Contents 1 4-LOM 1.1 Things to do 1.2 Removal of FA status 1.3 Comments

4-LOMEdit

Things to doEdit

• Characteristics before equipment.
  • Done. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:14, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
• Needs some general cleanup.
  • Done. Finished off the copy-edit that I started while working on Zuckuss. Well, at least the major copy-editing is done. I'll no doubt be forever making little niggly tweaks to the wording for a while, as I'm just never satisfied. But for the most part, the copy-editing is done. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 07:50, November 20, 2010 (UTC)
• ESB adaptations missing from sources list. Toprawa and Ralltiir can provide any missing info.
  • Got two sources down for 4-LOM (novelization (he's not in it, only IG-88 gets a droid mention) and junior novelization, thanks Master Fred!), off to hunt down the audio... Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 06:21, December 22, 2010 (UTC)
    • 4-LOM has no mention. I can't even attribute any random background babbling to him. Only Fett was mentioned by name in the audio. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 06:32, December 22, 2010 (UTC)
  • Added a couple of obscure sources in which 4-LOM is (Picture only). Master Jonathan ^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 06:40, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Removal of FA statusEdit

• Placed on probation per Meeting 37.
• Probation extended per Meeting 38.
• FA status kept per Meeting 39.

CommentsEdit

• Tweaked 4-LOM's wording to hell and back, found and cited four—count 'em—four unsourced paragraphs, resourced and referenced each individual issue of SotE he appeared in, fixed formatting where need be, tweaked image captions where needed, organized citations where necessary, tweaked a nasty clausal reversal, and according to Tope, he looks good enough to survive the gauntlet. Good luck on Saturday, Lommy. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 07:52, January 7, 2011 (UTC)