 (Talk) 05:36, December 8, 2010 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:38, December 22, 2010 (UTC)