- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Yushyn[]
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:38, October 27, 2017 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Time for a short break from film characters.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)[]
Support[]
- 1358 (Talk) 18:12, November 12, 2017 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:47, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi (talk) 14:07, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
- Commander Boots 01:36, December 22, 2017 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 10:46, December 27, 2017 (UTC)
Object[]
Toprawa[]
The overuse of the same sentence structure in the Biography's final paragraph becomes extremely repetitive. Please mix it up.- Ok I've reworded two of the sentences, how does it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:05, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
- That's it. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:11, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
- Ok I've reworded two of the sentences, how does it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:05, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
- It's unnecessary to go into as much detail about his species as the article does in the P/T section. That's what his species article is for. I've therefore removed the parts to pertain more to his species than to this specific character.
- Thanks. I'll keep that in mind for future articles with characters of unidentified species. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:05, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
I'd like to see the BTS utilize TV.com to reference the Rebels episode's air date, as I believe that's a little bit more authoritative than affiliate.zap2it.com. Note this is what we started doing for another Rebels nom.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:05, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
Going along with the previous objection, the date ref used in this article doesn't work. I realize you probably copied it from some other article, as we went through the same thing on the Killun-71 nomination. You will see from the link provided in the previous objection how we properly referenced that episode's date using actual source material; you will likewise notice in the reference currently used in this article that no source material is actually being used to support this claim, "the first known episode to take place in the third year before the Battle of Yavin," nor is there any such support in that Rebels SH thread, despite someone's best efforts. I'm probably going to have to talk to you about this in person, so I will catch you on IRC.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:14, November 21, 2017 (UTC)- Ok, I'll wait till we've discussed it before making any changes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:05, November 21, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators[]
Can you please confirm that the episode can be used as a source for the following terms: Asteroid Belt Gas Refinery, planetoid, Galactic Basic?- Referencing should all work now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:48, December 27, 2017 (UTC)
Right now, only the intro states that the clouzon-36 gas collected at the refinery and the fuel shipped to the Empire were one and the same. Please clarify this in the body.Imperators II(Talk) 11:59, December 26, 2017 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:48, December 27, 2017 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:46, December 27, 2017 (UTC)